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[KDPtheKing]

Imma be as overpowered as heck

[I-Am-X]

Spoiler

 

Name: Hildegarde "Hilda" Breisgauer

Age: 26

Gender: Female

Nationality: Lorainian

 

Personality:

A tomboy to a fault, she's known to be wild and is a bit of an eccentric. Which is quite strange to those who have gotten to know her, well, those who have fought alongside her that is, with how calm and focused she can be in the heat of battle, almost seeming like an entirely different person. She's the type of person whom, despite how she may appear, will do whatever she pleases and can't be quite stubborn and hard to convince once she sets her mind on something. However, she can be quite loyal to those she respects and trusts.

 

::Combat::

 

Strongest Attribute: Magic

Weakest Attribute: Endurance

 

 

Primary Style: Magic Marksmanship - Specializes in the use of the 'Magical Bow'. Her style allows her use of basic spellcasting, in the way of using incantations to place 'properties' upon her arrows, i.e 'heal', 'pierce', 'fire', etc. She's also able to make magical arrows out of pure magic. A brute force sniper.

Secondary Style: Close Quarters Combat. Whether it be with her hands, feet or even with a blade, she'll be able to fend off most foes. Used in emergency situations in which enemies get too close.

 

Skills:

• Scouting
• Stealth
• Assassination
• Tracking
• Survival
• Support magic
• Enchanter
• Acrobatic

 

Equipment:

Artemis - A long and beautiful black and gold enchanted bow assorted with many attachments and enchantments.

• Magic Glass Scope - Basically, it's magic glass enchanted with the 'Zoom' enchantment that aids in her aim.
• Magic String - A second string for the bow made magic. Use of the string allows Hilda to quickly conjure magical arrows, allowing for very fast multi- arrow shots. Can be used in tandem with the 'normal arrows', 1st string, allowing for a destruction combination. Generally used for mid-range combat.
• Arrow Refiner - Specifically made for magical arrow shots and can be turned on and off. When turned on a short cylinder will sit in the main sight of the arrow (single shot only), and refine the actual fired shot. Gives the arrow more life over the distance it travels, and more stopping power.
• Barrier Generator - Laced through the entire bow, when channeled with magic in a certain way, it generates a magical shield.

 

Techniques:

Enchantments/spells:

• Homing - An enchantment that changes the behavior of the arrow. 'Homing' allows the arrow(s) to zero in on the target, allows for her to simply 'fire-and-forget' upon release of said arrows. However,  as it's not a guaranteed hit, it can still be interfered with. This enchantment is also possible as a last resort measure and can be cast on the users limbs albeit at a great risk to the users body.
• Guided - An enchantment that changes the behavior of the arrow. Unlike homing where you can simply fire at the enemy and forget, guiding is a behavior in which the user themselves take control of the arrow and 'guide it' to it's destination for when you 'must' hit the target and there's no straight shot to it and unable to reach.
• Cascade - An enchantment that changes the behavior of the arrow. While it divides the stopping power, 'cascade' allows the arrow to split off into several arrows allowing for more widespread destruction.
  • Rain - An enchantment that changes the behavior of the arrow. A weaker version of cascade but splits off into many more arrows. It has no stopping power but it allows for more widespread destruction. However, unlike cascade, when it splits, it fires down below it, effectively 'raining' down on its target.

 

