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Endless Haiku

Started by symbology, Oct 09 2012 02:52 PM
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#21
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Posted 12 October 2012 - 08:02 AM

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the mind stops in awe.


wonderful, just wonderful :) i have prepared a closing line myself but it was an utmost resist of the urge to post it... thanks

Edited by symbology, 12 October 2012 - 08:08 AM.

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abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is...

 

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 09:20 AM

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ok, this really turns interesting... like a game of wits - just beautiful, thank you all

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and here's my new challenge :)

Herald rise of souls...

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Edited by symbology, 12 October 2012 - 10:58 AM.

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abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is...

 

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 12:33 PM

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With the strength of will

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 01:22 PM

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answers battles call.

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 01:35 PM

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 01:52 PM

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With the strength of will


answers battles call.


hm, i didn't see that one coming... wow :)
that's the beauty of multiple versifying that i actually looked for... it's a real brain teaser for me, and there's so much sense in the complete verses...

Written on the pages


What's diggin' bowels of men

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 01:53 PM

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Just turn around and listen

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 01:56 PM

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Just turn around and listen


ha, now that's a real zen artist :)

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 01:58 PM

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>^.^<
Is that a good thing?

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 02:01 PM

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>^.^<
Is that a good thing?


definitly, i like it a lot :)
it is so much "more than meets the eye"...

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 02:03 PM

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Wonderful! I'm really having fun with this.
I'm sorry that I didn't find it sooner.

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 02:36 PM

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so, here's my weekend challenge for an opening line... and off i go :)

Future forgotten

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 02:40 PM

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Always desperately searching

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 04:16 PM

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got interested in haiku, what's good about it? I want to enjoy it too, give me recommendation

for a single light in this captivated darkness.
should be like this maia-san?

Edited by chihiro92, 12 October 2012 - 04:43 PM.

Jugemu Jugemu Unko Nageki Ototoi no Shin-chan no Pantsu Shinpachi no Jinsei

Balmunk Fezarion Isaac Schneider San Bun no Ichi no Junjou na Kanjou no Nokotta San Bun no Ni wa Sakamuke ga Kininaru Kanjou

Uragiri wa Boku no Namae wo Shitteiru you de Shiranai no wo Boku wa Shitteiru Rusu Surume Medaka Kazunoko Koedame Medaka...

Kono Medaka wa Sakki to Chigau Yatsu Dakara Ikeno Medaka no Hou Dakara Raa-yuu

Yuuteimiyaouki Mukou Pepepepepepepepepepepepe

Bichiguso Maru

 

 

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 04:18 PM

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Read the beginning, dear heart.

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 05:36 PM

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so, here's my weekend challenge for an opening line... and off i go :)

Future forgotten

Always desperately searching


for wrongs made in past

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 05:37 PM

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Standing on the brink

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 05:44 PM

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a red sea of madness

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 05:56 PM

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Looking into the past

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 07:14 PM

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