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[LEILOCKHEART]

It's good to see Ranmaru lose at something. So funny how Ranmaru was so full of himself. He didn't know Momoko was actually popular in the host club. Hahaha. Served him right!

P.S. I wanted to comment on how big Momoko's boobs are in Chapter 14, but I was afraid I'd ruin the moment >.<

Edited by LEILOCKHEART, 04 November 2012 - 08:34 PM.

[Justin Harolds]

Chapter 15 was pretty fun. Great chapter. I love how Ranmaru reflected on his actions. Sometimes this guys says means thing but does things in the end that will make you forgive him.

[kanoko]

Only in chapter 18 Momoko realized she loves Ranmaru? I would love to see Ranmaru confessing to Momoko next.

Edited by kanoko, 26 December 2012 - 09:36 AM.

[Purple Library Guy]

So, they finally made love.  Nice moment.  I like the way afterwards her sensual writing yes, got more realistic--but it was a problem because realistic may not work in erotic fiction.  Romantic/sexy writing getting better with real experience has become kind of a cliche in shoujo, so it was kind of cute having that twisted around.

I was kind of surprised that this doesn't seem to be the end.  For sure at the beginning this was the kind of story where when the girl reluctantly falls for the playboy, he commits, and they finally have sex, that's it job done.  But the characters have deepened some and gotten backstory and such since then.

[Marian5390]

So, they finally made love.  Nice moment.  I like the way afterwards her sensual writing yes, got more realistic--but it was a problem because realistic may not work in erotic fiction.  Romantic/sexy writing getting better with real experience has become kind of a cliche in shoujo, so it was kind of cute having that twisted around.

I was kind of surprised that this doesn't seem to be the end.  For sure at the beginning this was the kind of story where when the girl reluctantly falls for the playboy, he commits, and they finally have sex, that's it job done.  But the characters have deepened some and gotten backstory and such since then.

 

Don't say everything I wanna say before I do! Now I have nothing to write about! D:

 

But in all seriousness; I do have something to say:

Am I the only one who feels like she's going to be throwing in another character or two to go around making trouble instead of just resolving Ranmaru's backstory already? 'Cause I really don't want that to happen, but it's already being heavily hinted at. >_> Add to that the fact that Momoiro Heaven is twelve volumes long and that was the end of volume six, and it's basically confirmed. I don't see how she has another six volumes worth of plot left without at least two volumes of unnecessary drama...

Geh. Oh well. At least, if it's Yoshino-sensei, I can trust the characters and their actions to not be TOO over the top, even if this does end up dragging on.

....I hope.

[Venivixi]

Hmm. I wonder how Touma?-kun's doing.. Another new character, huh.. and foreshadowing.. well I've been thinking of the bliss for quite some time so yeah it's time for trouble, i guess? Haha

[Purple Library Guy]

 

Don't say everything I wanna say before I do! Now I have nothing to write about! D:

 

 

Preen!

 

But in all seriousness; I do have something to say:

Am I the only one who feels like she's going to be throwing in another character or two to go around making trouble instead of just resolving Ranmaru's backstory already? 'Cause I really don't want that to happen, but it's already being heavily hinted at.

 

Well, you sure called that one!

>_> Add to that the fact that Momoiro Heaven is twelve volumes long and that was the end of volume six, and it's basically confirmed. I don't see how she has another six volumes worth of plot left without at least two volumes of unnecessary drama...

Twelve?! Then yeah, I'd say your analysis is sound.
But that may be OK--look at the way it got handled in ch 24. Some mangaka would have spun that into a whole embarrassing thing--the girl would have felt weird about going for dinner with a different guy and tried to conceal it, it would have made this whole jealous misunderstanding blah, blah; I've seen scenarios like that get turned into near break-up over multiple chapters. Instead she tells him straight up because if she'd thought she was doing anything wrong she wouldn't have done it, and he starts to flounce signalling what it could have been like, but doesn't and just admits he's jealous. And she hits the writer jerk with "Pain, pain, fly away!" Hilarious!

[Marian5390]

Twelve?! Then yeah, I'd say your analysis is sound.

But that may be OK--look at the way it got handled in ch 24. Some mangaka would have spun that into a whole embarrassing thing--the girl would have felt weird about going for dinner with a different guy and tried to conceal it, it would have made this whole jealous misunderstanding blah, blah; I've seen scenarios like that get turned into near break-up over multiple chapters. Instead she tells him straight up because if she'd thought she was doing anything wrong she wouldn't have done it, and he starts to flounce signalling what it could have been like, but doesn't and just admits he's jealous. And she hits the writer jerk with "Pain, pain, fly away!" Hilarious!

 

That's true, too. And I do like this manga, so really as long as the drama is handled well, I don't mind it going on a bit longer. ^^ (Not that it needs my permission... xD) I loved Ranmaru just outright telling Mayuzumi that he doesn't like him. That last panel with the face-off and all the lightning in the background was priceless! And the poor photographer trying to get them to smile and be friendly... xD

Edited by Marian5390, 18 September 2014 - 10:37 AM.

[Shina-Hak]

Ragazzi. Ma le traduzioni del manga sono sospese ?
Dopo il capitolo 30 non trovo nulla