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[Call Me Daddy]

 

Introduction

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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…

 

It is a time or turmoil and  destruction. The remnants of the fallen empire has given rise to the First Order. Now a new threat looms over the galaxy. With the loss of the capital of the Republic, Hosian Prime, the Alliance is in disarray. As the war continues to develop, more and more players are drawn into the fray for one reason or another.

 

Whispers of a shadowy figure within the underworld of Coruscant are circulating. A new task force has been created within the First Order. The Alliance has caught wind of a coming attack on the Outer Rim planet of Ignos.

 

As new players arise in the battle for the galaxy, which side will you choose?

 

(This RP will take place directly after the events of “Star Wars: The Force Awakens”. It’s important to know that this will not be directly involved with the plot of that movie. It will take place with entirely new characters and the canon characters will likely not appear. If they do, it will be in passing. This is out of respect to the actual story.)

 

Character Sheet

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Name: (What do they call you? There is a lot of power in a name.)

Race: (What species are you? Canon races only. There may rarely be special exceptions or restrictions on races depending on what I deem to be fair or not.)

Gender: (Male or Female? Mixed genders available to races that have it.)

Age: (How old are you? May vary depending on race.)

Alignment: (Lawful, Neutral, or Chaotic/Good, Neutral, or Evil.)

Appearance: (What do you look like? Picture preferred, but detailed descriptions are welcome. Make the description as detailed as possible. Examples for appearance encouraged.)

Personality: (How does your character act? What makes them tick? Keep it brief as I believe personality shows most during the course of a roleplay. Example - “Honorable. Proud. Stubborn. Excitable.” Try not to use only positive descriptions. Nobody is perfect… except me.)

Background: (Who are you? Give me a detailed description of your character’s past.)

 

Faction: (Who are you affiliated with? Only three choices to start with.)

Occupation: (How do you earn your keep? Even Anakin used to make droids, Rey was a scavenger, and Luke was a farmer. This also can help determine what your character can or cannot do. Example - A lifelong engineer won’t be able to hack a computer with ease, but could probably repair a ship.)

Stats: (45 Stat Points upon Character Creation. Keep the total amount of your points here. Yes I shamelessly stole the Fallout stats.)

• Strength - (How much can you lift? How high can you jump?)

• Agility - (How fast can you run? How quickly can you physically react?)

• Intelligence - (How much do you know? How quick is your wit?)

• Perception - (How much do you notice? How quick is your instinct?)

• Charisma - (How much do others like you? How convincing are you?)

• Endurance - (How much damage can you take? How long can you fight?)

• Luck - (How often do you win ties? How often do you win at monopoly?)

Talents: (10 Talent Points upon Character Creation. Keep total amount of your points here. Talents are special abilities that your character can do or abilities they are born with. Race or Occupation may provide one with free bonus talents. Most talents will cost 1 TP, but there are special exceptions. For example, being Force Sensitive is a talent that costs 6 TP. Note that this is only being force sensitive. One’s character must be taught to use the force or be put into a situation where they become aware of it. The force talents are more expensive, but have greater benefits. In layman’s terms, the force is playing for the late game. You can only get Force Sensitivity on character creation. More specific talents may limit what a character can do, but will make them more specialized in that particular subject. May stack points onto one talent for improved effects. Engineer (1) → Skilled Engineer (2) → Master Engineer (3) → Legendary Engineer (5). Note of importance, you might want to PM me for specific Talents to get exactly what you want. Take a shot in the dark and make them yourself and I’ll judge how much TP they cost if you’d prefer, but I will more than likely bring it to PMs.)

 

Examples of Talents

• Force Sensitive (6 TP) - This character has the capability to use the force.

• Engineer (1 TP) - This character knows their way around machinery. Gives the character the ability to perform repairs and operate most machinery. Also gives basic piloting capabilities for planetary vehicles.

• Master Engineer (3 TP) - This character knows their way around almost all machinery. Gives the ability to perform repairs, operate all machinery, sabotage most machinery, build and/or reprogram most droids, improve upon most machinery, and identify specific machine components and weaknesses. Also gives basic piloting capabilities for planetary and space faring vessels.

Personal Weapons: (The weapons that your character carries on their person. This includes lightsabers, guns, etc. etc.)

Starships/Vehicles: (The vehicles that belong to your character. This includes speeder bikes, pod racers, and starships.)

Inventory: (Anything in your character's possession that is not under the other two item categories. Jetpacks and armor would fall under this category.)

Credits: (The currency of the galaxy. You start with zero unless I give you bonus credits to start.)

 

Factions

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Player Characters will be able to choose from three factions at the start. Note that these factions may change throughout the RP. They are merely a starting point for character creation.

 

The New Republic - AKA the Resistance or the Alliance. The “good guys” of the galaxy. Do note that one does not have to be a morally upstanding individual to be in this faction. Characters in this faction must agree (for the most part) with the Republic’s views and are directly opposed to the First Order. There may be exceptions to any rules here, but shoot me a private message if you have questions. Rule of Thumb, if you ask yourself, “Is this allowed?”, odds are you should private message me or it isn’t allowed.

 

The New Republic is in a state of repair and confusion since the destruction of Hosian Prime. With the senate having been on Hosian Prime, new players in the political game are beginning to rise to power. Whether this be for the good or bad of the galaxy is yet to be determined. The capital of the New Republic has been hastily moved to Coruscant because of it's history of being the capital in the past.

 

The First Order - The “bad guys” of the galaxy. Do note that one does not have to be a morally dishonorable individual to be in this faction. Characters in this faction must agree (for the most part) with what the First Order is trying to achieve and are directly opposed to the New Republic. There may be exceptions to any rules here, but shoot me a private message if you have questions. Rule of Thumb, if you ask yourself, “Is this allowed?”, odds are you should private message me or it isn’t allowed.

 

With the Starkiller Base completely destroyed, the First Order is attempting to regain more traction. It's military is still vast, but they need resources to rebuild their forces. Will they strike while the iron is hot or will they simply rebuild for the moment? Their motives are, as always, shrouded in mystery under the leadership of Supreme Leader Snoke.

