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[Zero King]

another chibi, this one is in a well

[nevernown]

Well done on the hair and the facial expression
what happnend to her neck?

and she's... floating? lolz, I think i've seen that before -.-

but if you'll excuse me, I'm going outside for a bit to explode due to moeness of this pic

[~Halen~]

Well done on the hair and the facial expression
what happnend to her neck?

and she's... floating? lolz, I think i've seen that before -.-

but if you'll excuse me, I'm going outside for a bit to explode due to moeness of this pic

I am in agreement...

lol *moeness*

but otherwise zero you are steadily improving your work...
keep practicing

[Zero King]

I'll fix her neck

Lol thanks nevernown

Thank you halen it means a lot




2 more sketches

a girl in a uniform



A sketch of sebastian from black butler

Edited by Zero King, 28 September 2012 - 06:00 AM.

[nevernown]

Whoa, that last one is, like, totally awesome
especially good Job on the eyes!
no obvious points here

The girl is again somewhat out of proportions (shes too "thin" so to speak)...
But then again, it does have impact..
i mean, anly at the second glance you will notice thet it's off

[Zero King]

Thank you nevernown

I'll fix it and repost it, I'm really trying to work on drawing women.
Sincw Halen tells me i draw guys better.


Here's one I did a few days ago

Edited by Zero King, 28 September 2012 - 10:47 AM.

[~Halen~]

Ahhh ahhh yay

[Zero King]

My first time drawing CHar or anyone from the gundam universe




Roberta from black lagoon

[Zero King]

a cute chibi

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my first time drawing amuro ray

Edited by Zero King, 08 October 2012 - 01:03 AM.

[perish]

I lob your wittle chibi one, i will marry them all

[Zero King]

Haha thank you AiNoKime:)

Go ahead but you have to invite me to the weddings

[Zero King]

porportion practice







Military Sketch 2





A dead Chibi (i was angry when i drew this)

Edited by Zero King, 03 October 2012 - 11:34 AM.

[Zero King]

Another Emo Girl, its been a long while since I drew realistically. it was fun drawing this

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[Zero King]

My Hilda



Cute chibis



chibi Oc

[baratha]

zero, close every manga u see...
try to read carefully every nice and harsh feedback u got.
all of them got points but u just pass over it, then u continue ur drawing just the way u always do which i think therere no progress in it.
imo ure not yet have right to step into mimetic style, thats why i told u to throw ur eyes out of ur manga.

since ure a animation student, u should understand...
grab your pencil n sketch book then head outside, take a comfortable spot to sketch.
dont abruptly starting sketching, observe the scenery in front of u bout few minutes,
determine ur eye point after u decide on ur drawing object.
u do not need to finish every figures (living or non-living object) on ur sketch.
just draw some frame of those object but make sure it clearly show the movement.
dont take photos or ur sense of volume will dull.
when drawing movement, better avoid cubicle frame, curves line make a better result.
in next few days you can finish those sketches.

i recommend u to not copy any manga style drawing in a year.
just focus on frame base drawing, it help u learn to scale and help u to understand anatomy + movement better.

the way u draw the lines, excuse me but it is ugly,
it show how hesitate n inconsistent ure. please be more brave and confident.

therere some training u can do indoor if u still eagerly to copy a manga style (which i dont really, sigh)...
buy a bunch of tracing papers, trace every drawing u can found.
try to limit ur time when u trace. 10 A5 tracing a day at ideal.
i guarantee u can make ur line smother n ur anatomy more valid.
after u can grab the feel of drawing, u can throw those tracing paper n those drawing examples.

i encourage u to not copy,
since ull become limited if u dont have example. ur imagination definetly walk in narrow road.

gud luck,
since nine years of my lazy drawing learning only get me a lil better.

Edited by baratha, 26 October 2012 - 06:33 AM.

[Zero King]

Hmm thank you very much for your comment:) I appeciate it, your comment is very insightful.

I already do that several times of day actually, I always have a notebook with me. I take a moment to take my surroundings in and I just draw whatever I see couples kissing(or much more), people playing with their cellphones, myself, etc.

I dont really show all of my artwork here, I have a lot of art that i never scan or show to anyone but one person. Who is the toughest critic I know (Halen).So no one can say I have or not improved because you dont see it all.

Ill try to have more confidence with my lines, and focus to make them better.


Thank you very much again

Pratice





My own chibi design for Halen (sketch)



Realistic sketches from the notebook i carry

[nevernown]

Y'know, what really seems to "jump out" (as said here in teh netherlands)
is that your sketches of eyes are a lot more accurate and detailed in comparison to the rest of the drawings...
on one hand that's a good thing, because the eyes (to me) seem Superb!
on the other hand, the rest seems to bleaken because the eyes are so good...

you might want to try and draw a whole face, maybe with a real-life photograph and an drawn example close by...

as for the hand on the last page, try to draw rudimentary bones before drawing the hand, that really helps a lot.
(unles you want to draw manga style -.-' I got no Xp with that)

that's a little comment, but my itnernet is going out any moment now, so more later

[Sieg]

zero, close every manga u see...
try to read carefully every nice and harsh feedback u got.
all of them got points but u just pass over it, then u continue ur drawing just the way u always do which i think therere no progress in it.
imo ure not yet have right to step into mimetic style, thats why i told u to throw ur eyes out of ur manga.

since ure a animation student, u should understand...
grab your pencil n sketch book then head outside, take a comfortable spot to sketch.
dont abruptly starting sketching, observe the scenery in front of u bout few minutes,
determine ur eye point after u decide on ur drawing object.
u do not need to finish every figures (living or non-living object) on ur sketch.
just draw some frame of those object but make sure it clearly show the movement.
dont take photos or ur sense of volume will dull.
when drawing movement, better avoid cubicle frame, curves line make a better result.
in next few days you can finish those sketches.

i recommend u to not copy any manga style drawing in a year.
just focus on frame base drawing, it help u learn to scale and help u to understand anatomy + movement better.

the way u draw the lines, excuse me but it is ugly,
it show how hesitate n inconsistent ure. please be more brave and confident.

therere some training u can do indoor if u still eagerly to copy a manga style (which i dont really, sigh)...
buy a bunch of tracing papers, trace every drawing u can found.
try to limit ur time when u trace. 10 A5 tracing a day at ideal.
i guarantee u can make ur line smother n ur anatomy more valid.
after u can grab the feel of drawing, u can throw those tracing paper n those drawing examples.

i encourage u to not copy,
since ull become limited if u dont have example. ur imagination definetly walk in narrow road.

gud luck,
since nine years of my lazy drawing learning only get me a lil better.

If you're gonna type that much, at least spell out your damn words. It's a terribly flawed and ignorant post in general.


Your chibis are adorable, Zero. The Revy drawin' was nice, too. You just need to make her chin less masculine.

[ArrJay]

If you're gonna type that much, at least spell out your damn words. It's a terribly flawed and ignorant post in general.


Your chibis are adorable, Zero. The Revy drawin' was nice, too. You just need to make her chin less masculine.

It's actually good drawing advice. I'd take it with a pinch of salt in regards to the time frames mentioned but the methods mentioned are good.

[SidL]

Well I'm no master, but from what I learned from modelling class (i'm taking same drawing classes as the animation students), try drawing the lines like you mean it.
Other than that, you definetly improved form page 1. Try drawing more curvy pictures, more realistic hands and faces and you'll be pro in no time.

May I ask if your going for animator or animation? (2d concept character design)