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[God of LoL]

Fan Fiction. FF. Story. Mini-Story. Illegal pieces of literature that will get you sentenced to death if found out(?). All this describe Fiction, the literate side of Art.
Little stories, great stories, novels, everything is allowed to be uploaded here... As long it's TOG related.
There are some simple rules you have to follow:
Rule #1: There are no rules.
Rule #2(lol, wut?): Please keep the fictions in spoiler tags, so the management will be easier. If your story is cut down in chapters, just edit your post to add the new chapter.
Rule #3: Enjoy, so that Inori and naphack won't experience too much emotional trauma.
Rule #4: Relax. Speak for whatever you want. Be random. But do upload a fanfic while doing so.

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Why don't I do this in FanFiction.Net? I'm bored, that's that.

[mod-edit] 101010: Actually the thread and the posts in it should follow our Rules and Guidelines. Systematic disregard of these rules and guidelines will result in some kind of penalty.

Edited by 101010, 05 November 2012 - 07:47 PM.
- clarification of the rules.

[naphack]

I hate that thread name...
I'm still voting for "God of LoL's loldump"

Gonna copy/paste all my old fictions which weren't part of a chain story started by someone else in here.

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Best of Untrustworthy Room fic

Augusgus hiring an assassin to kill Viole

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After the conversation with Love, Augusgus sighed.
Really. That Love had no respect for the rules of the tower.
The test administrators have no right to interfere in the test. Even less the right to assassinate the ones they were to test.
That is... The test administrators.
"You heard, right?"
He turned hie heavy chair and faced a shady small guy who has been in the room all the time, observing the ongoing discussion between the two rankers.
"You are to eliminate this threat immediately, however there shall be no interference from our side, so let a regular do it!"
The shady one smirks and replies:
"no worries. noone will suspect a thing. He was killed over a grudge..."
*takes list of participants*
"Yeon Family, eh? There we got someone with sufficient reasons to kill him."
*smirks again*
"this is gonna be delicious."
Augusgus looks away in disgust.
"I dislike your tastes... But you always do a clean job, so I can't complain much."
shady dude gives away another creepy smirk and leaves.

WANTED: BAAM!

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Koon stands in front of a Bounty Poster.
"hm..."
*WANTED*
DEAD OR ALIVE
[Baams Badass Face]
FUG Slayer Candidate
JIU VIOLE GRACE
reward: Instant promotion to High Ranker

Koon: "Dafuq... Nice going, Baam, very nice going."
Rahel: "Did you just say something?"
Koon: "Nah was just thinking about the fastest way possible to the top but I don't think, we can do it..."

Rahel, looking at the Wanted poster: "Dafuq...? I told him a thousand times, having the hair so long and all messed up looks bad!"
Koon: "..."

Stretching Exercise

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Love, seemingly angry at Viole: "What the hell did you do to this room?"
Viole: "Stretching exercise."
Love: "... just tell me the truth. I don't buy your shit."
Viole: "Well, you gotta see, Yihwa was kinda..."
Love: "You are on first name basis with her?"
Viole blushes and nods.
Prince comes along: "Oy, FUG Bastard! Don't think, I'd forgive you only cause you saved my Yihwa! How did you get that... Thing out of her, anyway? Even after the controller died, it still wouldn't come out."
Viole: "Around that corner is some homeless dude selling Voodoo Items. I just bought some bones and some other things I needed and performed a spell to exorcise the evil."
Prince: "You can do that?"
Viole: "Yup."
Prince: "Seriously?"
Viole: "Yup."
Prince: "And it works?"
Viole: "As you can see."
Love: "If you had the ability to do so anyway... WHY THE HELL DID YOU HAVE TO DESTROY THAT ROOM?"
Viole: "Cause it was more fun this way."

Viole not a member of FUG. A story about cake.

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So the test was finally over with and he got to go to the 21th floor.
Fighting that Ranker really was rather difficult but he couldn't say a word cause his cover might have blown then.
He folded the Slayer Clothes, he wore seemingly proud during the test and turned around to Akraptor.
Viole: "Ok, dude!"
Akraptor seemed to be in a very bad mood.
Viole: "I won the bet!"
Akraptor: "tch."
Viole: "Now, take your stupid clothes back and gimme my cake."
Akraptor: "ku.. ku... ku... ku ku kukukukukuku"
Viole: "..." <- important line, as it seems
Akraptor: "fine. Actually, you did me a big favor there. here you are... Oh, wait, nevermind."
Viole: "..."
Akraptor: "you see..."
Viole: "..."
Akraptor: "The cake was a lie, fucker!"

