The MC is to unlikeable, it's not the plain face, or the submissive character, not even the low self-esteem, it's the ego-centric that I hate. She basically let everything run it's course just because she was embarrassed. It's either one of the most delusional MC out there, or it's just bad writing. Even a little kid would know to seek authority when there is a problem, but NO, not her, she would fix everything on her own, even if there is a chance the whole country will burn, as long as she doesn't have to be embarrassed. The way I see it, if the writer wrote it like this, s/he can basically writes anything she want without any regard to planning or logic and just push it on us with little or no effort, just like the start of this story.
I know that these kind of stories is popular now, and I know that it's mainly marketed to teenagers, but that doesn't means that the author can write anything. There is a lot of examples of LN that have very decent structure and mature story telling and characters, not just some wish-fulfilling story that feeds the author fantasies. So once again, I'm just gonna say that it's bad writing.
Edited by Hexxus, 20 July 2015 - 09:38 AM.