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#41
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Good... so good!

Waaaaah it's too good! I wanna read the rest right away! Damn you, getting me engrossed in something like this! Maia is a really good writer~ And you got the personalities down pretty well too! I was sorta surprised at how like me that was XD Though my fictional self was a bit cooler than me, I feel kinda flattered =w= And of course my darling king is coming to my rescue~ But he got to undress me o////o Waaaaaaah!

Haha, I gotta say though, that code name really is embarassing now that I read it XD I should have come up with something cooler, hehe.

Anyway, sorry to ramble, I get like that when I read something that I like. It's like my soul lights on fire! I can't wait to see more! I'm guessing yours and Aote's part is next? Hehe, I can't wait to see how you write him~ I'm also excited to see how you write my darling Vayvay~

I can change it to something else, its no problem. I'll come up with something cool for you.

Go to the IRC Anna, and we'll talk about it.\

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Hehe, sorry for the trouble I guess XD

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No trouble at all, hun. >^.~<

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Good job Maia :) I like it, it has some funny moments. I also like how you have imported a few of the usernames into your story.

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Thank you Zero.
There will me more of the user names added as the story progresses.
I am currently working on chapter three.
Hopefully I will have it finished soon so I can post it for all of you.
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The first half of this chapter is going to be a bit longer than ususal because its going to be two intro's in one. I realize that its been taking a bit longer to get everyone in with their own part of a chapter, so I'm going to improvise a bit. I hope it doesn't upset anyone that this will occure.

And now, the awaited.....


Chapter 3: The Meeting

In yet another part of the town, another safe house was being rushed through as gear, weapons, also some dirty magazines that BottleBert was just not leaving behind, was thrown into duffel bags. TheArux shook his head at Bert as he watched him, then calmly broke down his sniper rifle and put it lovingly in its case, which he set beside his own duffel bag. Arux had long ago lost count of how many times Bert had brought his porn mags to an assignment, but oddly enough, it had never once gotten in the way of the man's job. Sometimes he wondered if the man would be able to function if he didn't have them. The crazy people he was associated with. But, they were his brothers and sisters in arms, so it didn't matter much.

They had all gone through hell together, and thanks to one woman, Belladonna, they had made it out alive, and mostly in one piece. It went without question that some of them had gone a little crazy during that time, but, hey, when you go through that much torture for that long, it was bound to happen. At least they had gotten out. And now, the shit was hitting the fan again. Bert tossed something at him, and he caught it, grinning as he recognized one of his gun clips. The little bastard.

"Thats where it went," he said. "You shit head!"

"Hey, don't look at me man," Bert said with a big grin. "You were the one who left it sitting around. Besides, it was hella funny watching you trash the place trying to find it."

"Remind me to kick your ass later," Arux said, laughing.

"You can try, snipey, you can try," Bert teased him.

"Now I'm really gonna kick your ass."

They both laughed uproariously as they grabbed up their bags, and bolted for the door. They pushed and shoved at eachother, each one trying to get out the door first. Bert was the victorious one. Arux glared jokingly at him as he reset the alarm system and locked the place up. Bert was climbing into the Tumbler as Arux tossed his duffel in, then carefully stowed his rifle in one of the weapon caches. The Tumbler roared to life and they started heading over to Wolf's. Their moods grew heavier and heavier as they drew closer to the safe house.

"Yo, Arux, you think its Vaygr?" Bert asked suddenly. "Think he and his followers have finally found us?"

Arux frowned, and shook his head. "I don't know, but considering he's former military, its possible. Still pisses me off that he and his team went rogue."

"Yeah, well, pisses me off even more that the bastard had the gall to ambush our team," Bert said acidly. "I don't know what the fuck that man is thinking."

"No one does, Horn, no one does," Arux said, and grew quiet as they pulled up to Wolf's safe house.


Orcraniil set up Wanderous's laptop, knowing she was going to send out some of her little toys to see if she could get a look at Taka's place, and asses the situation. She was out at the Tumbler, quickly and accurately programming some small hover cams, and pulled out her com. She gave the ready signal to Orcra, and watched as the cams lit up and hovered. She ran a quick scan over them, to make sure they were properly functioning and let them flow outside. Well curse it all! The damn things were instantly blown to the ground by the powerful wind gusts.

She sighed, and quickly picked them up before they could get damaged too heavily by the elements and being battered along the ground. She sealed up the Tumbler and looked up in time to see a second ATV plowing its way thorugh the snow. Judging by the driving, it had to be Bert and Arux. She waved and headed inside, shaking the snow from her jacket. Orcra looked up at his wife and frowned when he caught sight of the cams in her hand. Damn, hadn't worked. They had been hoping that the hover cams would be able to make it through the storm, but the blizzard was too strong.

"Its alright, sweetheart, you tried," he said, trying to sooth her.

"And this is why I installed cams in all of the safe houses," she muttered iratably. "We have no clue whats going on over there."

Orcra ruffled her hair and smiled. "Well, next time, hide them better."

"As if that would work," she said as Bert and Arux burst in with a blast of cold air. "I did that with Angel and Maia's place, but they found them all."

