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Yeah, since there bas a draw between highschool and post apocaliptic story, here it goes, not all the people will appear now.

*Story Start*

I jolted awake when I heard the alarms, everything was too dark and couldn't really recall any event or war yet, however, it was obvious that something must had happened in the city.

The first thing that crossed through my mind when I transitioned from being asleep to being awake was where my gun was, after finishing preparing myself I head out of the building just see a turmoil on the hall.



"It seems that foreigners from MF got into our cities to spoil our goods and steal most of our ammunition and food, students of the Military Academy are being separated into squads to confrot these intruders," the headmaster of the dorms said, I think his name was Trebor, not too tall but neither too short, intermediate with short and dark hair and quite an aggresive face, though he was always polite despite the rudeness some student have.



"Do we choose or Squad or that decision is up to you?" I glared at the person who said that, she was a girl, she was quite...happy and animated, taking into account that its 3am in the morning, also she seemed to have some kind of flashy fetish, since from time to time she moved her body in a way that allowed people to see their panties without effort.



"No, we decide the teams depending of personality, abilities and experience, usually to make the squads balanced, now all of you should check their cellphones, all of you received a location, go there, find your teammates, and investigate that zone, if you find suspicious people report it to us." Damn, can't I have a fucking day off? I checked my cellphone, just to see that my location was the Potato hell, at least its not so far away, Potato Hell is actually a place in which we store most of our weapons, ammunition and vehicles, we call it like that because, well, its a long story, for another day.

As I reached my location I got to see 3 figures, one of them was a quite handsome man, light brown eyes, tall, and brown hair, seemed to be very serious, at his side, reading a book, was a man with mid heigh and glasses, didn't seem to have any special abilities, but the noticeable thing was the large sniper he had on his back, damn, I hate campers.
The last one was a woman, quite mature if you allow me to say, with nice curves, though...her perverted face scared me, also the fact that she was reading an S&M Yaoi manga, better ignore the last one.

"So, are we all here?" Asked the handsome man, now he started making the kumagawa misogi usual stand. "Im Jabberwocky, people usually calls me Jabber, Im a martial artist, nice to meet you all" he indicated, none of us answered, while we were in an awkward silence, the woman stopped reading.

"Yo! Im Ellie, my focus is on armed combat" she assured as she showing her dual knives "hope you fuckers don't get in my way" giving us a smirk while she kept on reading her porn or whatever it was, her face was...agehao, eugh.

As I noticed that the silent man in glasses didn't seemed to be interested in presenting himself, I started thinking in what I was specialized exactly, since I never really mastered anything specific.

"Im thearux, I guess right now Im specialized with guns" assured them with a smile, while I took my Desert Eagle modified to shoot 3 concutives shots, though it was Illegal before "that" happened, no one declared it as Illegal in our current situation.

Jabber grabbed my shoulder, and with a serious face looking directly at my eyes, which made me blush, pointed at the top of the rooftop, just to indicate 2 men with masks.

Before we could react the silent guy took his sniper and started shooting at the figures, though they avoided most of the bullets, it was surprising the accuracy of the boy, since we should aknowledge that these intruders must be experienced in the first place to surpass our vigilance in the borders of the city. "Murdath, Sniper, lets have them dancing shall we?" the boy said, though when I saw the figures, I made a smirk, Murdath had hit them on their hands on purpose, so they couldn't use their weapons, guess I will have some fun tonight...

*Scene Break*

"Why can't I take a shit in peace? Now I need to run around the whole dorm to pick fucking toilet paper!" Bottlebert wasn't special, he always appeared in the worst moments, and never really put his heart into anything unless he gets paid later, be it money, objects or sex, lets say that he is a mercenary student. He honestly never saw it coming...

Edited by thearux, 14 July 2012 - 03:19 PM.


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Im aware how short this chapter was, I will try to make them larger, any critize is welcome.
Second chapter in few hours with luck.

Edited by thearux, 15 July 2012 - 07:40 PM.


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nice~ so far only Ellie-Chan appers with three guys.... Thearux-kun.I hope you will put some more girl in there in story ~ . xD Bottle-kun appears randomly.But it is really an nice start. I am also the first one to reply for some reason... o.o....

so this story is base on an setting in Military Academy.With the battle/conflict between MF and Batoto. Is this the first chapter? May you label the chapters so it may not get confusing as scenes change~^-^~. I will be on the lookout for more of your story~

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I will try to include titles then, yes bottlebert sitution will be further explained in the next chapter, obviously more girls will be added.
Im thinking of including TVtropes too.

