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TSI Red Saga Indie

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Rommel

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guys with chapter 5 volume 1 comes to an end,and now you guys have the basic knowledge of this world,in the next volumes i want to focus on character development,but there is much to this universe, the samurais have a whole culture,their loyalty to their families and the God Emperor(yes they have a God Emperor),but i want to know what you guys think,i want to know how to get better, do you think i should simplify the drawing to make faster chapters,maybe do it in manga classic black and white, im also going to make simpler chapters that will happen in-between volumes,they will be canon but won´t be necessary to progress through the comic,tell what you think give me your opinions,share your thoughts on volume 1 and how to improve or just hate on it curse me until the heat death of the universe.

 

THX!! and a kiss on your asses. 


Edited by Rommel, 13 June 2016 - 09:52 PM.


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Fireball36

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Hi Rommel, I'm impressed at your efforts on this webtoon - you put in a lot of detail on some of your pictures!  I like the color and your drawing is better than ONE's.  ;)    

Yes, you have spelling mistakes but that is understandable when English is not your first language.  (But please use "came" as past tense for "come" - not "camed")

I would suggest using smaller pictures on a page as I feel there is a lot of wasted space.  I don't know how much time you would save by making the art black and white instead of color but color helps set a mood much better.  I would recommend keeping the picture in color.   Then when I see all that white space on the page, I know it is snow and not grass, for example.  :huh: 

For art recommendations - try to avoid using rulers except for the border lines.  Free hand sketches have more energy.  Your art will improve as you practice it more.  Good luck!