 

Neutral - The characters with the least restrictions. These individuals can have as many enemies as they want, as well as allies. They are not tied to any one faction and are usually trying to achieve their own goals. Restrictions do not exist for the neutral factions besides gameplay restrictions that are imposed upon every character. Rule of Thumb, if you ask yourself, “Is this allowed?”, odds are you should private message me or it isn’t allowed.

 

Special Rule: For those amongst you who wish to be neutral, yet work with either of the two factions to further your own goals (I.E. Jango Fett) you will put “Neutral/New Republic” or “Neutral/First Order”.

 

Talents

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Talents may very well be the most important aspect of character creation when it comes to the capabilities of your character. This will tell me exactly what your character can do. I don’t want anyone deciding that they are just a master sniper when their character has been a farmer their entire life.

 

As a rule of thumb, it’s much, much better for your character and myself if you make it as specific as possible. I used the Engineer Talent as merely an example. It can be as broad as that, or as specific as “Droid Engineer” or “Starship Pilot”. The more specific it is, odds are you’ll be able to do exactly what you want. It’s important that you ask me in the OOC thread or through PMs (Private messages are preferred because it really puts exact parameters on what that individual talent can do.)

 

Force Talents are a special case. This system is balanced largely around them. This is Star Wars. I’m fully expecting someone to dramatically yell, “YOU CANNOT TAKE HER FROM ME!” and be all angsty and dark with lightning powers. That being said, to use the force at any point in this RP, your character must start with the Force Sensitivity Talent. It costs 6 TP. This is so that one cannot have any capacity of Legendary Talents along with the Force to begin the RP. This also balances the game quite a bit. I suggest those who take Force Sensitivity be experienced RPers as taking that talent is basically like playing this on hard mode as opposed to starting out with “Legendary Marksmanship” and “Legendary Starship Pilot” (This would effectively make your character Han Solo/Jango Fett to start the RP.) On the flip side, you will be able to roflstomp almost anyone later in the RP just by holding your hand out and choking them for shits and giggles.

 

A good example of a starting character would be Anakin Skywalker from Episode 1. When he was a young boy he would have had the talents “Master Engineer” (3 TP), “Force Sensitivity” (6 TP), and “Pilot” (1 TP).

 

Another point to note is how ties will be broken. The first thing I will consult will be stats. Depending on the situation they will break all ties. If there ever arises a situation where stats are taken out of the equation, I will consult talents. Anakin has “Master Engineer” and “Pilot”. If he had tied in a race with someone else who had the “Pilot” talent, then “Master Engineer” would give Anakin the tie breaker because it gives basic piloting skill as well (See earlier description.)

If even then there is somehow a tie. One, I’ll call you guys dumb and unoriginal and likely there will be less dumb and unoriginal character in the near future. Whether through being stabbed by a lightsaber or if I just say fuck it and make a giant boulder fall on you (depends on my mood really), the game will turn extra hard as long as the two characters in question are constantly putting themselves in situations where I have to break ties. Moving on, complete ties will be broken through the Luck stat. If even that is tied, then I will flip a coin. Alphabetical order will be used. If both your names start with A you both spontaneously combust.

 

Any questions about this will be asked in the OOC and I will add a FAQ to the OP.

 

Stats

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Stats are super simple. Generally it works like this.

 

STR vs END

PER vs CHA

AGI vs INT

Luck is has it’s own parameters.

 

There are many examples of it working out differently. For example, if a guy with a sword says he is attacking someone and predicting what they will do to corner them (I’ll decide if they are cornered or not) then it might be STR + INT vs END if the attack hits. On the flip side in that same situation, the defender may decide to dodge instead of blocking the lightsaber with his face. This may result in a STR + INT (Attacker) vs AGI + PER (Defender). This is something that I will primarily judge. I only leave this here so you guys can understand the method to my madness.

If I deem your attempts to corner corner someone with INT to be inadequate, then it may only be STR vs AGI + PER. Again, this is all circumstantial. For the most part the general guidelines I left at the beginning of this section will be how it works.

 

This is primarily an interest check. I wanted to put the information here for players to see and to scheme. More will be added within the next 24 hours. Main plot points for individual characters will be discussed via private message. I have plans set up already, but if someone decides to make the super special awesome loner Han Solo clone and just fly around space saying "LEL FUCK DA POLICE", then I'd have to tweak things.

 

Long story short, a plot section will be put up once I receive completed character sheets. Another thing to note is that I will only be accepting a preliminary 6 characters. First come first served. Family relations and connections between player characters encouraged. Private Message me ASAP to get a head start on character creation.

Edited by Call Me Daddy, 10 January 2016 - 06:31 PM.

[Unbelievably Majestic]

Looks pretty good to me.

 

Question: How much would the Luck stat actually affect things outside of ties in combat?

Edited by Unbelievably Majestic, 10 January 2016 - 05:16 PM.

[Call Me Daddy]

Looks pretty good to me.

 

Question: How much would the Luck stat actually affect things outside of ties in combat?

 

Luck would effect quite a few things. It's just less on the surface of things. A good example of luck would be Han Solo. Throughout the series he's constantly succeeding due to luck. One such example was the asteroid field where their luck to do it was about 1 to 3100 or something. Obviously he mixed it with his piloting skill, but there are tons of things that luck effects. In episode 1 a bigger fish ate the fish following Qui Gon and Obi Wan. It effects things like meetings of happenstance and being pushed into potential plots through one way or another.

[Unbelievably Majestic]

Okay, so it affects a fair bit. Nice.

Can we actually go past 10 in the stats on this? Or is it 10 the max, like Fallout?

Edited by Unbelievably Majestic, 10 January 2016 - 05:43 PM.

[Call Me Daddy]

Okay, so it affects a fair bit. Nice.

Can we actually go past 10 in the stats on this? Or is it 10 the max, like Fallout?

 

You can go as high in the stats as you want. There is no particular limit.

 

Updated the CS to include credits and inventory items.

[Unbelievably Majestic]

Need to decide on Talents. But other than that, here's my CS.

 

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Name: Iara
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Nineteen
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Faction: Neutral
Occupation: Freelance "I-need-money-so-I'll-do-pretty-much-whatever" Specialist
Personality: An opportunistic survivor. Not without a certain code of honour that she likes to think she lives by, but she'll throw that away in an instant if it is getting in her way. She's sharp, quick and gets the hell out of there if things start to get real.

