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[Zero King]

Thank you Maia

YOu have some good poems there Wolf, have more confidence



Here's a new poem


Enough

I don't really care what you have to say,

I'm pouring out my soul I'll never sway.

You think your crying will make me stay?

Life's not burger king you cant have it your way.

YOu tried to enslave me but I've had enough

No matter how hard you try you cant save me,

NO matter how hard you try you cant make me cry.

Isn't enough that you try to destroy my dreams,

DO you know how much damage you've done to me?

You haven't because it's never ENOUGH for you is it?

Are you happy now? My soul is so far gone,

the only way I can surive is to stay alone.

I'm so surprised that I haven't killed myself,

replace this pencil with a knife.

Is it ENOUGH if i take my life?

No you would even follow me into hell,

you wouldnt let me feel alive.

My torment is the thing that's keeping you alive,

So if I die you die so you keep me alive.

I've Had ENOUGH of you...of me

　

　

　

　

　

　

　

Edited by Zero King, 05 October 2012 - 09:08 AM.

[~Halen~]

Why do you write such things, you make me sad, cousin,
Are you really trying to end your life?

[Zero King]

I write dark



here's another one

Doll

YOu keep trying to play with me
I'm Nothing but a doll to you
but I wont play your game
I rather die than be your doll

You dont think I cant see you?
with him? with her scheming?
trying to know me through someone else
but no one knows the real me
You cant force me to be your doll

I can't play dead and let you walk over me
Ill rise up and take you with me
I'm not sorry I cant be your Doll
You can't play with me anymore

[~Halen~]

Cousin there is a side of you here that even I can't see,
You work even though you scare me

[Maia]

Damn, Zero.
That first one...
Damn.

[Zero King]

Thanks? maia

[Maia]

Enough was a really good one.
I don't know why, but a lot of you're poems leave me speechless, and I don't know how to reply at first.
I don't know wether its the emotion, the words, or a combination of the two that always get to me when I read your writing.

[Zero King]

Thank you very much for your comment Maia:)
That makes me very happy



Here are some more poems that I wrote during my english class


Fall in Line

Everyone Lies
Everyone Tries
Everyone Dies

Not Everyone Sleeps
Not Everyone Cries
Not Everyone lives


Watch

Tick Tock Tick Tock
The clock is hunting me
Tick Tock
This noise is driving me Insane
Tick Tock
Shut if off!
Tick Tock
Please stop! Please STOP IT!
Tick Tock
My watch is Calling
Tick Tock


Struggle

My heart no longer beats
yet it still hurts me
Every time I seek to believe
That I can Live though
The Pain I have inside
I'm fighting to feel alive
against myself how can I Survive?

Edited by Zero King, 10 October 2012 - 10:05 AM.

[Zero King]

I wrote this after watching a video where James Earl Jones read "The Raven" out loud. Also I read his biography, he lived a very hard and emotional life.

Edgar Allen Poe

He, the owner of the black cat
spoke the words of utter truth
You belittled him but couldn't stop him
no matter how hard you tried
it was in vain, for you did not know of his pain
for you, did not understand the man
you! the fan of the raven who Stalked the man
even to the Helen, who blamed the man
did not truly understand
How great the man was
only the woman who the man loved
knew the raven first hand
and how he, was a great man


Her Value

As I turned this page
I find a letter with your name.
A name that has no value,
and a love that was unreal.
I open the letter with haste,
with no emotion equal to when I wrote it.
they used to sprout words of love that never grew,
now they have wings but they never flew for you.
now these words hold no value,
just like you...

The black widow

She hunts her prey with glee,
silently stalking within the shadows.
but in the day she greets you happily,
the temptation of her smile is sinful.
you, who do not know blindly enjoys,
as she creeps deeper into your soul.
For you are to erected to see,
through her lies of love and seduction.
It's too late for you to see,
her threads are deeply embedded within you.
There's no escaping the black widow,
when she sinks her fangs into you.


This last poem is pretty much about me trying to get away from my misogynistic feelings while wanting to pursue a relationship with a loving girl.

My Struggle

I am attracted to you
you disgust me! get away from me
wait! come back, don't leave me alone....
I can't help it there's a deep hatred within me
I try to fight it, I even try to deny it
But I never try to hide from it
It is not your fault please stay...