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hey dearux-papa ~hugs father-in-law~
I really like it XD nice choice btw... school life with action!!
I assume the happy-animated girl is lally-chan? and Desert Eagle (googled it) is so cool...
looking forward to the next chapter!!

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her perverted face scared me


LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

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Rob's character is lulzy. I hope he turns out to be like a surprise hero or smth XD great job so far, thearux!

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Chapter 2: Up to Eleven

In the middle of the night a young man was running in the middle of the campus with quite a deseperate face, "Damnit" the boy snorted, when he reached the door of his bedroom a knife flew right next to his head, "Well, I already shaved myself in the morning, but thanks for the reminder!" bottlebert said, seeing the figure now approaching from the left side in the corner of the corridor, a little smirk appeared in bottlebert face after rocognizing her.

"Damnit Wanderous, can't I pick a goddamnt toiler paper? Im kinda driping down here!" the desesperate man said, instantly after that he opened the door, and in a hurry opened one of his drawers to pick a roll of toiler paper.

"Sigh, I just wanted to say that trebor ordered us to form a squad, and seems that you and I are in one, though I find it weird that its only a 2 people team, seems that some spies got into the city." the woman said, she is quite tall, with short hair and quite adjusted clothes, not the most beautiful woman in the world, but quite nice.

"Its just that? Man so disappointing, I wanted to read some trap yaoi porn, damnit, unless you can provide me with enough material to do so, since you are flatchested an all!" the sexually unsatisfied man said, while laughing hysterically.
The woman seemed oblivious to the weird flirting, though she seemed to have certain...aggresive tendencies towards the man, since she kept on punching him while they walked towards the graveyard. However, from one moment to another an annoying sound started, "What is this 'beep' thi-" Bottlebert was not lucky, at all.

Bottlebert body exploded into pieces, literally, Wanderous made a quick faint instantly after she heard the sound. she was a mine tracker after all. "Great, I lost another one, I should remember where do I put the mines, damnit", Wanderous quickly took the arm of Bottlebert that semed to have fallen onto her arm and threw it into the graveyard, activating another mine and blowing up all the graveyard, which was around a city block size, and luckily few spies died in the process, "Well, at least I have an excuse, hahaha..haha." Wanderous said while running away from the crater she made.

Time passed, and after half an hour or little less Bottlebert extremeties and organs started to regenerate themselves, "Well, that was exciting, though I really dislike when I lose the arm which I use for...personal activies" Bottlebert shrugged and started walking into the crater, "Damn if that girl isn't explosive! Maybe I should blackmail her, and then...", couldn't finish his sentence due to receiving a bullet right through his head.

The boy in glasses panicked when he found bottlebert body in the crater, "My bad, I thought that he was one of those masked dudes" Murdath said, not really giving a fuck, he took a bubblegum and started cleaning his Rifle, it was an Istigal anti-material Rifle, modified for consecutive shots and to stand a bigger ammuniton.

"Dude I thought you were a pro, but you just are a trigger happy motherfucker, when I first saw I thought that 'oh he is so quiet and reserved, he must be like yuki from suzumiya haruhi, all badass in that tiny body' badass my ass, go to a doctor for god sake, or better yet, go to a psychologist!" Thearux grunted, facepalming while he did so, Thearux started walking towards bottlebert 'supposed' dead body. "Dude he lacks an arm, how the fuck did you not notice that?"

"Dude I don't look men private parts, what kind of homo are you?" Murdath said with a giggle.

"My god, you are worst than Jabber" Thearux Grunted, after he started analizing bottlebert dead body, he heard a metalic sound, and he noticed that the bullet had fallen from the man skull.

"My head aches now, thanks." Bottlebert said sarcastically, "And my arm was vaporized, that flat chested, she owns me her right arm...for sexual purposes, hihihi!" Bottlebert started to laugh hysterically.

"Honestly I can't get surprised anymore, trigger happy Murdath, aparent high regenerative human Bottlebert and Air user Jabber" Thearux sighted at the amount of freaks around him. "Lets go back, and find...something on Bottlebert arm".

