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Edited by heijun, 14 October 2014 - 02:29 PM.
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Posted 11 December 2014 - 12:49 AM
Dr.Frost
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Potato Sprout
Well, I have expectation MC,
1. Original plot please, not rip-off manga
2. Not bunch of tragedy, I just hate it personally (lol), in some cases, if character died quickly without any "sufficient" development on the story, it just like a .... cameo who died over nothing.... but I think it's okay to make it as an opening story...
3. Don't add too many character, our reader not some walking wikia, and too much branch of side character event leading to "dulling" the main story, unless u want to make it long shot comic like a "N*r*t*" , "*ne P*ec*, and many other main stream manga, if u carefully analyzing those manga, many character added to become mumbo jumbo something ... (lol) unless u want to make a harem manga (ehem...)
4. When explaining the background of the story, u can asking to the reader, if the story is a slow paced, or fast paced, too slow make people bored, too fast make people confusing. Either way, not a god choice (pun intended, dame so lame xD)
5. Good luck, I'm waiting for another continuation chapter (for now, bookmarked)
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Posted 12 February 2016 - 03:00 PM
heijun
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Posted 15 June 2017 - 04:09 PM
Yasumi Todaka
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Well, I have expectation MC,
1. Original plot please, not rip-off manga
2. Not bunch of tragedy, I just hate it personally (lol), in some cases, if character died quickly without any "sufficient" development on the story, it just like a .... cameo who died over nothing.... but I think it's okay to make it as an opening story...
3. Don't add too many character, our reader not some walking wikia, and too much branch of side character event leading to "dulling" the main story, unless u want to make it long shot comic like a "N*r*t*" , "*ne P*ec*, and many other main stream manga, if u carefully analyzing those manga, many character added to become mumbo jumbo something ... (lol) unless u want to make a harem manga (ehem...)
4. When explaining the background of the story, u can asking to the reader, if the story is a slow paced, or fast paced, too slow make people bored, too fast make people confusing. Either way, not a god choice (pun intended, dame so lame xD)
5. Good luck, I'm waiting for another continuation chapter (for now, bookmarked)
Haha I understand. Well I think I'll do my best in translating the next chapters in order to deliver readers the utmost experience of the story! Thank you for sharing your thoughts Dr.Frost !
