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[Yaomo]

i existed eons ago as well. chances are we've met more than once before...
you can be the cute loli who interestingly grew up without me really noticing. that would get close enough to "niece"

[Maia]

Haha, alright, we can do that. I don't mind in the least. >^.^<

[Yaomo]

*drizzles some soot from fuzziness feeling*
that's nice. fits well with me getting an odd letter.

[Sir Flash™]

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Name: Darius Mitchell (Code Name: Sir Flash)

Age: 54 (Looks 30)

Gender: Male

Job/Affiliation: Gym Owner/Ex-Mercenary for "The Organization"

 

Appearance:

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Human Form:

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Dragon From:

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• Height: 6"6
• Eye Color: Blue eyes in human form. Yellow eyes in dragon form.
• Hair Color/Length: He has white/silverish hair; bob cut.
• Skin Tone: Tan
• Weight: 252 pounds.
• Muscle Definition: Muscular yet toned so not too bulky.

 

History:

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Bobby & Lorna loved each other. Lorna, formerly a n captive, escaped thanks to Bobby. They would soon fall in love with each other, rebelling against "The Organization" for 7 years until Bobby's untimely death protecting the one's he loved, Darius & Lorna. A year later Darius was born in Montevallo, but Lorna would soon be captured, before she was, Darius was given to his Grandpa James. His mother would never be seen again. Darius would then grow up in an MMA Dojo for the years to come mastering: Muy Thai, The Art Of Samurai (his grandfathers specialty), Judo, Boxing and Wrestling. He would pursue an career in armature MMA. Dominating all scenes, he went to the Pro's at 19 and became the youngest Welterweight champ in MMA history. By 21 he was signed to UFC moved and in 4 months became UFC World Champ for the heavyweights and dominated for 3 straight years. His true dream was always to open up his own gym and with the money he was winning, that would soon become an reality.

 

But then his fate struck! Originally he got his powers from an explosion that occurred at the hands of "The Organization", which were already lying dormant. Ruining his UFC career Darius retired and thus pursued the life of an mercenary. He took many missions slaughtering people with no remorse. He became cold and bitter at the world since his life was ruined. Looking for answers but finding none. One day he receives a call from a man saying he can make his gym happen and would help him find the culprits, the guy name was Ashax. Darius accepts the offer and started working for this mysterious guy. Now code named Sir Flash, Darius became a spy, not knowing he was being manipulated. After a series of unfortunate events he learned of Ashax's true identity and realized he manipulated his mother and father, while forcing him to try and kill Maia. After the great battle wavered Darius woke up and remembered he had rescued Inu's corpse. Only him and Maia know about it. 3 months have passed, now the age of 54, Ashax no longer has power over Flash. He shed his old powers and awakened his true powers, which is that of a dragon. Now in full control of his new found powers, instead of the negative energy that was gravity, Flash is a new man looking to do good by others.

 

Specialty:

Dragon Mode

 

Skills:

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Atoms - This includes as array of particles.

• Mirror Force - Can deflect any magic moves that does any physical damage to the user and deflect it back at the caster with twice the power (Can deflect Ice powers as well). Can be used to protect himself and or comrades. Can only be used once (Twice in dragon mode).
• Silent Room - Makes the surrounding area of the enemy completely mute, not letting them hear a single thing. If the caster so chooses to attack the target(s), Once touched he/she will hear an enormous echo which will do damage to their body. Can only be cast on up to 2 targets at once (4 targets in dragon mode). Can only be cast once per 2 days (Once in dragon mode).
• Particle Blast - As the name implies, it shoots an particle ball which explodes on impact. He can use this as easy as he breathes. Unlimited usage (Becomes a Lightning Beam in dragon mode).
• Particle Clone - The user can make an doppelganger to evade attacks or confuse enemies or ally's. The clone may only walk and talk. If the clone is destroyed any and all damage it received will come back to the users body. Can be used twice per 3 days (May not be used in Dragon Mode).

Dragon Mode - Can only be used once per 4 days. Comes with the standard, strength, speed, reflex increase. Can also fly. Looks like a humanoid dragon. (All above spells can be used 1 extra time while in dragon mode except for Sonic Wave.) Duration: 3-6 post. The Longer he stays in the form, the more strain his body will have. After 4 post he will fall unconscious for some hours after dragon mode is done, after 6 post in dragon mode, he will be knocked out for 2 days.

