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I didn't want to stop and write post for each of the interesting stuff I wanted to talk about as I read this. So I just kept those pages open as I marathon read it till latest. And haven't gotten around to writting this for a few days, I hope I can remember everything I wanted to say about X pages.

 

I really found some of this comic really funny, even though it obviously isn't meant to a comedy.

 

ch1 p 4-6

https://vatoto.com/reader#3b71d89a428b565c_4

 

Looking at it latter I didn't find it nearly as funny, but that bottom frame of 6 really made me laugh the first time I read it.  Am I the only one who cracked up over this?

 

ch6 p17

https://vatoto.com/reader#087271780fb3d2fd_17

 

     OK so I didn't entirely get why they were shocked that he accepted food offered to him. I guess the idea is that eating it off her fork was way too intimate somehow, and he did it so casually, is the idea, I think. I don't see it that way.  But their reactions still cracked me up good. "Just kidding?" "KYA!" LOL "What the heck, Machida-kun!"

 

ch6 p21

https://vatoto.com/reader#087271780fb3d2fd_21

 

What is going on with Inohara's face and and the "uh uh uh" "oh"? Is she mocking the other girl for acting cutesy? 

 

ch13 p22

https://vatoto.com/reader#2b88c5fcbd6624dd_22

 

Love at first sight, LOL

 

ch13 p25

https://vatoto.com/reader#2b88c5fcbd6624dd_25

 

"This person is a girl."  hehehe With such keen insight, I see why you would want to become a scientist. And so you know, this is sarcasm, I'm surprised you manage to dress yourself in the morning. 

 

ch 12 p11-24

https://vatoto.com/reader#4a66b8f07740e948_8

 

I wouldn't go as far as to say this sad story of betrayal and someone being hurt for doing the right thing, is unbelievable, but it is a little confusing. 

 

     So did Maki want to be Inohara friend in the first place?  Was Maki just lying through her teeth? If so, why? She foresaw saw all this happening and just wanted to be with the "in" girls? That is some incredible levels of foresight, convincing lying, and machiavelliism right there. And if Inoharas fake friends were looking down on Maki so much, how come they trade Inoharas in for her the next day, just needed anyone who would mindlessly obey them, doesn't matter who?

 

 

     I really like the story with the picture being shown and Inohara crying, that comes full circle around ch12 p42, I don't feel like trying to find the spot where it starts. To start with someone elses perspective, and have it come full circle like that so seamlessly, really well done!

 

ch14 p20 

      I liked the story that comes to its climax point right about here. Normally a protagonist would reluctantly stand up to the jerk trying to use his love interest in such a way .  Well he does stand up, but non-confrontational like, and says I'd do the same thing for you. Really sells the concept of Machida loving everyone.

Edited by truepurple, 31 August 2017 - 10:56 PM.