My Life as A Vampire
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Author: | Bryan Woods |
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Genres: | Doujinshi |
Type: | Other |
Status: | Ongoing |
Description: | I'm going on an adventure to japan in hopes to enjoy myself but strange turns of events starts to happen to me after I arrive at a small Japanese town called sotoba lets see and find out |
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Thought I will give it a try with the good-looking cover but nah I'm out XD
This is so bad it becomes good. I laughed my ass off.
At least the ebola "manga" with the 3D models was intentionally aiming to offend.
This is just genuinely bad.
This is top tier shitposting.
thank you I will do my best to fix some of the errors
Dear Bryan Woods, it seems that you uploaded your manga yourself so I believe you will look at the comments section.
Here is my reaction, page by page, reading the first chapter. I hope it will help you understanding what you need to change in your manga :
I get it that you're going for some kind of mysterious feel. Some pro mangaka manage very well to keep readers into their story without having to explain the characters' background, motivations or the whole situation they are in. But that's only because they know how to make you want to know all that stuff.
If you're a beginner you should start with easy storytelling : state clearly who your characters are, what their goals are and where you story is going. If not, people will stop reading after two pages.
Bad art can rebute people, but if the story's interesting enough they'll keep reading. Just look at One Punch Man.
"Alt Names: My Life as A Neet My Life as A Plagiarist"
I snorted a little.
Remove
*First frame with a poorly 3d rendered character*
*flip the bird to the screen*
*close the page*
*rant*
It's crap.
uhmm .... what
It is definitely difficult to determine the value of a story when you can't read the text due to it blending into the background art.
May I suggest that you use "stroke" on the text so that it will stand out and be easily read?
well that's because its made using the manga maker program called comipo!
comic sans
unironically
wew lad
Even that dank 3D comic is better.
lol Comic Sans
I wonder if it would be taken down for plagiarism because I'm not sure if the person who made the comic got permission to use the cover art.
I'm not even going to criticize this manga, or make fun of it. It's just so so sad.
The person who created the cover art and the person who made the comic are not the same person.
The way the title and author name are shopped in should give you a hint as to the quality.