Simple Poetry
#21
Posted 17 September 2012 - 10:23 AM
#22
Posted 17 September 2012 - 10:25 AM
#23
Posted 17 September 2012 - 10:43 AM
#24
Posted 17 September 2012 - 10:45 AM
#25
Posted 17 September 2012 - 10:54 AM
And Zero, those were some great poems.
I love reading your work, I really do.
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#26
Posted 17 September 2012 - 11:09 AM
Maia: thank you I'll try to update all of my stories soon
#27
Posted 17 September 2012 - 11:10 AM
I can't wait to read them! >^.^<
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#28
Posted 21 September 2012 - 12:45 PM
The world is spinning out of control
Where it stops I don't even know
I'm laying here wondering where the time went
As my eyes start to close
I wonder why I didn't tell your secret
Maybe because your just like me
Or I'm just like you
No one else in the world can understand the two of us
So tired...I have...to..rest
#29
Posted 21 September 2012 - 08:09 PM
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#30
Posted 22 September 2012 - 05:51 AM
I can really sense the darkness oozing out between each line. Meticulously thought out.
#31
Posted 24 September 2012 - 03:42 AM
Ooh, I like it Zero. Its slightly different from your norm, but, I still like it a lot none the less!
Thanks Maia, Its a little death note fan fiction poem
Very well written, I give kudos to you, ZK and Halen for these poem.
I can really sense the darkness oozing out between each line. Meticulously thought out.
Thank you Little Melon
I'm only posting my own poetry now
Haha I try
Here's a little something a month old, I'll post it since halen hasn't posted any in a while for her thread. I think these two are our last collabo poems
as always halen's words are in red
Strippin 4 daddy
The cheap sparkle of glitter shines
As she sways her body on top of the table
The crowd groans as she declines
Stripping off her clothes staying watchful
Trying to spot her next daddy
Seeing a few pieces of eye candy
But none worthy yet, until her eyes
Spotted the man swatting the flies
His eyes locked unto hers and
He waved her over with his freehand
Pulling her away from the crowd
Taking her somewhere not loud
His intent to break her
He couldn't deny her allure
He'd force her into submission
Until she lost her vision
Her hope for the future.
The Eighth Sin
The smell of death surrounds me
My eyes are open but I cant see
The darkness corrupts my soul
Slowly reaching its goal
It takes over, diving into
The abyss, running me through
Making my thoughts turn to dust
My body aching as I passed lust
And fall into a world unto its own
Looking at the devil I say I'm home
Edited by Zero King, 24 September 2012 - 03:43 AM.
#32
Posted 27 September 2012 - 03:45 AM
When I finally die bury me
Don’t cry pour liquor on my grave
Promise me to Never forget my name
I don’t really care how you remember me
Just remember me to prove I was truly alive
When I finally die…
Let halen play the last song
She’ll know the right one
I often wonder if she would cry
If the night come for me forever
When I finally die….
I wonder how my mom would feel
If her first child died before her
Would she even care? How about him?
When I finally Die….
Pour me a drink as you toast my life away
Just Promise me no one will cry
When I finally die…
Dieing scares me I don’t to but I will
When I finally Die…
My name and Life will fade away…..
Don’t cry….When I finally die
#33
Posted 28 September 2012 - 11:39 AM
I'm not sorry
I'm not sorry that I lied to you
Every time I said I loved you
Back then I was a little fool
I only wanted to play
You only wanted the same
We were using each other
Because there wasn't anyone better
I'm not sorry that I lied to you
I never truly loved you
I couldn't care less about you
I'm such a fool
I should have never went out with you...
#34
Posted 30 September 2012 - 01:42 AM
Spoiler
YOUR Such a heartbreaker , its light yet soo deep,
urrg these jerks why take love so easy, why fake love and be breezy
#35
Posted 01 October 2012 - 03:27 AM
Breezy huh...I haven't heard that in a long time
#36
Posted 01 October 2012 - 05:19 AM
YOUR Such a heartbreaker , its light yet soo deep,
urrg these jerks why take love so easy, why fake love and be breezy
how's this?
Inspired from a previous relationship
#37
Posted 01 October 2012 - 05:25 AM
Umm... its like you are trying to convince yourself it was all lust and lies was it? well nice poem the girl must have enjoyed being with you. Your farewell was sweet
#38
Posted 03 October 2012 - 06:56 AM
This next poem, I do not do it but Others have admitted doing it to me.
#39
Posted 03 October 2012 - 08:40 AM
ehh.... I might as well take a shot.
EDIT: Oh crap, put some real emotional feels into this one. DX
Uhm... read the spoiler tag please... uhh.... yeah. I know it's probably not the best, but.... w/e.... damnit, LittleMelon18! Having me explain my feelings to others. ARGH
Valence
A static Silence is all that is found
Alien things are all around
I can't seem to shake it no matter how hard I fight
And even when I do, I am never in the right
For I am the problem, I am missing a link
within myself, which will lead me to the brink
of destruction, where I feel I belong
Because no matter how justified I feel, I am almost always wrong.
Something Amiss
It's as though I am in the world, yet not.
As though I can see and hear the world, yet not interact.
When I try to talk, all that comes out is a static hiss.
I want to communicate, to gain what I have lacked;
Yet all that ever happens, is my dreams being shot.
Edited by Thunder Wolf, 03 October 2012 - 09:20 AM.
- Zero King likes this
#40
Posted 05 October 2012 - 01:22 AM
I think of all of your poems, When I Die was one of the best emotional grabbers yet.
I know I've said this before of others, but that one tops my chart of favorites written by you.
I love the other poems as well, but I think that When I die is the best of them. >^.^<
Sorry its taken me so long to read them.
And Papa Wolfy, those poems were actually really good. Especially the first one.
Its hard not to relate to it, it really is.
Very well written.
I like the second one too, again, I can relate to it.
Its better than you think it is.
Great job, Papa! >^.^<
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