"No need to worry, actually my arm will grow back in few hours, but I need to go back fast so I can get my free handjob!" Bottlebert chirped happily. Thearux exchanged some glances between Murdath and him.

"You and Murdath go back to report...well only Murdath can report what did we do, you go back and...do whatever the fuck you want, you scare the shit out of me" Thearux grunted, Bottlebert, with a huge grin on his face took his ear and threw it to thearux, though that provoked thearux to shot to it and giving another headshot to Bottlebert.

"Damnit, I need to stop doing that" Thearux said, "Murdath do you mind taking him to the infirmary?"

"Yeah, yeah, whatever you want" Murdath snorted, taking bottlebert body with him. Thearux took his phone and send a message to an unknown person.

"So, we are alone now, come out now." Pointing the gun to the tree near the crater he started shooting, a figured jumped out behind the tree, appearing behind the gunman himself.

"Dude can't I take a piss alone? We can do something when we go back, no need to be bitchy about it" Jabber said with an angry voice, "Jeeze Leweez! What is that!?" Jabber screamed while pointing towards a burned piece of meat.

"I guess its bottlebert arm, dude is disgusting beyond Triple H level" Thearux said, with a puzzled look, "Also my reason to call you wasn't that, or not only that, we need to get going, we already did our part, and I need to eat something".

"Whatever you say" Jabber said while putting an arm over thearux shoulder, walking towards the school grounds.

*Scene Break*

"Do a barrel roll! Rocki chan!" a young man screamed, while avoiding knives and bullets and...blood? It wasn't surprising for Ocranill to use game quotes or any type of quotes in really serious or dangerous moments, though he was a funny guy overall, though he is indecisive. Pointing his dual A-91 modified with a higher caliber, less ammunition, and to be able to shoot material bullets.

Pointing his machineguns to the spies, which never expressed any kind of emotion, they were like robots, unaffected by pain or suffering, started to shoot ice and fire bullets concecutively, thats why the dual machineguns, freezing and melting everything at contact.

"Stop with your game quotes, you won't get my heart saying that~" The animated girl said, she had the perfect little sister appearence, with long brown hair, with twintails using Tekagi-shukos, modified with a special variation of diamond to slice almost everything. Moving his tekagis faster than the eye can see she cut the floor under her and threw them as bullets, though the spies seemed stubborn enough to avoid most of them, until one of them received an ice bullet that got her leg, and before the other one could react her head was gone, those rock-like bullets are fearful stuff.

P.S: Characters will appear slowly, Im not into making this quick, since I will spend a lot of time with this fic.

Edited by thearux, 15 July 2012 - 10:30 PM.


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I will be using Hidan no Aria division of Highschool, do not worry, only that will be taken into account, nothing more.
This was kinda long, and not that funny.


Chapter 3: Berserk Button

The female spy fell to the floor, a great amount of blood rapidly started to leave her body, her neck open showing the inside of the irritated esophagus, her arms shaked a little before her whole body stopped moving. The male spy, for the first time, showed an emotion: rage. With a deep and hard scream he took the sword in his back, seemed to be a copy of Skofnung.

"This is what you guys are going to face, my orders were to not attract attention, and to not talk to anyone, however, now its another thing, you took my partner, and now Im going to take your lives, or at least your virginity sunshine." The spy winked to rockinangel, she shrugged.

After the speech the spy disappeared, only to surprise Ocraniil with a roundhouse kick to his ribs, barely avoiding it, but not after losing one of his weapons, he jumped backwards and started shooting the spy, though seemed futile, since Skofnung seems to negate supernatural effects on objects, his fire bullets were just normal bullets against him, so he simply had to deflect them with his sword, ricocheting them and directing them towards rockiNangeL.

RockiNangeL, using her diamond tekagi-shukos, ricochetted her bullets against the spy, making the air betweem them in an never ending exchange of bullets, at first there were few of them, however, each second more and more bullets started to be between them, with a surprising reacting speed, neither of them seemed to stop being able to ricochet the bullets, destroying the corridor during the incredible exchange happened.

Unexpectedly one of the bullets hit on Ocraniil leg, provoking him to fall into his knee, and receiving another ricochet bullet towards his left arm, which was the one with the A-91.
Rocki, after noticing this went into his care and started ricocheting the current bullets, most of them started hitting walls instead of just keeping ricocheting, until no more bullets were between the spy and her.

