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4 dh lawrence? no.. you don't get the joke, DH Lawrence writes very sensual stuff, but it's not sultry...

Have you read Charolette's lover, sons and daughter?


It's psychosexual more than anything. I want to write this scene where the FMC comforts the MC - they hug but I don't want them to kiss, because they don't want to cross that line (boss and subordinate)


the FMC is like a beast-grill so I'm thinking the MC just bites her on the horn... hmm....


and then there's another scene where one of the main anatagonist tries to psychosexual rape the FMC by strapping her to this machine that extracts her memory (memory penetration hue hue) and I'm trying to figure how to write it in a manner without making it too overt ...

this coming from a guy whose main relationship with grills is in 2D playing persona games trying to max out high school grills affection points

Plot goes like this.

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Or something like that. There are some variants of the story, haven't figured it all out, but I wish I could write fantasy stories for a living hue hue

I've been obsessed with writing this, been slacking off from work and online like crazy...


Edited by Feishy Pit Boar, 24 September 2020 - 06:29 PM.


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Well, I have read indeed nothing by him. You must keep in mind my knowledge of such Greats of Literature and so forth is actually quite bare-bones (I've never been personally that interested in the who's who of western literature, only in writing itself). As I haven't the foggiest who he is, I may have gotten the wrong idea glancing at the Wikipedia page. And other stuff.

What I got was the vague impression that he pushed some liberal-for-the-time views on sexuality, and some pithy quotes with a "back to nature" sort of mood, but that was about as far as I could parse for this context. Here we run into a problem as I generally assume at first blush that any author viewed from a classic literature lens as having bearing on the topic of sexuality, is genteel code for "this is racy as fuck", just like when certain classical paintings of naked ladies that are considered Art and described as "something something capturing the sensual subject matter", instead of calling them out for what they were (i.e. socially acceptable light pornography for the rich).

In any case not the sort of thing I'm naturally inclined to want to read, most probably.

Though anyway, one of the other things I got as an impression was that he wrote a huge amount of stuff that's contradictory in tone. And that he was a deliberate provocateur:

When the full unexpurgated edition of Lady Chatterley's Lover was published by Penguin Books in Britain in 1960, the trial of Penguin under the Obscene Publications Act of 1959 became a major public event and a test of the new obscenity law. [...] The 1959 act (introduced by Roy Jenkins) had made it possible for publishers to escape conviction if they could show that a work was of literary merit. One of the objections was to the frequent use of the word "fuck" and its derivatives and the word "cunt".


He sounds like quite the character, in any case.

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All that said, why go for psychosexual rape? Consent is good. ~w~

Even well-intentioned hugs can be bad sometimes if they're non-consensual, and you know how I feel about (at least non-creeper) hugs as a force for universal good.

Also horn-biting sounds distinctly like something that would be a violation of workplace conduct in a world where it's relevant, but that's just me. :'p

(Write what you want, of course, this is just my gut reaction to the out-of-context commentary provided.)

Oh, and definitely actual romance experience is not a prerequisite for writing about romance... So shoujo manga has taught me. :x Fantasy relationships are often about what we yearn for anyway, not what we think is realistic.

The problem particularly when men write like that, seems rather to be the exacerbation of an existing tendency to want to objectify women completely in an unflattering way, and utterly fail to consider what the experience would fully be like from their perspective (at worst, think that girls are necessarily mystically differently from themselves, such that this is all somehow unknowable) and to end up writing something that's both unbelievable and degrading.

Edit: when I wrote all that I only had the first half of your post. Hold on.

Sounds like a decently interesting plot outline if, of course, a bit too dark for my tastes. (Not saying I never read anything like that, just tends to make me depressed and/or a sadpanda so I have a very limited intake.)

And it's good to be passionate about something—just if possible make sure you're paying a little attention to whether your lack of attention to other things is going to be something you regret in the future, because downward spirals are not fun. I hope you're enjoying yourself and will continue to do so :'3

*hugs* (I considered adding "and fully platonic horn-biting" but maybe that would be too cheeky :'p)


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6 i've been quite literally obsessing over what i wrote yesterday... it's like i'm possessed or something... weird



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and today... i literally have to stop myself from looking at the story or i'll start writing / rewriting...


sigh, why couldn't anything in life be easy...


I've got two chapters written, first chapter about 2k words, second chapter 3k words


the next chapter is partially done at 2k 

the final chapter is maybe another 2k 

 

probably will take the whole of next month... halp 7



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*hugs*

I can't stop you though x.x; Just do remember that you do have the option to step away if it becomes too much, and not enjoyable...

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Take care of yourself, okay?

...If all else fails, honestly, it's kind of the year for going barking mad. If it comes to it at least we'll all have good company!

Edited by pokari, 28 September 2020 - 07:29 AM.