Background: Iara has lived her whole life in Coruscants Underworld. A place down in the shadows, underneath the glitz and glamour of the surface levels. A world populated by the poor and the criminals. A place lit only by artificial light. A fun fact about Iara is that she's never actually seen real sunlight. Not once. How fun! The exhaust fumes and fire smoke would often roll in like a mist. It was dangerous to go outside on such occasions. At least it was for Iara. Her body wasn't good at dealing with that sort of thing. She was never the strongest child, and still isn't exactly a heavy hitter.

She never knew her parents. She's told that they died when she was a baby. Though who knows how true that is. Either way she grew up sort of being kicked from group to group, learning to try and be useful for fear of being kicked out again. And that's how she grew up. Occasionally someone would find her to be funny or whatever and take her in. Then upon realizing she's useless in a fight they would tend to get rid of her. Though, while she could, she'd learn more from every group that took her in. She learned to charm people. She learned to notice things. She learned to trust her instincts. And she simply learned to survived.

Not the most dramatic story, I know. Not the most original story either. There's orphans everywhere with stories like hers. Some, like her, make it. Some don't. Some reach Seventeen and go down in a crime-related blaze of glory. Those are the ones with interesting stories. Those are the ones Iara is happy not to be. Though life has one thing that makes everyone take the risk at some point or another. Money.

If things get bad enough, people do anything to keep living. Well, the people like Iara do anyway. And when living off the streets and not getting shot in some dark dirty corner of the underworld means you need money. Well, Iara gets to work.

And since Iara is currently in pretty deep debt to a mean bastard of a loan-shark, and about 'thiiiis' close to being kicked out of her tiny little crappy one-room apartment she's taking on just about any job she can find.

Stats:
Strength: 3
Agility: 7
Intelligence: 7
Perception: 9
Charisma: 8
Endurance: 4
Luck: 7

Talents:

Personal Weapons: Pfft.
Starships/Vehicles: Hahahah!
Inventory: Oh man, you're cracking me up.
Credits: I'm in so much debt right now. Do you want me to tell you how many credits I don't have instead?

[Call Me Daddy]

Need to decide on Talents. But other than that, here's my CS.

 

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Name: Iara
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Nineteen
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Faction: Neutral
Occupation: Freelance "I-need-money-so-I'll-do-pretty-much-whatever" Specialist
Personality: An opportunistic survivor. Not without a certain code of honour that she likes to think she lives by, but she'll throw that away in an instant if it is getting in her way. She's sharp, quick and gets the hell out of there if things start to get real.

Background: Iara has lived her whole life in Coruscants Underworld. A place down in the shadows, underneath the glitz and glamour of the surface levels. A world populated by the poor and the criminals. A place lit only by artificial light. A fun fact about Iara is that she's never actually seen real sunlight. Not once. How fun! The exhaust fumes and fire smoke would often roll in like a mist. It was dangerous to go outside on such occasions. At least it was for Iara. Her body wasn't good at dealing with that sort of thing. She was never the strongest child, and still isn't exactly a heavy hitter.

She never knew her parents. She's told that they died when she was a baby. Though who knows how true that is. Either way she grew up sort of being kicked from group to group, learning to try and be useful for fear of being kicked out again. And that's how she grew up. Occasionally someone would find her to be funny or whatever and take her in. Then upon realizing she's useless in a fight they would tend to get rid of her. Though, while she could, she'd learn more from every group that took her in. She learned to charm people. She learned to notice things. She learned to trust her instincts. And she simply learned to survived.

Not the most dramatic story, I know. Not the most original story either. There's orphans everywhere with stories like hers. Some, like her, make it. Some don't. Some reach Seventeen and go down in a crime-related blaze of glory. Those are the ones with interesting stories. Those are the ones Iara is happy not to be. Though life has one thing that makes everyone take the risk at some point or another. Money.

If things get bad enough, people do anything to keep living. Well, the people like Iara do anyway. And when living off the streets and not getting shot in some dark dirty corner of the underworld means you need money. Well, Iara gets to work.

And since Iara is currently in pretty deep debt to a mean bastard of a loan-shark, and about 'thiiiis' close to being kicked out of her tiny little crappy one-room apartment she's taking on just about any job she can find.

Stats:
Strength: 3
Agility: 7
Intelligence: 7
Perception: 9
Charisma: 8
Endurance: 4
Luck: 7

Talents:

Personal Weapons: Pfft.
Starships/Vehicles: Hahahah!
Inventory: Oh man, you're cracking me up.
Credits: I'm in so much debt right now. Do you want me to tell you how many credits I don't have instead?

 

Very nice! I'm loving the picture! Once your talents are completed I'll throw in some extra information among other things for your character. ^^

[Mors]

Batoto doesn't get enough newcomers, so just dropping by to say good luck with this! Unfortunately, I'm not the biggest Star Wars fan so I probably won't be joining.

[Peng]

Edit: I apologive for being shameless. 

I'll try my best to learn.

 

 

I might pop in,

but this is my first time playing and I hardly know anything.

It will be great if you can link me some vital information and stuff if Neccessary

 

Oh lol I don't even watch star wars or star trek. 

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Name: Pazuru
Race: Human 
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Alignment: Neutral/Neutral
Faction: Neutral
Occupation: Mercenary with specialty in breaking and entering and also capable of teaming up for abduction missions.
Personality: I dislike hand to hand fighting and killing. Always take the safer route and makes the safer decision. Willing to be a follower because there is too much leaders in the world. Two leaders equals broken team. Does not let emotions take control. Constantly team up with others on mercenary jobs to make money. Money is super important, but surviving and having fun is also important. Cracks jokes every once in awhile and drinks here and there. Trusts hot women and falls for lies.
Appearance: The bad@ss above.
Background: Grew up poor in Coruscant. Lived all of his life there, but has traveled other places for work. In the end, he stayed in Coruscant. As a poor kid, the best money making job available was to be a mercenary. Although he hated violence and used to be on the receiving end of it for quite a while, he eventually accepted the world for what it was. It was age 12 when he threw away his ideals. Breaking in and stealing used to be his occupation until he was caught and jailed. Once he broke out he took it a step further and became a mercenary. It's a pretty strong word for an 18 year old. Four years later, abduction and killing no longer mattered. Beating his rival mercs and accessing a wealthy easy going life became his ultimate goal.  

