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[Original Comic] The Crawling City

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R. Merryweather

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Created a comic and put it here on Bato.to. Would love to hear what you guys think!

 

http://vatoto.com/comic/_/sp/the-crawling-city-r20183



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Little Yuri

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Art is great, keep it up!


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Emerald39

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Dude, that is an awesome premise! I really love the Alice-in-Wonderland-like vibe that it gives off, and the art style is just beautiful. I am genuinely jealous of the art style, because I am terrible with art; I can write the most fantastical stories, but I am only decent with sketching or painting of any kind. Do you happen to have any advice on that?



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My gut feeling when I read through this is that the strips feel like they never quite connect with each other; it feels like it's really jumping quickly between topics. Though I suppose you're going for a 4koma style of comic, in which that would make more sense.

That said, I concur with the others - the setting and artstyle are absolutely gorgeous. Definitely some of the better stuff I've seen on here, regarding self-published series. (Don't tell anyone else I said that.) I also like the strange little details you add in the backgrounds sometimes, like the scene in that house in the Halloween strip. Always funny to scan every panel to find little Easter eggs to enjoy.

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