• Cupid's Arrow - An arrow made exclusively of magic. Mixed with her support magic, it gives the arrow the 'Healing' property. Useful for situations in which she cannot reach and directly heal someone.
• For I Am Steel - This enchantment places a 'piercing' property upon the arrows. Useful for penetrating objects/ long thought impossible to break through normal means, especially via arrow. Able to pierce through/or crack armor, machinery, etc
• For I Am A Unrelenting Blaze - This enchantment places an elemental property, 'fire' upon the arrow. Useful for putting things on fire stealthily, chain reaction destruction via flammable objects, etc.
  • For I Am Destruction - This enchantment, a branch off of the fire element, places an 'explosion' property upon the arrow. Unlike her fire enchantment, this one isn't designed for simply setting things on fire, fire damage and the like. This enchantment 'explodes' upon contact with it's target, kind of like the arrow is a match and the target is gunpowder. It's an enchantment that takes some time to 'prepare' before firing. It is advised to use caution upon use for it is a double-edged sword, a dangerous enchantment.
  • For I Am Lava - An enchantment branched off of the fire element, it gives the arrow an 'Melting' property. An advanced enchantment, it takes quite awhile to 'prepare' it is not advised to be used in battle but prepared before hand, thus limiting it's use. But it's limited use is worth it because this enables the user to 'Melt' it's target. In a way it's similar to 'pierce' but instead of 'piercing' through target, this instead starts to 'melt' its target. Useful for targets in which pierce may be rendered unusable and for creating 'entrances' along with many other uses. While intended to inanimate objects, when used against flesh and blood targets, the damage is immense. Good for assassination.
• For My Heart is Ice - This enchantment, a branch off the water element, places an 'Ice' property upon the arrow. Useful for slowing things down and freezing targets in place (when used enough), especially when used in cold climates like Loraine, it's effects are multiplied, especially useful for stealthy missions.
  • For I Am A Blizzard - An 'Ice' property arrow, a branch off the water element, it's an enchantment that places the spell 'Blizzard' onto the arrow. Like the 'Destruction' enchantment, it takes times to prepare before being able to use, not advised to be used multiple-times in battle. Unless the other ice enchantment, it's ability to 'freeze ones target' is amplified greatly (via Arrow refiner). Like the name suggests, it creates a swirling ice storm around the arrow. It's a spell suggested for multiple targets.
• For I Am The Wind - This enchantment places an elemental property 'Wind' onto the arrow. While it doesn't boast effects like the other elements, this enchantment gets its use through it's speed, which it gets by manipulating the wind. Useful for fast targets that wouldn't get hit otherwise. It can also be used to manipulate the growth of fire, giving it more life.
  • For I Am Thunder - A branch off the 'Wind' elemental property, this enchantment casts the spell 'Thunder (Electric)' upon the arrow. Like previous 2nd stage spells, it takes some time to prepare and is not advised to be used multiple times, especially in a big battlefield, caution (and common sense) is needed. This enchantment basically sends a massive thunderbolt right at the enemie(s).
• For I Am The Earth - This enchantment places an elemental property, 'Earth' onto the arrow. This enchantment hardens the arrow with the 'Earth' Element and slams into the target. It's quite useful when brute force is called for. It's strength increases if used through the Arrow refiner.

Close Quarter Combat:

 

• Razor's Edge - A simple roundhouse kick that's strengthened by a hidden blade in her shoes that she usually strengthens with an elemental enchantment, usually fire. Varies depending on the enchantment used. It's an attack she uses as a follow up after basic punches.
• Sweep Smash - It's really 2 attacks in one, though it depends on how the opponent reacts. It's pretty much a simple leg sweep thats intended to make the opponent step back, however, if they jump up instead, it's follow by an elbow smash that's enhanced via Hilda's support magic
• Charge Guard - A simple counter move that could also be used as a set-up maneuver for other moves. With the right timing, the user charges in when the opponent initiates an action and takes appropriate action by brushing aside an oncoming kick or punch with the arm-guard, taking the opportunity to get in close.
• Front Row & Center - The combo breaker of her Close Quarter moves. It's typically the follow-up to other moves but can be used when given the chance. It begins with a kick to the body, where she kicks off, using the opponents body as a spring-board, flying backwards in a back-flip, notching back an arrow mid-air and fires upon completion.

 

Combat Style: Distance, it's all about distance. Being a magic marksman, her style is all about doing damage from a far but that's not all. With her many incantations, she can also play support and assist with some healing.

 

Backstory: Born in Loraine to a pair of soldiers. One can say she was practically born to serve their nation. How can one not? With your family having served or currently serving and the fact the nation is at war, even if you didn't want to, you were practically expected to join the fight. No pressure, right?. Not like that was the case for Hilda, though, it was her own decision to follow her parents. However, when she was little, she still didn't quite understand the situation completely, she had no way of knowing the problems she'd incur following her chosen path.

 

Since she was young, she always had a fascination with magical bows, specifically an old one that has been passed down in her family. Upon learning more about magical bows, she'd always take the bow without permission, to quite dangerous results. However, it never deterred her in the slightest in her efforts to learn about. Whether consenting of their own accord or to prevent further damage, her parents decided to show her how to properly use the bow. To her, the bow was something she held the most dear. She had faith in Hoor, the Norse god of winter but nowhere near the amount of the typical Loraine citizen.

