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[OOC]The Invisible World


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The Invisible World

 

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The Team

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hype?!


here's to a long life and dead friends

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Just so you guys know, you won't start as part of the team.  You will all be recruited in the intro.  Also, I plan to keep this rp small so its easier to manage and easier to whip people into posting to keep it moving smoothly.  Probably about 8 is all that I'll be accepting.


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Looks cool Rogue. I'll try and think of something fun. :3

 

Just to be clear, do we actually get supernatural powers? If we do, do we start with them? Or is it just that something supernatural has happened to, or around, us at some point?



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You are just an ordinary person at the start who has touched a bit of weirdness in their life.  There will be powers to gain but I will give them in the rp but its not really a super shonen rp so don't expect too much.


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I know exactly what character to make. 


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Rogue, pls.

I'm already too involved with other RPs, I can't manage another.

Stop trying to tempt me.

pls.


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Temptation is sort of the Beast's thing.


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Rogue, pls.

I'm already too involved with other RPs, I can't manage another.

Stop trying to tempt me.

pls.

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Alrighty.  First post is now finished.  Not that any of what I edited pertains to your chars but just the same.


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Rogue, I'm more than happy to join your roleplay, but since I've been busy lately I'll only join if slots aren't filled in a week or so. I just wanted to let you know my interest.



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Good to know.  Even if the slots filled a slot might open in the future.  People might die and if someone doesn't post for two rounds without any heads up I'll probably take them out and open up their slot.


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Is it cool if I put this here?


Edited by Fatal Blood, 27 March 2015 - 06:44 PM.

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@Fatal

Looking over your char I notice a few problems where you might of misunderstood the setting or wording of a few categories.  I wasn't too clear so that's not a big deal.  The actual problem with your character though is that I don't really get a sense for him.  There are a number of parts you toss out there but they don't really come together so it ends up feeling a bit haphazard.  So let's try and work it out together.

 

  • First lets just handle the technical issues.  For Relationships I'd like you to put your family there even if you aren't close or don't get along.  A bad relationship is still a relationship after all.  Now for Strengths I'm not looking for your skills.  Those should be apparent from your bio.  What I want from you there are parts of your personality that make you a better person.  Lastly, you have a few fonts and colors going on so if you can sort that out it would be appreciated.
  • Was there a reason for why you choose a medieval vampire for your appearance? If you need help finding an image I'm sure that I could help find you something more fitting.
  • What is it your family does?  Why does you being a fifth son or eighth child matter?  This is set in modern times so there is no title or lands really to contest for.  What do the Felldrakes do? What is Lucian's relationship with them and how would that have affected his personality and choices?  Are they still providing him with whatever funds he needs?
  • Why lightning?  It almost seems like a fetish for him.  Where's that come from?
  • Was he a professor at such a young age? What kind of position was he in where students could die from one of his experiments?  Why didn't he care?  
  • His experiment had nothing to do with lightning.  Why was he doing it?  What purpose?  Maybe you could make the experiment more auspicious and personal for him?
  • Where did the personal servant come from?  Your family is paying for him?  
  • Why did he assume he must of died?  Why would that bother him?  He seems rather detached and logical and he would of died from the only thing he cared about.  So why would it concern him?

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Looking good after the edit Vaf.


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Up for review.

 

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Hi. So uhh..

This is my first time RPing in BT (Rem finally convinced me).
Just wondering what the pacing will be like, and what we're expected to post. An approximate word count maybe?
I'm definitely interested, but wouldn't want to bite off more than I could chew.

Also, I'm a bit confused. If we're not part of the team then we're... the experiments? I'd rather clarify than join and get it all wrong.

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A WIP, hope I finish before others submit their characters

 

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It's looking good so far.  Did you end up using the name Giuseppe by chance? EDIT:  and as soon as I posted this I noticed you edited a lot more in.  Time to read that.

 

Hi. So uhh..

This is my first time RPing in BT (Rem finally convinced me).
Just wondering what the pacing will be like, and what we're expected to post. An approximate word count maybe?
I'm definitely interested, but wouldn't want to bite off more than I could chew.

Also, I'm a bit confused. If we're not part of the team then we're... the experiments? I'd rather clarify than join and get it all wrong.

Heya

 

I'd like for the rp to be somewhat faster paced when it comes to posting.  I'd like it to be at least once a week if not faster.  With it being a smaller RP I thing that should be sustainable.  If, for whatever reason, you weren't able to get a post in time you could just send me a message telling me the gist of your plans and I'd take that into account as I updated.  It shouldn't be too hard though to get in a post at least once a week.  There is no word count to worry about.  Just write as much as your comfortable with.  Everyone has their own styles so it's really up to how much detail you want to go into.

 

Everyone will become a member of the team in the intro arc.  So right now nobody is aware of the its existence or has any extensive knowledge on the supernatural.  


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things seem to be slowing down a bit so i'm showing my interest in this now and will work on a CS soon if things actually slow down.


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Hi. So uhh..

This is my first time RPing in BT (Rem finally convinced me).
Just wondering what the pacing will be like, and what we're expected to post. An approximate word count maybe?
I'm definitely interested, but wouldn't want to bite off more than I could chew.

Also, I'm a bit confused. If we're not part of the team then we're... the experiments? I'd rather clarify than join and get it all wrong.

Hey!! welcome to BT RP corner. Hope you have a lot of fun.


@Rogue: Want me to change the name? It's just that its my cousin's name so I often use it when I am going for Italian names. I can change if you want


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