Gabriel The Legend

When did this site turn into DeviantArt 2.0 where some any random person could scan his middle school sketchbook and expect it to be praised as the savior of manga? I came here to read works of a medium that cater to a specific niche, not self-published derivatives drawn by someone with the most cursory understanding of what he's trying to imitate.

Good to se you haven't give up, keep going. I see some improvement here.
Also please do the hair and eyes, it needs some work.
Don't give up, keep improving.

Thankyou for the support and the time you took to read my work. I greatly appreciate it. I'm always working on improving. Thank you for the great advice as well.

Good to se you haven't give up, keep going. I see some improvement here. Also please do the hair and eyes, it needs some work. Don't give up, keep improving.

Good news is that you've started doing this. In the long run, art and story will improve. Looking forward to this.

My my, now that's a lot of comments here. First of thanks for hosting my work here. Second, thanks for taking the time to read it. Seems the some of my team may have sparked some issues here. I apologize and appreciate your advice. So the art seems to be the problem I see. So now I know what to work on. I do appreciate your readership. This time I will myself take responsibility for this page. -Jaxon

Excuse me?! Don't go barking that it's trash when you haven't done anything worth comparing.... It takes a lot of work and dedication to do this and if you can't support it with constructive criticism then the least you can do is keep your negative opinions to yourself.

Nah he is right and you know it. 

 

No matter  even if the story it self is good if the art is shit it wont sell because the art makes it unreadable. I suggest you either find someone that can beautifully draw  or accept all the critics that are thrown at you.

Excuse me?! Don't go barking that it's trash when you haven't done anything worth comparing.... It takes a lot of work and dedication to do this and if you can't support it with constructive criticism then the least you can do is keep your negative opinions to yourself.

Is the guy who make sonichu your hero

Excuse me?! Don't go barking that it's trash when you haven't done anything worth comparing....

 

Whoa, I can't believe anyone tries to play this terrible, terrible card.

 

Sharing something you created means you get judged by the audience - not by other creators.

 

Also, this is a place for reading, not for publishing. So expect the readers to be in power here.

 

What you just said can be translated into "99% of people here aren't qualified to have an opinion and I'm above them".

I have seen crap less crappier than this crap

that drawing style though

Excuse me?! Don't go barking that it's trash when you haven't done anything worth comparing.... It takes a lot of work and dedication to do this and if you can't support it with constructive criticism then the least you can do is keep your negative opinions to yourself.

What about constructive criticism being: "keep it off this site if you don't like being criticised?"

no. but after looking at this....we might have to, or find a way to prevent DA junk from seeping in here

Excuse me?! Don't go barking that it's trash when you haven't done anything worth comparing.... It takes a lot of work and dedication to do this and if you can't support it with constructive criticism then the least you can do is keep your negative opinions to yourself.

Is there a tag for self-publish yet?

 

no. but after looking at this....we might have to, or find a way to prevent DA junk from seeping in here

Is there a tag for self-publish yet?

The way he introduces characters seems familiar...oh yeah, its Oda's style in One Piece...

 

Naive young Gabriel Stumbles into a Universe, governed by the Hierarchy of the Orders of creation. The species of Gods being the 6th order, rule over the 7th and 8th (humans) order and the entire universe with an iron fist. Having memories of his home on earth stolen from him, he now has to find a way to end this Order of Tyranny. But with 1000's of leagues of Gods in his way to the top, the race to the throne has begun. Little does he know, he doesn't belong to either of the 3 orders of creation. Will he claim the throne and change the future or will HE be the one to destroy the future that he sought to save.

...Wuh?

7/10

NOT AS GOOD AS LOVE THE DESPAIR. NEEDS MORE MS PAINT AND LESS NARRATION TO BRING IT UP TO PAR.

When did deviantart start redirecting to bato?

Walking disaster is right.

WHAT? I'VE LITERALLY NEVER SEEN FULL CAPS USED IN THE 100+ SCANLATIONS I'VE READ. EXAMPLES PLEASE. BTW REAL PROS SHOUT WHAT THEY'RE TYPING IN REAL LIFE. REALLY CAPTURES THE EMOTIONS. ALSO WAKING PEOPLE UP AND MAKING THE NEIGHBOURS MAD IS FUN.

 

toradora, kuro, one piece, toriko, TWGOK, this, and probably a few hundred more. It's not the rule, but it is fairly prevalent.

Funny how you guys call it shouting in the description, but not when with the text itself, and like a large majority of scantelations use full caps for translated bubbles.

WHAT? I'VE LITERALLY NEVER SEEN FULL CAPS USED IN THE 100+ SCANLATIONS I'VE READ. EXAMPLES PLEASE. BTW REAL PROS SHOUT WHAT THEY'RE TYPING IN REAL LIFE. REALLY CAPTURES THE EMOTIONS. ALSO WAKING PEOPLE UP AND MAKING THE NEIGHBOURS MAD IS FUN.

Funny how you guys call it shouting in the description, but not when with the text itself, and like a large majority of scantelations use full caps for translated bubbles.

HAVEN'T WE SEEN THIS WESTERN PIECE OF SHIT BEFORE

Jakusuon Burourii。。。guess that's why we have the awkward Broly. THIS DEFINITELY FEELS LIKE A SHOUTING MANGA.