Nephlim
Alt Names: | |
Author: | Jordan Troche |
Artist: | Heather Matheny |
Genres: | Fantasy Shounen |
Type: | Other |
Status: | Ongoing |
Description: | The world has fallen into a state of chaos and war. A group of Angels fell to earth to become mankind's new Gods and prove to their creator that they are superior to humans in every possible way. Their rule has been one of fear and nightmares, people cower by the mere mention of the Fallen. Just like their creator they wanted to make new life so they took human women and mated with them creating Nephlim. Beings that are half human and half Angel. These Nephlim became the generals in their dark armies and they relished in the evil they committed. One Nephlim was born unlike the rest, his name is Ezekiel and he's vowed to kill every Fallen and evil Nephlim that walks the Earth. Empowered by the Angel of Death he fights for the weak and hopeless. He fights to rid mankind of fear and despair. |
Go to Nephlim Forums! | Scroll Down to Comments |
The following content is intended for mature audiences and may contain sexual themes, gore, violence and/or strong language. Discretion is advised.
Latest Forum Posts
Topic | Started By | Stats | Last Post Info | |
---|---|---|---|---|
FREE WEBCOMICS | Sid1ous |
|
|
|
Website Launch | Sid1ous |
|
|
|
New Fantasy Comic Needs Artist | Sid1ous |
|
|
|
Kickstarter Campaign | Sid1ous |
|
|
|
20 Comments
Feel free to look it over in website post. Thanks again.
Jordan
though i'll still read about him, it's interesting to finally see some self published manga here. i hope you'll manage to develop your style well as the story goes on, looks like you have some potential
Other than that, I'm diggin' the story line! I'm not going to be condescending and say "oh, I know where this is going," because I don't, and I'm excited to see how the story progresses.
I also agree with the background issue, many times is seemed as if they were in the middle of nothing. The clothing detail is good, it's seems all medievel and magiclike, but it should blend with a developed background. And I think the eyes are given too much detail, such as the pupils, how they water and shine.
The angles should be experimented with as well. It looked a lot like there was jut profile and front views to avoid shading...which also could have brought out the art more.
It might sound bad, but I really did like this I just pointed out somethings that got to me, but might not stand out to others. I really do hope you continue the story and I look forward to seeing it progress and improve. Especially since it's in OEL.
You just got followed
Some people were saying characters werent detailed enough and stuff, i think they are too detailed in comparison to background, making it look like they are standing in middle of nowhere. rather than focussing on so many lines in the clothing you need to reduce the lines to make them look cleaner and not clutter up the page. actually in art in general i think simplicity is the best, if you go and look at any picture, not just manga youll find they dont have THAT many lines per area, thats because it makes it look messy. the anatomy of characters wasnt terribly bad, it didnt look "OMG AWKWARD" but it wasnt great either. maybe practice drawing anatomy a bit
Story: The pace is a bit strange, is this a preview chapter to create hype? if it is its fine i guess but if this is the pace youll be at all the time i would say its too fast.
Still, it is an awfully interesting concept.