OK! I have not replied yet because I haven't got the time to read thoroughly your comics!, it is not like I ignored it or something, am not like that.
-To not double post, I will edit this one with a mini-review! :3
Anyway, niiice work in progress matey! I like how you used the roots as if it where hands! I love it!
And I forgot to mention, but some of your works remind me of some music tracks I have from a game! 0.0
Edit: I do not intend nor would have wanted to sound harsh ( ;-; ) Am very, very, VERY DEEPLY sorry If I did so.
Let's see, indeed the letters got mixed up with the background in the first 3 pages and it was kinda hard for the eye, but then it does, at all. Pretty colorful! With the shading, I agree with YanQ. And yeshh the results can be noticed on pg.5! :3
The setting, if i may say, a post-apocalyptic ice age with traces of medieval(?) age, and adding some alchemy! You got me there!
The story telling is going at a nice and comfy pace, no rush and not slow.
The typesetting, for presentations of new characters, the tiny letters telling a mini bio, those kinda mix up with each other because they are all thin plus the thick outline so it is hardy to read.
Then again, the plot so far seems really interesting! And I would love to see it through it all, and also hosted here at Batoto!! \(^0^)/
And I would like to add that your new page layout is waay better and I love it! Also it makes a nice contrast with the manga pages one is reading, because of the dark background with the white bg the pages have! Instead, of course, with the previous one.
-------------------Well then I hope it... helped?---And Am very, very, VERY DEEPLY sorry If I did sound harsh or offended you.
>As of the songs mentioned earlier, to be specific, those are: Matchmaker and Moon, both made by Masafumi Takada for "The Silver Case".
Edited by NekoXrebellion, 24 May 2015 - 01:51 AM.