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Edited by Icee, 10 June 2014 - 10:29 PM.

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The world spins

nothing changes

Cause and Effect

What needs to happen will happen

No longer living for the Future

only living for the present

We don't care who we offend

We know where we are going

We pretend we deffend

We can do no wrong

Let's go back where everything started

The promised Land

A lie a dream

The Bubble burst 

Forced to be awakned

You lose your heart

you lose your head

The world Turns

The world Ends

 



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goddammit i'm so bored

 

Recall the days when thou was young

When mindless words slipped off thine tongue

Like children slipping off clomb trees

And falling to an early peace

 

Recall the days when thou was small

When toys and games stood over all

Till thou ways changed and so thou found

That more than games made Earth spin 'round

 

Recall the days when thou was mild

And all called thou a lovely child

Till drink took thy kind face away

And drug made thou tired waste today

 

Recall the days when thou own self

Had but one wish: to waste thine health

And now do think and do recall

The Reaper that doth consumeth all.

 

...i swear i made this up on the spot XD



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Only the good die young

In a vile world like ours.

The evil man walks free from censure,

While the righteous fighter cowers.

 

While the righteous fighter cowers,

The giants and tyrants roam wild.

They target all, from the greatest men,

To the purest, most innocent child.

 

To the purest, most innocent child,

I dedicate these words to you:

Stay clean, stay strong, stay pure of heart,

Lest you become tyrant too.

 

Lest you become tyrant too,

I'll set you back on track, my friend.

And if you get bored of the trip, remember:

The means always justifies the end.

 

The means always justifies the end,

Said one wise man stroking his beard.

Yet that once wise man is now dead,

By the blade of the ones he once feared.

 

By the blade of the ones he once feared,

So died the fighter unsung.

Young he was, but it can't be helped,

Only the good die young.

 

"Remember: the pen is mightier than the sword."



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The world seen through a box

Made in my image

Tick Tock

A second Passes

A minute passes

An Hour Passes

A Day Passes

Complacency

I want to hear truth in your words

I desperately want to believe your lies

You Speak great words

Oceans of people roar at your feet

Cheering Drowning

And as you sink

You don't regret

Stubborn Insidious

Dragging the World with you

I won't miss you.

Once your gone,

Life will truly begin

 

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Edited by Icee, 10 June 2014 - 10:29 PM.

IM or it's for naught


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tears fall, i wasn't able to win, my body gave up at the finish line, it came crashing down on me just before i could win. anger, sadness, hatred, and a broken spirit is what i felt. i realized then that my only enemy was myself, i knew i had to train hard everyday to the point of exaustion, to surpass my limits, to surpass myself. i went through hell but in the end it was all worth it because i arose from the ashes like a phenox and annihilated everything in my path. the rest is all history....



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don't make me laugh

you drunk little ass

or i'll call the staff

to bring in the gas

 

there's no escape

so don't even try

i brought some duct tape

to silence your cry

 

it's broken, your calf

all covered in glass

pain splits you in half

your blood tastes like brass

 

darkness will drape

over your eyes

which i will scrape

until you die


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stayed up all night day dreaming of you, i wasn't in my right mind, my face was very blushed, my eyes were lost in your beautiful image, my heart wouldn't stop pounding against my chest and the blood circulation was all going to my head. i was high on love, high on you, enchanted with with your lips, voice, long hair, your eyes which see right through me and your aroma which arouses all my senses. your existence itself is a gift from god, being away from you is like a child being away from its mother. people always do stupid things for love and finally uderstand why cause my days with you have been heaven on earth, and i would do anything for you. may our love be ever after,may it flourish higher then any other love ever. let are love roam free in the sky and be seen by others like shooting stars... 



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Here I am again,

Writing words

Without thinking

 

Only silence

Inside a room

Devoid of light

 

Far from reality

Far from dreams

Far from sanity


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HERE I AM AGAIN LIVE

ON RADIO STATION 

SIPPING COFFEE

PLAYING MUSIC

SMOKING INSIDE THE STUDIO  AND SAYING THE F WORD

 ON AIR ,CALLING OUT TO DA HOES

PARTY NIGHT LIVE WIN TICKETS! 


Edited by MR.SPONTANEOUS^^, 10 August 2013 - 08:30 AM.


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Here I am again–

running away

in my head

because

my body

is stuck here

against its will.

 

Hey stranger, won't you

teach me how

to find

the freedom

that once was

mine.


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running wild can't nobody tame me, when my beast instincts kick in you ain't shit, when im staring you down i can sense pussy all over you, you ain't ready for dis, im hundred times above everybody else, i achieved a state of mind that can't be broken. im on top of the world, im heading towards greatness, im soaring high, im a new born shining star and I've come to take my place among the stars, nothing holds me back, rules don't apply to me, i only apply the weed and my inspirations to get where i want. "to my babe" there is no place like home for me like your body, i can always rest on your lap and lose myself, cause u is addicting like ecstasy and i wants ta stay but im off on an adventure, im on my way to heaven, go off some place dreams can't even dream of, im jumping in a worm hole........



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I guess

we're both

too blind

to see

the universe

as it falls

into

order

 

while our lives

fall

apart


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Definitely not a poet. This is probably my first few attempts at poetry.  :unsure: 

Every time I see,
Those eyes shifting to me,
My body is in a surge
Emotions I never understood
Hovering my heart,
Capturing my soul,

Yet pure and destiny weren't never meant to be,
For his eyes could never see,
Just how many shades of colours fill my mind,
When I think of him. 


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YOUR DRILL IS THE DRILL THAT PIERCES THE HEAVENS! WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM! 

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You ripped out my heart and kept it to yourself,

Everyday is like a living hell,

I never wanted to lose you,

But you never wanted me did you?

I think about you all the time,

I guess I can't give up what isn't mine.

Lying here awake in the night,

wishing you were here by my side.


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If I'm honest with myself I don't want this night to end

Is it me, you, us, or them?

Logical, illogical, who really cares

My head spins and I forget

Your eyes, your smile, myself

What I wouldn't give to forget tomorrow

And forever stay by your side

My mate, my love, my friend



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Forsworn and forgone, a tale long left unborn,

An oath sworn, shorn, forsworn thrice twixt the morn,

A morn horn's blasted scorn, a lord seen well adorned,

Plucked corn by sweaty fingers, hate stemmed from families torn.

 

Friends went, men sent, long days spent in small tents,

Behind deep dents, trenched, drenched, stench rising once again,

Words well meant unread, luxuries now beyond their ken,

No desk men dead or buried, by war-rent rivals' intent.



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R.I.P

 

Here I am broken bodied

mental shattered

 

home...

home...

I`m going home

 

to fixed my broken mind

to repair my broken bodied

to not study not not care

 

To Rest

To be In

To at Peace

 

And Rest in Pieces I will...

To be with and without la Familia

To not be love not be hate not not be here

 

home...

home...

I`m going home


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I opened my wardrobe and inside had a look,
My old boots were right there, in the corner away cast
alone, abandoned, even in pain.
I haven't wore them since last December.

Maybe to repair, outside I them took,
Suddenly I started myself to ask,
why did I stop wearing them again?
No, seriously, I cannot remember.


Edited by 101010, 20 October 2013 - 08:40 PM.

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