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[slez]

Here is a story that takes place at the end of chapter 26. It's not trying to predict what will happen next, it's just something I wrote to try and get out of my writing slump. The story is just under 2,000 words, and it's family friendly. I hope you enjoy it.

 

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[God of LoL]

...Hm.
I should make a Fiction Center here too.

[slez]

Due to the overwhelming response to my first fan fic, I decided to write another one. This is another flash fic that starts right at the end of chapter 49. I was a bit rushed to finish it before the next chapter so there are probably a few typos. Anyway, hope you enjoy it.

 

PDF Link:

http://bit.ly/1ywncEz

 

 

...Hm.
I should make a Fiction Center here too.

 

Looks like it won't be necessary

[Panthertwat]

Love the first one:

Perfect use of Life Drain. Hadn't thought of that. 

She could go into zombie instance with MC and he would drain Zombie's life into her.... and she would gain levels and be able to put points into Vit.

 

I would have added him scheduling a healing session every day with Sung-Ah after class.

This would help him raise/grind his healing skill, and keep the black demon invasion/freezing affect from raising higher than intermediate.

So he would burn through all his mana, and take off.... traveling to Sun-Il's house while regenerating his mana.

 

Would like to see one about him healing the yunhon clan members and checking the red heads stats and seeing Interest and Affection in her emotions and how he reacts.

Edited by Panthertwat, 14 August 2014 - 08:51 PM.

[slez]

Love the first one:

 

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it in spite of the fact that I made a big blunder in understanding how 'Distribute Equally' actually works. Probably since I'm not much of a gamer myself.

 

 

Would like to see one about him healing the yunhon clan members

 

I've thought about him trying to heal the YunHon clan members that can no longer use martial arts. Since they are members of the YunHon clan, I'm assuming that they can't be healed with YunHon Soul Recovery. I'm guessing that they have broken Ki Centers. However, Jee-Han might be able to create a skill to cure them similarly to how he created the Curse Removal skill. Frankly, I doubt I will write this. While it is an interesting idea, it's not interesting enough to me to write it out.

 

 

checking the red heads stats and seeing Interest and Affection in her emotions and how he reacts.

 

I hate you for writing this, you bastard.   Since reading it I've been thinking up all sorts of scenarios that end up with the two of them in a hot and steamy mess. I might have to write this one just to exorcise the demons you've plagued me with.

[Leekz]

Nice Fanfic you make your events sound more entertaining than the current events in the manwha/webtoon. If you started from chapter 1 and made a alternate time line/events for Jee-Han in his choices I would totally read it. I was planing on making my own Fanfic sooner or later with my own Character with the Gamer ability for fun, but not sure how am gonna go about it. since It'll be my first fanfic ever I want it to be at least decent.

Edited by Leekz, 17 August 2014 - 06:32 AM.

[Calmandweak]

that would be fun Leekz, just trow something on the spur of the moment and see how it goes if you like it refine it  continue it and share it (here where i can easily find it, ima lazy)^^  i'll gladly read it.

Edited by Calmandweak, 16 August 2014 - 06:51 AM.

[Formulaic]

Those fics were definitely interesting, addressing issues that I thought needed to be made a bigger deal of. Sung-Gong interrupting Jee-Han's reveal of his knowledge of Sung-Ah's curse was at best a very brief delaying measure of his finding out. There's no way he wouldn't try to find out exactly what happened to improve his daughter that much. Especially after Jee-Han does it when she's awake, so she knows how trivial it was for him to improve her condition.

 

The slavery bit also bothers me. We get plenty of indication from Jee-Han, both in action and in declaration that he wants to help people in need, but the slavery is brushed off with just a moment of shock and a brief mention later. Even if he's not in a position to anything about at his current level, I'd've wanted to see some resolution to do something about it later. Or at least some thought into it. At this point I'm just hoping it's a hook for later in the story.

 

I've thought about him trying to heal the YunHon clan members that can no longer use martial arts. Since they are members of the YunHon clan, I'm assuming that they can't be healed with YunHon Soul Recovery. I'm guessing that they have broken Ki Centers. However, Jee-Han might be able to create a skill to cure them similarly to how he created the Curse Removal skill. Frankly, I doubt I will write this. While it is an interesting idea, it's not interesting enough to me to write it out.

 

 

Spoilery up to chapter... 45, I think, plus plot speculation.

 

Spoiler

Even if the YunHon can't fix their members with Soul Recovery, I don't think that necessarily excludes Jee-Han's use, even in its basic form. The nature of his power is fundamentally different. The Chunbumoon freak out about his use of Soul Recovery working instantly. I get the feeling that normally it would have just sped up recovery time, and perhaps even then it would have required repeated uses. Sun-Il was injured in a way that he was going to make a full, natural recovery from, but perhaps the YunHon members had injuries that wouldn't heal properly, so speeding up recovery wouldn't help. Jee-Han's Gamer status would presumably treat that kind of permanent damage as a debuff that he could remove with enough skill.