 

However, as her love and skill with the bow continued to grow, the more the nation's focus on Magical Bows took a back seat. With Loraine mastering the design of the sniper rifle and implementing it into their army, the nation's viewpoint of Magic Bows began to change. While they did continue to use them in their army, they were seen as inferior to the new 'sniper rifles' range and overall use. Thus those aspiring to be 'snipers' were 'recommended' to use the new rifle. However, Hilda adamantly refused to trade her bow in, staunchly believing her bow skills wouldn't lose to no rifle.

 

As would be expected she would be ridiculed greatly for it, with most laughing at her expense but she didn't mind. She strongly believed, that one day, she would prove them wrong. 'That day' came in the form of a suicide mission to the border to 'stop' an incoming number of Rhaelin wyvern riders from crossing the border into Loraine with minimal forces. When they reported to their post, there were far more than it was originally reported. In truth, they were there merely there to buy time, a mere distraction. Even though they made a valiant effort in holding back, her forces were almost completely wiped out.

 

Despite having made her 'shot', she felt disgusted by how things turned out. What as the point if her comrades were dead? For what reason were they killed for? Some 'god' you pray and pray and you're never heard. What use is a god that never saves? There never was one, was there? Shortly after the battle ended, she disappeared. Angry at how it all ended, she refused to return to Loraine and instead decided to travel to parts unknown. Somewhere down the line, she met Yoshirou while on a job.

 

She can't exactly remember what started it all, but they ended up fighting. Apparently she drank a little too much that day and mistook him for her target and well, it wasn't real pretty. What she does remember clearly was the conversation they had after she woke up. They talked about the state of the world with the Eidolon war, the 'so called gods', past experiences and such. As the conversation appeared over, he asked her if she had the power to stop this war, would she? Deciding whether to taking this seriously or not, she took a moment to study the expression on his face. Upon determining that he was being serious, she sighed before answering, that she would. Seeming satisfied with her answer, he caught her off guard by making a particular offer.

 

 

My upgraded CS. I considered 'Buff' arrow enchantments made via my support magic for use for allies but then thought, would it really be needed? Can't she just cast it without having to use her bow/shooting them with a magical arrow? Also, for my earth element enchant, like the other ones, I considered an advanced one that would take a lot of time to prepare, something akin to a temporary wall like spell but wasn't sure about it and thought it'd be best to see if the other ones I listed would be alright first. Not sure if some of the spells would get the A-Ok but put them anyway for an opinion.

Edited by I-Am-X, 22 November 2015 - 02:09 PM.

[El Phantom]

Those are good, but you're actually neglecting another school of enchantments, which is more commonly used on ammunition, and that is "Behaviours". This would include... Homing, cascading, raining, guided... Those kinds of things. Your sheet covers "Properties" already, and that is by giving it aspects of elements. Behaviours is changing how the arrow moves or acts. So homing would zone in on a target, cascading would split into multiple arrows, raining would let you call on a rain of arrows over where you fire, and guided would allow you to fire a shot through a crowd to hit a single target at high precision, since you can control it's pathing.

 

I'm sorry that magical ranged weaponry is pretty complex in this RP, but that's also it's strength, the versatility and ability to be prepared for almost every situation.

 

I recommend you make a few CQC techniques too, and in that vein I suggest you make them focus on creating distance between you and the opponent (since you're ranged and that only makes sense).

 

Also sorry there aren't any details written down about magic and so on, I'm sharing it all by word of mouth, because if I spent time writing it all, I'd be delaying this RP for quite some time. Not to mention it's not as important for Venerated, since we'll also be inventing or adding to that lore anyways.

 

Backstory seems good. Let me ask you again how you planned on rivalling a sniper rifle with a magic bow? Just to be clear. I read the backstory and it wasn't so clear. If you plan on doing it during the course of the RP, the best chance is when we go to Loraine, and you out-shoot their snipers.

Edited by El Phantom, 21 November 2015 - 01:50 PM.

[Shmuser Name]

@Faye

 

What's a number "3"?

 

Edit:

 

All jokes aside I must have accidently deleted my 3, which I left blank, but I remember now that I deleted it because I was going to add that remark onto my comment regarding Gerard, which is that he reminds me of Edward Elric.

 

Also, you're the one who made it amibiguous with what you described in that bad-ass loli's backstory, man! I don't want to be cynical but damn it's easy being cynical when you read something like that. You're the boss though, and if you say "No" it's a no. I say this in a friendly, lighthearted manner by the way.

