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STGI-X2
Episode 1: Back to the world of my dreams 
(epic)Noob Arc 

(In the year 2133, the story begins in a Japanese futuristic new channel room, were there was half round new table with the worlds X9C writing in blue, red, and blue. One end of the table there was and old man with a square black mustaches, wearing a brown suit , on the other side of the table there was young news reporter women with long red hair and eyes. She smile and wave at camera as she said)

Young News channel Lady-“Good morning every one, and welcome to this weeks special edition news report”

Young News channel Lady-“I’ am her today with an exclusive interview with the man, behind the sensationally new game which has capture the heart of half the worlds population”

Young News channel Lady- ”making it one the most popular games in all of history”

 Young News channel Lady-“Tell me Mr. Yakmonto , what is about the game that has so many, people from across wanted to play  to play it. Especially among the worlds collage students”

Mr. Yakmonto-“Well Lynda, if may call you that”

Lynda-“You may”
 
Mr. Yakmonto-“I created the game with soul proposed so that younger generation, could re-believe In there dreams again”

Mr. Yakmonto- "to think out side the box and re-image the many possibilities out there”

Mr. Yakmonto- “Relive there lost fantasies, and continue, to be inspiring, to created, to invent new possibilities in life”

Mr. Yakmonto- “Sadly it’s like most young generation today, simple do not believe in dreams anymore, they simply only want to do what is real. A not what they believe in”

Mr. Yakmonto- “but with my technology the  BMW the Blue Microsoft world deceive, can  players litter  travel into the world of  there dreams.”

Lynda- “well there you have it folks straight from the source itself”

Lynda- “I’m Sednaly Heartland signing off to this week’s exclusive new interview, until next time”

 Sednaly Heartland-“If haven’t already gotting a hold of this sensible new game, today your in lucky. I’m being told as this very moment at Downtown Tokyo Square, in celebration of over willing achievement, there giving away free limited editions of the game with exclusive unlockables, so get yours today!!”

(With that the news interview was over and everyone watching it quick went about there normal lives or head downtown to get there copy today. But meanwhile at a the private university University  of "Granger" in room room 233.There was a room fill with tons video games stuffs like collectable toys along a back self , tons of videos game in cases , a gaming p.c on a desk, a wooden windows sealther which supplies the only light source in the room. The rest of the room of room was filled type collage boys like stuff like a bed , self, and etc... But on the bed there huge roll of sheet and if someone was underneath cuddling up. And soon a older thin boy girly(trap) looking boy , with light green eyes, and light green pony tail hair that was thick and long and was like a bundle of rope. that stretch all the way down to his west. there few piece of lose hair that come out in-front of his face to.He has long thin hands and nails , and pretty long eye lashes.He was also wearing a light girl t-shirt of cute flower creatures on it ' with the worlds "flower boy" on it. Wake up in bed drizzly and slight feeling of dizziness inside his head has. as he rub his eyes and said

Unknown Collage Boy-“Ah my head fells so weird”

Unknown Collage Boy-“talk about a major hang over( he said as he took a great big ye'll and stretch his hand above his head) I don’t remember what happen last night at all ,I must got wasted , life to the party dude”

Unknown Collage Boy- “Those girls down at room 233 sure know how to throw party”

Unknown Collage Boy- “weeeelll, now that said that( he said as he cheerfully jump out of bed excited and full of energy , I wonder what I game should try out today” 

Unknown Collage Boy“I don’t  know since they all seem really cool and I just got a bunch from my sister last week, well i have all day for little dude time so i think i just get ready first"( he said soon begin to get ready to what appear to be a normal of school , like brushing his teeth , taking a shower , etc..  he soon started monologuing to himself)
Alice-“ hi my name is Alice Granger , I’m a 22 year old  4th year collage student”

Alice- "From Granger University, a 6 years collage exclusively for those who just graduate high school,Openly private to first time collage students only

Alice- “But don’t know way, I even brother going to collage”

Alice-“it’s not like want a job or anything like that”

Alice-“maybe I’m here, just because the dorms are free to live in “

Alice- “ And they food is free here , not to mention I get paid collage points while I here , to spend with”

Alice- “ it’s kind of like getting allowances , only it’s for being in school” 

