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Soul Anomaly

Shounen Action Harem Romance Comedy

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Well I guess I'll put up a bit of my own original story.

 

Quick summary: This is a story about Yuichi Shiro a narcissistic idiot. Whom by a twist of fate is knocked down in a traffic accident (mostly caused by his own stupidity). His soul ends up in Purgatory, a place on the outskirts of the Underworld. There, he is greeted by a reaper, whom he must defeat in a game to win back his life. He succeeds.

 

His new life will be one filled with many conflicts, but this self proclaimed genius is determined to embrace it.

 

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Cheat your way back into life and live it to its fullest.

My Web Novel, you'll laugh.

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Well here is chapter 2 please beware slight reference to nudity.

 

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Edited by cud-chi, 12 March 2016 - 07:08 PM.

Cheat your way back into life and live it to its fullest.

My Web Novel, you'll laugh.

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I absolutely love it; the structuring's a little weird to me, but I'm sure that was a more deliberate choice. The character is relatable, the ideas are very organised and I can feel genuine compassion for what's happened to Yuichi. I can't wait to see what develops from this; keep it up!



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And here is chapter 3

 

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Cheat your way back into life and live it to its fullest.

My Web Novel, you'll laugh.

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Here is chapter 4

 

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Cheat your way back into life and live it to its fullest.

My Web Novel, you'll laugh.

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