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[nevernown]

Hiya all,

some people have stated that my poetry is... not bad -.-'
so here goes me, writing every now and then, my thoughts about life, the universe and whatever!

And like every start of writing, we need words of wisdom:

For every smile
hides a tear
And every grin
hides a crime
And everybody
hides their heart

//An ode to Complication//

Digital Heart

The beating heart, ticking. calculating our minds, our soul.
The flashing lights, connecting our data, maintaining the stream.
Thinking of you, so far away and yet so close.
In a world of absolutes, you are the uncertainty.
The quantum, both and none.
And trough the firewall, you found a backdoor.
Into my heart.

//and of course, the poets pained soul - so cliche//

Lies for the good of oneself

deep in the darkness, a fire burns hot
hatred for all, slumbers so still
cooled in water, held back by the light
a dance to enlighten a soul

but sorrow and pain, awaken again
lies thus spoken, cover the truth
embraced you, loved you, my soul screamed in pain
as you tore a hole in my soul

the light turned inwards, the water dried up
as fire merges with darkness
hidden, protected, two were as one
but no joy was found in my soul

then light shone on darkness, core of the soul
revealing the shadows within
and water, flowing, gushed down in my heart
as I cried, I shattered my soul

the light and the darkness, dance evermore
fire and water colliding
loving the other and hating oneself
but lies here will never survive

[Diablock]

Wow, this looks not so bad, nice done DJ.

Hm, try to relate every words with everything eh?
I see the connecting our data <-- this one is great.

Hm, I'm not too good with poetry, the one who should see this mostly is Dubs.

But I like it, gloomy, insecure, daring, perfection, hope, and about the deep down feeling inside.

Keep the good work!

For every smile
hides a tear

.
Thinking of you, so far away and yet so close.

my fav so far.

[nevernown]

ah thanks
I'll try to find more of them, I might have about 100 poems, but they are scattered everywhere

//

Left, right, up, down
dressed in my colorful gown
love, hate, truth, lie
kiss me, I'm a butterfly

[nevernown]

//

You already had me, the day you were born.
But all people lose me, as days grow old.
As a rose I am beauty, but I have a thorn.
And then I will leave you in cold.

I'm given or taken,
by lover perhaps?
My beauty forsaken,
no filling the gaps.

The lucky ones lose me,
in joy of the night.
The lost ones let me free,
in heat of the fight.

but no-one reclaims,
what they have lost.
for they want to lose it,
no matter the cost.

what am I?

Spoiler

Innocence

[nevernown]

Rays of Light, Droplets of gold
Silvery eyes, staring so cold
Violation of the mind
Questions raging on
Watching wonders, manifold
Your heart broken, my heart sold.
baby, you're one of a kind
and so you keep me hanging on

[Diablock]

hahah..good!

even I am sleepy now, but I still can feel the sunlight...huh? sunlight?.

[nevernown]

The mind wants to speak,
But the tongue is bound
as he struggled to keep inside
the feeling of failing
for things not his fault

Bound by his anger
hidden by fear
the people around, they abide
still mocking and thinking
"we did nothing wrong, it's his fault"

and slowly but surely
she poisons their minds
convincing them a lie for the truth
as smiling she looks up
backstabbing the one without fault

For rules of society have bound honest words
and sneering sarcasm, the facts
For nobody listens, for they all are sure
in the end it's only his fault

[casandra29]

//

You already had me, the day you were born.
But all people lose me, as days grow old.
As a rose I am beauty, but I have a thorn.
And then I will leave you in cold.

I'm given or taken,
by lover perhaps?
My beauty forsaken,
no filling the gaps.

The lucky ones lose me,
in joy of the night.
The lost ones let me free,
in heat of the fight.

but no-one reclaims,
what they have lost.
for they want to lose it,
no matter the cost.

what am I?

Spoiler

Innocence

I really like this one. You have a good and unique way of writing in this one. I hope to read more.

[nevernown]

Thanks

Breaking me is sometimes smart,
sometimes awkward,
sometimes hard.
Hearing me,
a job well-done.
Accomplished
by almost none.

Making me, is sometimes though.
sometimes soothing,
sometimes rough.
Composed of nothing,
is my song.
The plane of emotion,
s'where I belong.

what am I?

Spoiler

Silence

[nevernown]

A glimpse of winter,

A touch of frost.

Can I recover,

What once was lost?

 

The whisper of wisdom,

In stories untold.

How can I fathom

This battle of old?

 

If we remember

The terrible price

It took to reveal

This secret in ice.

 

Remember the fallen

And do it no more.

For each leviathen

has greed at it's core

 

And so we retell now

This story untold.

About frozen spectres

And dragons of old.

[Lustful]

Haha this one is nice... I like it.

 

Especially this part:

 

 

 

A glimpse of winter,

A touch of frost.

Can I recover,

What once was lost?

[Antalius]

Cool way of writing. From my modest pov, you're talented.

For every smile
hides a tear
And every grin
hides a crime
And everybody
hides their heart

This^^ is may fav.

Edited by Antalius11, 26 March 2013 - 04:59 PM.

[Zero King]

nice job there dutchy boy..I like this line the best "And trough the firewall, you found a backdoor.
Into my heart."

[nevernown]

Haha, thanks!

 

By the way, is the one I wrote it for, still alive? D:

 

//

 

I looked trough the window

And called out to the stars

The civil sounds were fading

No more passing cars.

So silent

So dark

 

The thoughts in the night

They looked up to the cloud

The shadows creeping closer

They almost made him shout

So noisy

So still

 

But after all the fighting

His resolve, it was gone

For, in the dead of night

Everybody is alone

And fall down

He will

 

//

 

Turned out more depressed than I wanted, this one

[nevernown]

Have you seen the poet, the wandering of mind?

He was a handsome poet, but darkest of his kind.

Searching blacken'd places, the darkest of this world

Holding back to no-one, bane of light unfurled.

[nevernown]

So, I made three sigs~

 

White Hat: http://imageshack.com/a/img208/6681/dxfc.png
Grey Hat: http://imageshack.com/a/img845/364/gkq0.png
Black hat: http://imageshack.com/a/img707/7687/v9si.png

 

Those who know what they mean, are free to use them

Disagree, think you know a better one, feel free to post your version~

 

I might do mocking ones on Kiddies and Trolls later, but I'd reckon no-one wants those <.<

[Miki]

I'm impressed ;3

[nevernown]

I'm impressed ;3

I'm flattered~

[nevernown]

Grasping the last rays of sun, of hope
Brushing past the jagg'd line
Of thoughts so torn, they shine
Upon the hill of everlight, a slope
And lights this heart of mine

Finding a place far away, a home
Calling over sil'nt sea
Shouting at birds, so free
Thinking, knowing where I'll never roam
Oh please just let me be

[Bobby W.]

White Hat: http://imageshack.com/a/img208/6681/dxfc.png
Grey Hat: http://imageshack.com/a/img845/364/gkq0.png
Black hat: http://imageshack.com/a/img707/7687/v9si.png

These are my favorites. Good job there!