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[bahboh]

Guess who should have been studying for a big test but decided to translate instead. lalallalala
My translations may not be 100% accurate since I mostly learned from my parents who didn't use slang or bad words which are hard to get proper translations for from google translate,
number=panel
letters=bubbles
roman numerals=sfx/things they said outside of a bubble
raw: http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=68&weekday=fri
translation:

Spoiler

Lessa 2 ch 67

a. The resolution that I’ll never die by your hand is keeping me breathing
1.

a. !

2.

a. Whether it’s starvation or being cut into 16 pieces, I am “immortality”

i. grrrrrrrowwwlllllllll

3.

a. What…? Immortality…?

i. rooaaar

4.

a. Hehehehe

b. This soon to be dead bastard who doesn’t even recognize his own hallucination saying shit…

5.

i. roooaarrr…

6.

i. Roooaarrrr

7.

i. squirm squirm

8.

i. squirm

9.

i. Squirm

10.

a. Regeneration…?

11.

a. This isn’t a hallucination. This is my pentahorn that you so wanted to see.

12.

a. Heh--!

b. What bullshit--!! Then I’ll cut you into thousands of pieces and spread you everywhere.

13.

i. WHOOSH

14.

i. spins

15.

i. CLANGG

16.

a. …?

17.
18.

a. This…son of a bitch…

19.

a. Oh look, it’s a piece of shit.

b. Aren’t you the fastest among the inner circle?

(tn: what was it that the prev translations called ares’ inner posse?)

20.

a. If you don’t try a little harder, by your own words, like this---

21.

a. piece by piece,

i. thud

22.

a. you’ll be cut to pieces.

i. crack

23.

a. This fucker…

24.

a. No--, I’ll show you why I’m in the inner circle. For a bastard like you, one hand is no problem.

i. Slides

25.
26.
27.

i. RUMBBLEEEEE

28.
29.
30.

i. Slice slice slice

31.

i. SLASH

32.

i. BAM

33.
34.

a. Score

35.

a. For now, halves.

36.

i. grab

37.

i. crack

38.

i. flinch

b. …?

39.

a. I already told you. It’s no use.

40.

i. crunch

ii. crunch

41.

a. Apparently… I’m hungry.

i. shatter

ii. shatter

42.

i. grab

43.
44.

a. Caleb, I think I know why you grew up eating death.

45.

a. I’m actually not hungry anymore.

46.

a. I think I know why they did that too.

47.

a. Lucy, Mindy-Mindy

b. Were you guys also looking for freedom…?

48.

a. This is Gentlemen Pub! The challenge match is getting underway!!

49.

a. Although they entered as new human participants, they’ve easily winning.

i. Waaahhhhh (crowd roars)

50.

a. The two human participants facing off!! Are they going to fight?!

51.

a. Oh man… what the hell is going on. What’s with the atmosphere between those two…?!

i. Fight!

ii. Fight!

52.

a. You never imagined the chances of a human winning, right? If you had bet on those guys, it would have been the bomb, right?

b. Oh, yeah?

c. I’m jealous~ because you’re on the human’s side, you probably bet on the humans, right?

53.

a. No, I ended up betting on the big guy, Yeongchun Park…

b. !?

i. Because he seemed strong, I bet on him. Damn

c. heheh

Edited by bahboh, 23 February 2016 - 01:01 PM.

[bahboh]

Translations for ch 68

 

I decided to go with the name Reynold rather than Rainold as OGE uses since Reynold is a more well known spelling.

the korean 레이널드 in ipa would be /ɾɛinʌldɯ/ (each ipa letter is linked to the wiki page with audio clips if you're curious) which is still quite similar to (what wiki says is) the english pronunciation of Reynold /ˈrɛnəld/

 

raws: http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=69&weekday=fri

Spoiler

1.   

2.   

                                                              i.      wooosh

3.   

4.   

                                                              i.      bam

5.   

                                                              i.      flies

6.   

a.     The amazing human duo!! With one punch, they sent the two contestants flying out bounds!

7.   

a.     Just what are these bastards..

b.    Are you saying that a human can show that kind of power…?

8.   

a.     So there’s one guy left.

9.   

a.     Who’s going to take care of that?

10.                      

a.     W-wait! You idiots! What are you thinking?

                                                              i.      flinch!

b.    Didn’t I tell you? If you want to beat each other, whoever wastes their strength on me is going to lose.

11.                      

a.     Saving my strength as much as possible was my secret to winning in previous seasons.

b.    Is that so?

12.                      

                                                             i.      step

b.    Then I guess we can beat you together equally.

c.     Aren’t you a genius?

                                                             i.      step

d.    What?!!!

13.                      

a.     These bastards, treating me like a pushover?!

                                                              i.      step

b.    You don’t seem to understand what it means to be the champion of the previous season.

14.                      

a.     Yeah, come at me togeth…

15.                      

16.                      

                                                              i.      boom

17.                                

a.     Out-! It’s an out!!

                                                              i.      crumbles

b.    Going against all expectations, they’ve reduced the previous champion’s title to pieces!!

18.                      

a.     !?

19.                      

                                                             i.      whosh

b.    Who, among the remaining two will ultimately

20.                      

a.     Come out on top with the victory!

                                                              i.       pow (english onomatopoeia really needs some variety…)

21. 

                                                              i.      slides

22. 

a.     Get out of the ring while I’m being nice, Reynold.

b.    Nice~?

23.                      

a.     I was going to be nice, but it seems like I won’t be able to.

                                                              i.      wipe

24. 

a.      I still haven’t said everything.

                                                              i.      squeeze

25. 

a.      You and Ares—

26. 

a.      shouldn’t meet--!!

                                                              i.      bam

27. 

a.      Wahh?! What’s that!!

28. 

a.      Flames…?

29. 

                                                               i.      step

30. 

                                                               i.      rumble

31.    

a.      So you’re going to just let it out and show your power in front of them.

                                                               i.      roarr

32. 

a.      What, if you’re frustrated, why don’t you bring out your cute horns.

b.      You probably already know, but I’m not the old Reynold that blew up on you.

33. 

a.      It can’t be helped.

b.    Rather than throwing you out of the ring, I’ll throw you out of the 2^nd zone.

34.                      

a.     Hey you--! As long as it’s not a ‘weapon,’ it doesn’t matter, correct?!

35.                      

a.     Yes (in English)

b.    Miss Blake…! But that’s…

36.                      

a.     This game can’t end just yet.

b.    Because I’ve wagered money on them.

37.                      

a.     You hear that, Reynold?

                                                             i.      crackle

38.                      

a.     I’m no longer going to overlook this.

                                                             i.      crrraccckleee

39.                      

                                                             i.      roarrrr

40.                      

a.     ….

41.                      

a.     I’m starting to remember the past.

                                                             i.      ha

                                                           ii.      woong

42.                      

a.     The 2^nd round is tag team

                                                             i.       woong

43.                      

44.                      

                                                             i.      growl

45.                      

a.     ….!!

46.                      

47.                      

                                                             i.      roaaarrr

48.                      

a.     Your life exchanged for power…you’ll end up regretting this strength.

49.                      

a.      Enough worrying. You’re in the same position.

b.    I’m no longer human anymore.

50.                      

a.     What the hell, just what are your friends!!

b.    They said they were humans--!!

                                                             i.      gah

                                                           ii.      shake shake

c.     Now that I think about it, I don’t know those people

51.                      

a.     You idiots… if you raise this kind of ruckus, what’s the difference from just breaking into the 1^st zone…

b.    Ahh…..my bright path has been shattered to pieces….!

52.                      

                                                             i.      roar

53.                      

54.                      

                                                             i.      vanish

55.                      

                                                             i.      dash

                                                           ii.      dash

56.                      

                                                             i.      roarr

57. 

                                                             i.      zoom

58.                      

a.      oops

                                                             i.      boom

59. 

a.     Reynold.

                                                             i.      appears

b.    Now, piss off.

60.                      

                                                             i.      suck

61.                      

                                                             i.      hisss

62.                      

a.     He disappeared…?

b.    He disappeared…!!

                                                             i.      crowd noises

c.     What just happened?!

                                                             i.      crowd noises

63.                      

a.     Rano-!

64.                      

a.     So. There is no one else in the ring. Is it now my win?

65.                      

a.     Ah…

b.    Uhh…!

c.     We could say that…?!

66.                      

a.     Then, the winner of the challenge match is-

b.    Mr. Marco!!

                                                             i.      woaahh

67.                      

a.     Don’t make me laugh

68.                      

a.     Do you not even do a count?

69.                      

                                                             i.      squeeaaak

70.                      

a.     My warp space…he opened it by his own accord…?

71.                      

                                                             i.      flutter

72.                       What’s going on, Reynold…

                                                              i.      step

73.                      

a.     I told you. That I’m no longer human

74.                      

a.     ‘The 9^th  lion, Raël’

                                                              i.      roarrr

b.    This is the identity of the power I received.

Edited by bahboh, 23 April 2015 - 08:26 PM.

[闇Stéphane]

Translations for ch 68

 

I decided to go with the name Reynold rather than Rainold as OGE uses since Reynold is a more well known spelling.

the korean 레이널드 in ipa would be /ɾɛinʌldɯ/ (each ipa letter is linked to the wiki page with audio clips if you're curious) which is still quite similar to (what wiki says is) the english pronunciation of Reynold /ˈrɛnəld/

 

raws: http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=69&weekday=fri

Spoiler

1.   

2.   

                                                              i.      wooosh

3.   

4.   

                                                              i.      bam

5.   

