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finally posted... and Happy [soon to be] New Year 

I wish i could say I have celebration with my family

but as it turns out every member of it already has other plan that didn't include me

so yeah I'm pretty much free these holiday season...

Wow looks like some heated discussion is happened while I was absent

I apologize for my late reply..

Regarding eve whether she's a super AI or not, I personally didn't make her that way, She was a byproduct of a crisis. And even though she overcomes the Genocidal Magidroid, she still has many flaws. She cannot transfer her consciousness due to disturbance during the first transfer (y know like when u shutdown or turnoff your console while saving the game kinda thing) making her data somehow identified as corrupt.

She can still input new information through link, but her own data cannot be upload nor deleted. Thanks to this Eve can only be stuck with one Magidroid Body she had and cannot be overwrite by any kind of hack.

I think L description is mostly spot on.

Regarding whether she has better software or hardware i would say Adam-01 is the one who had those, while Eve-01 is more likely a downgrade of Adam-01... how Eve won against Adam is also thanks to Gerrard being there, I want to leave those story as a mystery and a spice for my next character.

but..

Personally eve was more like a battle asset for Gerrard, since the Doc is more of a scientist nerd than a battle maniac, most of my action scene will be staring eve for most part.

Regarding the problem with manning the Airship I rather feel more comfortable to leave it to King, since eve have to man the ship and king can just access the bridge com or hack himself in..

and also regarding King, Ritsu from Assasination Classroom come to mind...

please correct me if i get the wrong impressions.

some add on information for those who cares...

L please help me if i overstep some boundaries.

Five. My CS is only in the PM right now but my character is an experimental Lorainian commander A.I.

 

Gerard is going to be a busy dude.

 

Gerard is going to be a busy dude.

 

Gerard is going to be a busy dude.

now why do i get a bad feeling about this?

Another thing your character should be aware of Imno is the creator of cyborg technologies (which will be more important in Reverence), when it came to present a new tech for Loraine to get behind in order to keep up with the other warring countries, it was between the Magidroids, and the cyborg enhancements. Magidroids won out pretty easily, and why wouldn't they? They were effectively a disposable army. The cyborg creator still works in Loraine's labs today as the head assistant, her name is Liesa Kornelia.

 

In Venerated, technology was not advanced enough to make cyborg enhancements affordable, but that will change in the years between Venerated and Reverence.

So I assume this cyborg enhancements also involve magic inside their technology? and more expensive to manufacture rather than the magidroid?

I just remembered, I need a pic for my old man without the armor. Any help is appreciated.

something like this?

and I found something while browsing for your Pic XD

 

Anyways, for some reason my text would sometimes begin being written backwords at the start of my sentence while I was making this application. Anyone else get this problem?

 

Also, since all the other cool character ideas the GM provided were being taken, I decided to try my hand at the Dogma user. Yeah, very Dante's Inferno inspired, and given how a lot of characters in this RP also use Ice and Fire elemental magic in some way I tried to be unique. Hopefully I adhered to the GM's laws while also stretching them a bit to create an Iconoclaust that also has faith in something other than a God.

 

Or can he be one of those evil types that still believes in a God? The ones you wanted to be a bad guy in the RP? I'm cool with trying that out, or being an Iconoclaust. Also, I figured the Kingdom of Arnerfell was just a bunch of Vikings/Nords/Norse who used medieval monarchies to rule over them, so I put knights and lords in my application, hopefully that fits the Lore? I mean it is a Kingdom. I also wanted to try my hand at incorporating some non-Lore specific tribe that is connected to Di-Ifrit, it would help explain how Caspian got his powers and began his journey. Hopefully that isn't Lore breaking either.