Stats: 45
Strength: 4
Agility: 4
Intelligence: 4
Perception: 10
Charisma: 3
Endurance: 7
Luck: 13

Talents: 10

 

 

Skilled Cook (2 TP) - This character knows how to prepare food rather well. Gives the character the ability to cook food, improve upon any food's taste, recognize food that was tampered with or poisoned, and create exotic yet delicious dishes.

 

Skilled Pistol Marksman (2 TP) - This character knows how to wield a pistol or revolver with impressive skill. Gives the character the ability to draw a pistol incredibly quickly, shoot with deadly accuracy, use any form of simple handheld firearms, and reload incredibly fast.

 

Skilled Thief (2 TP) - This character is skilled in the art of taking things from others without being noticed. Gives the character the ability to pickpocket unnoticed most of the time, notice the valuables on a character that the examine, lockpick with a moderate success rate, and hide stolen items very efficiently. Also gives basic stealth skill.

 

Skilled Observer (2 TP) - This character knows how to examine an area. Gives the character the ability to overhear important information with increased success, notice ticks and foul play more efficiently, understand someone's intentions more efficiently, and look into another character's inventory from afar. Also gives basic understand of situations as a whole.

 

Skilled Enforcer (2 TP) - This character knows how to enter a room. Gives the character the ability to kick down most simple doors, perform advanced feats of hacking to shut down security systems, and lockpick most any door with a lock.

 

Personal Weapons: Stun Blaster, Brass Knuckles
Starships/Vehicles: None
Inventory: None
Credits: 1000

 

 

 

Edited by Peng, 18 January 2016 - 01:00 PM.

[Shmuser Name]

Yeah, Peng, that is pretty shameless. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to drive people away. That app of yours is considered a WIP, so why not next time put "WIP"(work in progress) and then leave things blank, it's safe to do so.
 
I'm looking for an alien race I'd like to play as.
 
So far, the furry and cute ones or the ones with horns or tentacles on their heads appeal to me the most. However, I really do want to be more than "that cute, little furry alien that can do much bigger things" or the "I am basically a human but I have horns or tentacles on my head" type of character.
 
I even had a great image of a sci-fi military girl to use as a character for a Sci-Fi RPG but Joker beat me to it! The salt is real. Still, not everyday you get to be an alien.
 
WIP

 

Name: Xendo-Zha

Race: Draethos

Gender: Male

Age: 299

Alignment: Lawful

Appearance: Average height; Lean, strong musculature; Eggplant-purple skin tone with lighter undertone of navy-blue pigmentation; Cyberbetic left eye with a sapphire-colored iris and a natural right eye with a dark-gray colored iris; Pink scar going diagonally down his face beginning from the upper-lid of his left eye down to the edge of his right nostril

Personality: Has high morals, very dutiful, tendency to be hedonistic, has low tolerance for evil, sly

 

Background: Xendo-Zha was an excellent Security officer for a rather large business on Boz Pity. Being so close to Hutt Space, he handled the threats of Hutt factions for many long years. He did not seem to remember much of the Republic, being an adolescent at the time of the Empire's rise to power. After joining the police force on one of Boz Pity's cities after becoming an adult, Xendo-Zha realized that the corruption he saw was beginning to disillusion him. Therefore, he left and became a contractor, and was quickly picked up by a modest, but important corporation to behave as a security officer for their VIPs. He worked there for a good amount of time, and when the Empire fell the economic backlash on the Galactic economy caused him to lose his job. However, Xendo-Zha was allowed, through special merit, to be allowed back into the police force through his connections and favors, this time in a new city where the corruption was much more regulated. Yet, a new Galactic war was raging now. Being an experienced fighter and negotiator, Xendo-Zha was prepared for whatever the horizon brought. He had combated gangsters of both the criminal kind and the corporate kind, and had survived two Galactic Wars.

 

Faction: Neutral

Occupation: Police Officer

Stats: (45 Stat Points upon Character Creation. Keep the total amount of your points here. Yes I shamelessly stole the Fallout stats.)

• Strength - (8)

• Agility - (6)

• Intelligence - (5)

• Perception - (6)

• Charisma - (9)

• Endurance - (6)

• Luck - (5)

Talents:

 

Draethos Telepathy: Race talent, one-way telepathic communication, no mind-reading

Hand-to-Hand Combat: Star Wars version of Pencak Silat Mastery from all those years training and fighting any number of enemies in almost every environment

[/spoiler]​https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JkEEGidt9GY[/spoiler]

Cyborg Marksmanship: As a security officer and police officer, you need to be able to spot a threat and drop it quickly and accurately, and those years of training have helped Xendo-Zha hone his shot. Possessing a cybernetic eye also helps in looking through objects and and looking longer distances. He can operate mostly all hand-guns and blaster rifles, no heavy equipment training though.

Threat Sentinel: Xendo-Zha spent many years protecting and serving. He also spent many years ensuring he'd get paid. If people die, he loses either way. Fortunately, Xendo-Zha generates the most aggro in a fight, unfortunately he generates the most aggro in a fight.

Bugged: Xendo-Zha's cybernetic eye, if connected to a mainframe of cameras, can see from every single one of their perspectives.

 

Personal Weapons: Blaster Rifle, Heavy Blaster Pistol

Starships/Vehicles: Police Squad Hover-Car

Inventory: Police ID, Body Armor, Tactical Helmet

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Credits: 

Edited by Shmuser Name, 12 January 2016 - 01:27 PM.

[Unbelievably Majestic]

@Peng: Such super shameless stealing suits you sir.

 

@Shmuser: Ooops. Well at least you get to make a cool alien version of mad-eye moody. :3

 

I'm not going the badass fighter route though, so we'd probably be different enough if you wanted to be a military woman.

[pizhhh]

First time roleplaying.

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Name: Vik Mariss
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Faction: Neutral/New Republic
Occupation: Intergalactic Transportation
Personality: Has a bit of a temper. Not a big rist-taker. If given the opportunity, he will almost always do the right thing, not out of kindness or altruism, but because it presents the least amount of hassle in the long run. Can't hold liquor.