Alice-“ Or maybe I here because my collage is already pay for by my mom and dad”

Alice- “ no, none these ideals are reason"


Alice- “ for me I always dream of living and adventures life full and fantasy and dangers


Alice- “I always believe in the stories my mom would tell me about monsters, heroes, knights, fairies, and dragons”


Alice-“Stuff that most people I know of wouldn't believe in that stuff”


Alice-“but not me I’ am a believer, and their place in whole world were every fantasy and Sci-fi Dreams comes true”


( Alice said as he got out shows and and start getting dress. He slow walk over to his p.c and below it a gaming cased , he pull out a game with old retro space odessy kind of look to it , as he said)


Alice-“ The Game called “STGI-X2” the most popular game in the whole world”
( he soon begin to carefully look the games cased in percentile detail and he explain to himself)


Alice- “The Best first person, rpg , strategy  game ever in history!!”


Alice- “even thought it’s mostly play by collage students like me”


Alice- “ the game world it self is live every fantasy and Sci-fi all role into one”


Alice-“ and for first time every in gaming history , your  are your avatar and players”


Alice- “ that’s right  in this game , the gamer physic body and mind are transport  in game world”


Alice- “ and time moves normal with game world , just like the re.. no earthy world I should say”


Alice- “ I heard their people that spend their entire lives in the game world”


Alice-“Cause the earth is just to boarding, it can never compare to the awesomeness of the game world!!


Alice-“I heard the game it self was original design to keep players from not very wanted to go back earthy world ever again!!!”


Alice-“so why am I the one guy in the world whose not playing this game, well I would if” ( Alice then drop the game , with deep sign walk away slowly and plop himself face down on the bed, as he thought)


Alice- “When I got throw  out of the guy dorms something happen  , but I didn't think they really would mess with my stuff!!!”


Alice-" i get a little collage prank here and there , but miss with guys pervert life...


( Alice remain on the bed for few more secs then he jump out of his bed in furry as he yell)

Alice-“ those stupid jerk just wait until , I get my hands on them ,I tear them all limb from limb" 

( he walk over to case once again , and pick up the "SSTGI-X2" put it in to his p.c. Alice took a set and the game  begin to load up , soon the loading screen appear. A few secs later  the menu screen appear showing a cross over between fantasy and Sci-Fi. There robot , and space were wolf and space vampires/fairly , battle human like space pilots across many planets. but the strangest thing was with in the picture, was character that look like Alice. Expect he was wearing some kind of light green test pilot suit , with a few bangles on it , and dark green boots commanding the armies from mile as front and center of the screen. Alice slowly drag the mouse over to click started , as he slouch back on his rolling chair . Another screen open disciplining a picture of some-kind of dark sub aqua world , were a avatar that look like Alice was floating naked ,in cruel up position within this sub aqua world) (Alice bush a little as he though)

Alice-"see my self naked on a screen  is kind of embarrassing even for me , glad none one else is around"



Alice-“no matter long stare at it , nothing going to change the fact is this is my avatar from now until the day i die in the game world"


Alice-"maties those jerk are so going to pay for this , because of the hack they did on my p.c i can't  even change the character , and to make matter worse can't make any new one's"

Alice-"normal the new screen would ask if  i was  boy or a girl , and if want customizing opinions for my avatar, i didn't even get to take  the survey"  


Alice-" But they could have less of chosen a cool species for me , but no it had to be a synapse"


(Star Fantasy Character Detention)

Species Number 0

Synapse- are a species of sub-human like creatures that were created by humans for solo purpose of being living weapons. They were supposed to be a A.C species  of super psychic humans soldiers. That had power to gain access to every enemy technology and information there was ,even aliens. However they lack  slight amount of strength in comparison to a normal human and because of there weak immune system , there are weak to every  thing there is. A common cold could easy kill them. Which made them a fail experiment and as a result were cast away  and left to die on abandon deserted planet. Synapse in general appear to be human like expect they have pale white skin and often time have shorter elf like ears.