 

Spoiler

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Name: Caspian Riddlecrow

Age: N/A

Gender: M

Nationality: Arnerfellan

 

Personality: TBA

 

 

::Combat::

 

Strongest Attribute: Strength

Weakest Attribute: Speed

 

 

Primary Style:

 

Seventh Circle - Heavy Melee with broad reach and lingering effects

Violence is what Caspian indulges to, and heat is what drives life to its ultimate demise. Caspian highlights this natural cycle by imbuing himself  with​ heat, making his armor and body temperature rise and his violent combat abilities mightier, while also becoming slightly faster in speed. His melee attacks suddenly gain extra range and reach, as well as power, from the flames and heat that power his strikes up and leaves enemies burning and scalded or poisoned by toxic fumes.

 

Secondary Style:

 

Seventh Circle - Ranged destruction abilities of short reach

Boiling blood and burning rain land within his general vicinity whenever Caspian raises his blade to the sky and summon the power of the Seventh Circle. Caspian is also able to transform parts of his body into an amorphous cloud of burning sand that can fly through the air at high speeds and shred apart opponents. He is also able to conjure a pack of hell-hounds that can charge through enemy lines, lighting them aflame or tearing them apart with lava-hot bite and claw. All abilities in this fighting style have long cooldown periods.

 

Ninth Circle - Slow debuffs and AoE Freeze

Caspian, being a native Arnerfellan, has learned to implement the icy climate and environmental energy of his home into his magical combat by applying chilling winds or bitter cold locks onto enemies, either slowing them by a considerable amount until they freeze to death or by encasing an entire area in ice.​ His Seventh Circle attacks do extra damage to frozen targets. All abilities in this fighting style have short cooldown periods.

 

Skills:

 

Dogma usage

Fortitude

Great elemental resistance to Ice and Fire​

Great elemental skill ​in Ice and Fire sorcery

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Equipment:

 

Di-Ifrit's Blessing​

The icon of Caspian's faith. A set of armor that is only wearable by Caspian. The armor is corrupted with demonic magic, and thus has become super-reinforced to a point of nigh indestructibility given how strong Caspian's belief in Di-Ifrit is.

 

Torment

The hilt of a greatsword that naturally connects to the inside of Caspian's gauntlet, once it is released a great blade ejects out from the handguard. This blade is so bright and hot it seems like it is made of light and fire, and the damage is does with its sweeping blows or crushing cuts backs this claim up. Torment was also gifted by Di-Ifrit after the being looked upon Caspian's broken sword and salvaged it into a new weapon.

 

Techniques:

 

Seventh Circle - First/Outer Ring

Caspian summons his burning rain in a small area while also turning the ground into a small pool of boiling blood that also creates toxic fumes, and as the opponents struggle to escape Caspian swings his sword and creates a ring of floating fire which closes in on the area, forcing enemies to stay confined to the boiling blood and burning rain. No one in this region can be frozen while this ability is active. Heavier enemies sink more into the pool.

 

Seventh Circle- Middle Ring

Caspian summons his pack of hell-hounds, and he also charges with them in his high-speed sand form. Together they decimate enemies with little armor or who are frozen.

 

Seventh Circle - ​Final Ring

Caspian weaves through a crowd of enemies in his sand form, occasionally swinging Torment while a rainfall of burning fire falls upon the crowd, doing extra damage to all if they were frozen beforehand.

 

Ninth Circle - Lake of Death (Treachery Incarnate)

All enemies affected by this ability turn on each other in a rabid fight, and those who fight among themselves and rack up more and more kills gain more sin. The higher the sin they have, the more ice damage they do. Once the ability wears off and the survivors returns to normal, the ice effect on the crowd turns the floor into frozen water, where those who have killed the most or weigh the most sink the deepest past the ice into the freezing water below while those who have little sin are trapped on the ice. This Ninth Circle skill has a longer cooldown than any of his other skills, including Seventh Circle skills.

 

Combat Style:

 

Caspian decides to either begin an encounter through two methods:

1. Hitting hard and swift by creating his burning rain and boiling rain, while also sending the hell-hounds in while he too flanks the enemy in his sand form.

2. Going slow by using ​his Ninth Circle abilities to debuff the enemy and then letting the agonizing suffering of his lingering damage abilities of his Seventh Circle skills kill the enemy.

