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Pacing: Set up for failure?


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Dijon

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Is it just me or is the pacing ridiculously fast? The girl is a typical dense manga character, but her honesty is a good selling point. And the guy clearly has lovey-dovey feelings for her. But normally this kind of stuff is revealed after a dozen chapters. How long do you all think this manga will last? I bet... around 30 chapters. I'll probably be way off, but that's my first impression. Otherwise I love this one!



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This manga is a pretty short story, actually. It has 3 chapters in total (4, if you include the Prologue/Chapter 0) so yeah, I suppose the pacing has to be a bit faster if things want to get done in only 3 chapters lol.



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Jeeze no wonder. Thanks. At least its designed to be short.



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You were right regardless, it seems... but probably not the way you meant. It went too slow for the length (or perhaps just tried to get too much done)