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[I-Am-X]

@X:

http://i.imgur.com/bdY67pA.jpg

 

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Awww, thanks for the effort. If I cant find something else, I'll surely consider it.

xD

[Diabolical Rhapsody]

I always forget something

Add a section for perks above the inventory

@DR
Well, that shortened background thing always gets met stuck. I do it so people don't create these insane backstories for teenagers in school.
But I asked for it so I have no complaints

Perks
Enhanced Agility
Enhanced Dexterity
Passively Runs Electricity through her whip, BUT she can also be shocked by it as well if she touched the blade end.
Btw, there is a school uniform you will Be wearing one.

IC: Sure I have no problems with uniforms, as far as they ascribe to my taste xP

if this wasn't obvious enough. I am working on a CS now.

 

Need pic help from Fay, Rogue or anyone having a stash.

 

Spoiler

Personal Info
Her Look:

Her Tattoos:

 

Name: Rothera Sanguinera
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Race: Demon
Classification: Freshman
Personality: Reading books, copying human sculptures, Playing Rugby.
History: Youngest daughter of Archdemon Azazel, she is the bad apple of the lot. In a way, she is too good to be a demon. She spends major time reading, playing and looking after the demon army of her dad much to his chagrin. One can say she has a really caring heart though a very competitive spirit. Her enraged form has been often seen by slacking teammates or opponents who fold over too easily as she likes nothing more than a good contest.

Clubs:  She has submitted request for Fight club and Art club.

Battle Setup:
Rank: D Rank
Battle Points: 2000

Battle Style: Dance of Cracked Lightening.

 

Abilities & Techniques:

 

Funneled Lightening [1500]: Rothera can command lightening to do her bidding.

Lightening Bolt [Rank E]: A Straight-forward lightening attack.

Lightening Branch [Rank B]: A combination of 4 Lightening Bolts hitting simultaneously. Affects opponent's ability to channel magic.

Thunderstruck [Rank A]: A mini storm, conjures about 12 lightening bolts that fire at irregular intervals thus being very difficult to guess and dodge.

 

Middle Eastern Style Whip Fighting: Black Haze [500]: Here standard non-magic melee style.

Black Haze [Rank B]: An acrobatic and lethal dance style that looks more like a dance form. She uses a standard bladed whip in this.

 

Perks:

Enhanced Agility: Apart from her demonic ancestory, the fact that she has command over lightening gives her a bit of extra nimbleness.
Enhanced Dexterity: Complex maneuvers ain't a problem because she has great body control.
Living Dangerously: Passively Runs Electricity through her whip, BUT she can also be shocked by it as well if she touched the blade end.

Inventory:
Weapons:

Takshak: A bladed whip that is designed in the form of serpents, it is made of some obsidian metal capable of channeling her lightening discharge to become a really dangerous weapon. The whip then seems like it has a life of its own and the serpent seems to be alive, with its fangs capable of sending a jolt through the contact point.

 

Items: A satchel for holding her sculpting tools, a Knapsack for books and few bottles of plant sap.

hopefully everything is in order. Added the perks.

[KDPtheKing]

Good job accepted

I like how you added some description to your perks

[Faye]

Awww, thanks for the effort. If I cant find something else, I'll surely consider it.

xD

on second thought, i think this will suit your style more XD

http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag359/19931dfjhfds/IDEA-PC/ato/pixiv42373436PFFK_AiTuoKu_zps02b99cb1.jpg

[KDPtheKing]

Nice picture!!

[Faye]

This RP needs more attention.. I should probably draft my CS soon XD

Are passive skills allowed?

[I-Am-X]

on second thought, i think this will suit your style more XD

http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag359/19931dfjhfds/IDEA-PC/ato/pixiv42373436PFFK_AiTuoKu_zps02b99cb1.jpg

 

I really like it. The ears....she'd be a demon, yes?

I think I'll use it! Thanks fay!

xD

if this wasn't obvious enough. I am working on a CS now.

 

Need pic help from Fay, Rogue or anyone having a stash.

 

Spoiler

Personal Info
Her Look:

Her Tattoos:

 

Name: Rothera Sanguinera
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Race: Demon
Classification: Freshman
Personality: Reading books, copying human sculptures, Playing Rugby.
History: Youngest daughter of Archdemon Azazel, she is the bad apple of the lot. In a way, she is too good to be a demon. She spends major time reading, playing and looking after the demon army of her dad much to his chagrin. One can say she has a really caring heart though a very competitive spirit. Her enraged form has been often seen by slacking teammates or opponents who fold over too easily as she likes nothing more than a good contest.