I need you more than you need me
I need you to help set me free
Before I walk away without you
My romantic future looks bleak
If I continue down this path
i'm so tired of this path
of being alone with nowhere to go
Can't you see I want to Love you
Like you love me...

[Mystika101]

Wow, your poems are amazing... I especially like When I Die, the way the verses get shorter and smaller like your life really was fading... fantastic! It probably does not mean much coming from a stranger but I am sorry about the things that you had to go through to write such heart wrenching but beautifully dark poetry. The last poem seems like there's a glimmer of hope in you yet though... but keep posting please!

[Zero King]

Thank you very much Mystika:) I appreciate you commenting, not a lot of people do. I'm glad you liked when I die, it was a good poem to me and I thought that effect would make it seem better.

As you wish:) here's a new poem I just wrote


Letter to my mother (I Wish)

I wish I never knew you
I wish I never grew within you
I'm writing this letter today to you
To say I regret having a mother like you

When I needed you most,
You left me and maria alone.
With no regard you scarred my heart
When you left you tore it apart
So tragic..I'm wiped the memory away
I still can't remember it to this day

I'm sitting here writing this letter laughing
Remembering all the nights I cried myself to sleep
All that time wasted wishing you lived with me
I can honestly say you no longer matter to me

Without care,

"White Boy"

Edited by Zero King, 13 October 2012 - 01:06 PM.

[Zero King]

Love

My heart beats for something more
But I know I'll never feel it
This feelings that everyone truly wants but not all receive
I'm afraid if I find it, it will leave
I stay alone and bite anyone that gets to close
I'm so tired of being alone
My heart burns with the desire to receive
Any kind of love

[Maia]

Aaaaahhhh!
What is it with these poems!
Always grabbing at my heartstrings.
This last one was so sad in a lot of ways.
But I still love it.

[Zero King]

Thank you maia:)

[Maia]

As always, Zero, it was a pleasure to read your work. >^.^<

[Zero King]

I have a question (to everyone), Do you believe in Love?

[Mystika101]

Ah, I can really relate to 'Love'. That desperate feeling of wanting to be loved but doing everything you can to keep people away!

Yeah, I do believe in love, I see it in my parents, I see it with my friends. I know that love exists, including romantic love. But it's something I believe that other people get, I am not sure how to be in love, or even if I can! But other people give me hope that one day I will find love too, and hopefully it won't be too messed up, the only thing is that I have to learn to get over my fear of being hurt, which is hard to do over so many years of practice.

[Zero King]

I like your answer, I totally agree with you. Im not sure how to be in love either, I understand.

I believe in love as well, I'm secretly a romantic. I like reading romance novels, I love seeing how the characters love plays out. I neither saw any love between my parents. I've always told myself I don't want to be like them, I want to fall in love with a girl that I will stay with future and the only woman I'll have kids with.


Here's a new poem, I just wrote. I don't know how I feel about it.its about how my best friend (girl) who told me that she loved me but I didn't feel the same for her. Plus she was in an relationship already, I told her to stay in the relationship.

Can't love you

I'm sorry we can't do this
I can't do this to you
Your with him but you say you love me
I don't have those kind of feelings for you
How can I say this without hurting you

I don't love you like that
So I can't give you anything back
Please stay with him he's the one who loves you
And you love him isn't that enough
I'm sorry but our friendship has to end
I'll slowly fade away from your life
Someday you'll forget me
So please stay happy

[Mystika101]

Ah that's sad... I'm sorry about that... I'm not sure what's sadder though, the fact that you couldn't love her back or that you lost a friend...

And yeah I also am a romantic, I have read a rather large amount of romance novels and manga, I love seeing them fight for their love, or watching them slowly succumb to it, even watching them try so hard to resist it but giving up in the end... I know that stuff is not real that love is a lot more difficult and more hard work than that... but part of me hopes it is and that one day I will wake up and it will suddenly hit me, like a brick to the face, that I am in love with this person!

[Zero King]

Its alright, hmm its for the better that we dont be friends.

Haha I like your answer, you better watch out for flying bricks