@Zero King
I can understand the pessimism in your poetry, and yeah it's all around us now -- the rat race. Why must everyone be conformed to the dictates of our society, like of education, work, and etc. That I can see, yet I don't presume that it's really what you want to say. The content is heavy so I might read them little by little, one at a time or I might drown in it.
Oh, let me share one of mine
Ignored
There are times that are quiet and slow
And when it should be peaceful, I'm quite restless
I've check the TV, but there's Nothing to see
And stuff from the internet aren't good enough
How I miss those moments I'm working on something
Yet how I cursed when I was on it
Thinking about it, there's some unfinished work
Sadly, I could only wish I'm motivated enough
I came to have a little chat, to get my motivation up,
But you ignored me, just to drown in this deafening silence
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