Shishunki no Iron Maiden

"MARTY, YOU GOTTA MAKE YOUR PARENTS FALL IN LOVE before midnight."

"Why doc? So I can keep exisiting in my own timeline?"

"NO MARTY, I NEED YOUR MOTHER'S IRON CORE SO WE CAN POWER THE FLUX CAPACITOR SO YOU CAN GO BACK TO YOUR OWN TIME"

"Wait, how so, doc?"

"MARTY, THE ONLY THINK WITH MORE RAW POWER THAN A THUNDER ARE WOMAN'S EMOTIONS. I NEED PURE PINK IRON CORES TO GET ENOUGH POWER, MARTY."

Wow...I thought this would redeem itself..it did not.

I kinda hate it now for a variety of underdeveloped reasons.

Hell I don't wanna finish this anymore.

lol wtf.

Uh... Yeah, that took a deep dive. Oh well, whatevs. Looking forward tot he conclusion! We'realmost there.

and you can be sure it was quite a dive

I derive a certain pleasure in watching simpletons try brute forcing a solution.

Hey, brute force can sometimes be the smart answer. Personally it's pretty hilarious to me when the "evil mastermind" has a perfect plan that covers every legal detail and then proceeds to get the crap beaten out of him while he thinks "but my plan was perfect, who would be crazy enough to just come in here guns blazing?".

Although I also have to admit that brute forcing it has lost some of its charm after all those shows where the strong hero beats the smart villain. They really milked that cow as much as they could with stuff like Super Man.

Uh... Yeah, that took a deep dive. Oh well, whatevs. Looking forward tot he conclusion! We'realmost there.

I derive a certain pleasure in watching simpletons try brute forcing a solution.

C'mon, Mayama has really been trying hard to redeem himself. Give the guy a break.

heh bet Mayama, being Mayama, enjoyed the panties.

and that is one awesome mom.

So wait the protagonist is the lesser of two assholes?  Fuck that. Stopped at chapter 3.

I don't blame you, the protagonist is a dimwit and the author try hard to make you feel sorry for him.  Despite what he accomplished, if he was real, we would all hate him because of what he's done.

you're not supposed to go into someone's house and peek into their fking diary

 Yes you do when you like her , lol

you're not supposed to go into someone's house and peek into their fking diary

Desperate situation called for desperate measures...

And does Mayama looks like someone who'd give a crap about rules?

Manga logic disagrees with you.

Logic + manga = 404

you're not supposed to go into someone's house and peek into their fking diary

Manga logic disagrees with you.

you're not supposed to go into someone's house and peek into their fking diary

So wait the protagonist is the lesser of two assholes?  Fuck that. Stopped at chapter 3.

Well I already see the response to the spoiler so whatever, I'LL CLICK THE F**KIN SPOILER mmm...~!

So cure for metalization was

Gee, manga title is such a spoiler.

after reading the spoilers... wow, what a cheesy ending.

i dont even feel compelled to read until the end anymore.

 

ending spoilers (36-41), don't click unless you want to be spoiled. 

 

Spoiler

 

mayama goes home after tsukiko gives him that puzzled 'well i don't dislike you' reaction after he confesses to her. he thinks about it and can't believe that tsukiko would ever say something like that (she would either say 'i like you too' or 'eww i could never like you' but not 'uhh ok?'). he breaks in her room and reads her diary and realizes 100% that something must have happened to her and wants to rescue her. but he doesnt know what to do. then his mom comes in and offers to help. the procedure that tsukiko goes thru wipes away 'the feeling of love' from the girls there. that's why she responded with puzzlement when mayama confessed. 

