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[JienKein]

Hey all, new guy here. Just wondering if it's okay to advertise your own work here?

[Exlander]

Hey all, new guy here. Just wondering if it's okay to advertise your own work here?

 

Go for it. 

[JienKein]

@Exlander: Thanks for answering.

I've no confident about my work... since it's too generic.

But if I don't get butchered up I don't think I'll improve.

So here's for momentary pain and everlasting gain.

I just start the blog the other day though so there's not much stuffs.

But I hope it satisfy some of the readers thirst for a story at least.

Here's the link: http://jskein.blogspot.no/

Thank you.

Ah, right.

Sorry about the double post.

But... I just need to say that I don't have a title yet for the story.

What should I do?

[Kuroganekai]

@Exlander: Thanks for answering.

I've no confident about my work... since it's too generic.

But if I don't get butchered up I don't think I'll improve.

So here's for momentary pain and everlasting gain.

I just start the blog the other day though so there's not much stuffs.

But I hope it satisfy some of the readers thirst for a story at least.

Here's the link: http://jskein.blogspot.no/

Thank you.

@JienKein,about the site:

i think in my opinion the first thing is change u site to wordpress(have better organized layouts premade for u than blogspot) or use Google Drive, or change/made yourself a new layout for blogspot or dont change anything since it's your decision in the end

aboute the ch:

considering that yours ch have little quantity of words,write 2~3 ch and release them as one big ch

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that's my thoughts i hopefully this will be of some help or not for u, and good luck with your history

Edited by Kuroganekai, 17 January 2015 - 08:23 PM.

[JienKein]

@Kuroganekai: Ah, thanks for the ideas.

I think I have the Google drive thingy.

So I'll check.

About the chapter, I'm not entirely sure it's smart of me to group many parts together.

Because I wrote most of these based on different 'topics' for each parts; addressing various different things.

Grouping them together make the transition kind of weird in my own sense.

But I will see how it goes for now.

I could make changes later.

 

Then, a question like asked earlier, what's a good way to name the story... I'm completely lost on this part.

Oh, I did have a GDrive; so I moved.

Here's it: https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B19KLM1UX9S1Nkk4WWRON05GQkU&usp=drive_web

Ah, just notice... how do I get feedback now if I"m hosting it from google drive?

[Kuroganekai]

xag-ossan

about :" Princess wa Barairo no Yume wo Miru" under reicarnation tag

i was getting a look in the moon rune raws , the romaji is  Kyūketsu hime wa barairo no yume o miru,the kyuuketsuki is missing, and i think the title is werong, since 吸血姫 (vampire princess) using the sound system of GT, is speak as Kyuketsuki and removing princess moon rune(姫) is read as kyuketsu(without the ki in  the end ) the moon rune 姫 can maybe also means "ki",and in the synopse dont metion anything about gender change (and the synopse dont give a feels/vibe about the mc being a woman) if i'm correct, the title would be " Kyuuketsuki wa barairo no yume wo miru" (Vampire seeing/with a rose-colored dream(?) )

edit:

Spoiler

confirmed,is gender change history,our mc before die is a guy then reincarnate in a woman body

Ah, just notice... how do I get feedback now if I"m hosting it from google drive?

u can make a simple pool in your GD (like,how is the grammatica,how is the history and recommendatios) but i dont know how make this,try asking rei_hunter or someone that know how use GD

Edited by Kuroganekai, 17 January 2015 - 11:39 PM.

[aapmens]

hey im looking for a novel its about several people being summoned to defeat the demon queen and the mc is a weird ass guy who receives 6.5k points to distribute and he puts al of them in his harem stat and because of that he gets a broken character but i forgot the name any ideas?

[jake1456]

https://metalhaguremt.wordpress.com/route-to-almightyness-from-1hp/

[zodpower]

is there another novel like https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8517195/1/Heir-of-Dracula(where mc is an asshole who only cares about himself but is op as shit)

[Mirvra]

is there another novel like https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8517195/1/Heir-of-Dracula(where mc is an asshole who only cares about himself but is op as shit)

 

Moonlight Sculptor would be pretty much that if you're not specifying genres or anything o.o it's under Virtual reality tag

[zodpower]

Moonlight Sculptor would be pretty much that if you're not specifying genres or anything o.o it's under Virtual reality tag

 

thanks but have already read that

[flurburt]

http://aquarilasscenario.blogspot.com/?zx=a62016646a6adf7d
The Cursed White Rose

Synopsis
Sara Sato stumbles across an unknown book as she struggles to live normally while escaping from her parents' grasp. Unknowingly, she releases a woman named Rose from the book and is told she can make as many wishes as she wants. But only if she can pay the price?! Their meeting establishes their master/servant relationship as Sara takes her first step into the world of magic. Sara meets new friends as well as many new troubles tied to Rose. Will she be able to manage it all as she attempts to learn magic for the very first time?

