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[Original Story] Samurai NOT


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Hi everyone.
I'm rewriting an old story and I'd like your opinion
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Samurai NOT
By his master's request, Tadayoshi destroyed the life he had. Now he looks for the reason.
 
Genre: Action, Historical, Comedy
 
Table of Content.
Chapter 1
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Edited by phmmoura, 09 October 2016 - 04:04 PM.

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 2]

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 3

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 4

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 5
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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 6 

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 7
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Thanks for reading Samurai NOT Part 1
 
A long time ago, this was supposed to be just a short story, but it expanded in my head and now it's  much more than just a short story.
 
Part 2 is written, but it will take a while for me to translate into English
 
See you in Part 2

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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After a long time, I finally start bringing Samurai NOT part 2
Hope you enjoy it
 
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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.

 

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Chapter 09

 

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Ever since the school term began, Ryuu's life became hell. All because two idiots decided he was a fun target. 
And now the boy was alone, with no one to turn to, not even his friends or family.

"Shit... Shit..." the boy whispered, smashing his fists on the ground.
Even if his voice was low, even from that distance, the transfer student could feel. Ryuu's voice was full of rage and frustration.
This might be interesting, the transfer student thought, drinking the rest of his juice.