First impression, strongest impression, a story about picking girls

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Wangnan: "No, no, Vio- ... Baam. You have to choose one of them."
And I will take the rest for me once I am the King, muthafucka!
Viole: "..."
Wangnan: "How about... You compare them? Your impressions, feelings?"
Y/Y/R/A's stares burned holes into Baams Forehead.
Wangnan: "Let's see. How about first impressions and strongest impression?"
Viole: "..."
A long break.
Viole: "Rachel... A strange thing, I never witnessed before. Seemed awfully similar to myself. Taught me, there are many like us... Couldn't really believe her."
-Silence-
Viole: "Strongest impression... Pushed me into the dark, cold water. Disbelief. Depression. Fear."
-Silence. Rachel quietly left the room without saying a single word-
Viole: "Yuri noona... Pain. A strong Kick to the face. Strongest impression: Never believed in me. Always wanted to stop the tests."
-Silence. Yuri also leaves the room-
Viole: "Androssi - Defending me for some unknown reason. Didn't really pay too much attention to her cause that girl with the familiar voice was there. Strongest impression... hm. She is a treacherous witch who won't hesitate to take on teammates if it serves her plans. Still remember when she..."
-He stopped as Androssi stood up abruptly and left the room aswell-
Viole: "Yihwa... Hm... I'd say Vanilla."
-Yeon blushed and stormed out of the room.
Viole: "Guess, that settles it. I pick Koon."

Authority. AKA killing is overrated.

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Lurker was on the floor. Being pressed down by a giant, red hand. Just what was that FUG guy?
His Shinsoo hand got crushed by an even bigger one like it was nothing.
More importantly...
Was he going to die here?
Cold sweat was all over his face as he looked up to the face of his opponent, bearing no expressions at all.
He could only guess, what he was thinking right now, but that guy didn't even seem to enjoy overpowering Lurker like that.
Viole, in a deep, hollow voice: "Remember one thing."
Lurker was frightened and relieved at the same time. So he was not gonna kill him?
Viole: "I will fail you here but it would be pointless, I could kill you but it would be pointless. So I give you seven days."
Lurker was baffled. What did that guy say right now?
Viole, like a boss: "In seven days, every single FUG member and every single person somehow associated to us will get orders to kill you on sight. So get out of the inner tower before they get YOU."
Lurker was even more frightened. His pants were somehow wet and warm but he didn't remember why.
That guy had that much authority? He was a candidate for one of the top spots in FUG but that he'd be able to do that much...
Viole shot a fine hole right through Lurkers connector and the floor below, using an immense shinsoo burst.
Viole: "Run, while you can."
As lurker was ported out, Wangnan, who has been standing awestruck in the door all the time, bursted out:
"Really? You can do that much?"
Viole: "nope, but he has no way to confirm it anyway. And if he continues climbing, I will do so, too. And the day, I become slayer will be the day, I WILL give out such an order."
Wangnan turned pale.
scary

Break the prophecy arc, a compilation of God of LoLs and naphacks combined efforts

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Making Friends //naphack

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[flashback]
Viole: "Any orders or tasks for the next test?"
Hwa Ryun: "Make some friends. Talk to people, you are always so lonely."
Viole: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "Really. There are so many nice people in this world, you should just go and meet some."
Viole: "..."
-Awkward silence-
Viole: "I will do it as always. Just go there, take the tests and leave again. No need to fret over such minor details like friends and the like."
Hwa Ryun: "Well. No matter, what you do, I foresee, you will make some friends this time."
Viole: "This damn predictions of you. I wanna see one of them actually not come true."
[/flashback]
don't help him. Don't help him. All my efforts of making Hwa Ryuns Predictions not come true will be in vain. Don't help him. don't help him.
*Wangnan starts to cry*
Viole: "Fine. I help you."
DAMN WHAT AM I DOING? I LOST THE BET AGAIN. Stupid. Stupid. And I tried so hard this time. I mean, come on. No-one would befriend a Slayer candidate. Even if it's only fake. Noone would seriously do this. And even after I acted like a jackass all day, this guy still wants me to help him?

Careful family planning //God of LoL

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He climbed with them now, and he considered them friends. All was good... Except...
That bitch was right again!
He never disliked it more when her predictions were right. She would be smug about it for weeks!
One week ago, she called and told him of her arrival their arrival. Unfortunately (for him at least), she had to mention... that?
"So, how does your alone climbing go? I have some new predictions here that I would love to see you try to break! Also, "not interested in your body" ? You were nuding her with your eyes!!!"
There was no other person in the tower that could piss him off from a phone.
-=-
Wangnan and co. could only stare at him in disbelief. You have other friends other than us?
"So... how is that... Hwa of yours?"
"..."