That said, I think the Curse Removal makes more sense. Sung-Gong supposedly attacked them first, and it doesn't make sense for him to do that without a motive. I would guess that he's been studying curses a lot in his bid to cure his daughter, so he cursed a some of the YunHon to see if they could figure out how to use their Soul Blaze on different curses. His answer to why he was attacking Shi-Yun in chapter 2 seems to indicate that her skills are of interest to him, which is odd considering his very singular motive.

So all that seems to set up lots of curses for Jee-Han to practice on, considering that Shi-Yun has just learned that he used Soul Recovery to remove her curse. Judging by what happened with Sung-Ah, what he's able to do with the skill with regards to curses is way beyond what could be expected. So I think Shi-Yun is going to tell her clan about what happened, and that will hook into him leveling up his healing on the YunHon.

[Panthertwat]

You might like this fanfic too

http://japtem.com/fanfic.php?view=504

 

Not the best one on the site, but it is based off the gamer

Edited by Panthertwat, 16 August 2014 - 11:38 AM.

[Leekz]

btw anyone got any idea how people make the stat window screen in their fanfics?

[Prinny_]

Cool fanfiction Potato Sprout

 

...Hm.
I should make a Fiction Center here too.

 

Do you think your going to make anymore? I would love to read them, they are even more intressting than the real deal in some ways

[slez]

Nice Fanfic you make your events sound more entertaining than the current events in the manwha/webtoon. 

 

Thanks.

 

 If you started from chapter 1 and made a alternate time line/events for Jee-Han in his choices I would totally read it. I was planing on making my own Fanfic sooner or later with my own Character with the Gamer ability for fun, but not sure how am gonna go about it. since It'll be my first fanfic ever I want it to be at least decent.

 

I've actually considered redoing the whole series, but if I put that much work into a project I'd want it to be my own original work. If you ever want to do it, I'd be happy to help you out.

 

 

Those fics were definitely interesting, addressing issues that I thought needed to be made a bigger deal of.

 

Thanks, I totally agree. The lack interaction between Jee-Han and Sung-Gong after he healed Sung-Ah was very annoying and unrealistic IMHO.

 

 

The slavery bit also bothers me. We get plenty of indication from Jee-Han, both in action and in declaration that he wants to help people in need, but the slavery is brushed off with just a moment of shock and a brief mention later. Even if he's not in a position to anything about at his current level, I'd've wanted to see some resolution to do something about it later. Or at least some thought into it. At this point I'm just hoping it's a hook for later in the story.

 

Frankly, I doubt the author will ever go into the slavery issue. It's obvious that he has trouble moving the plot along, and dealing with slavery would just drag things out longer.

 

Cool fanfiction Potato Sprout

 

 

Do you think your going to make anymore? I would love to read them, they are even more intressting than the real deal in some ways

 

Thanks, and yes I do plan on writing more. I'm actually in the middle of writing one right now.

 

BTW the name is slez. Potato Sprout is a title the forum gives to people with a low post count. Your title is currently Potato Sprout too.

[slez]

While in the process of writing my third fan fic, I realized that it was getting rather lengthy. At the time of writing this post it was over 3,500 words. Therefore, I decided to break it up into two parts, and post the first part before finishing the story.

 

This story is a bit different from the first two I've posted. It's an alternate story thread that explores what could have happened if Shi-Yun had intercepted Jee-Han before Sung-Ah was able to talk to him. This story was wholly inspired by this comment:

 

[I would like to see Jee-Han] checking the red heads stats and seeing Interest and Affection in her emotions and how he reacts.

 

Intrigued by the concept, I though that light romantic comedy would be quite fun to write. I planned to make Shi-Yun a tsundere character and have the two of them get caught up in an unexpected comical event that brings our her dere nature. There would be lots of teasing from Jee-Han, and then Shi-Yun would be knocking him around quite a bit.

 

As any writer will tell you, sometimes stories will take on a life of their own, and the path they take you down is very unexpected. This was such a case. The end result couldn't have been father from the original concept. It's a serious story with very little humor. The second part is very intense and steamy, pushing the boundaries of an R rating without going into the realm of the X rating.

 

I had a lot of fun writing this. It's very enjoyable when a story goes differently than how I expected. I hope to finish and post Part Two sometime next week. Part One is acceptable for all readers, but if you plan on reading Part Two I recommend that only people of age 18 and over read it.

 

For reference, this story starts at Chapter 49 Page 18 Frame #4

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