(player information. Started off info)

Attack:  Rank 3 (average) about 20- 50 damage 

Defense : Rank 0 (sucks to be you) can only takes about 1 to 5 damage before shield's started dropping 

Critical Hit Chance : 20% (can be higher depends on the equipment)

Intelligence: Rank 3

Special: none special att or def 

Dex: nether durable , immune , or begin with ai's"

Health: 200

Shield:150

Mana: 10 ( ya synapse don't really used magic , if at all)

Energy:100

New Player Ability: new Synapse  began the game with 3x times the amount of "Noobs Shield" ( 15 to be accurate) 
Noob's Shields -(pervert high level players from killing you or spawn killing you. Takes most of the damage from high level attack , restructured or re spawn you on spot if you die or to spot that much safe away , 15 sec immune to pervert spawn killing

Passive Ability: Having access to all technology ,weapon, unlock-able in the game
( like doors , chest, jails cells can be unlock with out keys)

Planetary Ability :none (home planet was destroy)

Nature Ability: Degrading ( can equip high level technology of other species , but down grading to you level. Stat's/effect , and abilities of that equipment remain the same)  

P and N Ability: level up faster then other spices and gain more rewards. Also can change there weapons form to increase there power and stats 

Weakness Ability: all attack's on synapse player's, do 3x critical damage then what they normal do"


Alice-" but then again it my be kind if of cool playing a synapse i heard some pretty hardcore gamer play as them for  racket up challenges"

Alice-"beside this could chance to make my own clan , started off fresh and work my way up the leveling scales"


Alice-"o well (Alice said as he got up out of his chair) here goes nothing , back to the world of my dreams!!" ( he then slowly press his left hand against the started button below his avatar)

"Whooshx2 ( a mysterious blue vortex appears from his p.c screen and shallows him up and were he is transport down a blue vortex and into the game world of "STGI-X2" ) ( he then slowly decided into the strange aqua world that show on his screen before he enter the game world. He's avatar lie straight in front him , then as he slowly walked toward it. A flash of blue light appear next to him and voice of deep man could be heard)


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-"welcome my child , do not be  afraid of the light"


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-"reach you destiny  and size you goals young one"


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-" for the path that lies ahead of you is unknown one"


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-" there be many times when feel that reach the end and there's not hope left , but not desire do not give in"


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-" there are times were many chooses will appear before you , and you much diced alone with you heart on which path is right and which is wrong"


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-"you face many foes and many trials in this new left ahead of you , but  you will encounter  will be many friends and allies that help guild you though the bad and good times"


Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-"do you still accept the journey young one, know all that is ahead of you?"

( by this time Alice was right up by his avatar that he could almost touch it, he toking a deep breath and smile)

Alice-"hump, of coarse i would!!!" ( Alice said as he touch his avatar, in flash of white light, with consume the entire place. His avatar turn in millions of little tiny data piece that attract them self's to Alice and become his clothing. the suit he seen before and every thing. Then the floor beneath  Alice gave way as he begin to fall down which seem like endless black hole, but before he was completely out of sight the voice said one last thing to him)

Mysterious  Mystical Deep Man's Voice-"then wish you far well ,on you journeys young one, were meet again soon"

Alice-"Wha!!!! , this wasn't like this first time i play this game, what going on!!!!!!!!!" (Alice said as he fall down a massive hole to what appear to be him doom. all of sudden bit's and pieces of memories of his avatar started flying towards him as he fall down the hole. Each one becoming a part of his memories , over loading his current ones of earthy world of his. But the over load to his brain was to much, so Alice slowly started dirtying away into a deep sleep because of it, as he fall endless down the hole)


"loading.... Loading....Loading....x2"

(what seen to be a few hours later, Alice wook up with light headed feeling in his brain)

Alice-"urg....urg...." ( Alice morn as he barley opening his eyes)

Alice-"were am I?" ( Alice said as slows started drifting back to sleep , but tried his hardest not to. From he could see he appear to be in some kind super small space ship o most like pod ship in space. That had just eject from massive space battle  someone far away)

Alice-"urg...my head feel's dizzy ,it's feel likes I've been drifting in space for 8 weeks"


Alice-"and i probably have"


Alice-"after all in this game if i recall. when enter it both your mind and  your body become one the characters your creation, There last thoughts, memories and feels become one with your own"

Alice-"it could take some time to get used to"


Alice-"computer how long have I've been out?" ( all sudden a screen above the cock pit , started showing  a bunch of yellow color flashing lights, as an enlighten artistic sounding voice replay with )


Enlighten Artistic Males Voice- " apoplexmently 8 weeks young master?"