                                                              i.      flies

6.   

a.     The amazing human duo!! With one punch, they sent the two contestants flying out bounds!

7.   

a.     Just what are these bastards..

b.    Are you saying that a human can show that kind of power…?

8.   

a.     So there’s one guy left.

9.   

a.     Who’s going to take care of that?

10.                      

a.     W-wait! You idiots! What are you thinking?

                                                              i.      flinch!

b.    Didn’t I tell you? If you want to beat each other, whoever wastes their strength on me is going to lose.

11.                      

a.     Saving my strength as much as possible was my secret to winning in previous seasons.

b.    Is that so?

12.                      

                                                             i.      step

b.    Then I guess we can beat you together equally.

c.     Aren’t you a genius?

                                                             i.      step

d.    What?!!!

13.                      

a.     These bastards, treating me like a pushover?!

                                                              i.      step

b.    You don’t seem to understand what it means to be the champion of the previous season.

14.                      

a.     Yeah, come at me togeth…

15.                      

16.                      

                                                              i.      boom

17.                                

a.     Out-! It’s an out!!

                                                              i.      crumbles

b.    Going against all expectations, they’ve reduced the previous champion’s title to pieces!!

18.                      

a.     !?

19.                      

                                                             i.      whosh

b.    Who, among the remaining two will ultimately

20.                      

a.     Come out on top with the victory!

                                                              i.       pow (english onomatopoeia really needs some variety…)

21. 

                                                              i.      slides

22. 

a.     Get out of the ring while I’m being nice, Reynold.

b.    Nice~?

23.                      

a.     I was going to be nice, but it seems like I won’t be able to.

                                                              i.      wipe

24. 

a.      I still haven’t said everything.

                                                              i.      squeeze

25. 

a.      You and Ares—

26. 

a.      shouldn’t meet--!!

                                                              i.      bam

27. 

a.      Wahh?! What’s that!!

28. 

a.      Flames…?

29. 

                                                               i.      step

30. 

                                                               i.      rumble

31.    

a.      So you’re going to just let it out and show your power in front of them.

                                                               i.      roarr

32. 

a.      What, if you’re frustrated, why don’t you bring out your cute horns.

b.      You probably already know, but I’m not the old Reynold that blew up on you.

33. 

a.      It can’t be helped.

b.    Rather than throwing you out of the ring, I’ll throw you out of the 2^nd zone.

34.                      

a.     Hey you--! As long as it’s not a ‘weapon,’ it doesn’t matter, correct?!

35.                      

a.     Yes (in English)

b.    Miss Blake…! But that’s…

36.                      

a.     This game can’t end just yet.

b.    Because I’ve wagered money on them.

37.                      

a.     You hear that, Reynold?

                                                             i.      crackle

38.                      

a.     I’m no longer going to overlook this.

                                                             i.      crrraccckleee

39.                      

                                                             i.      roarrrr

40.                      

a.     ….

41.                      

a.     I’m starting to remember the past.

                                                             i.      ha

                                                           ii.      woong

42.                      

a.     The 2^nd round is tag team

                                                             i.       woong

43.                      

44.                      

                                                             i.      growl

45.                      

a.     ….!!

46.                      

47.                      

                                                             i.      roaaarrr

48.                      

a.     Your life exchanged for power…you’ll end up regretting this strength.

49.                      

a.      Enough worrying. You’re in the same position.

b.    I’m no longer human anymore.

50.                      

a.     What the hell, just what are your friends!!

b.    They said they were humans--!!

                                                             i.      gah

                                                           ii.      shake shake

c.     Now that I think about it, I don’t know those people

51.                      

a.     You idiots… if you raise this kind of ruckus, what’s the difference from just breaking into the 1^st zone…

b.    Ahh…..my bright path has been shattered to pieces….!

52.                      

                                                             i.      roar

53.                      

54.                      

                                                             i.      vanish

55.                      

                                                             i.      dash

                                                           ii.      dash

56.                      

                                                             i.      roarr

57. 

                                                             i.      zoom

58.                      

a.      oops

                                                             i.      boom

59. 

a.     Reynold.

                                                             i.      appears

b.    Now, piss off.

60.                      

                                                             i.      suck

61.                      

                                                             i.      hisss

62.                      

a.     He disappeared…?

b.    He disappeared…!!

                                                             i.      crowd noises

c.     What just happened?!

                                                             i.      crowd noises

63.                      

a.     Rano-!

64.                      

a.     So. There is no one else in the ring. Is it now my win?

65.                      

a.     Ah…

b.    Uhh…!

c.     We could say that…?!

66.                      

a.     Then, the winner of the challenge match is-

b.    Mr. Marco!!

                                                             i.      woaahh

67.                      

a.     Don’t make me laugh

68.                      

a.     Do you not even do a count?

69.                      

                                                             i.      squeeaaak

70.                      

a.     My warp space…he opened it by his own accord…?

71.                      

                                                             i.      flutter

72.                       What’s going on, Reynold…

                                                              i.      step

73.                      

a.     I told you. That I’m no longer human

74.                      

a.     ‘The 9^th  lion, Raël’

                                                              i.      roarrr

b.    This is the identity of the power I received.

About that, I checked in chapter 7 (http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=8) and the author wrote his name as Raynald in the message he sent the doc before he committed suicide. I don't know if he used google translate to translate the Korean name though.

[bahboh]

Hmmm, maybe I'll go with that next chapter... It's not a very common spelling, but there appears to have been some French guy who did also have that spelling. Thanks for that catch. I hope the readers don't get too confused/annoyed with 3 different spellings within 3 different chapters.

[shijon]

It seems I've found translation error in this page. → < /comics/2015/04/24/l/read553991ebc46b1/img000030.jpg >

 

Rano : I told you that I no longer the human. '9th Lion' Rael.

 

In that dialogue the word 'sah-ja(Kor)''s mean is not 'lion' but 'emissary' I think. → <  http://endic.naver.com/search.nhn?sLn=kr&searchOption=all&query=%EC%82%AC%EC%9E%90 >

[bahboh]

It seems I've found translation error in this page. → < /comics/2015/04/24/l/read553991ebc46b1/img000030.jpg >

 

Rano : I told you that I no longer the human. '9th Lion' Rael.

 

In that dialogue the word 'sah-ja(Kor)''s mean is not 'lion' but 'emissary' I think. → <  http://endic.naver.com/search.nhn?sLn=kr&searchOption=all&query=%EC%82%AC%EC%9E%90 >

 

hrmm, good point. I looked back at ch 22 where Ra congratulates Raynald on becoming the light's ninth "사자." Vendetta scans translated that as "heir," but after asking my mom about the context and language used, She agreed that the meaning of 사자 here is more of a king's representative/emissary as you said is more appropriate. Growing up, we were taught about like animals and such when first learning the letters and to read, so when i saw that word, I immediately jumped to the lion meaning and didn't think about the possibility of others.

I'll put up a v2 proly after ch 69 which would be up earliest friday evening but more likely sometime saturday. I'm taking a giant test that morning, so i probably can't/shouldn't do translating/typesetting on thursday.

Edited by bahboh, 30 April 2015 - 12:39 AM.

[bahboh]

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=70

Translations for ch69

Spoiler

1.   

a.     My space…He opened it up of his own volition…?

2.   

                                                              i.      flutter

3.      

a.     What’s going on, Raynald…

                                                              i.      step

4.      

a.     I told you. I’m not human anymore.

5.      

a.     ‘The Ninth Emissary, Raël’

                                                              i.      roaaarrr

b.    This is the identity of the power I received.

6.      

a.     What in the world…What is this form.

7.   

a.     Don’t you know? The form of the family of god’s emissaries is completely different form those originally human

8.   

a.     Actually, this is a violation of the rules. Since this isn’t a power I need right now.

b.    That is, if you hadn’t been so annoying…

                                                              i.      sighh

9.   

a.     A mysterious man who suddenly appeared form the sky!!

b.    Is that person actually Mr Pogo?!

10.                      

a.     Are we going to keep doing this?

b.    Do you want to face off some more?

11.                         

a.     I just…want to spend Ares’ last moment with him.

b.    It has to be me.

12.                      

a.     That boy was made by my hand.

13.                      

                                                              i.      crack

14.                      

a.     I absolutely cannot tolerate you and Ra haphazardly excluding me from your plans anymore….

                                                              i.      crack crack

15.                      

a.     The one who will take that child’s life is me.

                                                              i.      roooaaarrr

16.                         

a.     In the end, could you actually do something like that…?

17.                      

a.     The softhearted you got wrapped up in Ares’ plans.

b.    And in the end, everything will be ruined

18.                      

a.     You can’t solve anything.

19.                      

a.     Shut up!!

b.    Then I’ll just send the entire universe to that plane.

                                                              i.      booommm

20.                         

a.     If you’re not going to swallow the entire globe, you can never swallow me up.

                                                              i.      woong

21.                         

22.                      

                                                              i.      rush

23.                         

a.     I’m the same as the sun itself.

                                                              i.      booom

24.                         

25.                      

26.                      

27.                      

28.                         

                                                              i.      booom

29.                         

                                                              i.      pew

30.                         

a.     My word…

31.                      

a.     Those idiots are making it bothersome for me.

                                                              i.      floats

32.                      

a.     On the topic of Ra’s marionette…

33.                      

34.                      

a.     You’ve got a long ways to go If you also want to burn me.

35.                         

a.     ?!

                                                              i.      crackkk

36.                         

a.     Wait, this is…

37.                      

a.     Yeah, this is my power I regained in zone 3.