 

GM wants variety and since I didn't know all the peeps would be storming the thread and appropriating the types of character archetypes this quickly I'm left trying to think of something unique. I will satisfy you, GM!

Edited by Shmuser Name, 21 November 2015 - 02:47 PM.

[Faye]

XD

 

I was not thinking in that direction, but yeah. You're right, it's actually plausible.

Still, let's keep the RP PG-13 XD

[I-Am-X]

XD

 

I was not thinking in that direction, but yeah. You're right, it's actually plausible.

Still, let's keep the RP PG-13 XD

 

Considering there'll be blood and death, I wouldn't exactly say pg 13

=p

[Diabolical Rhapsody]

One Wyvern Rider will be served soon. Thanks L, you have reignited my fantastical reservoir.

A WIP

 

Spoiler

 

Tristan in Full Armor

 

 

Isolde:

 

Name: Tristan Meridius Caelius

Age: 42

Gender: Male

Nationality: Raeilinian

 

Personality: It can be said that he is a mellow old man, much older than his apparent age. He's an old soul who values life but isn't ensnared by it anymore. He knows its ephemeral and thus comes across as detached and oftentimes, a bit cold. But he radiates a fatherly warmth, surprisingly though he has no offspring. He wishes to end his bloodline with himself. In battle though, he's terror manifest. His bonding and skill with his Wyvern is fearsome and his Magic devastating, combined with the fact that his gigantic sword could easily cut a man a two. His reputation precedes him on the battlefield.

 

 

::Combat::

 

Strongest Attribute: Magic

Weakest Attribute: Endurance

 

 

Primary Style: Dual Casting Elementalist

Secondary Style: Swordsmanship

 

Skills:  Scouting, Leadership, Dark Magic

 

Equipment:

1. Leviathan - An Oversized Saber made of Stainless Steel - Titatanium mix sharpened with an enchantment.

2. Suit of Armor with a Large Black Plume,

3. Casting Gloves of Rejuvenating Mana,

4. A Sapphire encased in Ivory pendant as his Family Heirloom.

5. Four Rings of Elements aiding him with Fire, Earth, Ice and Dark magic.

 

Techniques:

 

Fierce Morning Dragon Style - Fire Breath

 

Fierce Morning Dragon Style - Fireblast

 

Evening Dragon - Falling Sky (Ice): Massive AoE attack where pointed hail is bombarded on an area.

 

Mass Hysteria (Dark Magic)

 

Soul Drain (Dark Magic)

 

Grip of Death (Earth Magic) [Tristan & Isolde syncronised strike]: Tristan holds the victims with vines and Isolde unleashes her Acid breath in one sweeping strike to reduce everyone to bones.

 

 

Combat Style: Long Range heavy attacks compounded with Close Range pinpoint Strikes

 

Backstory: Nine generations of Caelius line have served the interests on the Raelin Empire, now a Republic. So to think that the fate of the Tenth one would be much different would be straying away from the staunch loyalty that the Knights are known to possess. Born to Juno Aelius and Meridius Caelius in what is known as the Valley of Drakes, the place that has the imposing Castle Caelius sitting pretty atop the highest hill in the valley. It was almost fated that Tristan would be the Tenth contribution to the Raelian cause and that he would also be a Wyvern Rider.

 

What was special though was his talent for Magic. Ever since the boy could read, he had been mesmerized the Arcane potential of Nature around him and he was the most fascinated by what his family specialized in: Dragon Taming. Majestic and imposing, Wyverns were the epitome of the ferocity that nature can pack in a living being. Plus, the fact that even most of others Raelians didsn't know was the immense knowledge this ancient race held.

 

While others of his kind treated them as war machines or mere pets that served an important function, Tristan treated them differently. His deepest love reserved for one young Dragonling that he considered the kindred spirit his deceased older sister. This love manifested in almost intuitive communication between them. His skills at cornering and offensive maneuvers was so impressive he was nicknamed 'the prodigy'.

 

This cemented his reputation and set him on a fast track up the ranks of the Raelian army. He was the youngest Decarion Wyvern Rider at twenty-five and then the youngest Centurion at thirty five. It was at this time that his company became distinguished as "Sons of Deimos" called for their particular talent of sending opposing forces in disarray and causing widespread death and destruction.

