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[truepurple]

This story would have been better if Kou hadn't the infinite space ability. It's nice and convenient for the author to the point of the author forgetting Kou can't speak and treats the words zhe prints out as spoken out loud. But it misses some of the extra depth that could have been plumbed if Kou was more limited.

 

Would be fun to read about Kou trying to make words on the ground etc in various forms and the difficulty explaining Kous situation to others would be interesting too.

 

How would the safe papers break in bit have been done. Well for one he could still see the magic guarding stuff, and also have been able to undo it. Could reach into the safes mechanic and have undone the lock, and for actually bringing with the papers, carrying it in a ghostly hand. Or someone having gone in through a window as a helper. What to do with the papers after? Get the papers in a box to keep out the elements, then carry it with a ghost hand to a hiding place.

 

And this infinite space crap, not the first time I've seen it, and really the biggest stretch of them all.

 

What do you folks think, agree or disagree and why?

 

Of course it would also just be nice if the comic or the novel were to progress a bit faster

Edited by truepurple, 30 June 2016 - 06:27 PM.