Mokata

We will be successful.

Okay I have reviewed plots. They were really great. Personally I wish we could do them all right now. I believe it's best that we start with simple plot that probably somewhat clinched since we are beginning group. Basically start easy then go hard. I have combined some plots into what I believe to be solid plot. As I need sleep there are bound to be grammar errors or fragmented thoughts.

* things that need to be done
* Start a blog that the team can edit
* Make a head banner ( Team Moral )
* Artist start some drawings.
* Writers Review my plot for acceptance

It’s a nekomimi world. A Princess decides to runway from home the day before the grand bay of nekomimi suitors. While at the same time Hikkikomori guy falls into a black whole from inside a toilet to the nekomimi World. While the princess is on the run the Hikikomori guy falls on top of the few soldiers that were on here trail. Instead of saying thank you the innocent looking princess tries to slap them but instead misses the target and trips on a rock that sends both of them down a hill just before more soldiers arrive. Then they proceed to aboard the boat that happens to be at the bottom of the hill. They fall asleep from exhaustion in awarked positions. The Hikki (aka Hikikomori) complains about hungry he is and how he his phone won’t connect. The Himi(princess neko) she ask what phone is? Hikki keeps talking to himself about how he needs to order pizza from pizza clay. He continues on talking about how he needs his laptop to play Dark Eden. Next Himi points to a town as says that maybe they have his exotic food pizza there at the market. Brighten by the idea of pizza he walks into failing to notice glares from the townsfolk. We the arrive at the plaza they are confronted by the village elder who looks like 60’s rocks roll star. He asks” He asks Himi why have you brought a mutate into our city. Confused himi ask what do you mean? The elder points to Hikki. Hikki finally stoping his daydream pizza notices the elder and the glares of the townsfolk. Hiki blurts “is this a game or what “ Humans are the superior species”. Outraged by his claim the elder turns red and yells burn the mutant. Himi looks at him and yells oh yeah you don’t have ears what happen? Himi notices the gathering villagers and garbs hiki once more and says “ let’s run for it” while keeping her bright smile. Hiki and Himi start running and fall into dark forest that know enters even when their live is on the line. They hear a goar and see evil eys. Hikki looks sleepy. Himi Looks scared but then looks ready to fight with a smile on her face. Last thing you her is wolf( dog sound) . Then you see the dragon.
The end of the one shot!

Story goal: is to escape
Characters: Himi and Hiki
Himi – Adorable, spunky, always smiling princess, looks happy looking.
Traits: fails to notice the surrounds.
Hiki – reclusive, needs pizza, doesn’t like people, looks gloomy looking. Looks really handsome when cleaned up.
Traits: able to focus on goals such as pizza, falls alsleep randomly which
Village1: add details
Village2:
Village 3:
Village etc:
Dragon
Elder – Rock Star looking with plump body time.
Background: Medivel Times, think knights,dragons,serfs,bishops… etc
Background: A very green world with lot’s of trees or wildlife, rivers, mountains…etc
Background: Need a Dragon


Night all see you all in 24 hours maybe. I have to sleep

Whats the goal of the thread? Make a Team project? Sounds fun? Skype,google plus, yahoo messager?


Hmm... maybe start a group that helps other get started. Maybe this is the apart future of manga readers? Need wanted pages would say Needed translator,proofreader,editor, artist,writer. Well I suppose not a lot would change.

btw: Maybe some weired love triangles. Some of my ideas where for stories that reach long distance lengths.I hope to read your story someday. I live the warrior idea. Maybe neko warrior girls don't like how cats are being treat on the human planet. Meets handsome guy?

Oh yeah here some links to software
http://download.cnet.com/Comic-Book-Creator-Standard/3000-6675_4-10461623.html
http://mashable.com/2010/10/24/create-your-own-comics/

My suggestion is trying something different. I think what people crave in something unorthodox. Here I going to throw some random off the head suggestion.
What about tragedy title neko girls. What happens when you wake up and you become an neko girl. What do you hear and see. Maybe things you didn't want to hear. ( ex mean girls or boy). Throw in a twist a little ways in and bunch more people have become neko. Toss in themes of equality, discrimation. Obviously there the mystery is why are they neko girls. Of course it could be more little hearted with comedy that only neko girl can make. (Think dogs,catnip)

Another thought is what happen when your normal cat has neko girl kittens. Now you have to take of them. Feed them and bathe them. Don't forget they will grow up fast. They are curious kitties that do what cats do including catnip,dogs,rolling in dirt, attacking you. You must teach them right or the they might do wrong.( cat burgler) Theme is taking care of others. The plot is the adventure of the neko cats. A deeper plot could be the reason why your cat had neko kitties. Oh yeah you could add serious trio that want to capture your cats. So it's not cliche don't ever let them catch instead let be some outside makes the world think they aliens. Maybe a mob attacks his house. The story could keep growing has the neko girls age. Obviously this would be hilarious if they main character was guy. These could mean rommance, school life troubles. Wow this story could go on for awhile.

