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[Angelo.]

i never met a girl as sweet like melon....so sweet the air around her becomes breath taking with her beautiful scent... her hair is long and is the color of a melon more beautiful and longer then Rapunzel's hair.... her smile is so sweet it sends beatings down my chest.....her eye's are as sweet and sparkling as a jewel...and her voice is that of a fairies.... she's so sweet and beautiful yet out of my reach! i love you melon!!!

[LittleMelon18]

*double face palm*

[Angelo.]

COME ON PEOPLE WE NEED MORE POEMS.

Edited by Angel., 13 January 2012 - 03:52 AM.

[LittleMelon18]

There's nothing to lose and everything to gain
To write some poetry with very little pain!

[Autumn]

But what should I write?
Under what theme should my words unite?
Should the weather outside be my preoccupation
Or should I be all about emotion?

(and that was a lot of should^^)

[Equiliz]

What's to lose
or what's to win,
dancing
dancing
on thy swords brim.

[Autumn]

Win or lose
Two extremes
Always around
Which rarely find a common ground.

EDIT:

If walking a fine line
Requires to be agile
Dancing on it
Is even more of a daunting task.

Losing your footing
And falling
Is an all too easy thing.

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Aaaand because it's really pretty outside - I keep adding more lol - should really get back to studying

Deep down, you feel a rustling
A warm feeling
Urging you to leave the earth
To grow
So you can know
What awaits above.

And so you begin
Without knowing
A great journey

A peek above ground you finally get
And what do you see?
The sun smiling at you at you, in a corner of the sky.
And you want to reach it.

Edited by Autumn, 13 January 2012 - 11:20 AM.

[annihilator]

wow! reading your impromptu poems...
makes me want to join...
it may be difficult to make...
but i will try to create...

awts!

[Angelo.]

doesn't have to make sense sis so go for it!

[Thunder Wolf]

Lines._________________________Syllables | Rhyming scheme.

I've been rather bored as of late.__________ 8|A
An end to this boundless sea of static,______10|B
I need to escape from this fate._____________8|A
For even my writing is rhetoric.____________10|B

If only I could see,_______________________6|C
Any way out for me,_____________________ 6|C

Anything to escape this emotional state._____12|A
_________________________________________________________________________________

Also, do Haikus count?

Edited by Thunder Wolf, 13 January 2012 - 10:44 PM.

[LittleMelon18]

Yes haikus can count!

Here's a poem I wrote at 3am. I woke up randomly and had the urge to write. So, please forgive me if it's really rough.




"It's you, not me!"
It seems to be
What eyes see

from the one who accused
from the one who abused
from the one who denied

"It's you, not me!"
It seems to be
Is actually a plea

from one who is scared,
from one who is bared,
from one who is unprepared.

Is there worth
To refuse to admit that
One was not wrong?

Is there worth
To refuse to admit that
One did not make a mistake?

Is there worth
To refuse to admit that
All one truly wanted was you?

Is it worth to have
The pain, the sacrifices,
The fights, the silences, the loneliness
The sleepless nights, the constant denial
To be truly honest with oneself?

"It's me, not you."
As one goes through
With resolve anew:

I want you. I need you.
I made a mistake.
I'm sorry.

"It's me, not you."
And what I said is true.



Try to guess the theme!

Edited by LittleMelon18, 14 January 2012 - 03:13 AM.

[「黑風影」]

In the words/song of Elton John "Sorry seems to be the hardest word"

Great poem btw ^-^ I like it =D

Edited by 「黑風影」, 14 January 2012 - 03:45 AM.

[LittleMelon18]

In the words/song of John Lennon "Sorry seems to be the hardest word"

Yup, that's one of the themes! There's a few more, if you can pick them out!

EDIT:
Thank you for the compliment!

Edited by LittleMelon18, 14 January 2012 - 05:51 AM.

[「黑風影」]

Pointing fingers/ pushing blame and guilty conscious to redemption

Sorry in advance if it seems repeative ^^U that's most of the themes I got out of the poem.

[LittleMelon18]

Pointing fingers/ pushing blame and guilty conscious to redemption

Sorry in advance if it seems repeative ^^U that's most of the themes I got out of the poem.

No, not at all. It's great to hear a response from the poetry!

You're also right on those themes too!

[Angelo.]

i wish i dream t on forever and get sucked in to a manga were i can meet bamm and climb the tower or help Allen walker kill the earl....... enter soul society and become a shinigami.....visit wonderland and find my beloved Alice...... find the philosopher stone and help Alfonso...... i wish i dream on forever only to wake up and find myself in another endless dream. this one kinda sucks i think.

Edited by Angel., 14 January 2012 - 05:18 AM.

[LittleMelon18]

It doesn't matter.

Just keep the poetry coming in!

I'm out of juice so I'm thinking of something to write about...

[LittleMelon18]

Writer's block, oh, writer's block.
Seconds, minutes, hours tick by
Sensed in the mental clock.
You sigh.
In your head you frantically knock
For inspiration you can spy.


~~~~~

Another poem!




Damn damn damn damn.
Why does it feel like I've been scammed?

Bang bang bang bang
Goes my rage in a clang.

Even though I turn them away
With my earnestness, I pray

That I won't be shattered with the hurt.

Edited by LittleMelon18, 14 January 2012 - 08:54 AM.

[Angelo.]

how do you worm a heart which is frozen.... it doesn't sound..... nor has no beat....blood won't pump through only sadness and sorrowfulness.... my hearth is no longer whole... only shattered in half's which can't be fix..... frozen forever will i ever be free...