Background: Hailing from the streets of one of Corellia's major urban centers, he grew up on stories about the planet's two most famous heroes, the dashing smuggler and the daring rebel pilot. Since he was a youngling, Vik dreamt of buying his own starship and having numerous exciting adventures across the galaxy. But reality is never as glamorous as a child's dreams, and he ended up a as a glorified taxi driver. After being swindled into buying a small starship (a decent one, though he was cheated into buying it for twice it's real worth), he now makes a living ferrying a max of 6 people to different systems of New Republic space. Along with his astromech droid named 1ST-M8, an old R2 unit he found and repaired, he's been doing this since he got his flying license at 18.

Stats: (45 SP)
Strength: 7
Agility: 6
Intelligence: 8
Perception: 8
Charisma: 6
Endurance: 3
Luck: 7

Talents: (10 TP)
Master Starship Pilot (3 TP) - This character knows how to pilot almost any starship. Gives the ability to pilot starships with high proficiency, pull off advanced combat maneuvers while piloting a starship, recognize outputs of starship systems, efficiently use starship weapon systems, dodge incoming enemy starship attacks, and avoid obstacles. Also gives basic knowledge of starship capabilities.

Skilled Starship Mechanic (2 TP) - This character knows how to perform upkeep on starships and keep them running smoothly. Gives the character the ability to repair all starships, upgrade most starship capabilities, immediately find problems any most starship's machinery/systems, redirect power to other systems of a starship, and understand most starship capabilities at a glance.

Skilled Droid Mechanic (2 TP) - This character knows how to perform upkeep on droids and keep them running smoothly as well as construct them. Gives the character the ability to repair droids, upgrade droid abilities, immediately find problems with any droid's machinery/systems, construct droids when the parts to do so are available, reprogram most droids, and understand binary.

Navigation (1 TP) - This character knows how to find their way. Gives the character the ability to navigate basic planetary maps and galactic maps.

Haggle (1 TP) - This character knows how to drive down a price. Gives the character the ability to more efficiently drive down the prices at any shopping center or vendor. Also reduces Daddy's Emporium prices by 10%.

Singing (1 TP) - This character knows how to perform with their voice. Gives the character the ability to put a calming effect on those who hear their singing and the ability to gather a crowd more effectively with music.

Weapons: Wrench, Lead pipe, Multitool

Vehicles:
Starship Name: Krayt Fang
Starship Model: VCX-113
Class: Light Freighter
Weapons: <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>
Crew: 1 Pilot, 1 Co-Pilot, 1 Gunner, 5 Passengers
Hyperdrive: No
Shields: No
Systems: Life Support, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>
Rooms: Vik's Room, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>

Inventory: Astromech droid 1ST-M8 (Old Republic-era R2 droid)

Credits: 1000

Donnee!

Edited by pizhhh, 12 January 2016 - 04:49 PM.

[Call Me Daddy]

I'll be looking through each CS shortly. For those of you who need information, use this site.

 

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page

[Unbelievably Majestic]

Finished CS with Talents and stuff added.

 

Spoiler

Name: Iara
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Nineteen
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Faction: Neutral
Occupation: Freelance "I-need-money-so-I'll-do-pretty-much-whatever" Specialist
Personality: An opportunistic survivor. Not without a certain code of honour that she likes to think she lives by, but she'll throw that away in an instant if it is getting in her way. She's sharp, quick and gets the hell out of there if things start to get real.

Background: Iara has lived her whole life in Coruscants Underworld. A place down in the shadows, underneath the glitz and glamour of the surface levels. A world populated by the poor and the criminals. A place lit only by artificial light. A fun fact about Iara is that she's never actually seen real sunlight. Not once. How fun! The exhaust fumes and fire smoke would often roll in like a mist. It was dangerous to go outside on such occasions. At least it was for Iara. Her body wasn't good at dealing with that sort of thing. She was never the strongest child, and still isn't exactly a heavy hitter.

She never knew her parents. She's told that they died when she was a baby. Though who knows how true that is. Either way she grew up sort of being kicked from group to group, learning to try and be useful for fear of being kicked out again. And that's how she grew up. Occasionally someone would find her to be funny or whatever and take her in. Then upon realizing she's useless in a fight they would tend to get rid of her. Though, while she could, she'd learn more from every group that took her in. She learned to charm people. She learned to notice things. She learned to trust her instincts. And she simply learned to survived.

Not the most dramatic story, I know. Not the most original story either. There's orphans everywhere with stories like hers. Some, like her, make it. Some don't. Some reach Seventeen and go down in a crime-related blaze of glory. Those are the ones with interesting stories. Those are the ones Iara is happy not to be. Though life has one thing that makes everyone take the risk at some point or another. Money.

If things get bad enough, people do anything to keep living. Well, the people like Iara do anyway. And when living off the streets and not getting shot in some dark dirty corner of the underworld means you need money. Well, Iara gets to work.

And since Iara is currently in pretty deep debt to a mean bastard of a loan-shark, and about 'thiiiis' close to being kicked out of her tiny little crappy one-room apartment she's taking on just about any job she can find.

Stats:
Strength: 3
Agility: 7
Intelligence: 7
Perception: 9
Charisma: 8
Endurance: 4
Luck: 7

Talents:

Force Sensitivity <6TP>
Sleight of Hand <1TP>
Master Con Artist <3TP>

Personal Weapons: Pfft.
Starships/Vehicles: Hahahah!
Inventory: Oh man, you're cracking me up.
Credits: I'm in so much debt right now. Do you want me to tell you how many credits I don't have instead?

[Call Me Daddy]

I'm going to be pretty thorough with everything so bear with me people. Apologies if I tear you a new asshole.

 

 

Finished CS with Talents and stuff added.

 

Spoiler

Name: Iara
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Nineteen
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Faction: Neutral
Occupation: Freelance "I-need-money-so-I'll-do-pretty-much-whatever" Specialist !!! (Very vague, may or may not help your character. I will talk to you about it.) !!!
Personality: An opportunistic survivor. Not without a certain code of honour that she likes to think she lives by, but she'll throw that away in an instant if it is getting in her way. She's sharp, quick and gets the hell out of there if things start to get real. !!! (How does she feel about confrontation? I know you have it in the backstory, but adding here for this particular kind of character is important.) !!!