The spy, noticing her fast breathing, said "Whats the matter, feeling a little tired? Don't worry, this will take a minute!" the spy took a flash bomb and threw it between them, while both of the student were blinded, he took this opportunity to finish them all, though he had the same luck as bottlebert, bad luck.
Just before he could slice rocki arm in two a chakram cut his right arm, provoking him to scream of pain, losing his sword and trying to stop his blood loss.

"Can you please stop the noise? I can barely can barely hear my girlfriend moan while we do it, and its been a really, really annoying night." the chakram user said, seems to be quite young, and despite his current angry attitude, Dara was lovey dovey with his girlfriend all the time, he is quite innocent in general, sometimes oblivious to the situation and serious most of the time, even if someone says a joke, he might take it seriously.

Dara run towards the spy, though he picked up his gun from his jacket and started shooting dara, Dara evaded them with ease, and crushed the spy skull with the chakram, multiple times until the brain was clearly visible, showing the hemorrages provoked by the smashes. "Well thats a turn off" said dara, while kicking the dead body away.

"Hey Hey now, we got it under control mister deus ex machina" said Ocraniil, while rocki helped him to stand up and to pick up his weapons. "Though we are grateful for your support, Im afraid we have to report things to our superiors, we leave the cleaning of this to you~" whats the last thing Ocra said after rocki picked him up, with unreal strength, and run towards the infirmary.

"Kid these days, irresponsible and full of hormones, and I have to clean their mess, sigh, sorry darling I gotta clean this before meeting up with you" grunted Dara while going to the janitor room to pick up cleaning objects.

*Scene Break*

"Getting headshot'd twice, being blow into pieces and lose my arm in one night wasn't all that bad!" said Bottlebert while drinking coffee in his bed in the infirmary.
"Say whatever you want, but the fact that I had to clean your body of the amount of blood why your arm didn't regenerated was disgusting" said the male Nurse, Powha was quite emotionless most of the time, though he expressed his opinions openly, it was really weird to see him making a reaction against something, despite being disgusting, sexy or any kind of thing.

"And Im not going to give you a handjob, I had enough problems for blowing up the graveyard" said Wanderous in a really angry voice, while sitting next to him.

"Blah Blah Blah, can I get something to eat? Like Mcdonalds or something, getting blown into pieces made me hungry" said Bottlebert, while smirking.

"Can you take this seriously? I can't belive we are partners, though it kinda make sense, since Im an especialist with bombs, and you an immortal dumb dude, I wouldn't be able to kill you with my bombs, so we are pretty much compatible, I wonder if regenerating is the only thing you are good for" said wonderous.

"Well, Im good at sex." Said bottlebert with a smirk.

"Sigh, just shut up and I will call for Pizza delivery" said Wonderous.

*Scene Break*

A huge amount of student were waiting in the hall, seems that the headmaster of the dorms and the President of the city were going to give a speech to us, I wonder, what will happen to the citizens? Nevermind, "Citizens" are the same as "Soldiers" nowadays, after the World War III and the abuse of biological weapons and atomic bombs most of the countries and people were anihilated, together with a lot of habitable places and food resources, special cities were made to take care of the refugees from different countries, training them, and teaching team different types of combat, the biological weapons and atomic bombs provoked various kind of mutation, be them good or bad, some of them received unusal powers, whereas other suffered severe mutations that caused them to die after few days, some of them grew a third arm, while others bodies self destructed themselves.

Nowadays different cities fight against each other for power, food, resources in general, and women. Yes women are important, if you want the human race to survive, females are needed, they are the ones that give life, and as such are important "goods" which its quite irritating when I hear that term for them.

The President came to the hall, Grumpy was a quite tall man, maybe not in a good shape or with a nice appearence, but he had this chivalrious attitude and friendly attitude towards most of the people, however, as the president, he was always involved with these "exchanges of goods", which wasn't nice from my point of view.

"Student of the Batoto Military Academy, its been said that Mangafox declared war to our nation, even if it was not directly, the spies are the main reason to consider it as a fact, the war won't be starting until the next conflict, be alert! The next time something like this happens, we won't hold back, and we will eliminate those who oppose us!" students started to applause at the declaration, indeed, it wasn't incorrect, though being at the defensive is good, its better to be the one who attacks to take control of the Battle.

