Karasu

Sadly, it's the way it is T_T there's 3 scene taking place at once so it's very confusing, hopefully it make sense on chapter 2

The pages are definitely out of order.

The art is good, the premise seems nice but the way it delivered is a bit confusing especially the chronologic of the pages mmm...

..I'm so confused. I assume things will become clearer as the story goes on. Good art, though the expressions creep me out.

The current summary is:

 

I'm wondering if something like the following might be better:

 

 

There's a lot of room for improvement, but as it is it's a more comprehensible summary than the current one in the first spoiler tag.

 

It's too early to see how well the story's written, but the art shows promise. Needs to work on proportions and posing a bit, but they do very well at shading and details, like on the fist in the upper-left panel of pg. 3 in ch. 0.

I changed the description prior to what infos provided in the chp so far. Make it have more flaw and sense. It maybe changed if anyone thinks of an better one. Though the chap havent been complete., it is interesting. Most stories, the main chara goes through a phrase that happens to come unexpected, xD.., but how it comes about and what happens prior to that,makes one want to read more. It is just the beginning , cant really say if it is bad or good. X)

The art is cute.

General reminder: descrition is ONLY for the series summary... Not the scanlator's status of the series....
 
Please Dont ask the scanlator to add such info on the description. Also any comments directing toward the scanlator or uploader, please use pm. comment section shouldnt be personal discussion about scanlation/mistakes...
 Reason being: comment section is not about the scanlator's work but about the series itself.

Scanlator can make note of such in the chap title or if it does affect the audience(readers) to post here in comment section..ex: tlr notes, authors/artists' status...

 

10+ lines comments: most of them must be in [spoiler] tag.

the manga/comic is read from left to right, this is a amateur work so the art is bad haha, i apologize for the incomplete pages, i'm still working on them, i was just testing the upload.

Thank you for your efforts, even if it's not a follow of mine, I still appreciate what you're doing. You might want to revise the description to include that the current chapter is incomplete and will be reloaded after completion. Good luck with the rest of the project.

Art isn't bad, but... WTF? Next time you should put some info in description. Like "incomplete" or something.

Good luck

the manga/comic is read from left to right, this is a amateur work so the art is bad haha, i apologize for the incomplete pages, i'm still working on them, i was just testing the upload.

Took me awhile to realise that it is read from right to left.

...still doesn't make sense.

It seems like halfway through the pages got flipped into left to right format. Then it seems if they left out 4-5 pages. Art isn't that great either. Think I'll give this a pass.

Took me awhile to realise that it is read from right to left.

...still doesn't make sense.

If these 8 pages are indeed the entire opening chapter, then I have only one thing to say...

 

Hum, it doesn't make any sense to me ...

Are all the pages here ?