Background: Iara has lived her whole life in Coruscants Underworld. A place down in the shadows, underneath the glitz and glamour of the surface levels. A world populated by the poor and the criminals. A place lit only by artificial light. A fun fact about Iara is that she's never actually seen real sunlight. Not once. How fun! The exhaust fumes and fire smoke would often roll in like a mist. It was dangerous to go outside on such occasions. At least it was for Iara. Her body wasn't good at dealing with that sort of thing. She was never the strongest child, and still isn't exactly a heavy hitter.

She never knew her parents. She's told that they died when she was a baby. Though who knows how true that is. Either way she grew up sort of being kicked from group to group, learning to try and be useful for fear of being kicked out again. And that's how she grew up. Occasionally someone would find her to be funny or whatever and take her in. Then upon realizing she's useless in a fight they would tend to get rid of her. Though, while she could, she'd learn more from every group that took her in. She learned to charm people. She learned to notice things. She learned to trust her instincts. And she simply learned to survived.

Not the most dramatic story, I know. Not the most original story either. There's orphans everywhere with stories like hers. Some, like her, make it. Some don't. Some reach Seventeen and go down in a crime-related blaze of glory. Those are the ones with interesting stories. Those are the ones Iara is happy not to be. Though life has one thing that makes everyone take the risk at some point or another. Money.

If things get bad enough, people do anything to keep living. Well, the people like Iara do anyway. And when living off the streets and not getting shot in some dark dirty corner of the underworld means you need money. Well, Iara gets to work.

And since Iara is currently in pretty deep debt to a mean bastard of a loan-shark, and about 'thiiiis' close to being kicked out of her tiny little crappy one-room apartment she's taking on just about any job she can find.

Stats: !!! (45) !!!
Strength: 3
Agility: 7
Intelligence: 7
Perception: 9
Charisma: 8
Endurance: 4
Luck: 7

Talents: !!! (10) !!!

Force Sensitivity <6TP>
Sleight of Hand <1TP>
Master Con Artist <3TP>

Personal Weapons: Pfft.
Starships/Vehicles: Hahahah!
Inventory: Oh man, you're cracking me up.
Credits: I'm in so much debt right now. Do you want me to tell you how many credits I don't have instead?

 

Your talents.

 

Force Sensitive (6 TP) - This character has the capability to use the force.

 

Sleight of Hand (1 TP) - This character knows how to perform incredible maneuvers with their hands. Gives the character the ability to distract and steal objects without being noticed.  Also gives the ability to draw small or concealed weapons quickly.

 

Master Con Artist (3 TP) - This character knows how to swindle people into doing most anything. Gives the ability to convincingly lie to almost any other character, talk down most any aggressive enemy, deflect blame onto others more effectively, coerce others to become your ally, efficiently pretend to be another individual, and identify another character's inventory.

 

Put these in and you're accepted. I may or may not give out character specific talents once I have every accepted character.

 

You are accepted. 

 

First time roleplaying.

Spoiler

Name: Vik Mariss
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Faction: Neutral/New Republic
Occupation: Intergalactic taxi driver, or something like an Uber driver from a galaxy far, far away !!! (Change this to Intergalactic Transportation. Sounds cooler and is simpler and broader.) !!!
Personality: Has a bit of a temper. Not a big rist-taker. If given the opportunity, he will almost always do the right thing, not out of kindness or altruism, but because it presents the least amount of hassle in the long run. Can't hold liquor. 

Background: Hailing from the streets of one of Corellia's major urban centers, he grew up on stories about the planet's two most famous heroes, the dashing smuggler and the daring rebel pilot. Since he was a youngling, Vik dreamt of buying his own starship and having numerous exciting adventures across the galaxy. But reality is never as glamorous as a child's dreams, and he ended up a as a glorified taxi driver. After being swindled into buying a small starship (a decent one, though he was cheated into buying it for twice it's real worth), he now makes a living ferrying a max of 6 people to different systems of New Republic space. Along with his astromech droid named 1ST-M8, he's been doing this since he got his flying license at 18. !!! (Only problem I see is the 1ST-M8 Astromech Droid. I can only really find pictures of R2 series (R2-D2) and BB series (BB-8). It's not much of a problem, just hook a brother up with a picture of how you want the droid to look. Did Vik build this droid? Is the droid an original droid? Even R2-D2 wasn't the only R2 unit. Only asking because I see the Droid Mechanic Talent.) !!!

Stats: !!! (45. I just want people to keep their totals here.) !!!
Strength: 7
Agility: 6
Intelligence: 8
Perception: 8
Charisma: 6
Endurance: 3
Luck: 7

Talents: !!! (10. Same as above. Like having total there for me to see.) !!!
Starship Pilot (3)
Starship Mechanic (2)
Droid Mechanic (2)
Navigation (1)
Haggle (1)
Singing (1)

Weapons: Wrench, Lead pipe, Multitool !!! (This isn't a problem, but I'm excited that you put these under weapons and not inventory.) !!!
Vehicles: Small Corellian starship (relatively new and decent condition, max 2 crew and 6 passengers) !!! (I'll be putting the ship information underneath all this.) !!!
Inventory: Astromech droid 1ST-M8. !!! (Only thing I want is a picture of the droid. You could also easily get an R2 unit or a BB unit for sake of ease. It matter little to me. I mostly want an image in my head.) !!!
Credits: 0 !!! (Because you have an actual occupation and are not in debt like that silly Iara, you start with 1000 Credits.) !!!

 

Your talents.

 

.Master Starship Pilot (3 TP) - This character knows how to pilot almost any starship. Gives the ability to pilot starships with high proficiency, pull off advanced combat maneuvers while piloting a starship, recognize outputs of starship systems, efficiently use starship weapon systems, dodge incoming enemy starship attacks, and avoid obstacles. Also gives basic knowledge of  starship capabilities. 

 

Skilled Starship Mechanic (2 TP) - This character knows how to perform upkeep on starships and keep them running smoothly. Gives the character the ability to repair all starships, upgrade most starship capabilities, immediately find problems any most starship's machinery/systems, redirect power to other systems of a starship, and understand most starship capabilities at a glance.

