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[Shinmaru]

Hmmm I'll be MIA for a little while maybe a few weeks or months due to some internal problems but I'll still continue with the developments I'll try to keep in touch..

No problem, solve any situation that you may have, we'll be here!

I will for now omit Haname Aoi from the story till you make it back.

[Shinmaru]

We need a group name, Any suggestions?

[Shinmaru]

::UPDATE:: Summus Visual Art
We have our development forum, where the full discussion will take place, you can join us if you'd like and/or join our Dev team.
LINK:
http://summus-va.forums.net.bz/

[Shinmaru]

Some Character Design by Niiw:

Spoiler

First CG Design:

Spoiler

[Yan Q]

interesting *nods*

have a firm plotline yet? which genre are you guys thinking about?

my favourite is mysteryy~ woooh~ but I don't think it's going to happen with this one ^^"
it'd be nice if we could learn a little bit more about our mc and his/the girls' past through it, and not just a straightforward dating-sim.

hope it's going well (:

[Shinmaru]

interesting *nods*

have a firm plotline yet? which genre are you guys thinking about?

my favourite is mysteryy~ woooh~ but I don't think it's going to happen with this one ^^"
it'd be nice if we could learn a little bit more about our mc and his/the girls' past through it, and not just a straightforward dating-sim.

hope it's going well (:

No, this isn't going to be a date sim, for a date sim I would have to make my own framework, since I don't like the one that the users at ren'py made.

the main genre is Love, Tragedy and Comedy(not everything is going to be tragic but there are some path that are.) we have to make, the dialog of act 1(complete it).

[Shinmaru]

We are in need of story writers and Artist, to help with the story and character designs.

[Zero King]

May I help with the writing?

[Shinmaru]

May I help with the writing?

Yes, you can, for what heroine do you plan to write for?
Available:
Saionji Karen
Haname Aoi

[Zero King]

hmm, Is it possible to do both?

if not then Saionji Karen.

Should I join your site?

Edited by Zero King, 05 August 2012 - 09:19 AM.

[Niiw]

Should I join your site?

That would be good i guess ^^

Hi and welcome to the project btw~

[Zero King]

Hi and thank u

[Shinmaru]

hmm, Is it possible to do both?

if not then Saionji Karen.

Should I join your site?

You can do any and as many as you like, but one at a time!

Welcome, aboard, also you have been added to the VN Developers group in the forum.

[Zero King]

Alright good both and Thank you!

Edited by Zero King, 06 August 2012 - 12:59 AM.

[Boomsickle]

Sounds awesome and something that if completed will pave the way for other similar like minded people, but i see no loli character so i think it needs more loli

*EDIT* Add a side loli character with a special path and id be glad to write her path.

Edited by Boomsickle, 06 August 2012 - 08:00 AM.

[Shinmaru]

Will have to think about it, with the rest of the members, so it's is highly uncertain, though I like the idea!

[n/aㅤㅤ]

Could I possible act as a proofreader/editor (purely in the grammatical sense)?

If your first post was an actual sample of in-game script (shown in the spoiler), then may I have a chance to try editing it to show you what I can do?
If it's not an actual sample, then never mind...
><"

Spoiler

Current Progress:

Characters:
	Takumi Shinji:
		Description:
			The main character in this story, he is smart, looks are a little above average, he is "OK" in Sports.
			He lost his Father at an early age, and his mother at the end of Elementary, He currently lives with
			his Aunt, He attends Nakamura High-school and he is on his freshmen year.
		Age: 16

	Akihito Mika:
		Description:
			Heroine, Shinji's Childhood "Cousin"/friend, Athletic, considered one of the school beauties, Speculated
			to have a crush on her cousin Shinji, though deny it when questioned, Is the Student Council President,
			very Charismatic. Knows something that she doesn't want Shinji to find out.
		Age: 17

	Kitamura Mizuru:
		Description:
			Heroine, She is Vice President of the Photography Club, She has an unorthodox way of seeing things, she
			has many admirers but her personality makes her extremely hard to approach, can be mainly seen taking scene
			photos or "things" that catches her interest.
		Age: 17

	Saionji Karen:
		Description:
			Heroine, A half-blood Japanese/British, Somewhat outgoing and very assertive, been a bully to a particular
			"someone"(since middle school), Great Athlete and Ace Member of the School's Volleyball Team, has a bit
			of a "Tsun" personality, has rejected many love attempts from all of the guys, some have come to believe
			she is a "Lez".
		Age: 16

	Haname Aoi:
		Description:
			Heroine, The intellectual Girl, Very Smart, has no interest in the opposite nor same sex as that or so they
			say, member of the Literature Club, can be somewhat of a daydreamer, some say she reads BL books but no one
			has ever seen her reading it.
		Age: 18

	Yamamoto Sango:
		Description:
			Shinji's friend, Short Stop for the baseball team, usually hangs out with Shinji, but it's short-lived
			because of baseball practice, has a goofy personality and likes to tease Shinji about Mika.
			Dependable, but somewhat stupid from time to time.
		 Age: 16

Story:

	Have you ever thought you might be forgetting something...something important...that...you might have forgotten?
	I've felt this kind of feeling even since my parents passed away, I've had this prick in my heart that I have forgotten something that, even I would be scared to remember.
	I just... don't know...what...Shinji...huh?...Shinji,,,Wa...U...p...	