                                                              i.      crraacckkkkk

b.    That Hansel guy’s…?!

38.                      

a.      This is one of my strongest powers that used to be inside of me.

b.    I luckily regained it.

39.                      

a.     Get a grip!! That’s not yours!!

b.    From start to finish, all your power is only due to Dark Lessa.

40.                      

a.     It doesn’t matter…I’m just sealing it back inside me.

b.    Seal…? Get a grip.

41.                         

a.     The end of this story isn’t that simple.

b.    Please, trust me, Lessa

42.                      

a.     I’m saying you’re going to be consumed in the end.

                                                              i.      shatter

43.                      

a.     Consumed…?

b.    Me…?

44.                      

45.                      

a.     There’s no way, Raynald.

b.    I’m the only thing that can seal that girl.

46.                         

47.                      

a.     I’ve been sealing her for hundreds of millions of years.

48.                      

a.     And not once during those years have these powers ever been a threat to me.

49.                      

                                                              i.      suddenly opens

50.                         

a.     There’s no way I can lose.

                                                              i.      flash

51.                         

52.                      

a.     Lessa…?

53.                         

54.                      

a.     What’s happened…

                                                              i.      slide

55.                      

a.     Wake up, Flour…

56.                         

57.                      

                                                              i.      booooom

58.                         

a.     What the—?!

                                                              i.      cough

                                                            ii.      cough

59.                      

a.     Yo—Newbie. You’re looking cool.

b.    Gah, L-Lid…?! Why are you here

60.                      

a.     Oh, it’s no big deal.

b.    Lord Lessa is also only frozen.

c.     I only had to split about a tenth of a second in to thousands.

61.                      

a.     Rather the issue would be you, Newbie.

62.                      

a.     I told you already, what happens to us when we violate the rules.

63.                      

a.     You’re no exception.

                                                              i.      presents

b.    I’m sorry!! I’m sorry!!!!

c.     Just get rid of that humiliating lid—!!

64.                      

a.     I told you there’s no exception—

b.    T-t-t-t-time!

                                                              i.      shake

                                                            ii.      shake

c.     Look at Lessa’s body over there—! Look at what he did to himself—!!

d.    In order to safely carry out the duty that you guys gave me, it couldn’t be helped.

65.                      

a.     Hmm….

66.                         

a.     Well, I suppose that’s true.

b.    Lord Lessa has definitely laid his hands on a huge chunk of dark power.

67.                      

68.                      

a.     That is, Dark Lessa’s frozen heart.

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this chapter has been the most difficult in terms of translating so far.

I've edited a bit from this version to the typeset version in the webtoon, but suggestions are still welcome. 

 

Spoiler

1.   

a.     I suppose that’s true.

b.    Lord Lessa definitely laid his hands on a large chunk of dark power.

2.   

3.   

a.     That is, Dark Lessa’s frozen heart.

4.   

a.     Frozen heart…?

b.    What’s that?

c.     Have the Gabriel brethren not said anything?

5.   

a.     Well, They’ve told you about how various powers have slipped away from Lord Lessa, right?

6.   

a.     Speaking of the heart, this is the name of one of three elements that make up Dark Lessa.

b.    Through the well, you should have been able to see the sealing day.

7.   

8.   

9.   

10.          

11.          

a.     The day that the sealed Dark Lessa tried to come out after the body had been wounded,

b.    we pierced it with spears of power.

c.     However, there was an accident.

12.          

a.     Among all eight emissaries’ piercing spears…

b.    only 7 penetrated it.

13.          

a.     It was quite strange…

14.          

a.     The fragment of Dark Lessa that fell out then stems from that accident.

b.    Because we fell into a lull immediately after that, we couldn’t collect that fragment.

15.          

a.     So you’re saying there was a traitor.

b.    Who knows.

16.          

a.     It’s a rule that we don’t doubt each other.

b.    Only Lord Ra may give judgement regarding us.

17.          

a.     Additionally…

b.    Among us, it’s not polite to the two brethren that aren’t here now.

c.     But more urgent than the responsibility for the sealing accident was not losing the whereabouts of that fragment.

18.          

19.          

20.          

a.     Is it already morning…

21.          

a.     ?!

                                                                          i.      bzzzt

22.          

a.     Eeeek…!

                                                                          i.      boom

23.          

a.     Can I really not see the sun…?

b.    Lord Lessa, it’s terrible. I…

                                                                          i.      suddenly rises

24.          

a.     Sob—

                                                                          i.      slither slither

25.          

a.     The fragment followed Ares. No, it might be that it was following it’s body.

26.          

a.     Sob…Lord Lessa…

b.    Lord Lessa…

27.          

a.     Before you used to laughed that I would get up so suddenly…

b.    You used to call my name…!

28.          

29.          

30.          

a.  Go away, you monster!! Just leave us alone!!

b. Damn….!!

31.          

32.          

a.     Lord Lessa…He’s not breathing…

b.    Have you discarded me and gone away…?

33.          

a.     Return…

b.    That child will return…

34.          

a.     ….?

35.          

a.     After a little bit of sleep, He will return to your side.

36.          

a.     That fragment was one of the 3 elements, that is Dark Lessa’s ‘soul.’

37.          

38.          

a.     Uh…

39.          

a.     Who…

b.    Who are you that Lord Lessa’s face and…

40.          

a.     That child is not real.

41.          

a.     He’s just a shell.

42.          

a.     Ares probably couldn’t have resisted.

b.    Things that dream can’t refuse that woman.

c.     Inside the hearts of those who have faced that woman, she approaches as something bigger than anything else

d.    Like the morning after a nightmare, since it has no substance, it’s hard to deal with.

43.          

a.     Inside that child is half of me.

44.          

a.     Will you return it to me?

45.             

a.     The half that that woman demanded,

b.    The futility of will and

46.          

a.     The dark soul and

47.          

a.     The frozen heart

48.          

a.     Among those three, two of those elements were safely sealed in Lessa.

b.    Compared to that, the dark powers that have been returned to Lord Lessa are like fog.

c.     With just those three, Dark Lessa can return to its ancient form.

49.          

a.     Also, there hasn’t been much time since Lessa woke up from his sleep. The remaining two powers were all taken.

50.          

a.     The one who assisted that, Ares, laid his hands on ‘the futility of will’ that burns everything to ashes.  

51.          

a.     Lord Lessa, through recent events, has regained ‘the frozen heart’ that puts to sleep all warmth.

52.          

a.     In the end, the power isn’t all gathered in one place.

b.    This is because of the condition that without the body of this world that Lord Ra created, nothing can be substantialized.

c.     So you’ve probably heard that Dark Lessa is looking for a body.

d.    Although, so far, only Lord Lessa has been able to be the container that could hold those three powers, Dark Lessa doesn’t want Lessa fearing that she might be resealed again.

53.          

a.     I heard from the well that even so, she still can’t be resealed in Lessa’s body.

b.    That he’d lose his sense of self.

c.     Why’s that?

54.          

a.     Are you asking from ignorance,

b.    Or rather from guilt?

55.          

a.     After that day, Lord Lessa—

56.          

a.      ‘the complete good,’ lost his innocent belief.

57.          

a.     The only reason Lord Lessa could cancel that woman was because he originally contained an absolute good that juxtaposed the absolute destroyer.

58.          

a.     However, since realizing that there is no such thing as absolute good, he became more like us.  

b.    Fearing betrayal, crying at unfairness, wishing that the world would change…

59.             

60.          

a.     I…

61.          

a.     broke Lessa.

b.    What could have been the world’s last hope…

62.          

a.     Raynald.

b.    Get rid of those kinds of thoughts.

63.          

a.     Although the first day I saw you, I had completely forgotten about the existence of Diane,

b.    There is a brother that I haven’t forgotten even for a day.

64.          

a.     Don’t get weak.

b.    For those who have dedicated their life to your.

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Spoiler

 

                                                              i.      wooshhh

2.   

                                                              i.      shhhhhh

3.   

4.   

5.   

6.   

7.   

                                                              i.      step

                                                            ii.      step

8.   

                                                              i.      stops

9.   

a.     To you, perhaps….Ares is like family.

10.                      

a.     I know that it will be painful having him die without you present

b.    and why you’re doing this…

11.                      

a.     But you know better than anyone else. That it’s not a problem between just the two of you.

b.    Therefore…

12.                      

13.                      

a.     Raynald.

b.    Don’t try to understand.

c.     Since it doesn’t matter.

14.                      

a.     Thousands of years…tens of thousands of years….?

b.    The years are countless.

c.      The feelings I have towards that child aren’t just anything.

15.                      

a.     In front of those years, you know-

b.    Yearning…sadness, those remaining embers will turn to ashes.

16.                      

a.     You can’t even imagine.

b.    The moment that all that remained of those years was ashes.

17.                      

a.     The one that will destroy me is not Dark Lessa.

b.    It’s ‘Ra’ and his follower, ‘you.’  

c.     ….

18.                      

a.     …if you think that way.

19.                      

20.                      

a.    What, what’s going on?!

b.    Mr. Berger. Are you leaving the ring by yourself?!

                                                              i.      silence

c.    If you don’t return in 3 seconds….!

21.                      

a.     Rano…

22.                      

a.     3!

b.    2!

c.     …1!

d. Out-! Mr. Berger is out!!

23.                      

a.  Due to unexpected events, Mr. Marco has become the final victor in the challenger match.

                                                             i.      Woaaaaaaahhhh

24.                      

25.                      

26.                      

a.     Even though Lessa is no longer god nor human

b.    I wondered what he could gain after this fight.

