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girls come and go but brothers we remain forever....dough i loved her too i respected you more.....dough she was pretty but still not enough to break are bond.... bros before hoe's forever and ever.....

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how do you worm a heart which is frozen.... it doesn't sound..... nor has no beat....blood won't pump through only sadness and sorrowfulness.... my hearth is no longer whole... only shattered in half's which can't be fix..... frozen forever will i ever be free...

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Your shallow heart
no sparks
no glows
it only takes
until only bitterness comes forth.
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what is a person who has no emotions... has nothing....doesn't understand the meaning of life nor understands his reasons for living......Wat is there left wen your just an empty shell....can you still call that living.... can you still call yourself human... you feel non-existent and feel like time has stop moving...... your just a statue for display....but deep down in the endless darkness there's a small fragile light inside you.....and wen you take it you finally realize.... there is a reason for living and that reason is your fear of dying... the fear of knowing there is still something in this world waiting for you! guy's never give up no matter how many failures you experience in life get back up and move forward!!!!!

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Sip in the cup of memories
leave behind the first and last taste of bitterness
quell the inner turmoil to soothe the heart's sourness
savour every drop for they too will bring sweetness
raise for the living
pour for the dead
beyond the circular rim
lies the lingering scent of reminiscence
to all forgotten
to all forgiven
extending my cup to you
I await for your visit

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u made me into this kind of person who keeps on falling in love with you...
thoughts of u flooding my brain and fills up my heart til its overflowing...
i cant stop it nor will i intend stop it..
it's sweet yet its bitter....
but i welcome it..
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You hide..........
............I'll seek
On that bright day start east head west
Running upslope on those ever green
Chasing away those puffy clouds
soft laugher blends with chirps, chirrs and ribbits
Golden gleams of light
casting shadows as we walking on ledges
Paint runs filling the skies
soon to greet the glowing wonders of many
white on black
we watched
as they shy away from one another
As time moves foward
We shall move back
because in our endless days
You'll seek
and I'll hide

Edited by 「黑風影」, 22 January 2012 - 10:30 AM.


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I need it.
Closer, closer.
My hands around your neck,
Accepting every call and beck.
Closer, closer.
Approaching my lips,
My hands dips.
Oh, the bliss.
The world lit.

The cool touch,
In your quivering clutch.
The sensation down
My throat, oh, drown
In lost pleasure
Of such a simple measure.

Please don't get me wrong.
For this is only just a song
Of an action so unappreciated
The gratefulness of it depreciated
Of such act
That the fact
We need water on a hot summer day.

What crude thing were you thinking of, eh?

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u made me into this kind of person who keeps on falling in love with you...
thoughts of u flooding my brain and fills up my heart til its overflowing...
i cant stop it nor will i intend stop it..
it's sweet yet its bitter....
but i welcome it..
. :batoto_021:

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just like newton's first law of motion
i was in a state of stable emotion
but then you came and exerted an external force
and before i knew it, love has taken it's course

now my heart beats faster than the speed of light
i can't stop thinking about you, day and night
but we're too different, like x and y
no matter what i do, i still can't catch your eye

... aaand that's all i can come up with XD
.... (it's not done yet, lol)

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i never thought to fall in love with you...
you're the opposite of me...
yet we defy our birth rights...
and choose to be together...

i just wonder how long we could make...
the stress of wanting us separate...
How long this bond would take...
the pressure of authority wanting us break..

i decided to fight for you...
i'm hoping you would too...
i will wage a battle...
until they will rattle...

loving you this much..
made me into such...
heroine of my own story...
and dare to win for my glory...




*sooooo amateurish poem... but hey.. its mine.. kukukukuku

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iv been with girl after girl... but none seem to have the beauty and aroma you have... the smell of a flower so rare it only grows once very hundred years....the smell of the forbidden fruit which is so sweet it gives me ecstasy....the aurora of a goddess so pure it spreads beauty and life to all things around you.... a smile which makes even the heavens smile upon her.....a voice so fragile and gentle ...it takes all evil away from a man....thus her beauty has no limits ....the god's placed her in the garden of Eden.... where she awaits for her knight in shining armor...which is me! ill be any girl knight in shining armor long as she pretty and worth rescuing!