They never thought it was possible for Viole to frown. Not this way at least.
"She is the most annoying person in the Tower! She can see the future and boy, I want to break just one, JUST ONE OF HER PREDICTIONS!" He went on and on about every little 'shitty' situation he was put in because of her, including being chased by 400 gorillas and 12 White Steel Eels on his way back from the store. They ran out of milk again.
Of course, his describtions gave off an image of her being an old hag, carrying voodoo items around.
She was bound to be unnatural like him, right?
-=-
Screw biasm, this chick smokes!
All of them were drooling all over her, with the sole exception of Yihwa and Viole, of course.
"So, you reached the 43rd floor in just 2 years? Keep up this pace and you will break Urek's record, kid."
"..."
"So... any luck breaking my latest prediction?"
"Shut up about it, we get the point, your predictions are always right. But not for long..."
If Viole's aura could get any more vicious, it just did.
"Just talk."
She moved a little closer to him and whispered to him her next grand prediction. Viole was drinking water that moment, and unfortunately for the glass, he crushed in his hands.
He was too shocked to responde to the next of the world.
"What did you tell him?"
"Giggle... Wouldn't you like to know?"
"You will get married with Yihwa, Yuri and Androssi at the same time..."

Assassination

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Hwa Ryun:"Today, you will kill Zahard!"
Viole: "HAH I WON! THERE IS NO WAY, I COULD KILL ZAHARD ANYWAY HAHA! AT LAST A PREDICTION WHICH DIDN'T COME TRUE!"
Wangnan runs into the room: "BAAM! BAAM! LET'S PLAY BASEBALL!"
Rak jumps in: "TURTLE! COME ON!"
Koon: "Well, I guess, I will be the catcher."
Rak, almost singing: "CLEANUP BATTER, CLEANUP BATTER!"
--
Viloe: This is the one pitch, deciding everything. If I hit that one and hit it good, we won. I really need to score a home run, so I gotta hit it clean.
Ok. Here comes the ball. Rotation. Fine. Speed. Fine. Hit it like... That...
At max power!
Need a Homerun!
Homerun!
Baam hits the ball with a terrifying sound, all the players on the field fall to their knees and there is not even a trace of the ball...
except for a hole in the wall of the house across the street...
And all the houses after that one...
...And The walls of Zahards very own palace...
...And Zahards very own Body.
--
few minutes later, on the streets:
"did you hear? I heard, zahard was assassinated."
"Really? who did it?"
"no one knows, they say, a high powered gauss rifle was used."
"thats some tough shit."
"yes. it went straight through 30 walls."
--
Baam: "Damn this shit. I quit! There is no way, I can keep up with this bullshit. So ridiculous."
Hwa Ryun: "On your way down to floor one to escape your destiny, you are gonna pass the 134th floors test"
Baam: "the fuck? you mad?"
Hwa Ryun: "You should know by now..."

Long broken prediction and twisted words //God of LoL

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Viole couldn't be happier.
Yes, after many eons of trying, he finally broke one of her predictions! He almost threw a party that day.
-=-
Agero: "Uh... Wang? What's with the funny face?"
Wangnan: "Vi- Baam... I just saw him... smiling."
Agero: "So? He does that all the time."
Wangnan stared holes through Agero. Since when?!?
Agero: "Just because you miss the chance to see it doesn't mean it's false."
Wangnan: "Any idea why he smiles right now?"
Agero: "Why don't you ask him yourself?"
Wangnan thought about it for a moment and found out it was not such a bad idea after all.
What's the worst thing that could happen?
-=-
Vio- Baam (even I get it wrong some times) was humming a vivid tune, while getting tonight's dinner ready; Chicken -marmelade covered- with potatoes in the oven, extra crispy. He didn't fail to notice Wangnan and Agero, but didn't stop humming nonetheless.
Wangnan: "Uuh.. V-Baam? Why are you so... happy?"
Baam suddenly stopped and looked at him.
Worst thing happened! I'm dead!
Fortunately, all he did was smile like a madman.
Baam: "Because I finally did it!!"
Wangnan: "Did what? Killed Zahard?! The last time it was a dummy!"
Agero: "Conquered the Tower?!"
Rak(?): "Get your wives pregnant?!"
The other three stared at him. He just popped out of nowhere and considering his size, that's no walk to the park.
Rak: "What? He did get married."
Baam: "Well, no no and... no, as far as I know at least. Wait have I?"
They shook their heads.
Baam: "Oh, okay then. Well, the reason why I'm happy today is because I have fulfilled my yearlong cause!"
Agero stared blankly at him, before patting his shoulder.
He got worried for his best man's mental health.
Agero: "Baam... I don't want to disappoint you, but Rachel is in the next room, playing with Akryung and Horyang a game of Tower-o-poly... She's been living here with us the last few eons, Baam..."
Baam: "What are you- Not that cause, you fool, the other one!"
Agero couldn't follow his friend at all.
Agero: "Which is?"
Baam: "Break one of Hwa's predictions!"
It was big news indeed.
Agero/Rak/Wangnan: "Really?!? Which one?!?"
Baam: "The marriage one!"
'She predicted that far?!?'
Baam: "She predicted that I would marry Yuri, Yihwa and Androssi, right?"
Agero: "...You are married to them, Baam..."
Baam : "Yes, but I'm also married with her and March!"
Agero and the other two thought of it for a moment. In a way, yes, he did break her prediction. In another sense, he didn't though. Which one was it?!?
They left the room, leaving Baam finish his work, while thinking over this hard riddle. Before closing the door behind him, Agero had just to ask.
Agero: "Hey, Baam."
Baam: "Yes?"
Agero: "Have you been hanging out with my father lately?"
Baam: "No. Why?"
Agero: "Nevermind..."
Somewhere not so far away...
Evan: "You enjoy to see him struggle, don't you?"
Hwa: "You should have done it with Yuri. It's exceptionally funny."
Evan: "But did you really not predict your marriage? I doubt it, your predictions are 99% right, with 1% of doubt just for the amusement of it."
Hwa: "That's for me to know and him to find out. Anyway, come. The chicken will be ready any minute now."
Evan: "Chicken with marmelade is not considered tasty."
Hwa: "First try it, then talk."