 

But, it brought along an unwanted change. Tristan found his sensitive side dying a painfully slow death as he himself became what he hadn't thought himself capable of, an agent of death. He questioned his faith, which wasn't as rigid as his predecessors or his counterparts. He failed to see how a God whose supposed to be the great Equalizer and judge could be appeased by so much destruction and death. He got dissuaded from falling the cause of subjugating his enemies just because their faith wasn't the same as his. He couldn't help but feel disgusted with the whole ideology.

 

Who gave him the right to take the life of others when they hadn't done any direct harm to him? How is killing in God's name; just? How inane is the whole idea of a fearsome god is and how stupid it is to so fervently serve that said god? Growing disheartened, the final push was the Battle of Dryhira where his Legion of Wyvern Riders took upon a handful of brave Lorainian Snipers before mounting an assault at their trade town. Seeing those men and women being wiped out without mercy and with merry moved him deeply and in that moment when his concentration was a bit down an arrow struck him. Sending an excruciating pulse of pain through his body as the poison began its job of fighting his body. He pulled the reins of his beloved Isolde and left the fight.

 

After several weeks of rest, recuperation and introspection he decided to call quits on his budding career dashing the hopes of his aging father of another Consul since his great Grandfather but Tristan had had enough and he slipped away to Ayntayikk spending a few years in the wilderness, meditating and honing his arcane arts. Slowly, experimenting on himself and finding ways of offsetting fatigue that both age and his war wounds brought he unlocked the secrets of Dark magic. He confined himself to the deep forest where he could test his new found strength and wandered to the remote island in Kingdom of Kouryang spending a few years in solitude. Before he felt clear and capable to mingle in civilization, Isolde meanwhile wandered and sired a few children, only to grow tired of the changed life. She hungered for change as much as his spirit twin did and so She sought him out and joined forces before they met a very interesting man, a man that could bring about the revolution they hungered for.

 

Tristan needed little convincing to join the cause, ever the eager man to bring about the fall of Gods. From 'Sons of Deimos' to 'Slayer of Gods', the life was coming full circle at last.

 

 

I have finished, waiting for a review

Edited by RP Fiend, 21 November 2015 - 06:01 PM.

[I-Am-X]

I have finished, waiting for a review

 

I think you're going to need to go into more detail about your dark magic techniques before anything, though.

[Muninn]

WIP

 

Spoiler

Name: Captain Fredrick Howan

Age: 37

Gender: Male

Nationality:

 

Personality:

 

 

::Combat::

 

Strongest Attribute: Skill

Weakest Attribute: Magic

 

Primary Style: Commanding

Secondary Style: Saber and Pistol

Skills: Helmsman, Gunner, Fire Discipline, Forward Observation

 

Equipment:

Officer’s Saber: An exceptionally crafted blade, both ceremonial and practical.

Six Chamber Revolver: A rare prize that Fredrick took as a spoil of war, looted from the body of a pirate captain. The envy of many his peers.

Cuirass: A standard piece of armor for Kouryong soldiers serving on board War Airships.

Techniques: (Do you have any special techniques? A mage may use this the most, as they should list all the advanced spells they know. It will be assumed they already know basic spells)

 

Combat Style: (Describe the way you use your fighting style)

 

Backstory: (How did you become an Iconoclast under Yoshirou? What of your life has led you to this day? Where did you come from? What have you achieved? )

 

[KDPtheKing]

Wtf is skill?
Should I describe my ship sir?

[Imnostrong]

Wtf is skill?
Should I describe my ship sir?

 

I assume skill was something like

navigating, cooking, leadership, marksman, crisis management, sensing potential or immediate danger?

 

regarding the ship it would sounded more cool if the weaponry is described XD

[KDPtheKing]

I think he meant dexterity lol. Because dexterity is what you just described skills to be

That is what L told me

[I-Am-X]

'Creating' CQC skills are such a pain lol. I managed to put 2 simple attacks down but I can't really think of anything out of the ordinary or that should be listed under the technique section considering there's nothing special about them.

Edited by I-Am-X, 21 November 2015 - 09:40 PM.

[Imnostrong]

I think he meant dexterity lol. Because dexterity is what you just described skills to be

That is what L told me

 

Oh we're talking bout the strong/weak attribute skill XD

 

yeah that was more or less bout the dexterity 

'Creating' CQC skills are such a pain lol. I managed to put 2 simple attacks down but I can't really think of anything out of the ordinary or that should be listed under the technique section considering there's nothing special about them.

 

Maybe some imbued swordsmanship?

