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NakedFury

NakedFury

Member Since 19 Aug 2012
Offline Last Active Dec 01 2014 07:14 PM

In Topic: [Recommendations] {ARCHIVE}

23 September 2014 - 03:24 PM

Spoilers concerning Dream Drive:

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Okay, warning time. first off, bunch of stuff i'm going to link will be easily 18+, so view at your own risk. Also a quick disclaimer about storiesonline.net (SO) as opposed to literotica.com (Lit). Lit seriously censors what they allow on their site. to give you an idea, nothing underage or rapey (consensual non-consent is okay I think, but I don't know where they draw the line). SO doesn't worry about stuff like that. Be mindful of the tags. Here is their list of codes. please pay attention to them, there's a lot of shit most people will not like. 

 

Dream Drive was/is amazing. Who knew literotica had stories as well written and as amazing and non erotic as that one. Damn man keep them coming.


In Topic: [Recommendations] {ARCHIVE}

20 September 2014 - 08:04 PM

Tried reading Key of the Sunken Moon and my god it was impossible to enjoy it. Found it horrendous. Could not keep reading after the second chapter. 


In Topic: [Recommendations] {ARCHIVE}

18 September 2014 - 04:54 PM

Finally finished reading all the currently translated Arifutera chapters (started yesterday late at night, got so little sleep...). It can be funny and the action is pretty enjoyable (the fight choreography inspires my imagination, like with R:M and, sometimes, Tate no Yuusha), although I find it poorly worded at times. I'm not sure if it's the author's fault or just the translators (because there were times I thought their choices of translation really questionable). Guess I'll see for myself since I'm now going through the WN. The omniscient PoV, as well, seems like an ill fit for the story (although I know from the prologue that the narrator is telling the story) given how the narrator exposits allot on the character's feelings, motivations, and even on their character growth. I find it strangely amusing, though. Just rushing through these things just so that things can immediately get to the action. I can't tell if the author is simply weak at conveying these emotions naturally or if he's intentionally doing it.

 

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For me Arifureta is like a badly written story with forced "funny" moments and its like the author completely forgot the tone or atmosphere of what he was writing near the end of  the first dungeon and then started writing the new crap with an incredible overuse of ridiculous sound effects. 


In Topic: [Recommendations] {ARCHIVE}

16 September 2014 - 12:08 AM

hmm So many abandoned fanfics in the suggestions.

 

 

The Ranker hasnt been updated since july. god dammit


In Topic: [Recommendations] {ARCHIVE}

15 September 2014 - 06:31 PM

I've two awesome suggestions:

 

Claret by Innotui

The story of a traumatized boy in the virtual world. Deep story, great writing.

 

The Ranker by SnowMelts

In a futuristic world, the government decided to change the teaching methods of kids.

A really complicated plot, but really cool.

 

Both deserve more readers, and I think people here would like it (Since many liked the ones recommended before).

Thank you for The Ranker. I find Cur to be exactly like I am in academic matters.