To kill or not to kill

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Wangnan stood above Lurker who was cowering on the floor.
"I will not kill you."
Lurker: "what?"
"I said, I will not kill you, motherfucker! Just wait till the Father of Prince hears about this, you will die then anyway."
Prince, entering the room stained in blood: "No."
Wangnan: "..?"
Prince: "No more killing, no more fighting! Would it not be better, if anyone came along with eachother?"
Wangnan: "Dude are you serious? This guy fucking planned on murdering you!"
Prince: "But killing is wrong! Don't you get it? all these bad deeds happening everywhere in the tower bring so much sadness to everyone. Why can't we live in peace and let everyone else live in peace too?"
Horyang, entering the room: "I think, Rappdevil hit a bad spot..."

the perfect tool

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Hwa Ryun: "Don't you dare going around and helping random people again."
Viole: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "You are bringing shame upon the name of FUG."
Viole: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "Got it? this is your last chance. If you end up helping some strangers again, we will throw you out."
Viole: "... Not like I desperately wanted to be a part of your group anyway."
Hwa Ryun, getting closer to Viole: "So you didn't? It sounded differently 5 Years ago."
Viole: "Yes, but..."
Hwa Ryun: "How do you ever plan on repaying me for my lost eye, if not by working for me now?"
Viole, looking down to the floor: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "You understand me now? Don't team up with anyone, don't help anyone, just crush them all and bring glory to the name of FUG."
Viole, mumbling: "Don't see anything glorious in that..."
Hwa Ryun, her left eye shifting dangerously close to her eyepatch: "..."
Viole: "Ok, ok. I got it. Fail them all, crush them all, don't team up, don't spare anyone and don't help anyone."
Hwa Ryun: "Ok. Glad, we settled this one straight."
*Viole leaves the room*
Hwa Ryun, to herself: "Oh, he is starting to hate me. He's gonna refine his hatred more and more, sealing his emotions bit by bit. The day will come when he kills me. It will undoubtedly come in two years. And when he's done that, he will be perfect. That's gonna be the finishing touch for the tool of my revenge. Kukukukukukuku. Just you wait, Zahard, my disciple is gonna come for your neck soon enough."

One eyed stalker girl

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Hwa Ryun: "So, you want me to take off this Eyepatch and get a Glass Eye? Ain't gonna happen."
Baam: "But..."
Hwa Ryun: "Look. Baam. This Eyepatch reminds me of the happiest day in my life."
Baam: "...the fuck?"
Hwa Ryun: "The moment, your shinsoo touched me, I fell in love..."
Baam, taking two steps away, disgusted: "So you are into that kind of stuff?"
Hwa Ryun, with an innocent smile: "Yes. And what about it?"
Baam: "It's just so... Wrong..."
Hwa Ryun: *chuckle* "Baam... If there is one thing, the Tower teaches us, it's everything is better with shinsoo, right?" *Reaches hand out*
Baam: "STAY AWAY FROM ME!"
Hwa Ryun: "Why should I? In the end, we were destined for each other, Baam. You simply belong to me."
Hwa Ryun, as Baam tries to escape: "No matter, where you go, we are destined for eachother, I will find you."
After this conversation, Baam ran away from the creepy Hwa Ryun but no matter, where he went, she would follow him. Stalk him. And harass, beat up or even kill every single person he'd have friendly contact with.
In order to escape the mad stalker and also avoid to cause people problems by having Hwa Ryun go after them, he joined FUG and took on a new name, in an attempt to conceal his identity.
Working by himself, he came pretty far, but this time was different...
This Wangnan guy really needed help. But...
*flashback of Hwa Ryun with the creepy smile*
If he'd help him and Hwa Ryun found out, she'd probably kill the poor guy for "bothering" "her" Baam.
Just what was he supposed to do?