Clubs:  She has submitted request for Fight club and Art club.

Battle Setup:
Rank: D Rank
Battle Points: 2000

Battle Style: Dance of Cracked Lightening.

 

Abilities & Techniques:

 

Funneled Lightening [1500]: Rothera can command lightening to do her bidding.

Lightening Bolt [Rank E]: A Straight-forward lightening attack.

Lightening Branch [Rank B]: A combination of 4 Lightening Bolts hitting simultaneously. Affects opponent's ability to channel magic.

Thunderstruck [Rank A]: A mini storm, conjures about 12 lightening bolts that fire at irregular intervals thus being very difficult to guess and dodge.

 

Middle Eastern Style Whip Fighting: Black Haze [500]: Here standard non-magic melee style.

Black Haze [Rank B]: An acrobatic and lethal dance style that looks more like a dance form. She uses a standard bladed whip in this.

 

Perks:

Enhanced Agility: Apart from her demonic ancestory, the fact that she has command over lightening gives her a bit of extra nimbleness.
Enhanced Dexterity: Complex maneuvers ain't a problem because she has great body control.
Living Dangerously: Passively Runs Electricity through her whip, BUT she can also be shocked by it as well if she touched the blade end.

Inventory:
Weapons:

Takshak: A bladed whip that is designed in the form of serpents, it is made of some obsidian metal capable of channeling her lightening discharge to become a really dangerous weapon. The whip then seems like it has a life of its own and the serpent seems to be alive, with its fangs capable of sending a jolt through the contact point.

 

Items: A satchel for holding her sculpting tools, a Knapsack for books and few bottles of plant sap.

 

She's quite big for a 14 year old.

STEROIDS!!!

xD

 

-prepares to make own demon-

[Faye]

Either a demon or an elf, yes

I know you're gonna like her :3

 

And some demons grow really fast, probably XD

Some are even born with adult bodies

[I-Am-X]

That is true.

 

I'll do a demon because that's what I'm familiar with.

xD

[Diabolical Rhapsody]

Well I like her design and maturity is a racial variance. I don't think demons need to be lolis for them ti look 14

[I-Am-X]

How long (amount of words) are the enchantments/incantations for S and A Ranked spells required to be?

 

Actually, I'd also like to know the length of C rank as well.

Once done, I'd like to add in the incantations for each spell in spoilers so I can remember them.

xD

 

And the 'Mixing', for that is it like half from one ability and half from another? Like taking 200 from one and 200 from the other to create a c-ranked ability? or any amount of points from either? Do I file this mixed ability under another category other then the 2 abilities?

 

And when taking points from the 2 abilities do I still list the original points used?

 

Like say my one ability has 1600 points invested in it and I take 200 from that ability and the other points from the other, do I keep the '1600' there or have it lasted as '1400' instead?

Edited by I-Am-X, 20 September 2014 - 07:07 PM.

[KDPtheKing]

The encantstions for S Ranked is about a 4 to 5sentences

E ranked is the name of the spell
D ranked is about 3 -5 (this includes the name of spell)
C ranked is about 6-9 words (includes spell name)
B Ranked is about 10 - 15 words (includes Spell Name)
A ranked is a poem. A good peom not "one shoe , two shoe, red shoe blue shoe"
A Ranked is about a paragraph and it fires next post

For other abilities, there are no incantations but there is a delay in the ability due to a charge time.


Magic spells are generally stronger but slower.
Other techniques are generally faster but weaker (in comparison)

Things I will take into consideration is skill with ability, level of skill, and situation at hand.

[I-Am-X]

What about the mixing?

 

And the 'Mixing', for that is it like half from one ability and half from another? Like taking 200 from one and 200 from the other to create a c-ranked ability? or any amount of points from either? Do I file this mixed ability under another category other then the 2 abilities?

 

And when taking points from the 2 abilities do I still list the original points used?

 

Like say my one ability has 1600 points invested in it and I take 200 from that ability and the other points from the other, do I keep the '1600' there or have it lasted as '1400' instead?

 

Just wanted clarification on how its listed and junk.

We just make a new category and list the abilities its mixed with, eh?

Does it have to be an even number from each one to make a mixed?

 

 

 

Edit: My CS

Spoiler

Personal Info

 

 

Name: Amara Diabolus
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Race: Demon
Classification: Freshman
 

Personality: Likes to read books, an Otaku (has grown to love the japanese 'otaku culture' and overindulges in Manga, anime, visual novels, games and more), Keeps to self, loves burning things, Her pride gets the best of her sometimes. An enigma.
 