You been rivals for years in everything that you could think about. Your best friends for life. What happen when want to date each other but find a secret that explains bizarre. obviously you continue the change but must protect her secret cause what happens when the other guys know.

You know apply to college is fun but If you don't research you might end up in a school for neko's where most of your classmates are girls. Your start to learn about neko life inside of cat life. (research how cats life, and act. Also research cat breeds these will help with character development.) What is the only human inside a cat school suppose to do? Hope you can run faster then the cat or maybe prove how brave you are but getting out of the tree. Ah be the leader against the rival school for dogs. (Maybe the dogs try and recruit him)

I win at all sports. Is it cheating if your not human? What happens when the coach finds out. What happens when the rival girls team finds out.
Theme: Pursuing your dream against all odds or animals. Plot: a fan of the sport finds out your a neko girl. Genre: Sports
Character: Evil fan or stalker

Your a fan of the new band called neko girls. What happens when you find out that they all neko girls. What does a fan do? Protect and Join them or become the evil fan.

So you were born differently but that doesn't mean your shouldn't achieve your dreams. What happens when the neko girl wants to be a doctor. Will here extra neko abilities help her achieve her dream or cause her more harm then good. ( Sense of smell vs smell blood, sharp claws and delicate tools) . A twist could be that a wired doctor does or want to do research on her

Things to consider

Genre and/or sub-genre

• Adult
• Comedy
• Ecchi
• Gender Bender
• Historical
• Martial Arts
• Mecha
• One Shot
• Romance
• Sci-fi
• Shoujo Ai
• Slice of Life
• Sports
• Tragedy
• Yuri

Audience

Doujinshi
Shounen
Seinen
Shoujo
Josei

manga,comic,mawha,orginal

Theme

What is the lesson, moral or the thing the story is trying to tell

equality for women, animals, aliens,demons, hobos, nekos... etcs
Prepare for the end of the world
discrimination
woman rights
It's easy to take over world
Poor vs rich
Live life to fullest
Don't ever give up
You don't have to be the best for you can Challenge the world till you can't any more
Easy is boring
Romance isn't simple
Love is cruel
The father isn't the son
Children aren't dolls to there parents
Demons aren't evil just different
Dare to be different

http://www.sjsu.edu/faculty/patten/theme.html



Plot

What is the conflict or struggle the main character goes through?
Parts of a Plot

Story Goal - What is story trying to solve or achieve (Obvious goal: Become Hokage( real goal: People to respect him) ( world peace ..naruto)( Bleach doesn't have one)

Consequence - What happens if the main character doesn't achieve the goal. ( Stays genin( destroys the world)(nine tails takes over)( World ends)

Requirements - What does the main character need to achieve this goal? What events need to happen. These show that the character is close to the goal. These is important for emotion control of the reader for positive emotions. ( learn knew skills, control nine tails, meet farther, other student, make friends, save the day.)

Forewarnings - These allows the reader to glimpse into the future. What bad (consequences) happens when the character gets closer to the goal. This is important to control the emotions of the reader. Giving them fear and tension. ( Sasuke gets jealous and runs away)( People die)

Cost - There is a price to be paid for everything. What will the main character/s have to pay to achieve the goal. These is proof that the goal matters to the character ( lose there family,friends, cat,dog, arm, eye, soul,pride,self respect, love,teacher)

Dividends - The opposite of cost. These are the rewards for a the journey( promotion in rank, friends(naruto), meet the family from beyond the grave, gold,fame,glory)

Prerequisites - Things that need to happen before the requirements are meet. ( Must rescure sasuke before naruto becomes hokage, eat the magical pill before she enters the a new world that starts her adventure, defeat the dragon to get the key to save the prince)

Preconditions - Conditons or rules that make it harder to achieve the goal ( Low stamia for sports, afriad of blood (doctor), fail the exam three times (naruto), can't got outside after 5pm)

Plot Development - how the character acts throught the story. Must decide traits/methods/ablities that hinder of help him/her/it
Climax - Desicive or important moment occurs which decides if the story goal will be achieved. This is where you might set up the reading for the ending.

Resoultions

1. Comedy (happy ending): the protagonist achieves the goal or solves the problem, and his success turns out to be a good thing.
2. Tragedy: the protagonist fails to achieve the goal, and his failure is a bad thing.
3. Tragi-comedy (Personal Triumph): the protagonist fails to achieve the goal, but his failure turns out to be a good thing.
4. Comi-tragedy (Personal Tragedy): the protagonist achieves his goal, but his success turns out to be a bad thing.

Story structure
Setting
Style and Tone
Characters

That is common in bitish tv. If you compare to the states we just have very long seasons or is that there are too short. Merlin is 12 epiodes a season.