 

mayama and his mom fly a helicopter to the building where he gets on the window where she is and tells her again that he loves her. once again she has no reaction and mayama looks dejected. he tries to smash the window but ends up falling down several stories unto the ground. tsukiko watches him fall to his death (or so she thinks) and something snaps in her where she totally transforms and she remembers her feelings for him. the other girls calm her down and tell her 'look he's alive!' (he fell unto a bush) and try to sneak her out. tsukiko and mayama reuinte and they try to escape. evil bitch lady captures them agian but all the girls attack. they tell tsukiko that cuz she was able to regain the feeling of love that they all lost, she's their hope so they want her to get out of the compound. evil bitch lady and her cronies regain the upper hand however. all of a sudden nonoa (that girl who liked mayama) and others come flying in and attack the baddies and the pair are able to escape on bike. baddies chase them again in a car, and the two go down an alley and find an old store front where they used to hang out when they were kids and decide to hide there. tsukiko is feeling worse and worse though cuz of her transformation. she says that if this continues she'll turn into a monster and die or something, she then tells her there might be one way to dissolve the stuff and save her. he goes 'what is it??' and she looks really embarrassed and her face turns really red...

 

final chapter: 

 

mayama keeps on asking her 'what hwat? what do we do?? tell me!!" tsukiko goes 'mayama i want to confirm something.. i wanna again hear you say that you love me..' and mayama is like 'wat why do you wanna hear that??' and tsukiko goes 'i luv u mayama, i finally understand, and i finally can say it'. with his face all red he also says 'i.. i ... also.. .love.. you... baka!!' and tsukiko smiles and says 'then it shouldn't be a problem..' she explains to him that there was one part of her that she never let mayama observe, and that was the one area that didn't have the iron spikes. she reveals that when senpei was gonna rape her, he said something about her condition that made her realize what the 'solution' might be. 

 

meanwhile evil bitch lady is out looking for them. ebl is frantic and demands they find them now. the underlings are all 'whats the worry we'll fidn those two kiddies' but she's like 'nonono it might already be too late!!' 

 

back to the pair, mayama goes 'what?? what are you saying?? we r only middle school students!! how can we do that??' she remarks that they both have grown and matured into adults, and that she doesn't have much more time... mayama goes 'damnit.. you better not regret this!' and goes in for a kiss. he stabs his lips on one of her spikes though. they argue a bit and she goes 'this is my first kiss!! not at all romantic!' and he's like 'oh.. well this isn't mine..' and she gets mad again. she realizes that she has some blood on her lips, and mayama goes sorry i was too forceful.. and she's like 'no no its alright' and remarks 'theres a saying that the first kiss tastes like a lemon.. but mine tastes like iron' ... 

 

back to the baddies, they find the hideout, and ebl kicks open the door. there she sees what she feared - naked and restored tsukiko (covered by a blanket) with mayama sleeping beside her. (reason she kills the feeling of love is cuz she always knew what the cure was but didn't want the girls to be cured obviously). a naration box goes 'this was the date of 'my secret with tsukiko'' 

 

two months later, mayama is still a pervert goofball running around with his pervert friends. in narration he describes wat ended up happening to his mom and to the institute and evil bitch lady. he runs into tsukiko and they of course get into another argument. 'wat the hell are u doing. we are almost ognna be 3rd years!' they argue a bit but then she calls mayama by his last name. mayama then goes 'hey wait, it isn't mayama'. and she goes 'oh yeah, im sorry.. haruki' 

 

everyone looks at them strangely and someone says 'hey u guys have been acting strange every since that day... did something happen or something?' the two of them say 'that is... a secret!' and they smile at each other. in narration: "that is.. for tsukiko and me.. our new secret'. 

 

and the end. hope you enjoyed the spoilers, keep in mind it's just a rough summery of what happens tho... and i appreciate likes! 

 

 

first time a spoiler that loved by everyone, 

wow

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ARGH MY EYES!!!

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you're right, thanks for the warning, isn't normal for the administrator to punish those that don't use the spoiler tag :/

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ending spoilers (36-41), don't click unless you want to be spoiled. 

 

Spoiler

 

mayama goes home after tsukiko gives him that puzzled 'well i don't dislike you' reaction after he confesses to her. he thinks about it and can't believe that tsukiko would ever say something like that (she would either say 'i like you too' or 'eww i could never like you' but not 'uhh ok?'). he breaks in her room and reads her diary and realizes 100% that something must have happened to her and wants to rescue her. but he doesnt know what to do. then his mom comes in and offers to help. the procedure that tsukiko goes thru wipes away 'the feeling of love' from the girls there. that's why she responded with puzzlement when mayama confessed. 