[hokuten04]

Bleach Do-Over Fan Fiction

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7678319/1/Bleach-Deathberry-Chronicles-Reprise

[Lynerparel]

Please read this other fanfic that I wrote.
http://www.wattpad.com/story/6383195-beginnings-end

[kizrock94]

Since I'm currently on break from studying, I really need something to read
Can anyone recommend some good book series for me, as many as possible. I've got time to kill

[kirindas]

http://aquarilasscenario.blogspot.com/?zx=a62016646a6adf7d
The Cursed White Rose

Synopsis
Sara Sato stumbles across an unknown book as she struggles to live normally while escaping from her parents' grasp. Unknowingly, she releases a woman named Rose from the book and is told she can make as many wishes as she wants. But only if she can pay the price?! Their meeting establishes their master/servant relationship as Sara takes her first step into the world of magic. Sara meets new friends as well as many new troubles tied to Rose. Will she be able to manage it all as she attempts to learn magic for the very first time?

Wow. Thank you very much for referring people to my story. I'm glad you like it.

 

FYI, for anyone that is afraid of the adult content warning. My first story (The Purchase) had more in depth descriptions of intimate relationships, so I put the warning up to be safe. I was never satisfied with the scenes when I wrote it so I kept 'The Cursed White Rose' content to a minimum, only one short paragraph so far, which is marked for people that want to skip it.

[Omnimessiah]

Mind giving me a summary of what happens?

Spoiler

So... The "good" god(s) decided that the instrument of War is too strong, and it's time to even the scales a bit. So they send two lovey-dovey Earthlings into Uman-Chi king. It seems they sent a prophetic song to a young Uman-Chi woman, which after adding some magicks popped out our dear couple. They get kept there for a bit, and then our friendly Emperor comes, hears the song and takes our American friends and the annoying prophetess to Elador. It seems, the song tells that those two and a couple of others are meant to find an ancient weapon to bring down Lupus. They spend there some time, find out they have some unique talents, and our "young" friend spends the time cleaning garbages and scheming. Finally, after a quick ruse, the A-team leaves the Conqueror's kind house and leaves to bring doom to his empire. On the road, they find a bunch of people "led to them by the song" or so it goes. And they generally just go to the place from this song.

[Xagnam]

RECOMMENDATION OF THE WEEK:

Ages Online

 

It is year 2034. The age of console games are over and the age of virtual reality has just begun. Yashita Corps, a Japanese company at the forefront of virtual gaming had released a new generation game called Ages Online that is said to be revolutionary among all other Virtual Reality MMORPGs. As gamers from all over the world flock to Ages Online, Sebast Koh watch on the sidelines as he persisted in finishing the story quest for an older game Yggdrassil Online. The result was him being ostracized in class due to him being the only one not playing the new game.

As he started off in the world of Agaia friendless and one step behind the rest, Sebast, handle name Beast, thought he could find solace in power grinding up as a warrior to catch up to speed, only for bad luck to strike time and time again. May he persevere in his most dangerous journey yet.

 

 

 

UPDATE:

• HP1 kara Hajimeru Isekai Muso [Route to Almightyness from 1HP]
• Azura of the White
• Chosen
• Dream Union
• Life in Purgatory
• Re: Death's Melancholy
• Re:Golem
• Re:Horn
• Re:Ocean
• Reincarnation: Empire of Scales
• Eternal Awakening | Eternal Darkness
• Wayward Soul
• Asunder Online
• Cruel Reality
• Hardcore Online
• No Longer a Game
• Realm Eternal
• Towards the Light
• The Soul of MorningStar
• Ashita, Boku wa Shinu. Kimi wa Ikikaeru. [Tomorrow, I will die. You will revive.]
• Torikagosou no Kyou mo Nemutai Juunintachi [The Sleepy Residents of Birdcage Manor]
• Among the Tear Soaked Flowers
• Beginner's End
• Dust to Dust
• Earth Bond
• Kit
• Oh My Beautiful Moonlight Goddess!
• Questing Sucks!
• Spirit Walker
• Subjugation
• Tarrin Kael
• The Cursed White Rose
• The Purchase
• Bleach: Deathberry Chronicles, Reprise
• Harry Potter and the Altered World
• Harry Potter And The Bonds Of Time | Fighting Fate | Age of Consent
• Harry Potter and the Trip to the Past
• Heir of Dracula

[Pseudonymous_Existence]

Don't know if it amounts to much but I really recommend No Longer a Game myself.

It's one of the better ones.

 

Also, unless you're into comedy, avoid Hardcore Online like a plague, there's nothing serious about it.

[perspherspley]

Don't know if it amounts to much but I really recommend No Longer a Game myself.

It's one of the better ones.

 

Also, unless you're into comedy, avoid Hardcore Online like a plague, there's nothing serious about it.

Hey, Hardcore Online was a serious FF, the name says it all.

Ahahahahaha