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[OOC] Eternal Sonata: A Dance of Spirits

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Is this based on Eternal Sonata?  Guessing not.

 

//goes to read


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*ahem* Working on a CS for the Royal Guard. :P

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Done. Still trying to find a picture. But done.


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Is this based on Eternal Sonata?  Guessing not.
 
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It is not. I forgot that that was a game series already. It's my intent to have this eventually turn into something of a series of RPs that center on the world of Astoren in various time periods, and the Eternal Sonata was the name i grabbed for the overarcing setting.

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Uuu I will almost certainly join this. 


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Ah, so this was it. Veeeery interesting. Ideas, ideas......


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Darkoda? With ideas?

 

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Heh

 

First question; do you need a skill to have an Aeon?

 

And what technology level is present right now?


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Can I be Ilyana Elincia Crysthera's son? Or better yet her husbando?



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Heh

 

First question; do you need a skill to have an Aeon?

 

And what technology level is present right now?

 

Nope. Everybody gets an Aeon and 2 Skills.

 

Tech level is Lord of the Rings level.

 

Can I be Ilyana Elincia Crysthera's son? Or better yet her husbando?

 

Until I have a more clear idea of how I want her immediate family to be (which should be tonight or tomorrow), I'm going to say no.


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WOO. Got a picture to work!



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*ahem* Working on a CS for the Royal Guard. :P

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Done. Still trying to find a picture. But done.

 

Hmm. Alright, a few things that I would like to see elaborated or adjusted.

1- Am I correct in assuming her older sister was murdered at the wedding? If so, it would have to have been more than a bandit mob. Royal Guards are badasses, so even if she had been dressed in casual attire she would've been more than capable of handling the entire horde quite handily. Especially if the rest of her sisters were present, if the training is as extensive as you suggest. I like the idea of the tragic wedding, but it would need to be more sinister to viably overpower somebody that was at least considered for the Guard.

2- Which brings me to another clarification; at the time of her death, was the sister already inducted into the Guard, or was she under consideration?

3- I'd like to see some kind of interaction with the Empress at the end. While the answer to 2 may alter this a little, if a Royal Guard dies they have a whole slew of selection processes for the replacement. It's perfectly feasible for the process to take well over a year, and the Empress can indeed override the whole thing and appoint somebody directly... but she would need some kind of motivation to do so. And "I'm the sister of your former Guard" wouldn't really be enough. So I would like to see you use Ilyana in your history toward the end (and you have my permission to do so).

 

Lastly, I'd like you to change the wording on your Aeon's effect. Increasing the power of her Holy Magic is fine, but I'd rather it not be as specific as "Five times." And you know you've only used 1 of your Specializations for magic, so you can select another. I'd recommend Infusion, as that would let you actually mix the Holy magic with your swordsmanship so you can emulate Beatrix's moves better.


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Yep. She was KIA at the wedding.

 

Hm...I could always input a new thought chain into that. I'll get to work soon! ^_^ Going to elaborate much, much more then.

 

She was about to be inducted, wasn't quite there yet.


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Ah, okay, that makes #3 a little smoother to play out.

 

And to rectify my statement on #1, it's less that the cause of death needs to be bigger and more that it needs more spotlight. As it stands, you've off-screened her sister, and I think that's a part of the wedding that deserves to be shown in some detail. I'd like to know what it was that led to a Royal Guard candidate being slain in battle, because that's a pretty big thing.


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Aaaand, Edits made. How about that?


Fixed a timeline issue. @.@



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Hmm. Interesting. Congratulations, you're in the pool for the Guard slots. Once I see who else is interested, I'll make my final determinations, but by and large you can consider yourself tentatively Accepted.


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Are royal guards meant to be like one from each race?  What kind of things falls under dark magic?  Are aeons items that we can only have out for short windows or can they also be a constant weapon we have in our arsenal?


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Royal Guard racial constraints vary based on the Emperor/Empress. Some did go for the one from each race thing, but Ilyana has no preferences in that regard.

 

Shadow/Darkness magic consists of creating and manipulating shadows and darkness in pretty much whatever manner you fancy. Teen Titans Raven is a fairly good example, as is Pride from FMA.

 

Aeons can maintain their transformed states for extended periods without any trouble. For what I presume to be the intent of the question, they are permanent arsenal installments from a functional standpoint. They just revert to their natural state when they aren't being used.


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Can someone just make a mage with two magic specializations to go full out magicy?


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