Saigami

Its pretty good. But things are going way to fast and I can't keep up. Just what was the purpose of the father? I really love her she's very funny and likable but the boys kinda suck. I don't want to be mean but yeah its like a poorly written "shounen shoujo". Please consider how your portraying and telling the characters to the reader. No need to rush the story telling as long as its good!

It's so annoying that people who haven't experienced a situation like the girl has, thinks that every person needs a family or "family portraits" or whatever to be happy or content with their life. You'd get used to it, and you don't really care about those kinds of things.

 

Either way, cute art and story.

Funny fact, hungarian and finnish are both Finno-Ugric languages so they are more similar to each other, than let's say finnish and swedish.

 

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Yeah, the Japanese names are odd unless it's set in Japan. I was guessing from the the ö in her name that the author was Finnish, but googled the name and apparently it's Hungarian. Huh.

Funny fact, hungarian and finnish are both Finno-Ugric languages so they are more similar to each other, than let's say finnish and swedish.

Why bother with japanese names in this kind of setting? Especially when MC is a redheaded girl. And when i look at author deviant art i only ask "what the hell is with those drawings?!". On devianart she drew an awesome picture of Deku from Boku no Hero Academia and here characters look like derped Winx... Still, backgrounds are pretty, critters also, but the story... well let's just say it's on par with poor written shounen-like shoujo manga that appeared en masse some time ago. I hope i'm wrong and it won't change into another tales of Mary Sue or princess in disgress and her bishounen harem.

Yeah, the Japanese names are odd unless it's set in Japan. I was guessing from the the ö in her name that the author was Finnish, but googled the name and apparently it's Hungarian. Huh.

Why bother with japanese names in this kind of setting? Especially when MC is a redheaded girl. And when i look at author deviant art i only ask "what the hell is with those drawings?!". On devianart she drew an awesome picture of Deku from Boku no Hero Academia and here characters look like derped Winx... Still, backgrounds are pretty, critters also, but the story... well let's just say it's on par with poor written shounen-like shoujo manga that appeared en masse some time ago. I hope i'm wrong and it won't change into another tales of Mary Sue or princess in disgress and her bishounen harem.

Hmm... it's interesting so far lets see what happens next...