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[Ne0spartan]

Okay we all know that the 'younger brother' is in fact female.

For some unknown reason the mother is deciding to hide the gender of her daughter from her stepson.

Any thoughts?

[zyphil]

It's so they don't copulate.

[DeathDot]

where it's said that her mother make her do this?

 

i'm not sure but from this page

http://vatoto.com/read/_/208730/imasugu-onii-chan-ni-imouto-da-tte-iitai_ch1_by_roankun/46

it's seem like Ayuma is the one hiding it

Edited by DeathDot, 25 April 2014 - 09:34 AM.

[RhythmiC]

To me, it looks a bit more like the author decided to do it this way to create something beyond the usual, for the readers to get invested in. The annoying part is that the author is withholding facts where they normally would've been revealed in order to do so.

It's probably going to turn out very generic in the end though, as the rest of the characters have indicated already with their very standard setups.
I.e. they all think of the protagonist in a more positive light than the rest.

Edit: Don't get me wrong, I love generic stories. As long as they're not too shallow then I find them very relaxing and intellectually stimulating. It's when an author goes too far off the deep end with their creativity that it can really mess things up.
Anyhoo, great story so far!

Edited by RhythmiC, 17 July 2014 - 10:40 AM.

[rickblah]

Come on who would really get together like this? "I thought you were a guy but one day I figured out that you felt you were just lieing about that, but I'm not even gonna be fazed about it so once you feel that you don't need to live that lie anymore I'm just gonna come right out and say I love you cause that's what we do to when we want to start a health relationship...

BTW after that yeah I have to say that the smart cute childhood friend with a great personality is way to god for this clown. The author has zero setup for this to be believable, rush to the "Endcest". Cause they are siblings now gonna make those parents real proud.

[RhythmiC]

Come on who would really get together like this? "I thought you were a guy but one day I figured out that you felt you were just lieing about that, but I'm not even gonna be fazed about it so once you feel that you don't need to live that lie anymore I'm just gonna come right out and say I love you cause that's what we do to when we want to start a health relationship...

BTW after that yeah I have to say that the smart cute childhood friend with a great personality is way to god for this clown. The author has zero setup for this to be believable, rush to the "Endcest". Cause they are siblings now gonna make those parents real proud.

Uh.. Right, sorry but I don't even understand how you perceived it all when you write 'I thought you were a guy but one day I figured out that you felt you were just lieing about that'.
Second of all, stop comparing it to reality. As far as build up goes, there has only been vague hints that it's how she has felt all along, while the male protagonist have been pretty much emotionally shallow the entire time.

Up until this chapter it's been a very generic story, but as it turns towards step-incest the author seems to be pushing the limits a bit, which in turn makes the characters lose stability in the process.
Disappointing chapter structurally, but it's still creative.