"Grumpy, may I complain about your sudden statement?" I said, I can't belive how stupid I was, talking back to the president.
Students glared at me, some with interest, and some with confusion, the President was surprised at my request.

"Go ahead, whats your name youngster?" Grumpy asked.

"Thearux, a second year student from the Assault division" yes, there are different divisions in the highschool, Assault is generally referred at those students whose main focus was close to combat and usage of close combat weapons and handguns.
Snipe is the division which focus on large range assistance with rifles and long range weapons.
Lezzad is focused on making intelligence reports of criminals or different organizations, also focused on making strategies.
Dagula is focused on the interrogation of criminals or spies, in this case, Dagulas will take care of the spies that end up alive during this situation.
Inquesta are focused on investigation and using detective skill and reasoning skill to use the information.
Repier are focused on searching proof via science or other method of a crime scene.
Amdo is in charge of suplying and modifiying and mantaining our equipment, Im quite fond of my Amdo favorite girl, Seeyou is quite charming, and if it wasn't for the fact that she had someone else in mind, I would have hit on her, her ability with modifying and even creating new weapons is outstanding.
Logi is in charge of the vehicles, people focused on logi are important, since they tend to know how to drive any kind of vehicle.
Connect is in charge of providing informatio via communication.
Informa is in charge of compiling and sorting information using information procession equipment.
Medica are in charge of providing medical care during a mission or during the battlegrounds.
SPD is in charge of teaching the usage of supernatural powers of certain people who mutated due to the exposition to biological or atomic weapons.
Also students can be in more than 1 division, though Im not too fond of it, Im also in Logi division, but its something I do not reveal much, for the fact that people tend to ask us to drive when we go out to drink.

"In my opinion taking the lead of the war is of utmost importance, having control of the battle is crucial for the war" I said coldly, few second passed with an awkward silence, until Grumpy, with a loud laugh stopped the awkward silence, making the situation even more awkward.

"Hahaha boy you have a point! Still, we need to make preparations before actual battle, thats one of the reasons why making the first attack is most likely impossible, or better said, disadvantageous for us" Grumply said, "with that said, you are all dismissed, today will be a free day for all students." with that said, he left the hall, and most of the students retired to their own rooms, while I went to the cafeteria to get something to eat...tomorrow will be an enjoyable day for sure.

Edited by thearux, 16 July 2012 - 02:21 AM.


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I come back and there is already a chapter 3.
My reaction: :D

So this chapter sets the stage for the conflict, okay.

Edit: Problem solved. :)

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Ah you are right, thanks, i was too focused I made that mistake.
Yes, this chapter was kinda more of an explanation and introduccion.

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If you are typing something up and keep having great ideas I understand it can be easy to get completely engrossed in the story and forget about any slight mistakes.

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"Well, Im good at sex." Said bottlebert with a smirk.


looooooooooooooool

the divisions are interesting, would you put up some sort of chart of how we're divided? :P

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I'm reading this at work. People are wondering what the hell I'm giggling at.

Also I freaking love my special ability. I have a character of my own that can regenerate like that as well.

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In a future I will make a recolection of all the division, weapons and powers of each characters

Chapter 4 What Do You Mean, It's Not Henious?

I entered the Cafeteria, luckily there were almost no students there, so I could pick up my food, (Hambrguers) relatively easy, after choosing my meal I sat on a table near the door, just because I like to be alone when I eat.
In the blink of an eye a woman sat in front of me, it was Ellie, the same scary female from the other day, her changes of attitudes scare the shit out of me, but she looks as a nice girl though.

"I found one of the masked ones, don't worry I didn't kill him yet, we need to interrogate him after all~!" said Ellie, sometimes I ask myself who is really sane in this world, or Im the insane one, or Im just around insane people.

"Thanks for that, Murdath let the other one escape, instead he shot another student to-the-face, Im seriously asking why are we a squad, I think there are more compatible people out there." I grunted, eating my hamburger and french fries, now that I think about it the Cafeteria started filling itself with students, and it was only 7am in the morning, I guess people really can't sleep with the adrenaline in their bodies.

"Mou, aren't you happy that you have me in your squad?" she blinked at me, sometimes I ask myself whether I should kill her now, or just take her seriously once and see her reaction, and I opted for the second one.