27.                      

a.     From the beginning, there might have been nothing.

b.    Yeah, you might have everything taken away until the end.

c.     No matter what you do when you meet Ares…

d.    Hey-

28.                      

a.     Are you okay?

29.                      

a.     Things have gotten a little complicated.

30.                      

a.     Yeah. That’s true.

b.    That bitch completely played us.

31.                      

a.     But it’s still a good thing that at least Lessa was able to go to Zone 1…right?

b.    I was worried because the atmosphere was a bit tense between you two.

32.                      

a.     You’re not going to give up here, right?

33.                      

a.     I’m not going to give up. It’s just taking you along is now irrational.

b.    It’s also not feasible to quietly make that road of light you mentioned.

c.     To go to Zone 1, we’d now have to confront the army.

34.                      

a.     So you’re saying you’re going to leave me?

b.    Is this the best you’ve come up with sitting here?

35.                      

a.     You don’t need to worry about me.

36.                      

a.     I may not know the exact situation between you and Lessa,

b.    But we’re on the same side. Right?

37.                      

a.     In the end, we’re all going to return. On the same road…

b.    In order to fight against the same enemy.

38.                      

a.     You deceived us.

39.                      

a.     You will definitely pay the consequences for that.

b.    Seeing how sorry you are by yourself, you must have been pretty close friends.

40.                      

41.                      

a.     Relax~ If you go to Zone 1, You’ll be respected by other cool guys like you and live on.

b.    Well, if you’re that sorry, do your farewells and come back. Why are you here alone?

42.                      

a.     Farewells…

b.    Can I do that…?

43.                      

a.     Other than a parting with piercing each other in the heart…

b.    I have never done such a thing.

44.                          

a.     Whether with Ra,

b.    Or with Diane

c.     Or with Ares…

45.                      

a.     And on account of you…

b.    It’s become like that this time, too.

46.                      

a.  The long awaited BIG! MATCH!

                                                              i.      screams

b.  The best all season gatekeeper! Last year’s champion! The one who’s become Zone 1’s elite soldier, Bolton!!

47.                      

a.  Blasting through powerful challengers to get here, the mysterious Mr. Marco!!

b.  Will he ultimately be able to blast through the gatekeeper!

48.                      

49.                      

a.     So Raynald didn’t come..

50.                      

a.     Hey.

b.    What are you doing standing there doing nothing. I’m a busy person.

c.     Fight me.

d.    It’s a waste of time to deal with a kid like you.

51.                      

a.      Urk…

b.    The one getting his time wasted is me.

                                                              i.      whoooaaaaaa

52.                      

a.     We’ll provide the clothes, so please sign here.

b.    Mr. Marco, will you ride a limousine? Or a midsized sedan?

c.     Please sign here.

53.                      

a.     There’s a lot of stuff…

                                                             i.      scritch scratch

54.                      

a.     Um…when do we go to Zone 1.

b.    Ah. Don’t worry. The preparations are almost done.

55.                      

a.     As soon as we get there, we’ll be giving our greetings at Lord Ares’ palace.

b.    It’s a big honor.

c.     Ares’ palace…

56.                      

a.     Also, because you’re a human, you might receive vapor.

b.    …..

c.     Ah, also, could you fix your tie and come back?

57.                      

58.                      

59.                      

a.     I don’t know how to do this at all.

b.    I can’t remember what Raynald taught me.

60.                      

61.                      

62.                      

                                                              i.      throws

63.                      

a.     Damn it.

                                                              i.      flump

64.                      

65.                      

a.     Raynald

b.    That’s a lie.

c.     Saying that you were interfering…

d.    If you hadn’t set me straight, I couldn’t have come this far.

66.                      

a.     But I know.

b.    That you’re always right.

c.     That’s why even without me, you’ll be able to do everything.

d.    Even if I’m on my knees in darkness

e.     Even if I’m dying.

67.                      

68.                      

a.     They are always right.

69.                      

 

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Spoiler

1.   

                                                              i.      caw

2.   

                                                               i.      caw

                                                            ii.      caw

3.   

a.     Sorry for tying you up.

4.   

a.     Can you tell me what’s going on?

b.    I met Lessa…

5.      

a.     But I can’t tell if it was Lessa or Dark Lessa.

6.   

a.     Miena, what are you talk about? What did you see?

7.   

a.     It’s wrong to have made humans.

8.      

a.     Ra made a mistake.

b.    Ra was the one that first broke the order…!

9.   

a.     Our creator failed, and we are that failure. Our existence itself is a failure.

b.    Because of that failure, we are suffering for eternity…

c.     Going against Dark Lessa is meaningless… No, rather we should free her.

10.                      

a.     What are you talking about?

11.                      

a.     I’m saying that the origins of humans that I’ve dedicated my life to finding is a failure…!

b.    If we can return Dark Lessa to her ancient state, everything can finally become perfect…!

12.                      

                                                              i.      sudden movement

b.    That’s because-!...

13.                      

a.     Don’t listen to the words of the devil.

b.    They’re trying to trick you and bring the downfall of humanity.

c.    

14.                      

a.     That woman is searching for me.

15.                      

a.     She’ll find me soon.

b.    Whatever the case, I’m going to be ruined.

16.                      

a.     Why…why you…

17.                      

a.     It might be because I dreamt her dream.

b.    It doesn’t matter. I have no hope anyway.

18.                         

a.     Miena. Do you know why I came to HAIS?

b.    It was to develop the deman cure with you.

19.                      

a.     There’s nothing we can’t do here.

b.    Especially if I’m with you.

20.                      

a.     To say to give up…

b.    I’m going to find a way. So I’m going to definitely turn you and Lucy back into humans.

21.                      

a.     But I said there’s no meaning in doing that…?

22.                      

a.     Failure or not, there’s meaning to me.

23.                      

a.     If I can keep living on with you…

24.                      

a.     Even if that’s it, it doesn’t matter to me.

25.                      

26.                      

27.                      

                                                              i.      flash

28.                      

a.     You heard it?

29.                      

a.     That woman wants Miena’s body…

b.    Since she has a good sense of understanding for a human…that dangerous ambition prompted the darkness.

30.                      

a.     But, in my opinion, she isn’t a perfect container. Like ‘Eljad’ right now, she’s about the level of a temporary dwelling place-

b.    She probably won’t be able to assimilate Dark Lessa and might be broken to pieces.

31.                      

a.     That won’t happen…

b.    Because the doctor will turn us back human first.

32.                      

a.     Though will that really happen? You can only watch as your friend turns into a monster.

b.    Before that happens, isn’t better to take me to Zone 1?

33.                      

a.     Don’t be ridiculous…! What are you doing in my head-?

b.    Get out…!! Or shut the fuck up!

34.                      

a.     Oh, this won’t do…

b.    Raspberry girl.

c.     You have to keep your promise.

35.                      

a.     Your beautiful face like that person’s,

b.    Rosy skin… a beautiful voice

c.     Eyes as pretty as gems. Didn’t I give you these…?

36.                      

                                                              i.      flinch

b.    What….

c.     You now have to pay the price.

37.                      

a.     I never made that kind of promise!!

38.                      

                                                             i.      pant—..

                                                           ii.      pant—…

b.    Just like how you ultimately opened up your body to me,

c.     You can’t escape your fate.

d.    Even if you had a choice-

39.                      

a.     Becoming my dream is your fate.

40.                         

a.     Dream…

b.    Your dream…

c.     So you want to become one with Dark Lessa…

d.    On what grounds…?

41.                      

42.                      

a.     Then what’s going to happen to me…?

43.                      

44.                      

45.                      

                                                              i.      caw

                                                            ii.      caw

46.                      

a.     Oh…

                                                             i.      blank stare

47.                      

a.     It’s a fairy.

48.                      

a.     Ah,

                                                              i.      click

49.                      

a.      It’s a fairy~?

b.    A fairy is flying towards us, I see-!

50.                      

a.     I don’t see anything but crows…?

                                                              i.      caw

b.    Shut thwe fuck up. If the priest says it’s a fairy, it’s a fairy.

51.                      

a.     Oh… ohh, because that person is finally moving dwelling places, work hard to regain that body.

b.    Because a dark guide to the owner of that body will be sent, go bring that person.

52.                      

a.     The body that Lord Dark Lessa is searching for…!

b.    Is at HAIS!

c.     It’s one of the intruders!

53.                      

a.     My God!!

                                                              i.      tap tap

b.    W-wait for us!!

54.                         

                                                             i.      caww

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I may have been a bio major, but this does not mean i know any korean cell bio terminology.... >_>

Spoiler

1.   

2.   

3.   

4.   

5.   

                                                              i.      slide

6.   

7.      

a.     It’s still here.

8.   

a.     Miena!

b.    Look at this. There’s still some glasses in my drawer.

9.   

a.     You’ve turned back into Professor Fungi?

                                                              i.      hahah

10.                      

a.     No one must have sat in my seat because there was mold…

                                                              i.      hehe

11.                      

a.     The lab room… It hasn’t changed one bit~ It’s good to see it again.

12.                      

a.     Fine. I don’t know how it’s going to turn out, but lets’ try.

13.                      

a.     You should have said that from the start.

14.                      

a.     You’re saying the body is inside here?

b.    Then the ‘intruder’ the guide spoke about could be this being?

15.                      

a.     If the revelation is correct, it’s probably so.

b.    Hmm, the building is too big.

16.                      

a.     Yes. It’s going to be quite large. Let’s divide up the floors and search.

