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[wEr4]

is chapter 2 up and ready for reading?

yo'!!

Ah sorry sorry. The chapter's 3/4th written. I had to go back and remove some things 'cause I wasn't satisfied with it ._.

I'll upload it as soon as I get better :3

This is good... I mean really good.
You're doing great, Dubs, keep it up!
I can't wait for chapter 2!

I really like the Doctor, he seems like he is damn good at his job, and knows it.
The dialog is also definitely worth mentioning, I think it flows quite naturally.

Thank you so much for reading it! I really appreciate it.

[Orcraniil]

Thank you so much for reading it! I really appreciate it.

No, thank YOU for writing it. Damn good read, much better than mine.
I can't believe I hadn't noticed it until now. It actually makes me feel bad.
You put so much effort into each chapter, and it really shows through.

Edited by Orcraniil, 20 September 2012 - 12:48 PM.

[wEr4]

No, thank YOU for writing it. Damn good read, much better than mine.
I can't believe I hadn't noticed it until now. It actually makes me feel bad.
You put so much effort into each chapter, and it really shows through.

Gosh, how you flatter me! >_<

Hahaha. That's alright really. For an author, the fact that a person likes his work is enough. :3


I've read your work. Traitor!Coward! is quite good. I especially liked the fact that Sid enjoyed slicing the guard's flesh. Gave me an interesting idea.

Haven't been able to read past Chapter 2 though

(I've been lazy ._.)

[Orcraniil]

(I've been lazy ._.)

As have I, apparently having missed this gem for so long.

[Aarti]

I don't know why I'm reading chapter 1 only just now, but damn was it good. (I read it twice)
I'm really liking the doctor, he was so...for lack of a better word, badass!
I enjoy the dark tone of the story.
Keep up the good work Dubs. Eagerly wating for the next chapter.

[wEr4]

Chapter 2: Part One is now uploaded. :3

As have I, apparently having missed this gem for so long.

Hahahaha >__<

I don't know why I'm reading chapter 1 only just now, but damn was it good. (I read it twice)
I'm really liking the doctor, he was so...for lack of a better word, badass!
I enjoy the dark tone of the story.
Keep up the good work Dubs. Eagerly wating for the next chapter.

Hehehehe. Thanks, Aarti.

[Frost]

The mysteries continue to stack up.
It's safe to say I'm now hooked, can't wait for the next chapter!
I love main characters with a dark past or any past for that matter it gives them more depth.

Good Job Dubs! you continue to out do yourself everytime

[wEr4]

The mysteries continue to stack up.
It's safe to say I'm now hooked, can't wait for the next chapter!
I love main characters with a dark past or any past for that matter it gives them more depth.

Good Job Dubs! you continue to out do yourself everytime

Hehehe. It'd be a bit sad if the Doctor got this good without a past or something.

Thanks a lot for reading, Frost. I appreciate it.

[Lalbutt]

And now i understand all those references to The Doctor XD
great story dubs~ i love this Doctor guy~

[wEr4]

And now i understand all those references to The Doctor XD
great story dubs~ i love this Doctor guy~

Hehehehe.

Thanks for reading it, Lal. : )