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[pizhhh]

Yes, I do.

[Maia]

Yes, I do!

[Frost]

A yes for me too :3

[Zero King]

Thank you everyone! Sorry it's late but here is Chapter 2 of Hero. I wanted this chapter to be longer than the other one to make up for taking so long to write it. Pleave leave a comment after you read it, enjoy!

Be warned this chapter is not for kiddies.

Hero Chapter 2 (Edited By Maia)

Spoiler

Me and Emily are the two sides of the same coin, with no place to call home. The darkness within us, will eventually kill us. The world keeps on spinning but we’re at a standstill. Nothing can move us but ourselves yet we can’t move a muscle. We are not broken but we are scarred you may not see them but our scars still grow today.
By the knife, will it be the end of us?

Hero Chapter 2

Let’s go back to before Emily's desperate plea to end her life. Before she found a hero in life…

As any other day Emily came home from school in no hurry and as she opens the door slowly she pokes her head in, taking everything in before she enters the house and expecting the worst. With no where else to go or hide Emily walks into the house.
There’s a breath of relief as the room stays dark with no life among it. Making her way to her room slowly trying to be quiet as she can, as she doesn’t want to wake him or…. Did she leave her light on? No, she hadn't. She takes a deep breath of air before pushing her door open.

“About god damn time,” He was there on her bed and he had been drinking.

“W..Wha..What are you doing in my room?” Emily nervously asks not moving a muscle away from her door.

Without skipping a beat, Richard gets off of the bed raises his hand and strikes Emily across her face knocking her down to the floor. She lets out a quiet scream that ends when her face hits the carpet hard.
Don’t make a noise, be quiet. It will be worse if I make a sound, Emily tells herself in panic.

Richard, now standing over Emily says, “You’ll only speak when spoken to girl.” Picking up his bottle, he kicks her feet out of the way of the door, which they had been blocking. He pushes the door back open but stops and turns around. Emily’s mouth is bleeding her cheek bright red, contrasting with her pale white skin. Richard bends down with his good knee, forces Emily’s head up, pulling her hair away from her face.

He smirks, but that’s not all! He raises the bottle over hear head and pours the liquor onto her face while keeping her head still with his other hand. “Clean yourself off, little slut.”

He peers at her body, taking it in: her sizeable bust constantly rising and falling as she continues to struggle with the liquor. She's petite but very sensual; she has the kind of body any girl would kill to get and every man would kill to have.

“You are a little slut, aren’t you?” Richard slowly mutteres as his hands start to caress her body. He slides his hands over her stomach slowly reaching to the zipper of her jeans before sliding them back up. His touch is sickening, but she was helpless; she couldn’t stop him. No matter how hard she struggles she can't break free from his hold.

She doesn't notice that the bottle is now empty and his hands are on her breasts, groping them like it was the first time. His knee moves onto her stomach adding to the pain she's now suffering through.

“Hmm you got a nice body. Maybe I should test it out.” The thought makes Emily want to vomit uncontrollably, its so sickening. Richard himself was sickening, how could he try to do this to his…

“Would you like that, little slut?” Richard slowly says as if he's trying to act Don Juanish, but no way in hell would that ever be true.

No! she screams it mentality because with his knee on her stomach she can't breathe. All that comes out are tears that flow heavily down her face. He moves his knee off of her chest but he isn’t done. Richard puts his body on top of Emily’s small body. He keep playing with her breasts.

”Stop..Please” Emily struggles to say.

“Shut up!” He hits her cheek again with a backhand, causing her lip to bleed even more. “I know you’re a little slut. With this body you have to be one” The sick bastard licks her cheek, it sends chills down Emily’s body.
Before she can let out another protest, Richard tears at Emily's tank top, splitting it down the middle. Her fully developed breasts, held back by a nice lacy black bra, are now exposed. No, please no!

Suddendly the front door opens. “Hello, I’m Home!”

“Mohhh!” Richard covers her mouth before she can make out the last m. “Don’t say a word bitch” He thumps her in her chest before getting off of her, walks out of the room, and closes the door in a hurry. Emily can hear Richard telling her mom that she's tired from school so she's taking a shower before going to bed.

Liar! She can’t say it, and it’s not like her mother will believe her anyway. Emily picks herself up while she struggles to regain her breath. She tumbles over to her dresser, which she grasps on to so she wont fall, pushes her hair away from her face as she looks into the mirror thats attached to her dresser. Her cheeks are red, her lip bleeding, and her whole face is wet because of the liquor. Her eyes are bloodshot red with fear and her entire head is throbbing in pain. The tears kept flowing, she couldnt stop them as she sank down to the floor focusing on the pain she felt. The world around her faded as she cried herself asleep.

Edited by Zero King, 08 October 2012 - 04:24 AM.

[Maia]

You already know my response to this chapter.

But I'll say part of it again.

Its really good, Zero.

[Zero King]

Thank you again Maia:)

[Maia]

Anytime, Zero. >^.^<

[Zero King]

I might end it in the next chapter or I'll do a few more chapters. Well anyway I'm working on the next installment

[Maia]

Woohoo!!!

I'll be ready if you want me to edit for you again. >^.^<