17.                      

a.     That the thing that Lord Dark Lessa is searching for is here…

b.    I’m pretty lucky. I only came out for reconnaissance.

                                                              i.      step

                                                            ii.      step

18.                      

a.     If I find it, I might get promoted.

19.                      

a.     Hm? A room with the smell of a human…

20.                      

21.                      

a.     ………….

22.                      

23.                         

a.     Che— it’s only a weird looking doll.

b.    ?!?!!

24.                      

a.     Eh…ehhh…!!

b.    What—! What the hell just now…!!

25.                      

a.     Where did everyone go?!

b.    Did Miena wake up??

26.                      

a.     To meet a deman… Even though it sucks that I wasn’t treated like a human, I guess it’s lucky…

                                                              i.      slide

27.                      

a.     I have to tell everyone!

                                                              i.      step step

28.                      

29.                      

30.                      

31.                      

                                                              i.      choke.

                                                           ii.      choke…

32.                      

a.     W…what…

b.    What are you doing in this sort of isolated place?

33.                      

a.     Under whose orders are you here?

34.                      

a.     This is Ares’ private land.

b.    This isn’t a place a kid like you can roam as you please.

35.                      

a.     I asked why you’re here.

36.                      

a.     …….

37.                      

a.     I had heard that there was a reactionary among the believers, but to see this impudent bitch…

38.                      

39.                      

a.     We came here looking for something.

40.                      

a.     But finding an intruder like you is a plus!!

                                                              i.      wham

41.                      

42.                      

a.     Other than me there’s also another elite and executive here.

b.    You’ll receive your due judgement for your heresy.

43.                      

44.                      

a.      …you dare lay your hand on this noble body…

                                                              i.      drip

45.                      

a.     Dirty human…

46.                      

a.      After receiving power from ‘that person’ by chance and running amok

b.    You all are still irreverent existences.

47.                      

a.     H…huh…?

48.                      

a.     Receive my judgement.

                                                              i.      pop

49.                      

50.                      

a.     Although for a year in the midst of traveling we couldn’t properly store things…

b.    the first cells we collected from Lessa  are still alive.

51.                      

a.     The things that made up Lessa in the past somehow are probably immortal.

b.    They probably can divide endlessly as if like cancer cells.

c.     It’s similar to the healing ability of Lessa whose body is currently no different from that of a human.

52.                      

a.     That’s the same as demans.

b.    But maintaining an unchanging cell line without becoming an immortalized cell is contradictory.

c.     We might have to conditionally regulate the cell’s internal clock since it’s a more complicated mechanism than that of humans.

53.                      

a.     But more importantly, I looked into your situation.

54.                      

a.     Your horns are similar to that of a bovid.

b.    I don’t want to know that kind of stuff.

55.                      

a.     Look at this. This is the vapor I gathered. I can do this too like other demans.

56.                      

a.     If you take in this vapor, you can take on that Lessa’s characteristics so easily.

57.                      

a.     But the condition that you have to take other people’s souls to lengthen your life is attached.

b.    It’s a mysterious thing.

58.                      

a.     That this gas has an effect on our base pair sequence.

b.    That the species is made this way by taking souls…

59.                      

a.     Perhaps we could interpret this if we could materialize a soul?

60.                      

a.     Whatever the case, at our level, this isn’t an idea we can bring to fruition.

b.    This was god’s will.

61.                      

a.     Level…

62.                      

a.     Professor~!!

b.    You guys were here!

                                                              i.      bang

63.                      

a.     Yuzuru…!

64.                      

a.     Bad news!!

b.    Demans have entered the school!

65.                      

66.                      

a.     ……..

67.                      

a.     ……..?

68.                      

a.     Haha… you’ve got to say that sooner.

69.                      

a.     Kyaah!

                                                              i.      lifts

70.                      

a.     Because humans have entered our private land.

b.    E..eeek…

71.                      

a.     We meet again in a place like this, Dr. Jin. 

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Spoiler

1.   

1. Haha… you should’ve said that earlier. 

2.   

1. Kyaah! 

1. lift 

3.   

1. Since humans have entered our private land. 

2. E..eeek… 

4.    

1. We meet again, Dr. Jin. 

5.   

6.    

1. I thought I said to never show yourself in front of me again. 

2. But you come here of your accord… 

7.   

1. stands 

8.   

1. If you lay a hand on my friends, I won’t just stand by. 

9.   

1. Hoho… 

2. It’s not going to be a big deal. 

10.   

1. That is if you obediently hand over that girl. 

2. What? 

3. We need that woman. 

11.   

1. It’s you, right? I saw a revelation regarding you. 

12.   

1. Dark Lessa is looking for you. 

13.   

1. Revelation… 

1. shuuuu 

14.   

1. The meaning of that hallucination was that sort of thing,,,? 

2. Out of all people, why me… 

15.   

1. No. Whether its revelation or revolution, it doesn’t matter!! 

2. Because I’m going to turn Miena back into human. 

16.   

1. ……… 

17.   

1. Turn back… into human…? 

18.   

1. Pfft. 

2. That’s funny. Someone who couldn’t even fix one disease… 

19.   

1. Kehehehehe…! 

1. giggle 

2. You really lie like breathing…! 

3. How do you change god’s will into human! 

4. Is that why you did that? 

20.   

1. Because you thought I couldn’t fix you… 

2. Is that why you became a deman. 

21.   

1. …. 

22.   

1. Yes. 

2. God saved me, not you. 

3. You only gave the dying me false hope. Even though I was just going to die! 

23.   

1. That wasn’t a lie!! 

24.   

1. I was just trying to give hope…! 

25.   

1. Just like your fairytales 

2. You discarded that hope… 

26.   

1. ripping it into pieces. 

27.   

1. Because… 

2. Right then, I was running to you since the cure had finished the clinical trial successfully. 

28.   

1. ….. 

29.   

1. Does this sound like a lie…? 

30.   

1. The one who made it good-for-nothing was you. 

31.   

32.   

1. Lies… 

33.   

1. Stop lying!!! 

34.   

1. dash 

35.   

1. woosh 

36.   

1. Miena! 

37.   

1. It’s a waste of time to talk with you. 

2. Since you keep spouting nonsense! 

1. stops 

38.   

39.   

1. Let go of Miena! 

40.   

41.   

1. crash 

42.   

1. Urrrk~?! 

1. sizzle 

43.   

1. Dr. Jin!! 

2. This won’t do!!! 

44.   

1. pow 

45.   

1. urghh… 

1. slump 

46.   

1. Wow, I got crazy strong!! I even punched a deman… 

47.   

1. shhuuuu 

48.    

1. I was going to take you quietly… 

1. uuuuu 

49.   

1. If you keep resisting... 

1. roarr 

50.   

1. Calm down, Anderson!! 

2. There are children here! 

51.   

1. It doesn't matter. 

1. squeak 

2. squeak  

52.   

1. Gobble them up! 

1. squeal  

53.   

1. zoom 

2. zoom 

54.   

1. bam 

55.   

1. ?! 

1. boom 

56.   

1. rush 

57.   

1. skiddd 

58.   

1. Lucy...! 

59.   

1. slide 

60.   

1. Take me to Zone 1. 

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1.   

a.     Take me to Zone 1.

2.   

a.     What are you saying! Why would you go there?!

b.    That’s for the best. If I don’t, you…

3.      

a.     I’m begging you. Stay here and continue the research

b.    But you don’t have to go that far-

4.   

a.     What are you whispering about?

b.    I have no desire to take you.

c.     You’ve already been exiled.

5.   

a.     Weren’t you distributing power so that you could find an appropriate body for Dark Less?

b.    You said this before….that I had a monstrous appearance in the era of prosperity. That’s why you gave dark power to me first…

6.   

a.     Hmph-! Don’t misunderstand.

b.    After you left, revelations about you don’t appear anymore.

c.     When you betrayed Lord Dark Lessa- He threw you away too!

7.   

a.     But…

8.   

a.     Lucy, leave it be! I’m not going to get taken.

9.   

a.     That’s not for you to decide.

10.                      

                                                              i.      grab

11.                      

a.     Well, this was an idle waste of time.

                                                              i.      skidd

b. Mienna-!!

c.   Stop right there, Ryan!

12.                      

                                                              i.      shatter clatter

13.                         

a. Miena-!!!

14.                      

a.     hahahahahahaha

                                                             i.      tap tap tap tap

b.    You didn’t take me…

15.                      

a.     When you said that if I said this, you’d take me instead of her-!

16.                      

a.     I’m begging you, do this for me whatever it takes.

17.                      

a.     I’ll it for you.

b.    I’ll save your friend.

c.     That is if I get to completely open the door

18.                      

a.     The door…

19.                      

a.     Open your eyes, Lucy.

                                                              i.      woosh

20.                      

a.     Ahh, what a refreshing feeling.

b.    What crisp air- it’s really be a long time.

21.                      

a.     If Lord Dark Lessa hadn’t given your dark power, I would have just stood behind your stiffly closed door.

22.                      

23.                      

a.     How glorious…!

                                                              i.      stab

24.                      

a.     Look here, human-

25.                      

a.     Argh…!

26.                      

a.     Are there really no revelations regarding me-?

b.     That girl, Miena, is bait. Do you believe that trifling human can become the container?

c.     Without our ‘permision,’ it can’t indwell anywhere.

27.                      

a.     Do you not know for whose permission Lord Dark Lessa has waited?

b.    Eeek-! Go away, monster!!

c.     For my beautiful empress…!

d. Uaaaakkk!!

28.                      

a.     Did I faint…?

29.                      

a.     Ah-hahahaha!

b.    ...!