 

He does not prefer dueling people, but takes great fun in attacking a swarm. Killing many people at once pleases Di-Ifrit, who only wants lifeforce in great amounts in order to be sustained. A fire must continually be fed and stoked, or else it will die. Killing an enemy one-at-a-time in long duels is impractical.

 

Backstory:

 

Caspian Riddlecrow, a ​child who lived in the Arnerfell mountains learning craftsmanship from his family. His brothers and father were great role models to him, when they weren't with the ladies (and men) or drunk off their asses. The Kingdom of Arnferfell was the frigid home to giant warriors, and Caspian was not an exception. He grew up into a handsome young man, and although the Kingdom held mighty warriors none aside from mercenaries were ever sent into world war happening just outside of the country's borders. Caspian was always an adventurous, violent type of child. The only ones who kept him in check were his mother and sisters, occasionally the other girls of the village as well. The children looked up to Caspian for some time, before they realized he was simply thirsty for a fight. He wasn't sadistic, but he also was too enthusiastic of resorting to fighting for any issue, no matter how small. Trained into a Knight after getting in some trouble with his family, Caspian learned the ways of the blade and how to follow orders from nobility with no question.

 

It was one day, in the ​highest hills of the snowy forests that covered the mountains, that Caspian discovered how ignoble his compatriots and those he was sworn to protect were. They hunted a tribe of people who lived secluded in the forests, taking pride in slaying these innocent folk not even the rest of society had much of a clue of. Caspian himself was surprised by his lord's love of the hunt, and although he was excited to also try his hand at hunting the best game in the world, his fellow man, he realized that he could not come to accomplish this goal. His knights and lord were brutally slaying the elderly and children, their treatment of the woman was horrid, and the manner of which they hunted the warriors pf this small tribe was dishonorable. The culture of these people was practically being destroyed, in utter silence. Caspian had not raised his hand to anyone during this expedition, and one day when he took a walk to clear his head of the terrors he was witnessing at the camp, Caspian stumbled across the temple that this tribe had been guarding in secret for many, many ages.

 

Within the temple was a​ shrine, and a sarcophagus. Caspian, driven by curiosity, opened the sarcophagus up, he was mystified by this tomb. Without warning, he fell into the sarcophagus which was more than met the eye. He fell and fell, screaming the whole way, surrounded by pitch blackness. For what seemed like days he continued to fall, or at least he felt that way. It was then that he was caught, and set upon what he could only judge to be the floor. The hand that caught him had been enormous, rough, and incredibly hot, hot enough to go through his armor and dampen his clothing. The fall had broken his sword, and he was starving and filthy.

 

In a massive chamber of​ intense heat and the raucous clanking of chains, Caspian met face to face with Di-Ifrit.

 

 

 Di-Ifrit was not a God, but something more of a divine, primordial demon who knew of the evil of man. He craved the souls and life force of the darkest human beings for his own mysterious goals. He also was pleased in the slaughter of human life, no matter the occasion. Now with a champion in his midst after so many years, Di-Ifrit was overjoyed to find a man who had a hate seething in him. He offered Caspian a chance at avenging the tribe and righting the evil of his lord's and fellow knights expedition. He also tasked him with a journey to vanquish those that believed in false Gods, justifying themselves in their conquests through their faith. Caspian whole-heartedly agreed, and slowly became Di-Ifrit's cold-hearted Champion.

 

Caspian left the temple, discovering that time had been distorted to his perception during his fall and conversation with Di-Ifrit. Returning to the camp with his Blessing and Torment, Caspian slaughtered the knights and his lord while also freeing the remnants of the tribe. Leaving the Kingdom of Arnerfell as a feared monster, Caspian Riddlecrow was assumed to have been slain with the others once the search parties discovered the now scorched camp. Caspian stumbled across the peculiar Yoshirou soon after leaving the borders of the Kingdom of Arnerfell and entering the Chang Dynasty, who informed him of Iconoclausts, and their journey to extinguish false Gods and stop their worshippers from destroying themselves. If it meant slaying evil men or accumulating a huge amount of life force for his own God in order to keep up their agreement, Caspian was on board, especially if Di-Ifrit was also going to enjoy the death of those who worshipped lesser Gods. Di-Ifrit, the Fallen One, the Red-Warden, the only force in the universe that Caspian could put his faith and gratitude towards, having seen the demon's power firsthand, was what provided him with the Dogma to wield his skills and sword.