[I-Am-X]

Maybe some imbued swordsmanship?

 

Ready have something like that. Been trying to think of moves, mostly kicks, that will distant her away from her opponent so she can use her magic/ranged attacks.

But everything I come up with sounds completely generic lol.

[Imnostrong]

Ready have something like that. Been trying to think of moves, mostly kicks, that will distant her away from her opponent so she can use her magic/ranged attacks.

But everything I come up with sounds completely generic lol.

 

how bout making the enemy be one of your arrow and shot em far away? XD

 

well joke aside maybe you had some of Loraine Tech for that kind of maneuver? a highly dense spring boots that can throw enemy miles away?

[I-Am-X]

Backstory seems good. Let me ask you again how you planned on rivalling a sniper rifle with a magic bow? Just to be clear. I read the backstory and it wasn't so clear. If you plan on doing it during the course of the RP, the best chance is when we go to Loraine, and you out-shoot their snipers.

 

Forgot to answer this but I've kept thinking about it and haven't been able to think of a clear enough explanation. Wasn't sure exactly how to get it done, I was thinking the bow had something to do with it but idk. So I guess it needs to happen during the course of the RP because I've literally got nothing. Speaking of the bow, how would Hilda come to acquire it? Considering she isn't a weapon crafter, she surely didn't do it. I can imagine doing the enchantments though. Maybe something to deal with the power Yoshirou acquired?

 

how bout making the enemy be one of your arrow and shot em far away? XD

 

well joke aside maybe you had some of Loraine Tech for that kind of maneuver? a highly dense spring boots that can throw enemy miles away?

 

Not exactly tech savvy nor do I think Loraine has something like that, we're talking about the tech level being that of what you'd expect to find in the industrial revolution age, after all. =p

[Imnostrong]

Forgot to answer this but I've kept thinking about it and haven't been able to think of a clear enough explanation. Wasn't sure exactly how to get it done, I was thinking the bow had something to do with it but idk. So I guess it needs to happen during the course of the RP because I've literally got nothing. Speaking of the bow, how would Hilda come to acquire it? Considering she isn't a weapon crafter, she surely didn't do it. I can imagine doing the enchantments though. Maybe something to deal with the power Yoshirou acquired?

 

 

Not exactly tech savvy nor do I think Loraine has something like that, we're talking about the tech level being that of what you'd expect to find in the industrial revolution age, after all. =p

 

well the homing and guiding thing already tops the sniper all you need to do is mark the enemy by binocular or some scope and the arrow will fly there on its own, which making the arrow invisible would make it even more deadly

 

well if the nation can make something like a genocidal magidroid, i'm pretty sure some of it's leg part could be modified for such things.

but anyway since she's not tech savvy, maybe from magical approach? anti gravity kick? burning kamen rider kick?

 

how bout along the line of glyph making, like wiess

 

[I-Am-X]

well the homing and guiding thing already tops the sniper all you need to do is mark the enemy by binocular or some scope and the arrow will fly there on its own, which making the arrow invisible would make it even more deadly

 

lol there's no need for something like that. For one her homing pretty much takes care of things for her and guiding when the situation calls for it and plus, if you looked at my CS and in the equipment section, you'd see that her bow as a magic glass attached to her bow that's enchanted with a 'zoom' enchantment which is the magic version of a scope. So she's covered from all angles.

 

As for the 'invisible' arrow, she has something similar in her wind enchantment which, by manipulating the wind, is able to go at really high speeds making it seem like such to the untrained eye. Plus, an invisible arrow would be a bit ridiculous, wouldn't it? lol

 

As for the other stuff....just no lol.

The only real CQC techniques worth mentioning on the CS should be those to create distance and nothing more, considering if they're just no name scrubs she can take care of them with normal CQC attacks. Not really sure how many attacks L would like me to have before I get the Ok, though.

Edited by I-Am-X, 21 November 2015 - 11:12 PM.

[Geo]

 

Hey, remember me? If there is anything that needs to tweak, I'm sure to fix.

He's basically the pointman.

 

Spoiler

| Gods? What Gods do you speak of? Fools, you have been deceived. There were never any in the first place.

Name | Sofis Archae

Age | 28

Gender | Male

Nationality | Frinian

Personality | Quiet, Calm, Collected, Observant.

 

----- | | Combat Abilities | | -----

 

Spirit Avatar |

Spoiler

Name | Yujeh

Size | Slightly larger than an average man.