• Raigeki - A flaming lightning strike which completely knocks out the target or targets. It has an 70% strike ratio, so it misses every 3 out of 10 uses. If any structure is hit, will cause a fire and or knock out any power source. Up to 5 people can be hit at once, be it ally or enemy, risky yet powerful move. Can only be used in dragon mode. Can be used once.
• Silver Dust - An attack involving the users wings. When used, silver dust will come out and if inhaled, all in the surrounding area become paralyzed. Can only be used in dragon mode. Can be used once.

 

Weaknesses:

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• Ice Power - Anything dealing with ice can be fatal to him. Though water can become ice, it is not a weakness until it becomes literally ice.
• Temperature - If it is over 100 degrees Fahrenheit , while is dragon form, he will not be able to fly. If it is under 0 Fahrenheit, has the same effect.
• Gerbils - He has been allergic too them since childhood, still is.
• Emotional - Anything regarding his family causes emotional trauma for him and can make him significantly weaker than normal or make rash decisions. Cannot change into Dragon Mode if he gets emotional.
• Nightmares - Can randomly have a nightmare awake or asleep at random times. There is no set pattern to it.

 

Equipment & Inventory: 

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• Dark Salamandra - It is a black flame sword. Its original form was the Salamandra (Flame Sword) & Dark Fiend Sword (Demon Sword). They were both fused into one. When wielding it, there are a set of Spell that can be used. 
• Sword Spells: 

1. Time Freeze: Freezes time for 3 seconds (Can only be used 4 times per day). The caster can move up to the targets, but cannot attack them until time is moving once more. 
2. Black Stagger: This move happens when the sword is stabbed into the ground. Kanji symbols appear in an alchemic circle and a black flaming ball forms for the wielder to throw (Can only be used once per 2 days). Black Sphere: The opponent will be engulfed inside a black sphere with the wielder surrounded by 100 swords that will strike the enemy at once (Can be used once a week). 
3. Soul Release: releases the collected souls to heal the caster and or allies damaged in battle (Can be used 2 times per day). 

• Dual Mode: In this mode, the sword splits into its 2 original forms, Salamandra & The Dark Fiend Sword. Salamandra burns whoever it cuts & Fiend absorbs only lost souls. When fused both abilities are combined.

• Bag - (Includes: Salt, Water, Sugar, Beef Jerky, Rope, Knife, GPS, Phone, Gloves, Chain, Shades).

• Ender Pearls - This item allows you to transform into your Dragon Form. In order for it to do so you must:

1. Have in the palm of your right hand.
2. Have any kind intense emotion (Anger, Fear, Passionate, Sadness, Excitement, Eagerness, Jealousy, Greed, Love). Only 2 pearls can be put in the bag at 1 time. If more than two is in the bag, they will explode. More can be found in the Montevallo once out of it.
3. All regular spells excluding sonic wave, have to have its usage maxed out.

• Sheath - Holds the sword onto the users back.

Relationships:

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Maia - Mayor of the city, she and Flash have had many encounters, sometimes allies, other times enemies. Both have come to an understanding of one another. Though Flash will never get over how Maia killed his mother. (Edited after asking you three times to change that. ~TRN)

 

Inu - Deputy of Batotoia, his corpse was saved by Flash.

 

Ashax - The boss of "The Organization" who manipulated flash for the past 3 years, making him do many underhanded/devious deeds. Unknown to him, Ashax killed Flash's father. (Edited.)

 

X - Former mission partner for "The Organization". Hasn't seen her since rescuing her 3 months back.

 

Lorna - Flash late mother who was killed by Maia, She was captured by Ashax but saved Flash before he got to her.

 

Bobby - Killed protecting Lorna during a rebellion against Ashax. He is the father of Flash.

 

James - The grandfather of Flash. He was put under protection by Maia and Inu during the initial fight in the city. Is still currently under Maia's protection (since Inu is technically dead); Flash visits him often.

 

Personality: Has a short temper, but is caring and loves the ones close to him dearly. Respects all of his comrades but if you betray him, you will become a top priority on his enemy list and he will not stop until you get yours.