"Excuse me, I'm looking for an irregular named Baam."

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Viole: "So anyway, whom are you looking for?"
Horyang: "An irregular named 25th Baam."
Viole: "You won't be able to find him. 25th Baam is a person which doesn't exist anymore."
Horyang: "Your wording is kinda weird, man. I also know, he's supposed to have died 5 years ago."
Viole: "Anyway, if I were you, I'd stop searching for him."
Horyang: "..."
Hwa Ryun comes running: "Baam! Baam! So you made it! I'm so glad to see you."
Horyang, slowly looking from Hwa Ryun to Viole: "Baam?"
Viole: "Well, it's a nickname... A nickname."
Horyang: "So you are the irregular who is said to have died 5 years ago? I had no id-" *thud*
Hwa Ryun had taken out her staff and clubbed him down mercilessly.
Hwa Ryun: "He forgot now, right?"

Edited by naphack, 22 June 2012 - 10:04 PM.

[God of LoL]

Hey, wanna chain-fic?

On a different thread.

[Necrokey]

hey 'God of LoL', this is off topic but what manga or webcomic is your profile picture from??

[God of LoL]

TOG. Search the maplestoryXtower of god one-shot.

Now, time for fictions... Please.

[naphack]

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43rd Floor. The Floor of the dead guardian.
Viole: "So this is the 43rd Floor... It feels... strange."
Wangnan: "I don't feel anything."
Yihwa: "Me neither."
Horyang: "Don't feel anything either... Probably because he is a wave controller."
Hwa Ryun: "But I don't feel anything either. And I am a guide."
Yihwa: "Viole... You are sure, it's not you?"
Hwa Ryun: "Well, it could also be, he feels it, because he is an irregular..."
Wangnan: "WHAT?"
*Hwa Ryun takes her staff and knocks out everyone with a quick spin.*
Hwa Ryun, looking at the bloodstained Staff: "I hope, they forgot now."
Viole: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "Woah, this bleeding is rather severe."
Viole: "If you don't want to hurt them, please keep your friggin mouth shut. That's the fifth time already. At some point, they will take irreversible brain damage."
Hwa Ryun: "Sorry. It just keeps slipping out."
Viole: "..."

Muh my first idea was having Viole find out about the lazy guardian on floor 43 who faked his death so he can sleep but meh... This one was more fun

Edited by naphack, 20 June 2012 - 09:48 PM.

[Arie Hon]

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43rd Floor. The Floor of the dead guardian.
Viole: "So this is the 43rd Floor... It feels... strange."
Wangnan: "I don't feel anything."
Yihwa: "Me neither."
Horyang: "Don't feel anything either... Probably because he is a wave controller."
Hwa Ryun: "But I don't feel anything either. And I am a guide."
Yihwa: "Viole... You are sure, it's not you?"
Hwa Ryun: "Well, it could also be, he feels it, because he is an irregular..."
Wangnan: "WHAT?"
*Hwa Ryun takes her staff and knocks out everyone with a quick spin.*
Hwa Ryun, looking at the bloodstained Staff: "I hope, they forgot now."
Viole: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "Woah, this bleeding is rather severe."
Viole: "If you don't want to hurt them, please keep your friggin mouth shut. That's the fifth time already. At some point, they will take irreversible brain damage."
Hwa Ryun: "Sorry. It just keeps slipping out."
Viole: "..."

Muh my first idea was having Viole find out about the lazy guardian on floor 43 who faked his death so he can sleep but meh... This one was more fun

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Hwa Ryun:Be carefull , We're entering the 43rd floor.
Wangnan: I've heard about it , a lawless area like hell.
Prince: What ? Are you scared ?
Horyang: -STARES-
------ Teleports In-----
Everyone: WHAT THE HELL IS THIS ?!
Viole: ......
Miseng: Lets go on the ferris wheel !
Viole + Wangnan:
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[God of LoL]

Hell of the 43rd Floor- Prologue.