 

mayama and his mom fly a helicopter to the building where he gets on the window where she is and tells her again that he loves her. once again she has no reaction and mayama looks dejected. he tries to smash the window but ends up falling down several stories unto the ground. tsukiko watches him fall to his death (or so she thinks) and something snaps in her where she totally transforms and she remembers her feelings for him. the other girls calm her down and tell her 'look he's alive!' (he fell unto a bush) and try to sneak her out. tsukiko and mayama reuinte and they try to escape. evil bitch lady captures them agian but all the girls attack. they tell tsukiko that cuz she was able to regain the feeling of love that they all lost, she's their hope so they want her to get out of the compound. evil bitch lady and her cronies regain the upper hand however. all of a sudden nonoa (that girl who liked mayama) and others come flying in and attack the baddies and the pair are able to escape on bike. baddies chase them again in a car, and the two go down an alley and find an old store front where they used to hang out when they were kids and decide to hide there. tsukiko is feeling worse and worse though cuz of her transformation. she says that if this continues she'll turn into a monster and die or something, she then tells her there might be one way to dissolve the stuff and save her. he goes 'what is it??' and she looks really embarrassed and her face turns really red...

 

final chapter: 

 

mayama keeps on asking her 'what hwat? what do we do?? tell me!!" tsukiko goes 'mayama i want to confirm something.. i wanna again hear you say that you love me..' and mayama is like 'wat why do you wanna hear that??' and tsukiko goes 'i luv u mayama, i finally understand, and i finally can say it'. with his face all red he also says 'i.. i ... also.. .love.. you... baka!!' and tsukiko smiles and says 'then it shouldn't be a problem..' she explains to him that there was one part of her that she never let mayama observe, and that was the one area that didn't have the iron spikes. she reveals that when senpei was gonna rape her, he said something about her condition that made her realize what the 'solution' might be. 

 

meanwhile evil bitch lady is out looking for them. ebl is frantic and demands they find them now. the underlings are all 'whats the worry we'll fidn those two kiddies' but she's like 'nonono it might already be too late!!' 

 

back to the pair, mayama goes 'what?? what are you saying?? we r only middle school students!! how can we do that??' she remarks that they both have grown and matured into adults, and that she doesn't have much more time... mayama goes 'damnit.. you better not regret this!' and goes in for a kiss. he stabs his lips on one of her spikes though. they argue a bit and she goes 'this is my first kiss!! not at all romantic!' and he's like 'oh.. well this isn't mine..' and she gets mad again. she realizes that she has some blood on her lips, and mayama goes sorry i was too forceful.. and she's like 'no no its alright' and remarks 'theres a saying that the first kiss tastes like a lemon.. but mine tastes like iron' ... 

 

back to the baddies, they find the hideout, and ebl kicks open the door. there she sees what she feared - naked and restored tsukiko (covered by a blanket) with mayama sleeping beside her. (reason she kills the feeling of love is cuz she always knew what the cure was but didn't want the girls to be cured obviously). a naration box goes 'this was the date of 'my secret with tsukiko'' 

 

two months later, mayama is still a pervert goofball running around with his pervert friends. in narration he describes wat ended up happening to his mom and to the institute and evil bitch lady. he runs into tsukiko and they of course get into another argument. 'wat the hell are u doing. we are almost ognna be 3rd years!' they argue a bit but then she calls mayama by his last name. mayama then goes 'hey wait, it isn't mayama'. and she goes 'oh yeah, im sorry.. haruki' 

 

everyone looks at them strangely and someone says 'hey u guys have been acting strange every since that day... did something happen or something?' the two of them say 'that is... a secret!' and they smile at each other. in narration: "that is.. for tsukiko and me.. our new secret'. 

 

and the end. hope you enjoyed the spoilers, keep in mind it's just a rough summery of what happens tho... and i appreciate likes! 

 

 

thanks for the spoiler, looks like things will be smooth and nice.