"You are right, why don't we go somewhere private~?" I said, winking her back, which caused a weird reaction on her, a blush appeared on her face, and she started to stutter. Hook, line and sinker bitch!

"W-w-what are you talking abou-" she couldn't finish her sentence when another man behind her appeared.
"Yes what the fuck are you talking about moron? She is my girl!" a young man which was slightly shorter than Ellie and me appeared, seemed to be the aggresive type, I should honestly start avoiding these kind of situations. Honestly its just a joke, what kind of dumbass thinks Im taking this seriously? It looks like some kind of Felony Misdemeanor or something.

"I was joking, take it easy, she was joking too, I have no interest in her whatsoever" I grunted, ready to pick my Desert Eagle.

"Yeah sure, thats why you were together in the Cafeteria now." He said, I think his name was wEr4, honestly I can't say he is violent, even if he misunderstood the situation I never really saw him fighting before, though I could be mistaken.

"Hey darling, he was trying to pick me up and ravish me later~" Goddamnit woman, Im going to tear you apart!

And with that said, I lost my hamburguer, wEr4 kicked the table and took his knuckles, kunckles? Against a gun? This is hilarious!
And I ate my words, a second later I felt like a car hit my stomach and send me flying to the wall, so thats his trick, who needs guns when you can use your punchs to send air punches to your enemy, so unfair, Im a normal person damnit!

"God I just wanted to eat my sandwich, why people escalate a single joke!" I screamed, my body hurted as hell, and wEr4 was unaffected by it, it seemed that he wasn't the type to react much, though he kept on sending those punch like hits to me, I wonder how much is its range? I started running and getting away of him, avoiding his "shots", he made sonicbooms each time he moved his arms, thats sick, also the wall is full of punch-like holes, Im not gonna pay for that.

In the blink of an eye a figured appeared and started hitting wEr4 for good, seeing his movements was impossible for me, after few seconds wEr4 fell to the floor, blood going out of his mouth. "Im sick of this! Can't you have a normal life for once dude!" Jabber said, while having a sandwich on his hand, thought he lost it a second later due to Ellie cuting it in half, he was lucky enough to use his wind barrier to avoid getting cut his hand.

"Hey Hey, I admit it was my fault, but no need to go sucky ass and attack by surprise!" She grunted angry, "Im gonna kick your ass and make porn of your desfiugred body" that gave me the chills. This is getting ugly. But then I noticed our surrounding, students already started fighting each other, I guess its the fault of the adrenaline "Im getting out of here" I said.

"Not so fast!"

*Scene Break*

"Lets go to the Cafeteria, Im starving! Too much 'action' for a night!" Lalmirch said, she was a cheerful go-happy-girl, with her beautiful long blue hair and her eternal smirk on her face, carring her modified nodachi, which instead of only having the blade, it had hidden compartments which had hidden guns, she is from Amdo and Assault after all, her ability with the sword is splendid.

"Of course, this shit its getting me tired" Firefly said, he was an Archer, unusual for an archer to be at school, taking into account the massive amount of handguns and other weapons that most of the student have, but his bows are more special, each of them had a different effect, adding his own vector power, he could change the direction of his bows in mid air, making the "can't miss" bows, though his power was only limited to his own bows, he has a good reputation overall, being a Lezzad and Assault has its advantages.

When they oppened the Cafetieria a man hitted firefly by accident, and taking into account firefly violent attitude, he took the man arms and stopped him, "Not so fast!" said Firefly, though he received a knife to the arm a second later, he screamed and left the man arm.

"Oops! My hand slipped" Said Ellie, not noticing the sapphire haired girl cut Ellie hand. "Goddamnit! What the hell is wrong with you!?" screamed Ellie in pain.

"You were trying to hit on him didn't you!? He is mine, MINE MINE!" okay...escalation is an ugly game, and now I can say it by experience, who would have known that a single joke could provoke a fucking battle royal! With a loud laugh Lalmirch took Ellie hair and was prepared to slice her troat, when Firefly took her arm and said "I want a sandwich, and Im not interested in any other woman, so would you be so kind to stop scarying the shit out of everyone and for the love of god stop laughing?" said Firefly, taking the knife out of his arm.