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The Hell of the 43^rd Floor.
It was unavoidable for them not to reach the 43^rd floor. A floor any man in his right mind would try to skip and stay away from. It was Hell on Earth. A lawless floor were law and order gave their place in crime and chaos. Kill or be killed. That was the rule of that place.
It all started when Enryu, the Red Tower, did the unthinkable; Kill a Guardian.
Some thought of it as impossible. Others as the product of storytelling and alcohol. Sooner or later though, they all found out that all that was told was nothing more than the truth.
You may have heard of Shinsou, the miraculous substance that replaces air in the Tower and has no specific property. It can do anything and everything the user wants, as long the Guardian permits it. Now, imagine what happens when this miraculous substance is locked and can’t be used by the public?
Everything collapses in a matter of moments. The usage of Shinsou, which gave the weak the chance to face the strong and the strong a chance to face the stronger, was ‘dead’. Conflict over control of the areas, death, robberies, rape, all were a part of the everyday life of a 43^rd floor regular.
Because of it, Zahard and the ten heads of the Great Families tried two things. Either bring order back to the chaotic floor or find a way for regulars to skip it. They failed at both.
That’s when the inhabitants of the floor took action. They established their own system, which in its own paradoxical way, brought a sense of order in the floor.
It was technically a race. The regulars had to race their way from the starting area to a safety area and from there to another, to another, to another, until they reach the last one, which was where the portal for the next floor lied. The safe areas, which were more like cities than areas, were zones where conflict was not prohibited, but not caused nonetheless. It was like a silent agreement between the test takers. If any of them wanted to live another day, it would be best to have some place to feel safe. Or at least safer.
They knew that what they would face would be beyond their wildest imaginations. What they didn’t know was that this was the floor were the darkest past of their darkest teammate would unfold.
Shall we untangle the story of a regular named Jyu Viole Grace? Or maybe the story of an Irregular named Twenty Fifth Baam? Both ends come from the same string, so why don’t start with both?
End of Prologue.

Edited by God of LoL, 21 June 2012 - 08:22 PM.

[naphack]

Spoiler

After Hwa Ryun patched the injureg guys up, they really didn't remember a thing.
Horyang: "What happened?"
Viole: "This Floor feels... strange. It is as if the Shinsoo itself is... sleeping..."
Hwa Ryun: "Sleeping?"
Horyang: "Can you just fucking tell me, why my head is all bandaged up and hurts like hell?"
Hwa Ryun: "Sorry. Can't."
Akraptor: "Damn, just what are you pulling, this is like the fifth time, my head feels split up like that."
Viole, lifting a hand: "shhhh"
Yihwa: "?"
Viole: "Gotta concentrate. Something is strange here."
Hwa Ryun: "Well, I told you. The Guardian on this floor got killed by Enryu just for the fun of it. To be honest, Enryu behaves way more like a proper Irregular than you."
Horyang: "what?"
*thud*
Viole: "One day, I will simply sew your mouth shut so you can't blurt out secret information just like that. Just like the time, you leaked out Luslecs secret plans to a RED member and I had to fucking go after him and eliminate him."
Hwa Ryun: "Sorry."
Horyang, standing up: "I passed out? this injury seems more severe than I thought. Shit."
Viole: "Well Hwa Ryun, about what you said before..."
Hwa Ryun: "About you not being as much of an ir..."
*thud*
Horyang: "Viole, what are you doing to your Girlfriend?"
Viole: "Saving your head from being clobbered again."
Horyang: "..."
Hwa Ryun, standing up slowly: "So where did we stop?"
Viole: "This Floor is strange."
Hwa Ryun: "Jup, cause the guardian got killed by Enryu."
Viole: "That is what is strange."
Hwa Ryun: "?"
Viole, pulling out massive amounts of shinsoo: "Let me show you."
Horyang: "What the hell are you doing? Want to split the entire floor?"
Viole: "Shut up and watch."
*Viole opens a giant gateway and pulls a Guardian through it. He seems pretty much alive but sleeping.*
Guardian: "zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. zzzzzzzzz. zzzzzzzzz... Hmm?"
Viole: "Oy, dude, shouldn't you be dead?"
Guardian: "How do you kill that, which has no life?"
Viole: "So you were only recovering from the damage, the fight with Enryu has done?"
Guardian: "Enryu? Fight? Oh yes, there was that guy. Told him, I'd rather sleep than take care of some random idiots. He replied, he could arrange stuff, so I could sleep... Guess, he was rather creative there."
Viole: "So you faked your death for all this time?"
Guardian: "I slept, ok?"
Viole: "..."
Hwa Ryun: "And you took this chance to cancel out all your contracts with Zahard so they really believe, you are dead, didn't you?"
Guardian: "Aww shit man. You got me."
Hwa Ryun: "Just imagine we lose a word about this to someone."
Guardian: "Oy, you are a guide, aren't you?"
Hwa Ryun: "What about it?"
Guardian: "You don't tell anyone and I will give you a special Guide contract."
Hwa Ryun: "Sounds reasonable. What kind of Contract?"
Guardian: "Well, I heard, guides are weak in combat, so how about it? I will give you a cockroach extermination contract in exchange for your silence."
Viole: "Deal."
Hwa Ryun: "Jup. At last I can kill them myselves."
Wangnan: "WHAT? You wanna sell a secret of such a magnitude, it could shatter the whole tower for something like THAT?"
Hwa Ryun: "Yes. Why not?"
Guardian: "Fine. And now let me sleep. Here is your contract."
little bit later:
Horyang: "Never thought, Enryu lied."
Viole: "Oy Hwa Ryun, what was this before about me not being a proper irregular?"
Hwa Ryun: "Well, I didn't know - OH SNAP!"
Y/W/A/H: "WHAT? VIOLE IS AN IRREGULAR?"
*thu-thu-thud*
Hwa Ryun: "... Woah. That Contract is very effective against Wangnan... oO"

or something like that

Edited by naphack, 21 June 2012 - 08:49 PM.

