GrimAter

Awesome. I want to know what happens next.

Ahaha, Thank you, Please hang tight! ^ ^

Awesome. I want to know what happens next.

Is the wait time between chapters going to usually be this long? I don't know about waiting almost half a year for the next one.

Well, I hope to put out a chapter monthly or bi-monthly on normal schedule, but I some mistakes happened during the making of Chapter 2, you can read about it in the First page of the chapter

 

 

Nicely done! 

Thank you! ^ ^

 

 

Nice introduction to the storyh, i like it.

Hey Thanks! 2nd Chapter is also up now! After a lot of reupload haha (fixing some minor mistakes)

 

This is one of the highest production quality works, of any self-published work that I've ever read. I'm surprised huge publishing companies in the manga industry aren't constantly hitting you up to officially publish this, since this looks good enough to be printed in paperbacks, and even translated into multiple languages...I bet it'd be pretty popular in Japan with the niche otaku.

Ahaha, Thanks for the compliment man! I think personally think the detail cannot match the level of a professional myself, but I'll to make it look as good as I can, thanks!

 

 

Got my interest, following with wish for next chapter

Second Chapter is upp! Please, go take a look! ^ ^

 

80-ish pages is about 2-4 months worth of regular manga generally, I don't think that's so bad. Especially for the art and the level of detail. Especially for a self-publishing artist.

This is great so far, keep it up!

I try to make it around monthly or bi-monthly if I can ><"

Nice introduction to the storyh, i like it.

Sorry for a lot of reupload, but I keep finding mistakes in pages order and such, the latest one should be fine now though, sorry for the inconvenience

Is the wait time between chapters going to usually be this long? I don't know about waiting almost half a year for the next one.

80-ish pages is about 2-4 months worth of regular manga generally, I don't think that's so bad. Especially for the art and the level of detail. Especially for a self-publishing artist.

This is great so far, keep it up!

Is the wait time between chapters going to usually be this long? I don't know about waiting almost half a year for the next one.

Nicely done! 

This is one of the highest production quality works, of any self-published work that I've ever read. I'm surprised huge publishing companies in the manga industry aren't constantly hitting you up to officially publish this, since this looks good enough to be printed in paperbacks, and even translated into multiple languages...I bet it'd be pretty popular in Japan with the niche otaku.

Got my interest, following with wish for next chapter

Wow a self-published work, great job on the art! It feels like a one-shot manga especially on that ending. And it would help the story if there's a big overhead shot of the place to show what kind of world are they living in since the story is a fantasy one. Though it would be a lot of work XD.

 

I'll be sure to do an establishing shot whenever a new location comes up! Thanks for the feedback! ^ ^

 

 

Wow, this is self published? I didnt even notice, looks pretty good, I'm digging the artstyle and looking forward to where the story goes. Keep it up.

 

Thank you for taking interest in my work, I really appreciate it ><

Wow, this is self published? I didnt even notice, looks pretty good, I'm digging the artstyle and looking forward to where the story goes. Keep it up.

I also like the titled locations and attacks, make it feel like a jrpg.

Wow a self-published work, great job on the art! It feels like a one-shot manga especially on that ending. And it would help the story if there's a big overhead shot of the place to show what kind of world are they living in since the story is a fantasy one. Though it would be a lot of work XD.

Whoa, the autor himself is uploading the chapters here and answering comments? such commitment, definitely following. I'll also check that patreon later.

 

Thank you very much! Yeah, I'll try to answer as many comments as I can! >w< and please do check my Patreon! you can get sexy stuff there ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

 

 

 

I feel like the monsters is too cute to be murdered, please do something ・-・)つ

 

It's Cute but deadly! >: )

I feel like the monsters is too cute to be murdered, please do something ・-・)つ

Whoa, the autor himself is uploading the chapters here and answering comments? such commitment, definitely following. I'll also check that patreon later.

Great first chapter. The art is quite good and I really like Dizzy and Al's characters. Not too sure about Kloa yet, but her breasts character makes quite the impact.

 

Yeah, I need to give her breasts a Big opening...

Great first chapter. The art is quite good and I really like Dizzy and Al's characters. Not too sure about Kloa yet, but her breasts character makes quite the impact.

Weird. Looking at the artwork I thought it was the next work of Yumekui Merry's author but it is not the case. Following to see where this goes.