Special Abilities |

• Shimmering Hymn: Heals wounds in battle. Long cooldown period.

• Canticle of Ruin: Light AoE spell; rain of destructive light. Long cooldown period.

• Crystal Cage: Encases foes with crystals. Medium cooldown.

• Crystal Rain: A shower of magic crystals.

• Crystal Shield: A shield of magic crystals to protect Yujeh and Sofis from any harm for a short period of time.

 

Description |

Yujeh is Sofis’ avatar, and proves to be the best partner when it comes to combat. She is good with a blade and quick on her step, compensating for Sofis’ slowness. Capable of using light elemental spells, she tears down her foes with his speed and range. She is also capable of support, having the ability to heal. But due to its long cooldown period, it is best used as a last resort.

 

Aside from her special abilities, she conjures up a sword of light in battle. Her attacks are quick, clean and deals less damage, unlike Sofis' more slower, dirtier, and damaging style of fighting. Although her attacks are weaker, it shouldn’t be underestimated.

 

 

Strongest Attribute | Strength

Weakest Attribute | Speed

 

Primary Style | Swordsmanship: Vanguard - Pave the way to victory.

Sofis takes the advance and charge into battle, leaving no-one standing in his way. Slashes from Tenebrae are heavy, but have long range and deals plenty of damage. With Sofis’ expertise in swordsmanship, they are more quicker and is still just as deadly. Thanks to the reach of his blade, this style involves AoE attacks that make for great crowd control.

 

Secondary Style | Soul Tag Team - The mortal shell has its limits, but the spirit is limitless.

Sofis’ avatar will destroy any foe that gets in my way, and he shall fight alongside it. Impressive combos are now possible with a more deadlier effect, and his reach is more effective. With his ally, his back is covered and getting blindsided is a near impossibility.

 

Skills | Tactician, CQC, opportunist, survivability, crowd control.

 

Equipment |

• Tenebrae: A family heirloom. A claymore that is nearly indestructible with a mysterious dark energy stored inside.

• Alyut: An enchanted steel plate armor with incredible toughness.

 

Techniques |  

• Avatar Burst: Sometimes Sofis cannot take the heat and is able to sacrifice avatar in a massive AoE explosion. Time to resummon avatar gets significantly more longer.

• Spirit Shield: Instead of summoning his avatar, Sofis can summon a temporary spirit shield to protect him.

• Eternal Dusk: The hidden ability of the Archae family heirloom. Dark energy stored within the sword is released, dealing a very heavy AoE DoT attack. Never been used before, effects are unknown.

• Lux Aeterna:  Enchanted armour shines brightly and stuns foes from the light.

• Heart Tear: Sofis’ strength isn’t for show, and the blood on his gauntlets either. He is strong enough to tear out the hearts of his enemies. Used as last resort.

 

Combat Style | Get into the heat of the battle, but stay calm and assess the situation. Use every opportunity as an advantage to compensate for the weak speed.

 

Backstory |

 

The Gods are dead. I always knew that. You tend to come up to that conclusion as you continue to think about the world.  The more you question, the more you doubt the way things are. I kept that revelation to myself, for I do not know what would happen to me if I do tell others about it. But I still keep thinking, observing, and asking question. The world isn’t so simple than what it seems to be.

 

I have been born from a strong family bloodline of warriors. They were not noblemen but they have fought valiantly in many battles. Our success in battle caused us to make a name for ourselves.  I lost my brother a long time ago, and his armor, Alyut, is now mine to carry. Alongside my family heirloom, Tenebra, I stand as the last of the Archae.

 

These Eidolon technologies discovered were outstanding. Yet, they definitely spelt destruction of our world. Their potential to wreak havoc amongst the world is too great. I have killed many by my own hands alongside my fellow soldiers, but the numbers will grow even more exponentially through the use of these technologies. It will be soon until the escalation of this war will reach the tipping scale and everything will be all too late to save.

 

I met this young man, Yoshirou, and he was pretty astounding character. He had the same idea as me, but he is brave enough to act upon it. I swear by my sword that I will fight alongside him as an iconoclast. The Gods may have never existed, but to the many, they are still very well alive. So it is my calling to kill the idea of Gods from each and everyone of them they dare to defend it. I carry the name of the Archae, and I will show them all what we are made of.

 

 

 

Updated. Also gave the sword, Tenebrae, an opportunity to be used as a nice plot point (if you want).