[God of LoL]

Dude, I will add that up in the story! No matter what!!!

The hitting part at least.

Also, you made a slight mistake. You meant combat, not contract... I think...

[naphack]

Wanna see 43rd's reaction to this

[43rdFloorGuardian]

Spoiler

With the guardian having decided once again to... strategically conserve it's energy... the rag tag group continued on their way, knowing full well that attempting to rouse the sleeping behemoth would be a wasted effort.

Wangnan: I can't believe we didn't ask it to teleport us to the next floor!
Hwa Ryun: There were more important things to take care of.

Akraptor nods his head firmly in agreement, until Horyang looks his way - whereupon his nod becomes hanging his head, shaking it slightly in disbelief as he sighs in exasperation.

Horyang: ...
Akraptor: Idiot woman! Cockroaches are nothing to be wary of. Wasting our chance on something like that....

Hwa shifts her hand on her staff and begins stalking towards Akraptor, until Viole stops then turns to Horyang, his long black hair swaying ever so slightly.

Viole: Stop. Shoe.
Horyang: Hmmn? Oh? What is all this?
Hwa Ryun: Not again?!

A small host of caterpillars, centipedes, lady bugs and jumping insects makes their way through a tiny crevice on the ground that Horyang was about to step on with his oversized shoes.

Miseng: Wow, so many different types!
Prince: Woah! So nasty!
Yihwa: (Hmph! Look in the mirror you bug.)

Akraptor meanwhile had darted on ahead, around the crevice and towards Viole; he looked back over his shoulder, smiling condescendingly as he shrugged.

Akraptor: Don't we have better things to do than to worry about itty bitty little bugs?
Goseng: You look a little green there Silverfish. Oho~ what's this?

She covers her mouth partially as she smirks widely, she reaches down and picks up a twig, placing it near the column of insects long enough for four of the hundred legged monstrosities to cling to the end as she lifted it free and began walking ever so slowly towards him.

Akraptor: Shu- Shut up woman! Get away from me.

Horyang immediately began glowering at Akraptor who meets his eyes and the two lock gazes, neither willing to concede an inch, though Akraptor's face had begun sweating with concentration from the effort of ignoring Goseng. The tense moment was broken as what had at first been a barely audible noise in the background grew louder, Hwa Ryun's evil laughter - enough to make the hair on the back of the regulars' necks stand on end; no longer absorbed in watching the insects, Miseng moved to put herself behind Goseng, clutching the taller girl's skirts.

Hwa Ryun: Kukukukukukukukuku Back again huh? This time I don't have anything to worry about!

She prepared her staff with a flourish, the glow of shinsoo surrounding the end with a vast rotating cloud of shinsoo as she activated the contract, the air itself roaring with power. Viole's eyes narrowed and he looked at the concentration of Shinsoo carefully, his lips moving ever so slightly as he concentrated before a look of understanding came to his face.

Hwa Ryun: Die!!!

She swung the staff at the crevice, with all her might, the shinsoo light expanding to envelop the entire party - everything was obscured, from Akraptor's delighted expression to Goseng's surprise was lost amidst the blue ball of energy; Viole spun around, hunkering down, his black hair whipping through the air even Hwa's cry echoed and the expanding ball of energy engulfed him.

- - - - -

Moments passed as the dust cleared enough for everyone to see, Hwa Ryun's mad laughter continued, eclipsing the sound of falling debris.

Hwa Ryun: Finally... Victory is mine!!!
Akraptor: Hooray! Great work!

Akraptor ran over to the red haired guide and grabbed her hand, enthusiastically shaking it; so happy was she that she had defeated her most hated enemy that she allowed it in good humour. Miseng however had begun tearing up and Goseng was busy consoling the much shorter girl. Horyang stood dumbfounded as he looked at the ruinous crater in the earth near his feet.

Horyang: Ummmn... Miss Ryun?
Hwa Ryun: Hahaha Yes?
Horyang: They all seem to be fine.
All: ......
Akraptor: What!? Don't lie to me you damn teddy!

Akraptor stalked his way to the edge of the crater, only to be shoved out of Hwa's way as she arrived moments later, the silver haired man falling down into the hole that had been created revealing innumerable tiny insects.

Goseng: Well, they aren't cockroaches after all.

Hwa collapsed to her knees sobbing as far below Akraptor continued to scream in panic and revulsion.

Hwa Ryun: But it worked so well against Wangnan I thought...
Goseng: There, there...

Goseng smoothed the crying red haired girl's head while Miseng looked out over the edge towards Akraptor as she snapped some pictures with her phone.