30.                      

a.     Lucy…?

                                                              i.      stagger

                                                            ii.      stagger

31.                      

a.     Come to your senses, Lucy-!

                                                              i.      grab

b.    Tell that person…This body has returned

c.     That I’m going to find you soon.

32.                      

                                                             i.      grit

33.                      

a.     What the hell are you saying!!

                                                              i.      tap tap tap tap tap

34.                      

a.     Lucy?!

                                                             i.      slump

35.                      

                                                              i.      hissss

36.                      

a.     Soon I can be one with that person.

37.                      

a.     Lucy

b.    Regretfully-

                                                              i.      drip

c.     you can’t close the door anymore.

38.                      

a.     What’s the matter…

b.    What are you looking at, Lucy…?

39.                      

a.     Your eyes…

40.                      

41.                      

a.     Because you gave permission. Just like that time.

42.                      

a.     Do you remember now?

43.                      

                                                              i.      scritch scratch

44.                      

a.     This game was a huge success.

b.    The earnings is more than I thought?

45.                      

a.     Now if I earn just a little more…

46.                      

a.     !

                                                             i.      click

47.                      

a.     What the.

                                                              i.      stops…

48.                      

a.     Isn’t security standing guard outside the door?

b.    Sigh…

49.                      

a.     Hey- have you not heard the rumors?

b.    That there are many trespassers that have entered the Blake mansion, but none have exited.

50.                      

a.     I’ve heard the story. But I dunno?

b.    I don’t know if there’s anyone left in the mansion to come at me.

c.     You!!

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1.   

a.     I’ve heard the story, but dunno?

b.    I don’t know if there’s anyone left in the mansion to come at me.

c.     You!!

2.      

a.     I got rid of all the security outside. What’re gonna do?

                                                              i.      smirk

3.   

a.     The hotel room and board service should have been lacking in anything. What’s your problem?

b.    Tell your complaints to my secretary.

c.     Oh, it’s not any problem with you.

4.   

a.     Send us to Zone 1.

b.    What?!

c.     If it’s you, it shouldn’t be too difficult, right?

5.   

a.     Stop playing. There are clear rules here.

b.    You lost and don’t have the right. Why do I have to break the rules for you?

c.     I’m serious.

d.    I’m not going to go easy on you because you’re a kid. I’m going to kill you.

6.   

a.     ….

b.    Do you want to go to Zone 1 that much…?

c.     Why….

7.   

8.   

a.     Why ask the obvious? We’re going to go to Zone 1 to enjoy the lap of luxury.

b.    Yeah, yeah. I’m gonna be super awesome.

9.   

a.     You said so yourself. Zone 1 is every believer’s dream.

b.    ……

10.                      

a.     As a mere human, what the hell are you talking about…?

b.    Rather than associating than bugs like you, they’d rather die.

11.                      

a.     Oh… shoot her.

b.    Huh? Huh? Shoot for real?!

12.                      

a.     You think I’ll get scared? I’m Blake.

13.                      

a.     Even if you say that, aren’t you human too? What’s so special about you?

14.                      

a.     I’m different from you…!

                                                              i.      hold in

15.                      

a.     Even though you just a kid…

                                                             i.      grind

16.                      

a.I’m different from those pathetically weak guys trying to become a deman!!

                                                              i.      suddenly

17.                      

a.Why are you trying to become something like a deman!!

18.                      

a.     …..

19.                      

a.     …..

20.                      

a.     …..

21.                      

a.     Wait…

b.    What…?

                                                              i.      blank stare—

c.     In other words…

22.                      

a.     Come in.

23.                      

a.     Though, I don’t really care for you.

b.    The only place without surveillance is my room.

c.     This is your room?!

24.                      

a.     S-so this is what you call a girl’s room…

                                                              i.      sniff sniff sniff

b.    Her interests just seem like weird bullshit…

c.     Shut it, you two

25.                      

a.     Well, anyway

b.    You guys don’t want to become believers…?

c.     And you want to go to Zone 1 with that mindset?

26.                      

a.     Look who’s talking

b.    How is a kid who has no intention of becoming a deman in this sort of place?

c.     Demans just leave you alone?

27.                      

a.     That’s why it’s a secret.

b.    But anyway, after this and that ends, I might ultimately become a deman.

28.                      

a.     What do you mean?

29.                      

a.     I’m going to buy everything. Zone 2, that is.

b.    That’s the only solution…

30.                      

a.     Was it about a year ago…? You probably know, the time when the deman's head appeared and then occupied the inside of the Field.

b.    At that time, I was hiding in a small pub in the Field.

c.     One, two...three, four...

d.    Ooo- ahh~~

31.                      

a.     Exactly ten!I I killed exactly 10!

b.    Huh?? I killed 10, too? Then we tied!

32.                      

a.     No? If I kill her, I’ll win.

                                                              i.      twitch

b.    !!

33.                      

34.                      

a.     Then, I could just kill her.

b.    Is she yours?

c.     Because I found her, I have dibs.

d.    Wait here, I’m going to kill her.

                                                              i.      step

35.                      

a.  Look at this bastard messing around!!

b.  Are you really going to be so childish?!

                                                              i.      clench

c.     Like I said, you didn’t even notice her. Am I wrong?

d.  If I kill her, that’ll be it!!

36.                      

a.     ….excuse me…?

b.    You two could just fight it out…

c.     Could you really tell who’s stronger by killing someone  like me…?

37.                      

a.     …..

                                                              i.      flinch—..

38.                      

a.     Aren’t you a genius…?

b.    So though I had a ridiculous but narrow escape from the situation…

c.     because I was the judge then, afterwards, other guys would stand in line to ask me who was stronger.

d.    Those dumbasses made Gentleman Pub.

e.     They arranged for me, though human, with privileges and respect and fight in a gentlemanly manner.

39.                      

a.     As it got bigger, it became an issue that I, a human, was the lord.

b.    Thus I made a pledge to become a believer when I became an adult.  

c.     After receiving that token, everyone was able to respect me as a fellow believer.

d.    Yes…it might be because of that that the believers here didn’t haphazardly kill humans.

e.     Around the time I was being ecstatic having survived…

40.                      

a.     I saw it.

b.    That it wasn’t that simple…

c.     what was worse than death.

d.    They mutilated the bodies of humans and dealt with them like they were things.

e.     In the end this was their way of doing things.

41.                      

a.     In order to request help, whenever I had time I would go into the internet and search.

b.    Even though  it had become a big issue and there were countless articles about Hexagon Island,

c.     It was just flying rumors about the situation… As this island become isolated, no one could find out anything.

42.                      

a.     UN…?

43.                      

a.     If it’s this, they might be able to help us.

44.                         

a.     It was a glimpse of hope.

45.                      

a.     I will connect you to the advisor.

                                                              i.      beep

b.    What can I help you with?

c.     Uh…I-I am someone living in Hexagon Island.

46.                      

a.     You’re a citizen of Hexagon Island?

b.    I will connect you to a different advisor.

                                                             i.      beep

c.     Hello? What can I help you with?

d.    I…am from Hexagon Island…

e.     Please, help.

f.       Can you tell me the situation?

47.                      

a.     I am captured by demans… as well as other people. So many people have died.

b.    Are you on a land line?

c.     Yes?

d.    Shall I connect you to the Hexagon Island Criminal Investigation Bureau?

e.     There isn’t anything like that anymore…! I’m saying we- this place need help from outside!

f.       Ah...It’s regrettable. We will contact you again after we review what we can do to help.

48.                      

a.     ‘Right now it’s difficult for other countries to send military intervention or support.’

b.    This is the entire response I remember.

49.                      

a.     Because they were calculating profits and losses, no country would be the first to lend a hand.

b.    There was no solution.

c.     To endlessly collect money, to endlessly develop the mansion, to endlessly gather people…

d.    Yes. Until Zone 2 becomes actually powerful.

50.                      

a.     I’m going to change the rules of this place.

b.    That’s my choice.

51.                      

a.     In order to not to get any suspicion even if as a result I become a deman.

52.                      

a.     You don’t need to be a deman.

b.    What…?

53.                      

a.     I thought you were just a kid…

b.    But you’re doing things that even adults can’t do.

54.                      

55.                      

a.     So now it’s our turn to tell our plan?

                                                              i.      slide

56.                      

a.     Send us to Zone 1.

57.                      

a.     I’m going to kill Ares.

b.  You’re going to… kill Ares…?

58.                      

a.     Is this the guy who got selected to be an elite soldier?

59.                      

a.     Yes, sir, that is correct. You confirmed this on paper, correct?

b.    Sigh, man… this delicate looking thing did well to come here.

60.                      

a.     Doomk, Anon. Open the door.

b.    Yes, sir-!

                                                              i.      rumbleeee

61.                      

a.     Don’t be too nervous, Mr. Marco.

b.    Isn’t the sky beautiful?

62.                                

a.     The Zone 1 that you’re going to see now on is going to be even more beautiful.

                                                              i.      vroom

b.    Isn’t Zone 1 like a golden empire.

c.     I’m not sure why they did all this secretly…

63.                      

a.     Secretly…?

                                                              i.      window rolling down

64.                      

a.     Yes, sir. It’s like an Egyptian temple.

                                                              i.      roarrr

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1.   

a.     Ms. Blake’s secretary, Khan Maximus,

b.    Meet palace general, Lord Baekya!

2.   

a.     Yes. I’ve heard of you.

b.    You’ve brought a special friend?