Edited by Angel., 17 January 2012 - 12:18 AM.


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iv been with girl after girl... but none seem to have the beauty and aroma you have... the smell of a flower so rare it only grows once very hundred years....the smell of the forbidden fruit which is so sweet it gives me ecstasy....the aurora of a goddess so pure it spreads beauty and life to all things around you.... a smile which makes even the heavens smile upon her.....a voice so fragile and gentle ...it takes all evil away from a man....thus her beauty has no limits ....the god's placed her in the garden of Eden.... where she awaits for her knight in shining armor...which is me! ill be any girl knight in shining armor long as she pretty and worth rescuing!


then u won't be my knight cause i'm an old ugly hag...hehehe

hmmm... lols....

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iv been with girl after girl... but none seem to have the beauty and aroma you have... the smell of a flower so rare it only grows once very hundred years....the smell of the forbidden fruit which is so sweet it gives me ecstasy....the aurora of a goddess so pure it spreads beauty and life to all things around you.... a smile which makes even the heavens smile upon her.....a voice so fragile and gentle ...it takes all evil away from a man....thus her beauty has no limits ....the god's placed her in the garden of Eden.... where she awaits for her knight in shining armor...which is me! ill be any girl knight in shining armor long as she pretty and worth rescuing!


then u won't be my knight cause i'm an old ugly hag...hehehe

hmmm... lols....

but your my sis so of course ill rescue you!

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she passes by and screams one more
her soul glides down your inner core
clutching your spirit forevermore
wailing, swaying into her lore

---------- In vain have I struggled. It will not do. My feelings will not be repressed. You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you. ----------


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Through the entanglement of wires
Beckons a voice beyond white noise
Soundwaves beats like electric pulses
Notes echos like coloured rain
Melting my senses with your rhythmic sways
Passing physical boundary reflected in your gazes
Harmony escaping from your lips
Tracing the lights along those fingertips
Unlocking the cage to ascension
Deeper into your musical europhia
I am falling....
Yet
I cannot find my way to you
behind these screens
Forever will I be chasing your unfading melody.


Edited by 「黑風影」, 12 April 2012 - 03:07 AM.


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When you turn the page ~ what do you remember?

The sorrow and the tears ~ the joys and the laughter?

Is it the words of conversation ~ perhaps the lines crisply drawn?

The plot, color or theme? ~ The list goes on and on.

My heart is often fickle ~ My mind equally so.

But no matter what story I crave ~ I read it on Batoto.

"To have so many creative people who can tell wonderful stories is a blessing."

"Not being one of them is a curse."

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Society made me who I am today
For this reason the end brings no dismay
My choices are not truly mine
The emotions I have harbored cling to no tide
I have long forgotten myself
A conscious based off the judgment of man
Death is in the plan
But at least then, the reins return to hand

Edited by The Voice of Reason, 26 January 2012 - 05:58 AM.

I hope they understand that I really understand that they don't understand

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Through the entanglement of wires
Beckons a voice beyond white noise
Soundwaves beats like electric pulses
Notes echos like coloured rain
Melting my senses with your rhythmic sways
Passing physical boundary reflected in your gazes
Harmony escaping from your lips
Tracing the lights along those fingertips
Unlocking the cage to ascension
Deeper into your musical europhia
I am falling....
Yet
I cannot find my way to you
behind these screens
Forever will I be chase your unfading melody.

The fuck is this?

The fuck is this....T.T

Why are you so good?

I hope they understand that I really understand that they don't understand

Oh Sky.

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@ The Voice of Reason: That poem was purely out of musical inspiration. It took me awhile to piece the bits I wanted to convey so I don't know if it would totally count as Impromptu... but thanks for noticing it =). I was starting to wonder if my poems didn't resonate with anyone but I'm glad there are people that enjoyed them =D

Edited by 「黑風影」, 26 January 2012 - 07:16 AM.