 

Skilled Droid Mechanic (2 TP) - This character knows how to perform upkeep on droids and keep them running smoothly as well as construct them. Gives the character the ability to repair droids, upgrade droid abilities, immediately find problems with any droid's machinery/systems, construct droids when the parts to do so are available, reprogram most droids, and understand binary.

 

Navigation (1 TP) - This character knows how to find their way. Gives the character the ability to navigate basic planetary maps and galactic maps.

 

Haggle (1 TP) - This character knows how to drive down a price. Gives the character the ability to more efficiently drive down the prices at any shopping center or vendor. Also reduces Daddy's Emporium prices by 10%.

 

Singing (1 TP) -  This character knows how to perform with their voice. Gives the character the ability to put a calming effect on those who hear their singing and the ability to gather a crowd more effectively with music.

 

Your ship. (Put this under vehicles.)

 

Starship Name: N/A (Unearned/Not Named)

Starship Model: VCX-113

Class: Light Freighter

Weapons: N/A (Built in gun was stripped), <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>

Crew: 1 Pilot, 1 Co-Pilot, 1 Gunner, 5 Passengers

Hyperdrive: No (In need of replacement Hyperdrive Propulsion System)

Shields: No (In need of Shielding Unit)

Systems: Life Support, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>, <Open Slot>

Rooms: Vik's Room, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>, <Unoccupied>

 

It's important to note that I gave you a rather good ship. By "good" ship, I made it not incredibly small. This (in the Star Wars universe) is the next series in line from the well known YT-1300f (the same model as the Millenium Falcon). I made it a VCX-113 instead of a VCX-100 just so you could give reasons to say why exactly this ship has a few tweaks here and there to match your preference. Maybe it has an extra room or another systems slot or a holding area for a shuttle ship (I would recommend that as you could potentially store a small fighter class starship there.) Just take it up with me first.

 

The drawback that I gave you was the lack of shields and hyperdrive and the built in gun. This is what you will probably end up dumping your credits into. A lot of potential to be a great vessel, but I stripped it down. Let's see if you can make it up to snuff.

 

Here's a link to the model of ship. http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/VCX-100_light_freighter

 

As for the rooms, these are not just all bedrooms. You could easily fashion them into a medbay or honestly anything else you turn them into. Ask me for how much everything will cost and I can give you a rough idea of what you're gonna need to make this baby into a monster and earn a nick name.

 

On another note, this is important to you in particular. There will be a "Daddy's Emporium" section soon enough. It will feature things that you can use your character's credits to get outside the game. Think of it as a special offers kind of thing. Featured there will be ship parts/systems and a variety of other trinkets. I'll try to put it up ASAP and give you an idea.

 

This is a lot so let me know if you have any questions. There may very well be a thing or two even I didn't think of.

 

Yeah, Peng, that is pretty shameless. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to drive people away. That app of yours is considered a WIP, so why not next time put "WIP"(work in progress) and then leave things blank, it's safe to do so.

 

I'm looking for an alien race I'd like to play as.

 

So far, the furry and cute ones or the ones with horns or tentacles on their heads appeal to me the most. However, I really do want to be more than "that cute, little furry alien that can do much bigger things" or the "I am basically a human but I have horns or tentacles on my head" type of character.

 

I even had a great image of a sci-fi military girl to use as a character for a Sci-Fi RPG but Joker beat me to it! The salt is real. Still, not everyday you get to be an alien.

 

WIP

Spoiler

Name: Xendo-Zha​

Race: Draethos

Gender: Male

Age: 311

Alignment: (Lawful)

Appearance: Average height; Moderately-defined musculature on a lean body; Eggplant purple skin pigmentation; Cybernetic eye with bright-blue colored iris, and one natural eye with dark-gray colored iris; Scar going down from the top of his left (cybernetic) eye's upper lid to the edge of his right nostril

 

Personality: (How does your character act? What makes them tick? Keep it brief as I believe personality shows most during the course of a roleplay. Example - “Honorable. Proud. Stubborn. Excitable.” Try not to use only positive descriptions. Nobody is perfect… except me.)

Background: (Who are you? Give me a detailed description of your character’s past.)

 

Faction: (Who are you affiliated with? Only three choices to start with.)

Occupation: (How do you earn your keep? Even Anakin used to make droids, Rey was a scavenger, and Luke was a farmer. This also can help determine what your character can or cannot do. Example - A lifelong engineer won’t be able to hack a computer with ease, but could probably repair a ship.)

Stats: (45 Stat Points upon Character Creation. Keep the total amount of your points here. Yes I shamelessly stole the Fallout stats.)

• Strength - (How much can you lift? How high can you jump?)

• Agility - (How fast can you run? How quickly can you physically react?)

• Intelligence - (How much do you know? How quick is your wit?)

• Perception - (How much do you notice? How quick is your instinct?)

• Charisma - (How much do others like you? How convincing are you?)

• Endurance - (How much damage can you take? How long can you fight?)

• Luck - (How often do you win ties? How often do you win at monopoly?)

Talents: (10 Talent Points upon Character Creation. Keep total amount of your points here. Talents are special abilities that your character can do or abilities they are born with. Race or Occupation may provide one with free bonus talents. Most talents will cost 1 TP, but there are special exceptions. For example, being Force Sensitive is a talent that costs 6 TP. Note that this is only being force sensitive. One’s character must be taught to use the force or be put into a situation where they become aware of it. The force talents are more expensive, but have greater benefits. In layman’s terms, the force is playing for the late game. You can only get Force Sensitivity on character creation. More specific talents may limit what a character can do, but will make them more specialized in that particular subject. May stack points onto one talent for improved effects. Engineer (1) → Skilled Engineer (2) → Master Engineer (3) → Legendary Engineer (5). Note of importance, you might want to PM me for specific Talents to get exactly what you want. Take a shot in the dark and make them yourself and I’ll judge how much TP they cost if you’d prefer, but I will more than likely bring it to PMs.)

 

Examples of Talents

• Force Sensitive (6 TP) - This character has the capability to use the force.

• Engineer (1 TP) - This character knows their way around machinery. Gives the character the ability to perform repairs and operate most machinery. Also gives basic piloting capabilities for planetary vehicles.

