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The art sure improves a bit when comparing chapter 1 with 7, as it looks more clean and neat in 7 compared to 1. The page size is too big in my opinion, although batoto have an auto zoom but still 5000x7000px resolution is quite big, usually you see pages around 1400px in height and they are already big. Also the typesetting/letting has improved but still need more works, the form/shape is good most the time but not always, the strokes are rather too big, need to use more fonts for different situation, as it enhance the impact/experience of the bubble/panel depending the font that's being used given the situation. As for the story, I've nothing to say atm as I only read the first half of chapter 1 but got annoyed due to the inconsistency of the page size, double pages and etc.

I'll adjust the page sizes for future chapter before I upload...I didn't realize that it remained so big.  On mangafox they always make it the right size for me.  =)

And as for chapter 1...sorry about that, I uploaded the wrong zip file...there's a lot of extra pages and stuff I didn't intend to have in there...I think I'll delete it and re-upload the proper one!

Thanks!

The art sure improves a bit when comparing chapter 1 with 7, as it looks more clean and neat in 7 compared to 1. The page size is too big in my opinion, although batoto have an auto zoom but still 5000x7000px resolution is quite big, usually you see pages around 1400px in height and they are already big. Also the typesetting/letting has improved but still need more works, the form/shape is good most the time but not always, the strokes are rather too big, need to use more fonts for different situation, as it enhance the impact/experience of the bubble/panel depending the font that's being used given the situation. As for the story, I've nothing to say atm as I only read the first half of chapter 1 but got annoyed due to the inconsistency of the page size, double pages and etc.

Hi Yeah! it's in 5000x7000. It's originally uploaded at mangafox so the pages are made sure to be High definition.xD You can also read it there! xD  Bato.to's auto zoom though. Thanks for the comment  

The art sure improves a bit when comparing chapter 1 with 7, as it looks more clean and neat in 7 compared to 1. The page size is too big in my opinion, although batoto have an auto zoom but still 5000x7000px resolution is quite big, usually you see pages around 1400px in height and they are already big. Also the typesetting/letting has improved but still need more works, the form/shape is good most the time but not always, the strokes are rather too big, need to use more fonts for different situation, as it enhance the impact/experience of the bubble/panel depending the font that's being used given the situation. As for the story, I've nothing to say atm as I only read the first half of chapter 1 but got annoyed due to the inconsistency of the page size, double pages and etc.

This is exciting!!!!!  ... Like theyre looking for somethings else... Aaron is handsome   ... Like a journey  in an fantasy place and meet pirates.. .. I don like prime chapters like robots..lol I hope there no other robots in next chapters.. lol.... mehhhhhhhhhhhhh *runs away and take aarron with me*

Haha, glad you like it!  There might be some robots occasionally...but I promise it won't take away from the story at all!

Thanks for the feedback!

This is exciting!!!!!  ... Like theyre looking for somethings else... Aaron is handsome   ... Like a journey  in an fantasy place and meet pirates.. .. I don like prime chapters like robots..lol I hope there no other robots in next chapters.. lol.... mehhhhhhhhhhhhh *runs away and take aarron with me*

Hai! newbie here. How long have you been making the manga? I agree with jack. The manga is improving when you try to scan over other chapters... I think this is a starter manga with a chance to improve.... &  the manga is good if you say you created this not over a year... some manga are made over a year to see so much improvement. Looking to read another chapter. 

Thanks!  I just started this manga 5 months ago, so I think that when you look at the improvement over a short period of time, it's got a lot of potential.  Also, the story is much bigger than what you've seen so far...at this point I'm just doing some character development before the story starts to get intense...that's pretty normal for a new manga.  Thanks for the comment!

Hai! newbie here. How long have you been making the manga? I agree with jack. The manga is improving when you try to scan over other chapters... I think this is a starter manga with a chance to improve.... &  the manga is good if you say you created this not over a year... some manga are made over a year to see so much improvement. Looking to read another chapter. 

Too be honest, art is iffy, as noted by others so far. The way the story/chatting is not very developed. The concept does have potential though, and with work, could make this much more readable. Basiclaly, work out the kinks and wrinkles and it ill be something.

The artwork is too ambitious in some parts and too crude in others. The contrasts ultimately drags down the artwork as a whole. The story bubbles are kinda wonky, to say nothing of their size given the amount of text. The writing is flat-out terrible. I'll hold my tongue at this point because Batoto tends to delete my comments whenever I refuse to shower praise.

Thanks for the input...I've uploaded the first 6 chapters, just waiting for them to be approved.  Not to worry, the story has a direction, and gets much more intense as it moves along...as does the art.

As for the backstory, it begins with chapter 2...I just wanted to give the readers some foreshadowing. 

Artwork is rough but has promise.  Story bubble order needs some work.  Story started out with action right from the get-go and squeezed the back-story onto one page near the end.  That in itself is not the wrong way to do it, I've seen it done that way many times, but something makes me feel that the story is evolving as it's written, as if there is no clear direction for it. But I will be looking for more chapters to see how the author and artist continue to entertain us.