History: One of the youngest daughters of the Archdemon 'Lucifer', the other being her fraternal twin. Despite her battle hardened family whose physical traits being their strongest, Amara relies more on fighting from mid-to-long range to better accommodate her magical abilities.  Having said that, it doesn't really mean she's weak physically, just a preferred choice. While her preferred method of battle (given who her family is) gets her strange looks, It's her morely her strange behavior and hobbies that gives her the brunt of the looks and criticism. It's no secret that demons don't necessarily have the highest regard and respect for humans (most believing their food, toys, and etc) but Amara, upon being introduced to it, fell in love with the humans culture...errrr....well the Japanese otaku community that is... and she doesn't hide it in the least. She regularly shirks her family (and races) duties to indulge in her 'way of life'.

 

Given the fact that the family has plenty of successors, and her 'obsession', It was suggested she'd be sent to the human world to better understand them first hand. Though, some question the decision due to her unpredictable personality. With a laugh, she defends herself as being misunderstood.

 

Clubs: Library Club, Anime/Manga Club

Battle Setup:
Rank: D Rank
Battle Points: 2000
Battle Style: Crimson Blaze. It's a Fire based magic combat style.
 

Abilities & Techniques:

 

Hellfire [1500]: Amara has the ability to use and command fire.

 

Flicker [Ranked E]: A fast, rapid fire-based attack

 

Chains Of Flame [Ranked C]: A restraint/Binding spell made of flames that temporarily 'binds' or slows down the opponent

 

Inferno [Ranked A]: An explosion of fire magic that fires off three blasts, sucks out oxygen of hit areas, lowering combat ability of those hit.

 

 

Soujutsu 'Art of The Spear' [500]: A non-magic combat style involving a spear

Barrage [Ranked E]: A non-magic technique, it's a flurry of close range thrusts

 

Mixed:

 

Aestuo Furor, 'Blazing Fury' (Hellfire+Soujutsu) [Ranked C]: A mix of her Hellfire and Soujutsu, she enchants channels her fire magic into her spear and launches a frightening charge, delivering a solid blow to the opponents chest area.

 

Perks: (I will give you them)
 

Inventory: (this is where you put stuff you carry. I put them separate cause I think it needs to be there. )
 

Weapons:

 

Eye Of Tartarus - A spear given to her by her father prior to her departure to the human world. It is a Crimson spear with strange markings and ghoulish designs along the pole. It is made of a special material capable of handling her fire magic.
 

Items:

 

Not sure If I did it right. I put the mix but I wasn't sure if you needed to take away points from each evenly or not, so I took 100 points from hellfire and 300 from my other ability to do the mix. I left the points there unless you want me to make mention of the points taken away to make the mixed move. That's, of course, if I did it correctly. Which I'm sure you'll correct me lol.

 

But I'm done, up for approval/correction.

 

Well, all thats left is to add the incantations,though, probably best to wait until its ok'd

Edited by I-Am-X, 20 September 2014 - 09:15 PM.

[KDPtheKing]

Mixing is only a combination of two different abilities and put into one attack.

For example
Having water magic that has healing properties

Or using magic with swordsmenship

Or using your demonic abilities with a weapon for added effects. No need mix techs/spells of the same ability here.

[I-Am-X]

I' wasn't mixing anything of the same abilities, though =/. One's fire based and the next is just a spear based martial art. O.o

So in short, it's like your second example.

 

Though, I guess I'll need to put in an added effect in there to make it special or whatever.

Need to think of something.

 

Doesn't matter, decided to scrap it and decided to focus on my fire magic abilities.

 

Here is my updated CS.

 

Spoiler

Personal Info

 

 

Name: Amara Diabolus
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Race: Demon
Classification: Freshman

Height: 6'4
 

Personality: Likes to read books, an Otaku (has grown to love the Japanese 'otaku culture' and overindulges in Manga, anime, visual novels, games and more), Keeps to self, loves burning things, Her pride gets the best of her sometimes. An enigma.
 

History: One of the youngest daughters of the Arch-demon 'Lucifer', the other being her fraternal twin. Despite her battle hardened family whose physical traits being their strongest, Amara relies more on fighting from mid-to-long range to better accommodate her magical abilities and make up for her lax defensive abilities. While her preferred method of battle (given who her family is) gets her strange looks, It's mostly her strange behavior and hobbies that gives her the brunt of the looks and criticism. It's no secret that demons don't necessarily have the highest regard and respect for humans (most believing their food, toys, and etc) but Amara, upon being introduced to it, fell in love with the humans culture...errrr....well the Japanese otaku community that is... and she doesn't hide it in the least. She regularly shirks her family's (and races) duties to indulge in her 'way of life'. Through connections with her father, she has gotten to know Rothera Sanguinera, daughter of Arch-demon Azazel, who made regular visits to her home to receive training from her father, of whom Amara had complete success in converting her into an otaku.