                                                              i.      imposing presence

3.   

a.     Yes, sir... The winner of the Gentleman Pub this time was in fact an amazing successful human…

b.    The palace general…

c.     Hahaha.

4.   

                                                              i.      bow

5.   

6.   

7.   

8.   

a.     Let me see here.

                                                              i.      step

                                                            ii.      step

b.    uh, uh…!

9.   

a.     How did this little thing come here.

b.    How could you withstand all those expectations and shoulder them.

c.     ……?

10.                      

a.     Was it not difficult.

11.                      

a.     I’m fine.

12.                      

a.     When can I meet Ares…?

13.                      

a.     …..

14.                      

a.     Please don’t incur the general’s displeasure…!

b.    You’ll see His Majesty at the banquet.

15.                      

a.     It’s okay.

b.    I like this kid.

c.     Therefore, I’ll be in charge of his education.

d.    Excuse me?! Lord Baekya yourself…! Why…

16.                      

                                                              i.      chirp chirp chirp

17.                      

                                                              i.      turn

18.                      

a.     It’s Lord Baekya…!

b.    Lord Baekya?

19.                      

a.     Lord Baekya is with a human…?

b.    Is it a slave?

20.                      

a.     Everyone is looking at us.

b.    You seem to be quite popular here…?

21.                      

a.     Wouldn’t it be weirder if they didn’t love me?

22.                      

a.     What do you think, instead of becoming an elite soldier and becoming my servant?

b.    !

23.                      

a.     You’re telling me to become a slave?

b.    Do you think I don’t know what a servant is?

24.                      

a.     You seem to have seen a lot on the outside.

b.    You don’t have to be so uptight.

25.                      

a.     Do you see those humans?

b.    They’re the slaves of Zone 1.

26.                      

a.     Although the young make up the majority, there isn’t any mistreatment.

27.                      

a.     Rather, they receive appropriate compensation for their work.

b.     Humans are devoted to those more evolved than them.

c.     Look and see if there are any crying children among them.

28.                      

a.     Do you think they are happy?

b.    Whatever the case, they lose their family and are hurt children.

c.     This is balanced.

29.                      

a.     Balanced…

30.                      

a.     In some places, human lives are no different from pandemonium.

31.                      

32.                      

a.     In other places, humans are made into playthings.

33.                      

a.     Yes, most places just buy and sell humans.

b.    But, one by one, the time in which they will come to this conclusion will come.

34.                      

a.     This place has finally found the solution, and this is balance.

35.                      

a.     Not everyone can be happy.

b.    But if there’s something that won’t collapse,

36.                      

a.     Wouldn’t that be considered heaven?

37.                      

a.     …..

38.                      

a.     Anyway, won’t you become my servant?

b.    …..!

39.                      

40.                      

41.                      

a.     Eat without reserve.

42.                      

a.     Why are you so hospitable to a human like me?

43.                      

a.     Isn’t there no one else to take care of you?

b.    So be relaxed and eat.

44.                      

a.     Though I met you today, you very are kind.

b.    Is this a pretense?

45.                      

a.     Pretense…?

46.                      

a.     Is it not so?

b.    In order to reach your position, a countless number of human blood is probably on your hands.

c.     In other words, taking people’s lives.

47.                      

a.     Perhaps…

b.    In order to reach here, you probably killed a countless number of believers.

c.     Am I wrong?

d.    Aren’t we the same?

48.                      

a.     There’s no need to count numbers.

b.    Humans always need a fight for their rights.

c.     Because you can't throw away your spiritual, philosophical, or for some slaves, selfishness.

49.                      

a.     Because of that, this world needs leaders.

b.    Even if there is a decrease in sacrifices.

50.                      

a.     You're correct.

b.    But, if that's the case...

51.                      

a.     This place still isn't heaven.

b.    I know this place...

52.                      

a.     This place,

b.    Yes. I've seen these castles that Ares built somewhere before. 

c.     It definitely should have been that day.

                                                              i.      crack

53.                      

a.     What's this ruckus.

b.    Ahh. Prince, sir, on what occasion are you here...

c.     I'm looking around the site.

54.                      

a.     Ah, this brat...he's a prisoner of war captured from Palestine.

b.    I assigned him to cleaning but because he was so useless, I’m flogging him.

55.                      

56.                      

a.     Starting tomorrow, send him to the quarry.

57.                      

a.     E..eek…

b.    I’ll do better…

                                                              i.      struggle

c.     I’ll do better…

                                                              i.      struggle

58.                      

                                                              i.      suddenly

b.    How dare you retort!!

59.                      

                                                              i.      whhiiiik

60.                      

                                                              i.      flash

61.                      

62.                      

63.                      

                                                              i.      roaarrr

64.                      

65.                      

66.                      

67.                      

68.                      

a.     The day I first descended into this world…

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[bahboh]

ty for the support!

ch lateness is due to july 4th funsies w/ the SO 

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=79

and now for ch 78

Spoiler

1.   

2.   

3.   

a.     The day I first descended into this world…

4.      

a.     Please spare our lives…

b.    Please spare our lives…!

c.     Please spare our lives…!

5.   

a.     Why do you persecute this child?

b.    There is not a shred of qualification among you to do so.

6.   

a.     …….

b.    Please forgive us…

                                                              i.      tremble

                                                            ii.      tremble

                                                          iii.      tremble

7.   

a.     1500 BC Egypt

                                                              i.      howling

8.   

9.   

10.                      

a.     So you’ve been watching over from there.

11.                      

a.     God...

b.    …?

12.                      

a.     P-Please...

b.    Please wear this...!

c.     What is it?

13.                      

a.     You can keep it. I'm fine.

14.                      

a.     But...what shall we do if people speak ill of you

15.                      

a.     Please accept this as a token of my thanks...

16.                      

a.     Very well.

17.                      

18.                      

a.     He's radiating light...

19.                         

20.                      

21.                      

a.     I-I'm sorry!!

22.                      

                                                              i.      rustle rustle

23.                      

a.     I-I'm sorry!!

b.    Next time I'll offer you more fitting clothes...!

24.                      

a.     Next time...?

25.                      

a.     Yes, sir... From now on, I'll follow you as your servant...!

26.                         

a.     What are you talking about.

27.                      

a.     Now that you were given your freedom, you're saying you'll become a servant again...?

b.    You should follow your own path and live out your human life.

c.     I came to rescue the oppressed like you.

28.                      

a.     But I have no place to go...

b.    I'm alone now.

29.                      

a.     Then, you can now make friends.

b.    …

30.                      

31.                      

a.     You're saying that even though the people worship you like this, you don't need a servant...?

b.    I will show you the world!

                                                              i.      tap

                                                            ii.      tap

32.                      

                                                              i.      stops

33.                      

34.                      

a.     …...

35.                      

a.     Go on your way.

                                                              i.      push

36.                      

                                                              i.      turns

37.                      

38.                      

39.                      

40.                      

                                                              i.      wahh~

41.                         

42.                      

a.      heang

43.                      

a.     Why is he crying...?

b.    You start crying now that I've come to this place.

44.                      

45.                      

                                                             i.      uwaaang

46.                         

a.     Stop crying.

                                                              i.      poke

47.                      

                                                              i.      poke

                                                            ii.      poke

48.                      

a.     Stop cry...

                                                              i.      tap

49.                      

50.                      

                                                              i.      waaaahhhh

51.                      

a.     Looking at his hand, he's younger than I thought.

b.    This little thing is quite extraordinary to speak so clearly to me.

c.     He might do big things in the future.

52.                      

a.     Ares.

53.                      

a.     Look at this.

54.                      

a.     I tried drawing like you.

55.                      

a.     What is this...?

b.    You can't tell?

56.                      

a.     This is the sun,

b.    And these are flowers.

c.     And this is you and I.

57.                      

a.     Is it not good?

                                                              i.      groan

b.    Are you serious...?

58.                      

a.     What am I in your eyes that it looks like this...

b.    This Ares is now 16 years old. I'm taller than you too.

c.     Also, don't scribble willy nilly on my papyrus...!

d.    I'm sorry.

59.                      

a.     How about teaching me?

b.    Since you draw so well.

60.                      

a.     Are you bored? Sir?

b.    Huh?

61.                      

a.     This Ares doesn't have time for that.

                                                              i.      suddenly rise

62.                      

a.     I don't want to die of old age chatting with you.

63.                      

a.     It's impossible that an ageless person like you would understand an insignificant being like me.

64.                      

a.     I'm going to die of annoyance.

                                                              i.      grumble

                                                            ii.      mumble

b.    That useless geezer...

65.                      

a.     ...........

66.                         

a.     The time from the village is getting long...

b.    Perhaps it's time for Ares to return to the humans.

67.                         

                                                              i.      tap

                                                            ii.      tap

68.                      

a.     Yeah, I dunno, that's what really happened- haha

                                                              i.      hahaha

69.                      

a.     Yo~ Ares, you came

b.    Hey.

70.                      

a.     Say, on my way here, I saw something interesting.

b.    You want to come with me?

Edited by bahboh, 31 August 2015 - 11:26 PM.

[bahboh]

ch79

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=80

Spoiler

1.   

a.     Yo~ Ares, you came

b.    Hey.

2.   

a.     Say, I saw something amusing on my way here.

b.    You want to go with me?

3.   

a.     It’s that.

4.   

a.     Doesn’t it seem like something amazing’s in there?

b.    ………

5.   

a.     Hey. Maybe you don’t know, but we don't jack that kind of stuff.

b.     That's the carriage carrying the aristocrats' stuff.

6.   

a.     I know.

7.   

a.     But what's the difference?

b.    It's no problem if you don't get caught.

c.     What?