Just a work of one of his fans XD

 

Thanks for the Follow!

Weird. Looking at the artwork I thought it was the next work of Yumekui Merry's author but it is not the case. Following to see where this goes.

Nice first chapter, not the most original, but I quite like the art.

Can feel some heavy influence from Yumekui Merry in Dizzy character design though.

 

Spoiler

But I don't mind, I'm a huge Merry fan.

 

Will follow for now, keep up the good work !

Best regards.

 

Thanks you for your comment, I'm a big fan of Ushiki Yoshitaka-sensei work in general since his work on Advent Cirno and of course Yumekui Merry. There was one point where I just wanted to be able to draw like him but I've grown out of that period though, because I understand thats it's better just to be yourself.

 

Dizzy was create around that time though, she's a long time OC of my so I'm not surpirsed that the Merry influence came through, but I figure she's not an exact clone or anything so I just keep her old design anyway, haha ^ ^"" 

Nice first chapter, not the most original, but I quite like the art.

Can feel some heavy influence from Yumekui Merry in Dizzy character design though.

 

 

Will follow for now, keep up the good work !

Best regards.

Hi, I'm the Artist and Author of this comic, and I'm here to explain that this is a decision on my part to censored the comic. This comic is an independent project, so I don't make any profit from it aside from Patreon, So I decided that I would sell Uncensored Pages and concept art to make some money back, and hopefully one day I would be able to make a living out of this.
 
I'm sorry if it seems like I'm forcing gains, but it's just impossible to do a project like this without making money back. Although, I don't think you lose anything if you read this version though, the uncensored pages are more of like a eye-candy, if you're here for the story, you'll still get the full story ^ ^
 
I'm sorry again ;v;

* burning from embarrassment* lol pleases look back at my comment. I had actually realized after the post and made a edit not expecting you to be prowling a round to gauge feedback, so you replying to my original feedback like that makes me feel even more embarrassed and sorry.

So it's finally happened... Or at least I think it did. It seems scanlators are now holding "content" hostage in exchange for money. Nsfw pages for $5. This act is "ok" if said page was never uncensored originally and that censor was not artificially added by scanlators and they are re-drawing said nsfw back, but still pretty gray IMO. If not this, but rather they censored it themselves then asked for $5 then that's complete poo. I don't mind being Patreon to help groups pump out chapters, but I don't support Patreon if groups are seemingly trying to force gains like this if that is in fact the case. Sorry if I'm misunderstanding, but thus was the impression I felt from the group. Kudos to you guys if you're actually redrawing.

 

Hi, I'm the Artist and Author of this comic, and I'm here to explain that this is a decision on my part to censored the comic. This comic is an independent project, so I don't make any profit from it aside from Patreon, So I decided that I would sell Uncensored Pages and concept art to make some money back, and hopefully one day I would be able to make a living out of this.

 

I'm sorry if it seems like I'm forcing gains, but it's just impossible to do a project like this without making money back. Although, I don't think you lose anything if you read this version though, the uncensored pages are more of like a eye-candy, if you're here for the story, you'll still get the full story ^ ^

 

I'm sorry again ;v;

Edit: ignore everything I said below. I don't typically pay attention the authors name until I Finnish the chapter and either find the art familiar or the story was good and was curious about other works, but it seems I made a boo boo. I didn't realize Onigensou(contributor) was also Onigensou( author/ artist). I'm like beyond embarrassed at this point after waking up like 30mins ago. Very sorry for throwing at rant at you like this. Now my feedback on this manga is.... It has good points can t say there is a good story until more chapters are released. The art, just wow. Especially the style on the mc, it feels really familiar, like hentai mangaka or other mangaka kind if familiar.

Ignore with a passion: So it's finally happened... Or at least I think it did. It seems scanlators are now holding "content" hostage in exchange for money. Nsfw pages for $5. This act is "ok" if said page was never uncensored originally and that censor was not artificially added by scanlators and they are re-drawing said nsfw back, but still pretty gray IMO. If not this, but rather they censored it themselves then asked for $5 then that's complete poo. I don't mind being Patreon to help groups pump out chapters, but I don't support Patreon if groups are seemingly trying to force gains like this if that is in fact the case. Sorry if I'm misunderstanding, but thus was the impression I felt from the group. Kudos to you guys if you're actually redrawing.