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9 yeah i'll just have to refrain from looking at it or i'll get sucked in

it's a good story actually, imo... i wrecked my brains and threw all of the best animes i've seen and put them together 


i don't think we've seen the worst of the pandemic tbh, in the europeans at least they've already got their second wave, so if we're following them, then....


although i called my friend this weekend and he said the san francisco zoo is open for business, with reservations , idk... maybe things are ok


yawn.... 



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I feel like we've already had a second wave—it just merged with the first one so as to become indistinct.

A third (?) wave is nonetheless probably in order, given how we're acting.

Which isn't to say we aren't getting smarter at living alongside the virus.

We're not following Europe though. We're in a class of one, baby! I wonder if we're not now statistically one of the deadliest countries of the world to live in. XD

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A bright side to being unemployed is being able to play games that are massive time-sinks. Kenshi is great, but after four solid days of near-nonstop playing, it still feels like I'm only starting to get past just scratching the surface.

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11 :D kenshi sounds like a fun game

I like Kenshin tho 

Shinsengumi fighting! (Kenshin was a royalist, fighting the daimyos ie the shinsengumi so he was on the wrong side of history )

 

But.... if he was born a little bit later, as I understand the positions became switched, where the royal family became in favor of reforms (meiji reformation) while the daimyos were opposed... 



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I mean to be fair I have no idea how much of the game I've experienced—or am only starting to get an idea about now, anyway. The entire thing is broader than it is deep so sometimes there's often less content than I expect in a particular corner (but there are a lot of corners).

I think I've seen about half the map by now (well, less than that but large swathes are same-ish). I'm starting to see the end of the settlement research tree and whatever surprises it might have. The combat I still don't fully understand, but I think I understand which bits I don't understand.

But it seems like the game plays quite differently if you, say, settle in a different area than I did (or, heck, don't settle anywhere, it's not strictly required... I spent the first whole day of playing running around the map trying to figure out where I wanted to settle. But the gameplay without a settlement can feel a little shallow.)

Also apparently there's faction quests (to some limited degree?) which I have seen absolutely nothing of.

The weirdly missing bit is the ability to wage outright war properly, considering how all the hard parts of that are already done; can seemingly make enemies of everyone and wipe out towns (with great difficulty for cities), but can't claim victory / claim towns / get closure.

Mods possibly may fix some of that, it seems.

There's a lot of stuff that's imperfect but the whole thing actually makes good on its promise of meaningful flexibility of playstyle which is certainly something.

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13 4x? (expand, explore, exterminate... can't remember the last x)  

I bought hundreds dollars of games over the summer and i did play civ beyond earth and anno a bit

for anno i even failed the tutorial - image that .... 



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4x isn't really my thing, as I've learned after a while in life. I usually start out excited when playing one and then it gets old for me really quickly. Why should I care about conquering everything or being the richest empire, or whatever? By the time I've seen a good chunk of the actual content a 4x has, I'm pretty much done with it ~w~ The gameplay cycle itself feels more like work to me, and with no reward ("winning" just means discarding the empire I spent so much time building!)

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Anyway. It's definitely not 4x. The internet has described it as a flexible RPG/RTS hybrid which is probably as close as any terse pithy description is going to get. But with no particular end-goal, beyond survival I suppose (and I'm too chicken with my saving-and-loading to experience some of the more interesting sides of that—like getting knocked out and getting kidnapped by slavers and branded for life and having to escape, or losing a limb and needing to pick up a prosthetic (which range from the barely-functional to the strictly-superior-to-flesh cyborg limbs, but are either way annoying to obtain and expensive to maintain).

I do have a nice little town going with six or seven people, some fields, a handful of buildings, and as of today some new really twisty town walls running through the ocean in the hopes of setting up a kind of tower defense to catch raiding invaders. If it gets good enough, I may stop forking money over to the tax men each time they show up and laugh as I make mortal enemies of the neighboring empire with impunity, although then I wouldn't be able to walk over and shop in any of the nearby cities so I'm not sure.

Edited by pokari, 01 October 2020 - 07:36 AM.


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15 alright, i've got me story about 80% done... so happeh

you want to check it out? 



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Ehm... I can if you really want me to, but I don't know how far I'll be able to get—it sounded much too dark for my tastes; perhaps something I would have found intriguingly dark in an earlier era of my life, but nowadays would simply make me depressed; unhappy stories with unhappy endings simply are not my thing. There's nothing intrinsically wrong with them, of course, I just don't respond to them well.

I would not wish to dampen your spirits, though; if you really do need someone to read it, I shall try as best I can.

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17 oh no, 

no pressure bud


i'm used to dark stuff, but don't wanna color your worldview



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I wonder what 2020 will look like in the proverbial hindsight.

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21 the year people get to work from home



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22 two little ducks

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23 fight me