• Master Engineer (3 TP) - This character knows their way around almost all machinery. Gives the ability to perform repairs, operate all machinery, sabotage most machinery, build and/or reprogram most droids, improve upon most machinery, and identify specific machine components and weaknesses. Also gives basic piloting capabilities for planetary and space faring vessels.

Personal Weapons: (The weapons that your character carries on their person. This includes lightsabers, guns, etc. etc.)

Starships/Vehicles: (The vehicles that belong to your character. This includes speeder bikes, pod racers, and starships.)

Inventory: (Anything in your character's possession that is not under the other two item categories. Jetpacks and armor would fall under this category.)

Credits: (The currency of the galaxy. You start with zero unless I give you bonus credits to start.)

​

 

TBD WIP.

 

Edit: I apologive for being shameless. 

I'll try my best to learn.

 

 

I might pop in,

but this is my first time playing and I hardly know anything.

It will be great if you can link me some vital information and stuff if Neccessary

 

Oh lol I don't even watch star wars or star trek. 

Spoiler

 

Name: Pazuru
Race: Human 
Gender: Male
Age: Seventeen
Alignment: Lawful
Faction: The New Republic
Occupation: Neet. Trying to change that and become a cook or mercenary in freetime because it pays.
Personality: I like to pretend to be lazy/laid-back and actually am lazy most of the time, but can turn on serious mode anytime when necessary. Dislikes fighting and have 2 personalities. Usually, slow to think, dumb, and wussy are my traits. However, when serious, I can become tricky, evil, and cruel to my enemies (At least I think I can become bad@ss), . . . not that I ever made any real enemies. Gets out of most situation by being the errand boy. Also a shameless person that steals stuff.
Appearance: Plain face like watch dog man from OPM. My Profile pic. Short black hair. Race asian. 5 foot 5 inches 160 slim athleticish build but not strong enough to deal blows, but gotten better at taking blows. 140lb Tatooed 07 on arm.
Background: Unknown. (Honestly I don't know enough about star wars. So i guess I will reveil more about Pazuru along the way)

Stats:
Strength: 4
Agility: 5
Intelligence: 4
Perception: 9
Charisma: 3
Endurance: 7
Luck: 13

Talents: Cook (2) Trickery (2) Stealing (2)

 

Personal Weapons: None
Starships/Vehicles: None
Inventory: None
Credits: 0

 

 

 

 

TBD momentarily.

Edited by Call Me Daddy, 11 January 2016 - 09:35 PM.

[Unbelievably Majestic]

Tweak'd. :3

 

Spoiler

Name: Iara
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Nineteen
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Faction: Neutral
Occupation: Opportunist
Personality: An opportunistic survivor. Not without a certain code of honour that she likes to think she lives by, but she'll throw that away in an instant if it is getting in her way. She's sharp, quick and gets the hell out of there if things start to get real. Attempts to avoid confrontation at all costs, though that's not out of some moral obligation, it's because she's never been good at it.

Background: Iara has lived her whole life in Coruscants Underworld. A place down in the shadows, underneath the glitz and glamour of the surface levels. A world populated by the poor and the criminals. A place lit only by artificial light. A fun fact about Iara is that she's never actually seen real sunlight. Not once. How fun! The exhaust fumes and fire smoke would often roll in like a mist. It was dangerous to go outside on such occasions. At least it was for Iara. Her body wasn't good at dealing with that sort of thing. She was never the strongest child, and still isn't exactly a heavy hitter.

She never knew her parents. She's told that they died when she was a baby. Though who knows how true that is. Either way she grew up sort of being kicked from group to group, learning to try and be useful for fear of being kicked out again. And that's how she grew up. Occasionally someone would find her to be funny or whatever and take her in. Then upon realizing she's useless in a fight they would tend to get rid of her. Though, while she could, she'd learn more from every group that took her in. She learned to charm people. She learned to notice things. She learned to trust her instincts. And she simply learned to survived.

Not the most dramatic story, I know. Not the most original story either. There's orphans everywhere with stories like hers. Some, like her, make it. Some don't. Some reach Seventeen and go down in a crime-related blaze of glory. Those are the ones with interesting stories. Those are the ones Iara is happy not to be. Though life has one thing that makes everyone take the risk at some point or another. Money.

If things get bad enough, people do anything to keep living. Well, the people like Iara do anyway. And when living off the streets and not getting shot in some dark dirty corner of the underworld means you need money. Well, Iara gets to work.

And since Iara is currently in pretty deep debt to a mean bastard of a loan-shark, and about 'thiiiis' close to being kicked out of her tiny little crappy one-room apartment she's taking on just about any job she can find.

Stats: <45 Total>
Strength: 3
Agility: 7
Intelligence: 7
Perception: 9
Charisma: 8
Endurance: 4
Luck: 7

Talents: <10 Total>

Force Sensitivity <6TP> - This character has the capability to use the force.
Sleight of Hand <1TP> - This character knows how to perform incredible maneuvers with their hands. Gives the character the ability to distract and steal objects without being noticed.  Also gives the ability to draw small or concealed weapons quickly.
Master Con Artist <3TP> - This character knows how to swindle people into doing most anything. Gives the ability to convincingly lie to almost any other character, talk down most any aggressive enemy, deflect blame onto others more effectively, coerce others to become your ally, efficiently pretend to be another individual, and identify another character's inventory.

 

Personal Weapons: Pfft.
Starships/Vehicles: Hahahah!
Inventory: Oh man, you're cracking me up.
Credits: I'm in so much debt right now. Do you want me to tell you how many credits I don't have instead?

[Officer Judy Hopps]

O.o

I'm not able to join but jolly good show! If I had the time I'd join (I LOVE Star Wars) but impending baby prevents me from doing so. Best of luck and welcome!!

[Call Me Daddy]

pizhhh's character sheet has been checked in my earlier post. Problems with it are in red in the quote and things to add to the CS are what I posted underneath. Your character is accepted and I even put quite a bit extra for you.

[Unbelievably Majestic]

(Because you have an actual occupation and are not in debt like that silly Iara, you start with 1000 Credits.)

 

How rude.

[pizhhh]

he's just a regular R2 unit colored yellow. I just used the designation 1ST-M8 as a play on "First Mate".

I'll complete the edit of my CS later when I get home.