Enlighten Artistic Males Voice-"can i assess you with anything else today young master?"


Alice-"urg.... given me a sec...oh my... my head still feel's a bit weird though" ( Alice said as he got up off of the floor and head to pilot seat.As he sat down he look briefly around his ship, and could tell it was very very small ship, everything inside the ship was black color. Except from the controls and screens which were flashing many different colors.Behind Alice was only available way inside the space ship , a small iron door with a crack handle like the kind you see on ships in the movies like titanic or in subs. Lucky for Alice he wasn't custicphoic or else such a tiny small space ship could make you feel uneasy with it's lack of room size. Alice then order the computer to 

Alice-"computer bring up the data logs of last events"


Enlighten Artistic Males Voice-"yes, of coarse right awhile young master" 

( just then a screen appears right before Alice, and he started reading out loud to himself)

Alice-"let's see according to this data log , i'm young synapse pilot, that was just recruit into the synapse army. To protect the last of my species , the last of the colonizer. But my fleet was under attack by unknown aliens species sadly to say i'm the only survivor and last of my species" (but as Alice read messages he couldn't help but feel some kind stinging sensation, like a feeling of sadness eating away at his his heart , as he grip it) 


Alice-" that's weird i know it's just a game but why don't sudden feel so empty inside , like i just lost a really big piece of me"


Alice-"it feels so sad , it must be how my avatar feelings ( Alice said as he bottle those feeling and put on a eager faced) but i can't let them get to me"


Alice-"I'm supposed to be having fun , i just have be strong and ignore it"


Alice-" But this so lame ( Alice said as he lay back on the sit), my back ground so stereotypical for space obessy adventure like this"  


Alice-"at least make it more originally, like i'm boy prince who who rebel against my cruel tyrant father , to free all my people. But my revolt was crush and as punishment i was exile to far reaches of the universe by my father. But now I must reclaim my kingdom and gather a might force of many to beat my father. ya that's sounds that totally 10x times  much cooler then this lame shit of a story" 


Alice-"but i supposed that's to expect, considering the time and budget for this game. I Wouldn't expect the game makers to make a customize back ground story make for each of your characters" ( Alice look of disappointment)


Alice-"but it would be cool if they did , i guess there's a probably a dozen other synapses with same back ground story as me for my avatar"


Alice-"but i'm going to be coolest synapse of them all" ,( Alice once again said with eager excited)


Alice-"ya i have like dozen of really cool a powerful ships , and tons of planets were build lots stuff on  like pizza para's,video games , but of coarse bases and lots of defense. And space cannons and space station to protect them all" 


Alice-"and i have all the coolest toughest player in my army, and i make a huge massive amounts AI's units to , conquer many foes, everyone will bow down to my greatness. And every hot girl would want to be my girlfriend score!!" ( the more thought about what he was going to do the more Alice feel kine to do it)


Alice-" i'm so excited right now just thinking about want I'am going to do , because now that i'm started over again , i have lots goal i want build up to. And beside's working towards a goal is loot more funnier then went it's giving to you"


Enlighten Artistic Males Voice-"so lets get started!!" ( Alice said cheerfully but just then he heard a)


"Bling bling -ring ring ringx3" (  The sound of the message machine. Alice then  pull up a screen on side of him , it some kind of space text message , Alice could read it just yeti)

Alice-"what this a text but i don't know anyone yeti , i wonder wants it for?" ( Alice said with puzzled face)

Narrator Thought's-(" what this? A mystery messages for Alice and will it change his destiny forever, you just have to find out next time on this excited adventure of "STGI-X2")

(to be continue) 



So what do you think about my story so far? It's a different twist to a transsexual/gender blender/cross dressing story manga isn't it?
Leave a comment below of what you think of it so far. An lets me know if's hard to read or not i type pretty fast so i over look many things, In my typing. Thanks i do appearance the comments It helps me to make the story better. Also if have anys idea's for story i wouldn't mind hearing them thanks.

Edited by GirlyBoy, 02 July 2014 - 04:15 PM.