"Yeah, well, they're pretty thurough when it comes to that kind of thing," Orcra said. "They're good at what they do."

"We all are!" Bert piped up, then turned to Wanderous. "You tellin me, Gadget, that you put your little spy bots in our houses? What kinda kinky shit you into, girl?"

Wanderous grinned at him, saluted, and sat down behind her laptop. "Its all a part of my master plan, Bert."

"What plan is that?"

"One that makes us rich, of course," came her sassy reply.

"Orcra, you got one interesting wife." Bert said.

"Yes, yes I do," he replied sitting down next to Wanderous who was clicking away on the laptop.
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Part two of chapter three coming soon! >^.~<

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Ooh~ just started reading this. Glad I did. This is awesome up till now :o
You write really well :3

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Hee hee, I'm glad you like it, Icee-chan!

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Can't stop reading. So good.

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Lol xD ... I have some special talent ~ as Orcraniil-kun is my partner at this story

Sure gets interesting! you sure know me well, mama. I am into technology things xD
now what will I be doing that can make the team rich?.....

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>^.^<

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Rob sounds a bit like a stereotypical black woman, lol. So I kept reading in his voice, but like... him doing an impersonation? I dunno, it was funny anyway XD

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Pffft!

~Tries to think of where she put the voice impersonation...~

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finally got around to reading this. back home in my own bed now...
and again i find myself wanting more
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just read the latest update...
until... next time...
tomorrow, right? hehehehe

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And now, the awaited final introduction in the second half of chapter 3



The blizzard was still showing no signs of slackening, the wind a continual howl of rage against the windows of a small cabin tucked back in a large grove of trees on the edge of town. The compact structure was cleverly camouflaged, effectively hiding it from view unless one were right up on it and knew what they were looking for. The woodwork creaked and groaned under the onslaught, but the build was sturdy and held against the fury of the sudden storm. Snow was building around it slightly, but for the most part, it was protected by the trees, so it didn't get hit as badly as anything out in the open.

One of the curtains fluttered just the tiniest bit and then settled as if it had never moved. Inside the cabin two duffel bags lay open on the floor, a few of the weapons visible in the flickering light provided by a single candle burning away in its holder set up on a low coffee table. The interior was set up fairly simple and modest, yet still managed to look somewhat cozy with the variety of small plants around the room and furniture. A dark haired woman stepped silently away from the window, reached for one of the katanas lying near the candle, and quickly attached it to her hip.

She grabbed up the second one and smiled. "Hey, Angel, catch." She tossed the blade carefully through the air at the man tucking more weapons into one of the duffel bags, his back to her.

His hand shot out and caught it easily. "Testing me again, Maia?" He asked, turning around to face his wife.

She grinned cheekily at him. "Just making sure you're on the ball, my love," she said, biting back laughter.

"Hm, I see," he said quietly, smiling. "Shall I prove to you just how 'on the ball' I really am?" He took a step towards her.

"Oh, all the possibilities that come to mind," she answered as she attached a choker, which had a garrotte wire cleverly sewn into the material, around her throat. God, he loved that thing.

"I think I'll make you wait for it," he stated, turning back to the duffel bags. "So, are you ready, babe? Got everything you need?"

"As far as I know, yes," she said, sticking her tongue out at him.

She moved over to the coffee table as he sealed up the bags and snuffed the candle with her palm, plunging the cabin into semi darkness. The sound of one of the Tumblers' massive engines as it pulled up had them grabbing up their gear and heading for the door. She looked back at him and smiled as she watched him reset the alarm system and follow her. Oh yeah, she was just as game for this as he was. Too much time being cooped up in the small cottage safe house had them both restless, though they had found very...interesting ways to amuse themselves, but not knowing the situation they were going to be walking into just made them edgy.

"Yo! Starboy, Shadow, hows it hangin'?" Rock asked as they stepped out into the blistering cold.

"Its about time you showed up, oh Great One," Maia said with a soft chuckle. "We almost had to wait."

Angel laughed at Rock's slightly pouting face as he tossed their gear to Lal, who added it to the pile of duffel bags in the cargo hold. He grabbed Maia around her waist and pulled her into the ATV with him, grinning at her little squeak of surprise. Turnabout was fair play, as far as he was concerned. He set her gently down in one of the seats as Lal climbed back up front with Rock, and he sat down next to her, wrapping his arm around her shoulders. Rock sealed the hatch and climbed behind the wheel. Maia leaned into Angel and smiled at the couple in the front.

"That would be Bazooka's fault," Rock said as he turned the Tumbler around and headed for Wolf's. "She couldn't find her toys."

"Well, its your fault for not telling me you put it in here," Lal pouted, thumping Rocks seat with her foot.

Angel shook his head and Maia just laughed. "What were you looking for, Bazooka," he asked.

"My bazooka." Both Angel and Maia face palmed.
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Chapter 4 coming soon! >^.^<

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Aote shook his head and Maia just laughed. "What were you looking for, Bazooka," he asked.

"My bazooka." Both Aote and Maia face palmed.


Don't know why, but I got a good laugh out of the image this put in my head.

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Hahaha!

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Love it haha especially the last bit :P great story maiaaaaa~