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[Zero King]

I don't know if anyone has gone through it, but some people have a lot of rage inside of them that can control them.

[Maia]

I actually do understand it, sadly enough.
But, its been a long time past.
I just hope that you can get to the same place. >^.^<

Edited by Maia, 15 September 2012 - 12:45 AM.

[Zero King]

I'm not angry anymore, I'm in depression a lot times I just want to sit in a dark room with complete silence.

Why isn't life death its self?

Death chapter unknown

Hahahaha
Morgan's giggles were filled in joy, despair, and turmoil. She felt so much at one time, she didn't know how to act. One second she would cut her mother the next moment she would be playing with her mother. Who knew what she would do if this went on any longer?

Morgan looked around the hall, no one was there. She picked her mother's legs back up and continued to drag Diana.
She only stopped at the end of the hall to make sure no one was there. So no one could hear the screams...and laughter.

As she reached her door Morgan struggled to get her mother through the door. The woman wasn't fat but she weighed enough to make a 12 year old girl struggle.
Though eventually Morgan pulled her mother into her room and before she closed the door, she let out a laugh that would give Stephen king night terrors..........

[Maia]

Hmm.
In some ways you've go to wonder if she is bi-polar, skitzo, or has MPD.
Or if she has just been driven to insanity.
Its quite clear that she has a love/loathe relationship with her mother, but leans more towards the loathing.
But, which ever the case may be, its absolutely clear that the mother is the catalyst.

[Zero King]

Chapter ??

Morgans laugh ends with a smirk as her dear mother comes to. "Mor..." Diana's sentence is cut short as Morgan clasped her mothers mouth with her hand. "I'm Sorry Mama, Game time is over" she didn't remove her hand when she tore a piece of Diana's gaudy Sunday dress. Only then did she remove her only to gag her with the torn rag before Diana could let out any noise, word, or a plee to god....

Morgan ties her mothers feet and hands with an extension cord she tore from the wall. Diana's muffled words filled the room, Morgan stopped arranging the knot as she drew her face closer to her mothers. She put a single tingle up and rest it on her lips"Ssshhh! Mommy the game be over but the fun starts now"

Diana's eyes were filled as terror, her tormentor was her own daughter. Her own flesh in blood, why!? What did I do? Her mind was flooded with these questions. She was so absorbed into her thoughts, she didn't see Morgan retrieve a knife or raise it above her preparing to strike her dear mother......

All there to be heard was a scream like no other.........

[Frost]

Wow , what ever she did to Morgan must have been pretty bad if it made Morgan like this, and yet she claims she has no idea what she may have done.. tsk tsk shame on her.

Just a little something I noticed but wasn't the mother gagged? How can she still scream? Unless I'm missing something.

I like all the darkness in this one, just plain insanity, it's nice to read these sort of stories every now and then.

[Zero King]

Thank you for your comments as always Frost

Who said diana was the one to scream?

[Frost]

Oohh I'm intrigued you got me Zero

[Zero King]

nice, finally

[perish]

Wow morgan is has such a strong persona, ur writing is very interactive i can feel these scene like its happenning right infront of me. This is a great story

[Zero King]

Thank you very much AiNoKime:)

Edited by Zero King, 29 September 2012 - 11:59 PM.

[Maia]

Now I want to know who the scream came from and why.

You're getting better with the suspense, Zero!

Arugh!

[Yaomo]

this was interesting
dark is good some times

[Zero King]

Thank you takayuki

[Maia]

POST THE NEXT PAAAAART!!

Arugh!

The suspense!!!

~Falls over.~

[Zero King]

Sssh!...be patient please
Before zero has to scream
His mind is filled with Edgar Allan Poe
The raven can't escape watching the YouTube video
As it raps on the window
I can't let the raven go


Translation: I've been reading up on Edgar Allen poe , I borrowed his biography from the library. Halen showed me a YouTube video with James Earl Jones reading the raven by Edgar Allan Poe out loud. So my mind has been obsessed with writing stories based in London during the 1800s.
That is how I came up with the whispering, I allowed halen to write the story since she was itching to write something.
I will try to write death as soon as can please be patient maia

[Zero King]

Death


The scream stiffened our dear mother as she looked to the door when she heard her husband Paul banging on the door trying to break into the room.
Morgan crept to the door slowly while her mother screamed through her gags trying to warn her dear husband but it was too late. Morgan hid behind the door as she unlocked it, Paul came bursting in without thinking it would end with his….Death.

Diana screamed and screamed while trying to break her resistant’s but she couldn’t and all she was able to do is sit in horror as her daughter stuck a knife into her paul's back. Morgan let out a scream of delight as she repeatedly stabbed her dear "father" without a moment of hesitation. Paul dropped to his knees without seeing the cause of it or knowing its the girl who he swore to love forever like one of his own was holding the knife.

The man smiled to his wife as his eyes collapsed and he fell to the floor.

"How could you do that to hm?" diana screamed but her words were muffled.

"I know what you what to say mommy" Morgan walked over to her mother slowly while complaining about the blood on her dress without regard of the man she just killed.

She stopped and bent down infront of her mother while looking into the teary blue eyes of her creator she replied "That's what you get for breaking the rules of this game..Mommy..."

[Maia]

>O.O<
Okay, that little girl is just twisted! >^.^<
I love it!

[Zero King]

A teaser

Death

Hhhmm the man walks in his garden, he looks as if he was troubled by something.
"How do I do this?" The man puzzling asked himself out loud.

"How do I show her we may not be blood related but she is still my daughter"
The man hit his fist onto his palm with excitement

"That's it, its prefect"
He paced happily as he made plans in his mind while muttering like crazy.

"I'm sure you'll love it...Morgan"
The step father proclaimed happily shortly before his world would fade to darkness.
A blood wrenching scream bellowed through the whole house and even reached the ears of the man in the garden

"Morgan!!!!!"
He fled into the house forgetting all his plans and ran to his death.......

[Maia]

>O.O<
Oh man, and Morgan will never know it.