Goseng: Well, he IS part cockroach after all. It is understandable it would have worked well against him.
Wangnan: Hey! I'm not-

Wangnan was cut off as Teddy pushed him over the edge too, not wanting the loud mouthed regular to interfere. A second screaming man joined the first and Miseng giggled as she continued taking pictures. Yihwa had done her best to ignore the bugs, other than roasting those who had got too close to her (such as Prince, who lay blackened to one side with a caterpillar crawling up his nose), but now her curiosity managed to overpower her distaste.

Yihwa: Why were you so concerned about the cockroaches anyway? Surely you are strong enough that you could-

She made a flicking movement with one hand, as if to twirl a staff around.

Hwa Ryun: He- he keeps them as pets and sometimes they get out! And other bugs just follow us around all the time like they want to be his friends too!

The girls all turn to Viole, still crouched on the ground, hunkering around a small plastic bug container to make sure his precious friends were okay, he tapped on the side gently and smiled fondly as the black carapaces shifted in response.

Viole: Thank goodness you are all okay.

He spoke gently, happily, his lilting tone causing the cockroaches to scurry about and press themselves against the sides.

Viole: I don't know what I would have done without you by my side... you are the only ones I can trust...
Goseng: That's... kinda creepy.

Edited by 43rdFloorGuardian, 22 June 2012 - 02:25 AM.

[Hendzu]

I agree with Goseng

[naphack]

Oh and @ opening post: Please do not capitalize the first letter of my nick.
I hate it.

[Arie Hon]

Oh and @ opening post: Please do not capitalize the first letter of my nick. I hate it.

Aye Captain !.

[naphack]

edited a "best of untrustworthy room fics" in my second post, containing numerous of my fics as well as 2 of God of LoL which were part of a chain fic.

Had to leave out some masterpieces tho for not being related to untrustworthy room

[God of LoL]

Your titles are a killer!

MOTHER FUGGING-
I can't figure out how I will write down chapter 1!

[naphack]

Chapter 1 - the arrival

obviously.

[God of LoL]

It's not that kind of theme and I won't spoil the contents.

[naphack]

Spoiler

"Yo. Baam."*Breathes*
Viole: "who are you?"
"Just a passerby."*Breathes*
Viole: "wait. more importantly. How do you know my name? And what is that stupid black helmet?"
"hohoho. Of course I know your name."*Breathes*
Viole: "...The fuck? Explain yourself."
*Breathes* "I said, of course I know your name, -" *breathes* "- cause I am the one who named you." *breathes*
Viole: "... Wearing all black, a black helmet and having such a strange voice, breathing with such a crazy sound. You are some strange fella for sure."
*Breathes* "Strange fellow? Viole. I... am... your father!" *breathes*
Viole: "..."
*Breathes*
Viole: "..."
*Breathes*
Viole: "How long yre you gonna stare at me like that?"
*Breathes* "Join the dark side."
Viole: "what?"
*Breathes* "Join the dark side."
Viole: "... I am a member of FUG already. Want me to become any darker than that?"
*Breathes* "Your concepts of the dark side are amusing." *Breathes*
Viole: "..."
*Breathes* "Look. You think, this pitiful FUG rebellion will stand a chance against the empire?" *Breathes*
Viole: "Yes, I do."
*Breathes* "The Emperor does not share your optimistic appraisal of the situation." *Breathes*
Viole: "So? Well, I'm gonna blast away Zahards head, so step aside please." *moves past Vader*
*Breathes* "The Emperor has been expecting you. Indeed, you are powerfull." *Breathes*
Viole, looking around: "This is..."
Imperator Zahard, sitting on a throne: "Welcome, young Chestnut. I have been expecting you."
Viole looks in disbelief on the face of the person before him. Wrinkles was the wrong word. it had so many wrinkles, it looked hardly human anymore. And on top of these wrinkly wrinkles, there were even more wrinkles.
So that was the face of an evil which transcended the centuries?
Imperator Zahard: "Your feeble skills are no match for my powers of the dark s-" *coughs up blood*
Darth Vader: "Master. This is bad for your heart."
Viole: "..."
Imperator Zahard: "Everything that has transpired has done so according to my design. Your f-" *coughs up blood*
Viole: "You are gravely mistaken. You won't convert me, as you did my father."
Imperator Zahard: "Well. Maybe, that is true..." *coughs up blood* "I leave... The rest... to..." *dies*
Viole: "...That was anticlimatic."
Vader: *Breathes* "Yes... Kinda." *Breathes*
Viole: "So I did climb this shitty tower to see an old man die?"
Vader: "It's your fault for being so slow."
Viole: "Well. Screw this tower, I'm going back to my cave." *leaves*
Vader: *Breathes* "He is gone."
Zahard, coming out behind a curtain: "Good."

Edited by naphack, 27 June 2012 - 06:41 AM.