	Mika: SHINJI WAKE UP!!!!!! It's time to go to SCHOOL!
	Shinji: WAAAGH!!! Mi-Mika what the heck are ya doing!?
	Mika: Waking you up, ofcouse! Wake up we'll be late for breakfast and school if you don't hurry!
	Shinji: I get it, I get it, I'll wake up.
	Mika: Alright, I'll be downstairs.

	Mika has been cheery lately, it must be since we are starting the second term of my freshmen year, well time to get up.

	*Goes to washroom*

	Hmmm, we are almost out of toothpaste.

	Shinji: OBA-SAN WE ARE ALMOST OUT OF TOOTHPASTE!!
	Oba-san: I"M GOING OUT SHOPPING LATER, I'LL BE SURE TO BUY SOME!!

		*Brushes teeth*

	I've been living with Oba-san ever since the end of elementary when my mother passed away. It has been good my time with them, since Mika and Oba-san take good care of me. Still I never knew... SHIJI!!!!
	Shinji: ACK! HACK!! CHOUGH CHOUGH!!! YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!!!
	Mika: Waaa! I-I'm sorry Shinji.
	Shinji: *Sigh* Don't worry!
	Mika: Thank you! Anyways, we are going to be late, Shinji!
	Shinji: What time is it?
	Mika: 15 till 8!
	Shinji: WHAT? It takes us 15 minutes just to get to the gate!

	I run and get ready as soon as possible, barely getting properly dressed.
	I run down stairs and rush right out the door!

	Oba-san: Be careful when you run!!
	Shinji & Mika: We Will!
	Mika: Come one Shinji, run faster, I'm going to be late!!
	Shinji: I'm...run..ning..as...fast...as..I..can!
	Mika: Sheesh, you're helpless!
	Shinji: Yo..u..know...I'm..not..good...with..sports..even...less...running!
	Mika: ok I'll help you out!

	Mika suddenly grabs my hand, wow, a girls hands are so... *YANK*... Huh?

	Shinji: Mi-Mika! S-slow down, you're pulling too hard!!!!
	Mika: What cha say, Shinji?
	Shinji: AAAAHHGGG!!!

	Oto-san, Oka-san, I'll be there with you soon!!!

	Mika: We made it and with 5 minutes to spare!
	Shinji: T-that...must..be...a...new..world..record!
	Mika: right? I'm fast aren't I?

	Maybe too fast for my own good, note to self, never keep Mika waiting!

	Mika: Come, you have to get to your class.
	Shinji: Ok..I'll...be..there,..let...me..catch...my..breath!
	Mika: Ok Shinji, see you at lunch!
	Shinji: Right..See you later!

	*CHAACHIII*

	Shinji: huh? did I hear a camera shutter?

	*Spots the culprit.*

	Girl: He hee!

	*Girl runs away.*

	Who the heck was that girl? Anyhow, I need to get to class, before I get yelled at!

Edited by ☆Snazzy☆Zombie☆Mudkip☆, 06 August 2012 - 12:10 PM.

[JustAPasserBy]

So yeah, I've been away for a little while. I have troubles regarding my PC units and it might take a while till I get a new one but I still want to take hold of my Aoi's route if its still possible with the group of course but if deadlines and such are a priority then I'm willing to take a step back to let someone write it.

[Meow Zorg]

if you need a music composer, i may give it a go. Always making up songs. Does it need to be 8-bit or any specific type of music? Can probably make something with some online music composing stuff.

[Shinmaru]

sorry, I haven't been active too much, we have been getting blackouts behind blackouts this past week, I honestly thought my PCs and Household Appliances would have been dead by now but all seems fine now.

JustAPasserBy, in order to progress we need to move on with the story, it would be nice if you can input anything you have so the next person can pick it up, we still await for your return.

Snazzy, I have a version 2.0 of the story, but it can get a look at for correction, proofreading is also important, you don't want the story to look like it was made by illiterates. My grammar is good, but there is always someone better.

Meow Zorg, yes you can compose, some 16-bit Menu sounds and a BGM would be good, other than Music tracks for the Game itself, it's a big task. But you are more than welcome.

if you need a music composer, i may give it a go. Always making up songs. Does it need to be 8-bit or any specific type of music? Can probably make something with some online music composing stuff.

Could I possible act as a proofreader/editor (purely in the grammatical sense)?

If your first post was an actual sample of in-game script (shown in the spoiler), then may I have a chance to try editing it to show you what I can do?
If it's not an actual sample, then never mind...
><"

Spoiler

So yeah, I've been away for a little while. I have troubles regarding my PC units and it might take a while till I get a new one but I still want to take hold of my Aoi's route if its still possible with the group of course but if deadlines and such are a priority then I'm willing to take a step back to let someone write it.

Edited by Shinmaru, 11 August 2012 - 04:52 PM.