 

Given the fact that the family has plenty of successors, and her 'obsession', It was suggested she'd be sent to the human world to better understand them first hand. Though, some question the decision due to her unpredictable personality. With a laugh, she defends herself as being misunderstood.

 

Clubs: Library Club, Anime/Manga Club

Battle Setup:
Rank: D Rank
Battle Points: 2000
Battle Style: Crimson Blaze. It's a Fire based magic combat style that favors her skills in fire magic.
 

Abilities & Techniques:

 

Hellfire [1500]: Amara has the ability to use and command fire.

 

Flicker [Ranked E]: A fast, rapid fire-based attack

Spoiler

Incantation: Flicker

 

Chains Of Flame [Ranked B]: A restraint/Binding spell made of flames that temporarily 'binds' or slows down the opponent.  It creates 4 chains of flame on their arms and legs.

Spoiler

Incantation: With my will and Chains Of Flame, I hereby bind you!

 

Inferno [Ranked A]: An explosion of fire magic that fires off three blasts, sucks out oxygen of hit areas, lowering combat ability of those hit.

Spoiler

Incantation:

 

In my hands is the power of fire and the power of life.

A curse to some and a Gift to most, it's no stranger to strife.

With the power to save lifes, also comes the power to take them away.

With a flick of the wrist and a simple matter of words, they are kept at bay.

From my body, to my hands, I call it forth. Burn it all....

Inferno!

 

 

Soujutsu 'Art of The Spear' [500]: A non-magic combat style involving a spear, specifically used for close range combat.

 

Barrage [Ranked B]: A non-magic technique, as the name suggests, it's relentless barrage of spear thrusts.

 

 

Perks:

 

Acute Understanding [Lvl 1]: she likes to read and is well versed in fantasy/sci-Fi/Manga. When she sees spells from D rank and down, she understands how they world if she ponders on them for a post.

Fire Resistance [Lvl 1]: being a fire demon has its perks. She can resist (Half damage) spells up to C Rank dealing in fire. E rank has no effect.

Enhanced Dexterity:

 

Inventory: (this is where you put stuff you carry. I put them separate cause I think it needs to be there. )
 

Weapons:

 

Eye Of Tartarus - A spear given to her by her father prior to her departure to the human world. It is a Crimson spear with strange markings and ghoulish designs along the pole. It is made of a special material capable of handling her fire magic.
 

Items: A knapsack which, along with her school books, also carries some manga with her to class along with a small laptop for her anime and gaming pleasure (when shes on the move).

Edited by I-Am-X, 22 September 2014 - 06:48 AM.

[KDPtheKing]

No Abiliry has less than 500 in it

It took me 5 minutes to write this. I'm drunk I can't be a proper GM THIS WAY

But seriously, you need to Fix it

[I-Am-X]

Alright, I'll fix it. By the way, do all the '2000' points need to be used?

Can there be like 100 unspent left and saved for when we get more points? If not I'll upgrade my one ability to B rank.

 

Though, I can always make a weaker, faster version later so I'll just upgrade it.

 

How is it now KDP?

Edited by I-Am-X, 21 September 2014 - 08:07 AM.

[KDPtheKing]

XXX here are your stuffs

Perks
Acute Understanding Lvl 1: she likes to read and is well versed in fantasy/sci-Fi/Manga. When she sees spells from D rank and down, she understands how they world if she ponders on them for a post.

Fire Resistance Lvl 1: being a fire demon has its perks. She can resist (Half damage) spells up to C Rank dealing in fire. E rank has no effect.

Enhanced Dexterity:

[I-Am-X]

XXX here are your stuffs

Perks
Acute Understanding Lvl 1: she likes to read and is well versed in fantasy/sci-Fi/Manga. When she sees spells from D rank and down, she understands how they world if she ponders on them for a post.

Fire Resistance Lvl 1: being a fire demon has its perks. She can resist (Half damage) spells up to C Rank dealing in fire. E rank has no effect.

Enhanced Dexterity:

 

Sweet.

I'd say I got a good roll

 

Thank you KDP

 

I'll add them now.

 

Will work on my incantations later.

 

The incantation for A rank is going to be tough, though.

Edited by I-Am-X, 21 September 2014 - 02:44 PM.

[KDPtheKing]

I mean just be mean about it lol it don't have to be pretty poem