 

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I really really really hope that there will never be a plot where all the Iconoclast pit against each other... especially not with this guy on the same pit.

and here I thought surviving a genocidal magidroid was the worst thing that could ever happened.

Wtf is skill?
Should I describe my ship sir?

I assume skill was something like

navigating, cooking, leadership, marksman, crisis management, sensing potential or immediate danger?

Done

No worries

Oups missed that 'before dead' thing... Xd ma bad

Already post the revised ver. at d cache XD

TADAAAA!!

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Dark Tunnel
Unknown City, Unknown Country
Time: Unknown
 
 Damn!! this is scary!!
Iam walk down the dark Pathways
 
He look at his surrounding as he quicken his pace.
 
His eyes already accustomed to the dark.
 
other than the girl in front of him, He can't see where his fellow kidnapee is
 
but since there's no fork on the road they should be in front of him.
 
 
 
after walking for a while he saw the other had stopped and waiting for them.
 
He saw the other girl waved at them.
 
Once they gathered, the other girl starting to whispered
 
 "I know we're strangers who happened to get wrapped up in this mess,

and are under no obligation to listen and follow through on it,

but I may have an idea of what to do with him, "
 
she referred to their kidnapper.
 
"Introductions can wait but Will you hear me out?"
 
Iam nodded silently.
 
"Now, it's quite a simple plan, yet highly risky,

considering the one we're up against and the confines on this tunnel don't allow us much wiggle room.

But first off, did any of you also pick up some of the scalpels off the ground?"
 
Iam showed her his one rusty scalpel...
 
The other seems to pick up more sturdy and clean sharp scalpel than his..
 
Well, everyone has their own opinion.
 
"Now,"
 
as she glancing to the girl,
 
"Since the both of us have the most of them,

we should stay a good enough distance behind him,

but enough of a distance to where you feel comfortable hitting the target.

Given what we have to work with, hitting him isn't the goal here.

We need to distract him, keep him off balance, so he,"
 
Looking at the black man, she continued
 
"Can catch him by surprise and stab him. If you don't have a scalpel of your own to work with, I'll give you one of mine.

Now, if you can't get a good shot on him, don't try to act like a hero and go for another swing if you don't see an opening..

When you get the chance, try to push him down or kick him in the legs or just find a way to get him to go down.

I'm sure all of us aren't stupid to simply believe he's actually unarmed because he is.

Hence the reasoning. But first, we should have him,"
 
Now turning her attention to him
 
"act as a decoy. Or bait have at you. He'll run past the man and gain his attention,

then we'll throw the scalpels to turn his attention back to us,

All the while giving him the time he needs to catch him off guard. Questions?"
 
She finished while looking around at him and the other to see if we have any issue with her 'plan'.
 
Iam Gulped...

In such a short time this girl has already grasp the situation.

Planed our movement perfectly with precise detail.

Usually someone who are in this kind of situation would panic and crack, and yet

she's so composed and calm.

Iam couldn't helped but think that she is no ordinary girl.

Either she had this kind of situation before or she already experience something worse than this.

and suddenly..

the mad man Laugh, maddening laugh while waving his weapon.

Startling him and the other three.

and as they about to composed themselves.

Another rumbling noise echoing from behind them.

Getting louder and louder.

Sounded like something are coming their way.

and it doesn't sound friendly....

"We've got no choice now. Move!!"

after hearing the girl loud whisper, Iam Start to run.

Aargh the Hell with it, Here goes nothing!!

and with that in mind, He run as fast as his leg could take him.

His role is to be the bait.