LalMirch, with a huge grin on his face took firefly arm and when towards the buffet section, seriously after that every student stopped fighting, and most of them run as fast as they could away from the Cafeteria, also wEr4 took Ellie to the Infirmary,I really didn't notice him leaving, though I wouldn't be surprised, since he made those sonicbooms with incredibly ease.
Only Jabber, Lalmirch, Firefly and me stayed in the Cafeteria.

"That was a pretty smooth flying Jabber,I guess I should be thankful" I said to Jabber, with a small grin on my face.
"Sorry to Jet, but Im in a hurry pal." Said Jabber, taking my cigarrettes, slapping my ass and leaving the place, god at least he could be more reserved about that. "Sorry about that Firefly, things escalated a little bit" I said, with a wry smile.

"Don't worry about it, Ellie is always like that, we are on the same class and she is always flirting with most of the guys, though he stopped doing that with me since LalMirch planted a bomb on her room blowing up half of the building" Holy fuck, better leave the fuck out of here, though Lalmirch seemed so innocent she was a hardcore Yandere.

"Sigh, Grumply and Trebor are gonna kill me" I grunted, picking up another hamburguer, indeed, its going to be a long day...

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since LalMirch planted a bomb on her room blowing up half of the building" Holy fuck, better leave the fuck out of here, though Lalmirch seemed so innocent she was a hardcore Yandere.

LMFAO i love it. good job~

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Chapter 5: Body Horror


Well, at least I didn't get expelled, though cleaning and reparing the whole dinning room and the Cafeteria is too harsh for only one person, why me? Only because Ellie lost a hand doesn't mean that she shouldn't clean! Or that wEr4 had broken bones in his whole body! Though I don't see the problem, since thanks to the technology nowadays and a lot of medical treatment one can "recreate" part of the human body, but its limited, its impossible to recreate a brain with all the person memories or the heart, if someone creates a brain utilizing someone's DNA it may be the same person, however, all his memories will not be existent, and most probably all the knowledge of the person will be lost too.


Anyways, while I was repairing the holes in the wall a young man touched my head with a cold object, I looked backwards and took the Coke from his hand.

"Hooo, dara its been a while, I thought that you were all lovey dovey with your waifu" I said, with a smirk on my face, while I was painting the walls.


"Yeah, until I got cockblocked by the scream of a spy and the usual game quotes of that gamer dude" said Dara, while sitting on a chair and putting his legs on a table, playing with his cellphone.


"And why did the all mighty Dara chan came for?" I said in a sarcastic tone, which made Dara to snort something.


"Nothing much, my girl disappeared after I went back to her bedroom, so I had nothing better to do, I saw you going to the director office so I kinda knew that you fucked up earlier, there were a lot of rumors about a Captain falcon whose punches were as fast as sound, a tranquil fury guy who owned the Captain falcon, something about a girl called Yuno cutting the hand of another slutty girl hand...heck, there is even a doujin about it!" said dara while laughing, Yuno? I thought that she was LalMirch.


Dara gave to me his cellphone and showed me some drawings, a guy introducing his hand into captain falcon...eugh my god! Fucking fangirls! And whats this girl doing? whipping the other submissive girl while screaming some domatrix things...yeah, people here are not sane.


"Thanks god no one said anything about me" I said, with a smile.


"Actually, people just took you as a pushover, heh, uif they knew what are you capable of." Said Dara, yeah we were friends back before the war occured, usually we spent time playing football or training martial arts, seemed that it came handy in the end.


"Well, thats better for me, Im not interested in attracting attention, so, what do we do now? I painted all the walls already, and it needs around a day to be finished, wanna go for a football match?"


"if you insist" said Dara, while saying some kind of dirty jokes while they walked away.


*Scene Break*


"So, you said that you don't want your modified A-91? Why? I made really good adjustment with those ones" Said Seeyou while eating a lolipop, due to being one of the best Amdo student in the campus, she received 2 rooms in the dorms, of course, students do not have the obligation to live in dorms, but some of them feel better in them than being outside.

Seeyou workshop wasn't small at all, containing a lot of boxes with different weapons and ammunition, adding a lot of shelves with different parts of weapons.


"I feel that they are too heavy for me, my mobility was drastically reduced against the spy we fought, and now my arm and leg are injured, I would like to request pistols instead of machineguns, honestly those are less heavy and are easier to use" said Ocraniil, showing two boxes to Seeyou, he picked a Mateba Autorevolver and a Desert Eagle.