 

Important to all Rp'ers:

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 Note: The Sword(s) can only be used in human form. If the sword is brought out, the other spells cannot be used until the sword is put away. In order for the dragon form to be used, the user must have an Ender Pearl on him (See inventory for more information). It takes a week to get to the out world in order to pick up more pearls, and i will not go until both are used. With that, it would take an X amount of post with no time jumps, unless X, Maia or Inu want to fast forward the time.  

Edited by Maia, 26 February 2014 - 07:21 AM.

[Sir Flash™]

took me almost 90 minutes

[I-Am-X]

This looks like a totally different character altogether then the one that one in the original BC. Not that I mind with the gravity nonsense but you completely changed his looks and made him older. Might also want to change the 'With that, it would take an X amount of post with no time jumps, unless Taka or Maia want to fast forward the time'

 

Considering time jumps and such is completely up to me, maia and inumori.

I'll hold off on commenting until Maia and/or Inumori review it.

[Yaomo]

i tried to point it out to him, but... he apparently didn't take my point.

[I-Am-X]

Not to mention there should be one 'specialty' not two.

Oy

[The Illuminati]

I'm not adding you to mine and Inumori's PM. That one is a personal one between he and I.

Spicy Spicy! Your Love will set the forums on fire~!

[Sir Flash™]

i tried to point it out to him, but... he apparently didn't take my point.

If I recall you said that in IRC, but when you did you confused me because you never specified what you were talking about. I thought you said that because I asked you to read it. So indecisive *pokes taka*.

 

This looks like a totally different character altogether then the one that one in the original BC. Not that I mind with the gravity nonsense but you completely changed his looks and made him older. Might also want to change the 'With that, it would take an X amount of post with no time jumps, unless Taka or Maia want to fast forward the time'

 

Considering time jumps and such is completely up to me, maia and inumori.

I'll hold off on commenting until Maia and/or Inumori review it.

Fell asleep while finishing it, had to make him older, originally i was supposed to but did not. Talk to Maia about the age part.

 

Also was working on it with Maia, but she fell asleep as well >_>.

 

As to the power change, originally it was a good idea, but I was new to RP (structured anyway). It was a good idea but a lot went wrong with it. So I wanted to scrap the idea all together, but i could take 6 things from the powers i have now and make them gravity if you want. Since the atoms are technically an reimbursed idea of gravity.

Edited by CM Flash™, 25 February 2014 - 08:38 PM.

[Maia]

No gravity

[I-Am-X]

No gravity

 

I second that, won't have any of it.

 

Also flash,

'Temperature - If it is over 600 Fahrenheit or bellow -150 Fahrenheit (Ice powers would be very effective vs him), his body will become over heated or frigid limiting his movement.

Gerbils - He has been allergic too them since childhood, still is.

His heart is his biggest weakness. Now separated from his body after his first encounter with The Organization. Only Maia knows where it is located since she has been in his mind.'

 

Having those for weaknesses wont fly either. While we did say it could be comical or not, thats just getting around the issue.

To quote Inumori, "It's not a proper weakness if you can circumvent it yourself or with relative ease." Which your weaknesses do so blatantly.

 

Also, none of your moves have serious drawbacks just that they can only be used a certain amount of times per day.

Look at Maia's character, using her powers (strong as they are) has some serious drawbacks, like internal hemmoraging and such. Not that it has to be that severe but they must take a toll.

 

But all in all, no gravity.

We won't be going through that again.

[Inumori]

Having those for weaknesses wont fly either. While we did say it could be comical or not, thats just getting around the issue.

To quote Inumori, "It's not a proper weakness if you can circumvent it yourself or with relative ease." Which your weaknesses do so blatantly.

 

That goes for everyone. If you can fix it yourself, avoid it entirely, or someone else can fix it for you with little to no difficulty then it's not a weakness. That's called an inconvenience. I want everyone to understand that as they create their characters.

 

Also understand that no matter what you put as a weakness, GM discretion is used to dole out the severity. This is why you need to be careful with comical weaknesses like "allergic to gerbils" (not picking on you Flash. You're just the only example right now and I want to get this out of the way) then you need to understand that to counterbalance a deity-class power that allergy can be fatal.