8.   

a.     This guy fearlessly saying shit knowing nothing...

9.   

a.     You guys said so yourselves. If you want to live by robbing, you have to have guts.

10.                      

a.     Hey~ what's the matter~ You're being embarrassing

b.    That or a merchant carriage, it's all the same.

c.     You, too!!

11.                      

a.     This time I'll help you out too.

                                                              i.      smirk

b.    Damn...

12.                      

a.     What could be inside...

                                                              i.      sneak

b.    Most likely offerings.

c.     But what about Ares?

13.                      

a.     He went to hide out for a decoy.

b.    Cheap guy...

c.     We can't have a newbie do our work, right?

14.                      

a.     Let's go.

                                                              i.      dash

15.                      

                                                              i.      tap tap tap tap

16.                      

a.     Kekeke

b.    Hoo...

17.                      

a.     Lift it up. Let's see.

18.                      

                                                              i.      slide

19.                      

                                                              i.      shine

b.    ….!!

20.                      

a.     Hohoho. The royal family is like that nowadays.

                                                              i.      guffaw

b.    I see.

21.                      

a.     So speaking of the artisans~

b.    Excuse me.

22.                      

a.     ?

b.    Is the big carriage outside yours?

23.                      

a.     You should probably check it out soon.

b.    Some suspicious guys are hanging around the area.

c.     What~?!

24.                      

25.                      

a.     Ahaha... those dumb petty thieves...

                                                              i.      kekek

26.                      

                                                              i.      heap

b.    I wonder if their heads are flying right about now.

27.                      

a.     Trash like them needs to get punished.

                                                              i.      pfft

28.                      

a.     Oi, Ares.

                                                              i.      stops

29.                      

a.     You look happy.

b.    After pulling one over us...

30.                      

a.     Oh. You didn't get caught?

31.                      

a.     You knew, right...?

b.    That the carriage was going to the imperial family...

32.                      

a.     You betrayed us to get a mere few loaves of bread?

                                                              i.      tremble

                                                            ii.      tremble

33.                      

a.  Enough! Kill that son of a bitch!!

34.                      

                                                              i.      grab

35.                      

                                                              i.      punch

36.                      

37.                      

                                                              i.      thud

38.                      

39.                      

                                                              i.      slide

                                                            ii.      stab

40.                      

a.     These vagabonds...!

                                                              i.      thud

41.                      

a.     Do you regret it now? Hm?

b.    Don't take us as fools, bastard.

42.                      

a.     Keuk... damn....

                                                              i.      drip-

43.                      

a.     Who'd've thought they'd take out a knife..

b.    Look here!!

44.                      

45.                       …!

46.                      

a.     Lord Lessa...!

47.                      

a.     What are you doing!

b.    Stop immediately!!

                                                             i.      tap tap tap tap

48.                         

a.     W-what the...

49.                      

a.     Ares, are you okay...?

b.    What is this.. just what...

50.                      

a.     You're hurt...

51.                      

a.     What is this white thing. A person?

52.                      

53.                      

54.                      

                                                              i.      soft step-

b.    Lord Lessa...

c.     Why did you do that...?

                                                              i.      soft step-

55.                      

a.     Why in the world...

b.    Why did you only get hit...

                                                              i.      soft step

                                                            ii.      soft step

56.                      

a.     Why do you always allow yourself to lose to insignificant humans!!!

b.    To those unforgivable, worthless petty thieves...

57.                      

a.     Why do you go this far...

                                                              i.      sob

58.                      

a.     You brat...

b.    If you control using strength, what's the difference between you and those who turned you into a slave.

59.                      

a.     No...!

b.    Don't you understand...? People don't remember your mercy.

c.     They just remember bowing on their knees to you...

d.    I finally understood after meeting you.

60.                      

a.     Freedom...? Peace...? Those are only able to exist under repression.

b.    Just as I was tamed by you.

61.                      

a.     What do you what me to do?

b.    Shall I make this a sea of fire?

c.     No. I have a human child. I want him to grow up as a person.

62.                      

a.   …I want you to become king!!

b.   Where you raise the law, where you impress it on everyone so that no one can do petty things!

c.    Rather than living in secret and sharing a mere piece of bread.

63.                      

a.   Rather, if I had your power…!

64.                      

a. Shut up.

b.   Just how far do you want to ruin me…?

65.                      

a.     …goodbye

                                                              i.      limp limp

66.                      

a.     Ares took that path and disappeared somewhere.

b.    And 10 years later, right before he died, he returned.

c.     Yes. This place is the world that Ares told me about.

d.    Everything became as he wished.

67.                      

a.     Perhaps…

b.    even me, too.

Edited by bahboh, 31 August 2015 - 11:26 PM.

[bahboh]

just wondering, but are there people that follow/read this thread? or is this just me throwing translations at the air? :x

But in the case there are people who do read this:

Do you prefer that I translate sfx to an English equivalent as I have been attempting

or

That I just romanize the korean and have you infer what sort of onomatopoeia/adverbs they are?

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.nhn?titleId=603159&no=81

ch 80

Spoiler

1.   

2.   

                                                              i.      vroom

3.   

a.     B-b-beep-

b.    Transferring you to the kingdom entry screening.

4.   

a.     Have a good day-

                                                              i.      woiinng

5.   

a.     What is it at this time.

b.    Huh- Isn't this is Blake's unmanned passenger car?

6.   

a.     Look here, open the window.

                                                              i.      knock knock

b.    What is it at this late hour?

7.   

                                                              i.      wooong

8.   

a.     ?

9.   

                                                              i.      pew

10.                      

11.                      

a.                       What the hell!!

                                                              i.      bam

12.                      

                                                              i.      creak

13.                      

a.     Damn. If you have business, say it.

                                                              i.      boom

b.    Have you come to transport the elite soldier?

14.                      

a.     Oi, Doomk. The elite soldier already came earlier this afternoon.

15.                      

a.     Why Ms Blake is attacking...

16.                      

                                                              i.      crunch

17.                      

a.                       Kuuuuuhk!!

                                                              i.      grindddd

18.                      

a.     Doomk!

                                                              i.      crash

19.                      

a.     O~ii, You dead?

                                                              i.      skidd

20.                      

a.     Knnngg...

                                                              i.      (sounds of exertion. Couldn't think of an English equivalent...)

                                                            ii.      place

21.                      

a.     Dead? Who's dead, you dumbass!

                                                              i.      knng

b.    I nearly died driving

22.                      

a.     What the hell are you. Why do you have Blake’s unmanned passenger car?

b.    Did she send you?!

23.                      

a.     Blake~? Are you talking about the car’s owner?

b.    Well, that’s not my problem.

c.     ‘Cause we’re robbers.

24.                      

a.  Stephan! Bad News!!

b. Lord Blake’s unmanned passenger car disappeard!

                                                              i.      tap tap tap tap

25.                      

a.     Well… Lord Blake probably took it out.

                                                              i.      smack

                                                            ii.      smack

b.    No, that’s not it!

c.     The security guards’ bodies were found near Blake’s office!

26.                      

a.     What’s this ruckus?

27.                      

a.     What disappeared?

b. Lord Blake…!!

28.                      

a.      Uh..uhh.. that is…

b.    You’re safe…!

c.     The unmanned passenger car disappeared…!

d.    Several guards were also attacked…

29.                      

a.     Isn’t that our day-to-day?

b.    Call and cut the contract with car, and have a new one issued from the imperial house.

c.     Ah…! Yes, ma’am, understood!

30.                      

a.     Well- though my car probably already passed through Zone 1’s gate.

31.                      

a.     Identity confirmation complete. ‘Maya Blake’

32.                      

a.     Cleared for entry.

                                                              i.       wooong

33.                      

                                                              i.      groannnn—

34.                      

a.     No…

b.    It’s not Blake, you stupid machine…

35.                      

a.     Have an enjoyable trip!

36.                      

a.     That bastard…

b.    That bastard…

c.     Crimson Knight…

37.                      

                                                              i.      whoosh

38.                      

a.     Whooa… Can you believe it?

b.    This isn’t the Hexagon Island we once knew.

c.     …sucks.

39.                      

a.     That in only a couple years… he can do an outrageous thing like that…

b.    That guy Ares sure is a weirdo.

40.                      

a.     Seeing that it’s still quiet, Ares and Lessa don’t seem to have met yet?

41.                      

a.     We definitely can’t let them meet.

42.                      

a.     Lessa will lose.

43.                      

a.     …how a person’s business will turn out… is certainly mysterious.

                                                              i.      limp

                                                            ii.      limp

b.    Certainly only god knows.

44.                      

a.     The doctor said so.

b.    That day even if you hadn’t found me, I could have lived.

c.     Do you regret becoming a believer?

d.    No. I think I might not have been able to continue drawing fairytales at least.

45.                      

a.     Is that why you’re making these scribbles?

46.                      

                                                              i.      slump

b.    They’re not scribbles.

47.                      

a.     This is the last prophecy regarding you.

b.    You are going to lose.

Edited by bahboh, 31 August 2015 - 11:26 PM.

[Criminis]

I think it's easier and smoother (is that a word?) to read when the sfx are translated. For example: if I hadn't googled I would never have known that 후루루루 (hulululu) is the sound of thunder. If you translate it directly as 'thunder' it makes more sense for the reader.
But I think you're doing it quite well with the sfx, I noticed nothing that itched me, so keep it up

EDIT: You'll recieve our awenser, don't worry. We're discussing.

Edited by Criminis, 20 July 2015 - 07:01 AM.