"Hmm Desert Eagle huh, I guess I will take both of them, I suggest you to stop using machinegun and focus on these ones, in a start I never belived that you could manage those machineguns effectively, but who am I to negate money?" Said seeyou with an annoying laugh.


"Sigh, you are too eccentric, but thanks for your efforts, I suppose that I do not need to say what I want, if its possible to add more ammunition and some kind of energy reception that allows me to use my own powers into the bullets I would be grateful" said Ocraniil.


"Someone is underestimating me, haha, just go, remember, bring the money, I guess that in two days they will be ready to go" said Seeyou, Ocraniil, with a smile, left the room, and few second after he left Thearux entered with a quite an angry face.


"So nice Seeyou, did you have fun ruining my bulletproof shirt? It was sooo nice to see how it exploded randomly I tried to wash it" Grunted Thearux while looking around the workshop.


"What are you saying? I don't remember doing aaaaa~anyting to your shirt! Also I finished modifying your Bul cherokee and your Beretta 9000 S, allowing triple consecutive shots with a pointing laser and a flashlight mount. Sorry about your shirt, hilarity ensues!" said seeyou, giving the modified Weapons to Thearux. "In good time too! Someone else wanted a Desert Eagle, you poor gunman wouldn't be unique anymore!" said Seeyou with a grin on her face.


"Yeah, yeah, here is your money" Thearux gave her 515 rupees, yes Rupees is the new coin in this world, kinda like the dollar, but with Rupees, Seeyou loves money, and her modifications are expensive, but she is good at that, so non can do, also she is cute.


Thearux took the guns and was ready to leave, but she had other plans "So no goodbye kiss?" she said jokingly.

"No time for games now, I need to finish cleaning the dinning room, damn lunatics" Thearux left, leaving a happy Seeyou, she loves money.


*Scene Break*


In the Training arena a student and a teacher were sparring, one using her Caladbolg, with fast movements she started moving from one side to another, in a mockingly way, "Heh, someone doesn't focus on his duties, well, better said, focuses too much on his duties" Colour was quite a young teacher, but still older than most of the student, her great demonstration of power and grace allowed her to take a step on her career, and now she was the teacher for the assault division.


"I don't know what are you talking about, Im from the Medica department, studying the human body is important!" Said Triple H, yeah he most likely took everything as a challange, adding his superiority complex and muscle head, he was the perfect Wrestler.

In a second, he amplificated his body, increasing the muscular mass of his arms and legs, who needed weapons with an ability like that?


Even so, what he had of strength, he lacked it of speed, in a second, Colour appeared behind him kicking him with a force that sent him meters into the air, just to find that Colour was already waiting him to give the finish blow, as he reached the distance of fifty feet over the arena he received Caladbolg in a...rather inappropiate hole. Sending him fastly against the arena, destroying most of the floor.

"Man you are noobsauce, get out of here and become a familiy man!" Said Colour with a loud laugh, though Triple H didn't seem to react to her, "Muscle head is tough, I though that I used too much force, but he only broke his pelvis." she said, while picking him with one arm and walking towards the infirmary.


"She should learn that we are students, not fucking puppets" said Firefly while taking a nap on one of the bench in the arena, near him was Lalmirch reading some kind of book, while eating some chips.


"Its expected of her, in the end, she is quite young despite being a teacher, so its understandable if she gets too carried away, I thought that it was romantic!" said LalMirch, happily.


"...I need a drink" said Firefly, running away from the arena, trying to lose LalMirch, he knew he would not survive too long to tell his story to his kids.


Edited by thearux, 16 July 2012 - 05:39 PM.


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you are a very talented writer. have fun reading this.

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>.<''.... I won't do that to bottle-kun. I seem so violent o.o.....An mine tracker That is very special ~^-^~

I appear so fast in the story it kinda surprised me. There is an few minor spelling mistakes but I think people should understand when reading the surrounding context.

Really nice~ I see you switch some people around with their partners xD. Very unique~ Overall, nice description, detail. Blending in contexts and related info that connects back to the chapter title. The sentences are an bit long and the layouts of communication isn't really correct but that is okay~
I will look outlook for more of Thearux-kun's story~<3

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Damn, this is funny!

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nice dude i like my character a lot :D
who is my wife/GF in the story or will she be named later

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