 

For a more general example, let's say you have some god-like power - in this example it'll be weather control - and need to decide a weakness. For fun, you opt to balance your command over the primal forces with a crippling fear of clowns. Silly right? Careful though. Assuming that CS gets accepted you must now understand that to balance things, your life is now ruled by an overwhelming terror of clowns and the sight of one could put you into shock or send you into a psychotic break. Silly can be fun to play, but recall what makes it a weakness. Balance will happen. Be advised.

 

As a last note if your weakness is resultant of a character flaw or personality quirk that can theoretically be resolved (such as the fear of clowns in the above scenario) then it is possible to remove it so as not to stifle character development. However: You will get a new weakness to make up for it. You can come up with your own for re-approval or ask for one.

[Sir Flash™]

 

I second that, won't have any of it.

 

But all in all, no gravity.

We won't be going through that again.

 

Thus why i got rid of it, the weaknesses on the other hand, i didn't touch them yet since i just converted them over. Still changing them since i don

't want him to be the same as another RP.

[Inumori]

Also, none of your moves have serious drawbacks just that they can only be used a certain amount of times per day.

Look at Maia's character, using her powers (strong as they are) has some serious drawbacks, like internal hemmoraging and such. Not that it has to be that severe but they must take a toll.

 

Limiting number of uses is a valid way to help balance though. The rest of his balancing is supposed to come from a combination of his basic weaknesses and our roles as GM to apply severity.

 

Maia's character and my own should not be used as examples regarding strengths and weaknesses. Both would have to be dramatically altered were they still regular characters (as opposed to story NPCs run by the GMs). The rules were eventually established because of how out of control things were getting. At the very least my character's power are ludicrously vast and his special ability was made solely for the purpose of reigning other people in pre-rules. Maia's powers are fewer but stronger and as a result of story events we even share a few of them. While they're sticking around for their new roles as NPCs and possible boss mobs they are far from acceptable for proper characters and should not be used for examples.

 

That said, even in the old Batotia we were still able to be defeated. To anyone reading this who might be frightened off by the fear of OP GM characters, I ask that you trust us to police ourselves. If at any point things feel unfair, discuss it with us. We are not unreasonable people

Edited by Inumori, 26 February 2014 - 12:39 AM.

[I-Am-X]

Limiting number of uses is a valid way to help balance though. The rest of his balancing is supposed to come from a combination of his basic weaknesses and our roles as GM to apply severity.

 

Maia's character and my own should not be used as examples regarding strengths and weaknesses. Both would have to be dramatically altered were they still regular characters (as opposed to story NPCs run by the GMs). The rules were eventually established because of how out of control things were getting. At the very least my character's power are ludicrously vast and his special ability was made solely for the purpose of reigning other people in pre-rules. Maia's powers are fewer but stronger and as a result of story events we even share a few of them. While they're sticking around for their new roles as NPCs and possible boss mobs they are far from acceptable for proper characters and should not be used for examples.

 

That said, even in the old Batotia we were still able to be defeated. To anyone reading this who might be frightened off by the fear of OP GM characters, I ask that you trust us to police ourselves. If at any point things feel unfair, discuss it with us. We are not unreasonable people

 

I know that, I just meant that having things explained better wouldn't hurt as well seeing as people tend to misunderstand quite a bit.

Eh, I'm just a sucker for detail.

[The Illuminati]

I'm just a sucker for detail.

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[Sir Flash™]

I know that, I just meant that having things explained better wouldn't hurt as well seeing as people tend to misunderstand quite a bit.

Eh, I'm just a sucker for detail.

I'm not the best when it comes to English, just so you know. I hate the subject as well. My speaking skills/ speech/debating skills are great. Typing and writing them out, not so much. A's in my speech/debate classes, C's/D's in my literature classes .

Also updated weaknesses & changed the powers so now their will be not only drawbacks to me but to those around me.

Edited by CM Flash™, 26 February 2014 - 02:58 AM.

[Yaomo]

If I recall you said that in IRC, but when you did you confused me because you never specified what you were talking about. I thought you said that because I asked you to read it. So indecisive *pokes taka*.

sorry about that, will spell it out for you next time.

[Miki]

can I join?

 

lately I have been very busy but I have free time now :3